Mixed feelings about this one. First, to get prejudices out of the way: Kennedy, Franco’s lover at the end of Bleeding Out, was by far my favorite in that book, so I was really disappointed in the direction the author took their relationship.
Okay, now to the more objective. Clearly, the writing isn’t as good technically as in the first book, largely an editing problem. There are a lot of sentences that are really awkward, but some that are just -- well, wrong. This adversely affects the pacing of the novel, because mechanical issues draw the reader out of the story and back to the surface, calling attention to the words themselves rather than to the narrative.
Then, there’s the dialog. The pervasive, almost overwhelming use of street slang and gangsta talk, and just basic crudeness, are so inconsistent with Bleeding Out that you wonder if this is even the same character. I understand the desire for verisimilitude, but it’s simply overdone. In other places, the dialog just seems unnatural, more so than in the first book. These, of course, are largely editorial issues. I’ve always found Bella to be pretty inconsistent when it comes to both copy editing and story editing. It does a disservice not only to the reader, but also to a group of very talented writers.
Our protagonist, Lt. LA “Frank” Franco, is a complex character who, while she’s not always likable, is nonetheless admirable. There’s something of a Dirty Harry mentality about her, though, which makes her less commendable than she could be.
All that said, Street Rules is certainly worth reading. Saying the writing isn’t as proficient mechanically as Bleeding Out doesn’t mean it’s “bad,“ necessarily, and the mystery is interesting and consistently plotted, with plenty of curves thrown our way. The characters are pretty well developed; I still like Kennedy, though it seems Clare goes out of her way to make her less likeable than in the previous book. We get a pretty complete picture of Gail, and learn more about Frank, too. Only the “perp” seems not very fully-fleshed,“ which is a little disappointing. The blossoming romance between Gail and Frank proceeds at a really nice, leisurely pace which I found quite refreshing.
So, though not exactly a rave, still recommended.