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On Break

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Ayanna is a stressed-out school counselor and ready for Spring Break. Then her boyfriend decides they need to take a break to reevaluate their relationship. She posts her frustration on social media. Then Zack, an old flame, slides into her DMs. He offers to help her enjoy her break.

84 pages, Paperback

Published August 28, 2022

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Turtleberry

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I am a writer from Baltimore, Maryland.

I graduated from Towson University and The University of Baltimore.

My favorite animals are turtles, dragonflies, and sloth.

I write because the characters and stories in my head won't shut up until I share them with others.

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Profile Image for Shauntelle (shauntellereads).
660 reviews64 followers
November 17, 2025
Ayanna is a stressed out school counselor counting down the seconds until Spring Break when her boyfriend hits her with the classic “we need to take a break.” Now she’s single adjacent, irritated, and tweeting her feelings into the void when Zack, her old college flame, slides into her DMs like he’s been waiting for this moment. What starts as a little digital flirting turns into a second chance she didn’t realize she still wanted.

This was such a cute, feel good second chance romance with a grown woman choosing herself first before she chooses anyone else. I loved Ayanna’s energy, especially the way she leans on her best friend like the world owes them both good things. And Zack? That man said “I’m intentional now” and proved it every time he opened his mouth. No games, no confusion, just effort, clarity, and a little spice.

The story is novella short but still delivers a full arc, and I appreciated the message about not waiting around for someone who doesn’t know what they want. Ayanna deserved softness and peace, and Zack showed up ready to give it to her.

A sweet, quick read with Black love, good vibes, and a reminder to never let anybody put you on pause.
Profile Image for Keesha.
613 reviews21 followers
August 26, 2025
A cute little snippet that definitely leaves you wanting more. Wesleigh and Rashad Siobhan can do no wrong!
Profile Image for Shades N Pages .
1,002 reviews27 followers
May 12, 2022
3.5 stars

If your ex decides he needs a break from the relationship, do you cry or boss up and move on? If you’re Ayanna you take that opportunity to visit an old flame from college and watch all the pieces fall in place.

“I’m no longer interested in someone who isn’t sure about me”

This quote resonated with my soul and I promise I read that line about ten times before moving on. This is a short and sweet second chance Novella that proves that timing is everything. I absolutely LOVE the friendship that Ayanna had with her bestie. We all need that friend to encourage our shenanigans while keeping us safe. The twitter gods must have heard my cry because we have a 5’10 hero in this book. He’s not short but he ain’t a 6 ft plus giant. I love the representation because men under six feet need love too lol! This story isn’t heavy on the sex, but I enjoyed it because it sends a great message to NEVER sit at a table that no longer serves you. Get up, pack your shit and bounce. Kudos to Ayanna
Profile Image for lexi.
330 reviews5 followers
November 30, 2025
on break was such a cute, quick second-chance vibe — i really enjoyed this one. ayanna is a stressed-out school counselor literally counting the minutes until spring break, and then her boyfriend hits her with that classic, tired “we need to take a break.” like… sir, please. she’s suddenly single-adjacent, annoyed, and venting on social media when zack — her old college flame — slides into her dms like he’s been waiting for his opening.
the shift from digital flirting to “oh wait… this might be something real again” felt so natural. even in novella length, the chemistry was there, the timing made sense, and the pacing didn’t feel rushed. i loved that ayanna didn’t sit around waiting for a man who wasn’t sure about her — she deserved softness, clarity, and a partner who actually wanted her. and zack? yeah, he showed up ready to give all of that without hesitation.
short, sweet, and a solid 4/5 for me. the message hit exactly how it needed to: stop holding space for someone who doesn’t know what they want when someone who does is right there willing to love you correctly.
Profile Image for ariana.
240 reviews127 followers
May 29, 2022
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐/ 🌶️🌶️

Tropes: second chance romance, exs to strangers to lovers

TW/CW: 18+

Representation: black romance

Thoughts: this book was recommended to me based off another book i read on kindle. shoutout to kindle for telling me to read this cuz it was everything i needed!!! i love a good second change romance!! mike who? this book was short sweet and to the point! but zack dont play about this girl and im hear for it. zack is a true examples of “if he wanted to he would” my only issue was that the synopsis said the female mc is school counselor when shes actually is a school social worker. and im only pointing this out because there is a difference between the two career paths.
Profile Image for Wynette.
129 reviews
October 12, 2025
Ayanna is tired from work and a recent break with her boyfriend. Her ex reaches out to seize the opportunity of this break. It was a cute second-chance romance. I enjoyed that it was realistic and not over the top in the love and commitment area.
Profile Image for nakia .
54 reviews
April 30, 2022
Short and sweet

I'm a firm believer in actions speak louder than words. My girl said Mike who?! Lol. Zack is not playing about his Yanibear.
Profile Image for Shahtia Gay-hairston.
3,454 reviews27 followers
May 4, 2022
On Break

Short and sweet. An overall chill vibe. I wanted to relax and sleep right along with them. My favorite line was “ What about Mike”? “ Who “?
Profile Image for Flo.
43 reviews2 followers
August 14, 2022
Really Good

This was the perfect short story, it was nice cute and hot, and the resolution didn’t leave me hanging and i can let my imagination run wild
Profile Image for 'The Book Queen'.
6,039 reviews115 followers
September 26, 2022
So short, so cute

The story was extra short and really cute. I enjoyed this short interlude into the lives of this couple. Maybe we will see them again in a full tale.
Profile Image for Taija Thompson.
412 reviews
September 26, 2025
Spring Break!!

That’s it!?!?!!! Ughhh!! I need more of Zack and YaniBelle. Get that old thang back Yani girl!! Lol short and cute. But not enough!!😩😩😩😍🫶🏾
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54 reviews
October 21, 2025
Deedee had the perfect vacation. Zach made sure of it
Profile Image for Carla.
197 reviews2 followers
December 7, 2025
it was nice cute little read....☺️
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