This novel has a solid cast of multi-dimensional characters in a plot that kept me guessing. Jim Higgins, 50s, is a detective with a new wife, a baby coming any day, and he ends up looking after a four-year-old girl left behind by a sister Jim never knew he had. A double-homicide sends Jim out and about in the La Crosse, Wisconsin environs, letting readers visit this beautiful area of the country next to the Mississippi River. Solid secondary characters help make this story interesting. Unfortunately, near the end Jim Higgins refers to the women at the police station as the “secretarial pool,” and the woman in charge calls them her “girls.” The out-dated references were a turn-off for this reader. In addition, punctuation errors abound. Also, several paragraphs and scenes mix two characters’ points of view, which can be confusing. Messiness aside, the novel’s storyline and characters are as good as anything on the mystery/suspense bestseller list today. Give this author a chance