this was a poorly written story that obviously needed to be revised, with hardly any good character. It was like they were all literally ghosts, no emotions whatsoever. I could sum up the book in just a few paragraph's as easy as this;
Great, im moving in with my voodoo aunt, who isnt really my aunt, and ive only met her a few times, wait why do i call her auntie? Im best friends with my twelve year old cousin,and im 16, beat that. So my aunt tells me that people get murdered in the grave yard, and just out of curiosity, i march on in there to spy on other people. Aww yea.
SO I walk a few steps to find them, and i sit there listening in on there conversation. Then i get turned around, where is the gate? I only walked for five minutes and im lost. hard to see the gate around these foot tall graves. :/
But wait there is a girl who is staring at me with shock and horror! I'll ask her. Oh found my way out. Right in front of my face. Need to get hot guy to unlock it so i can get out. Cool. i think im in love. There is a mean girl at school so i make her think im an even bigger loser. that's right. so i see the guy in the coffee shop, offers to show me around town, and oh, look at that, he's got no personality either! Someone mentioned my mom, but im to guidy and happy of a persone to even reconize a bit of sadness that she died. oh well.
I try and find the girl that helped me in the grave yard to thank her. um wait, didn't i already say that? and turns out she is a ghost, ya that's right, she came right out and told me. We became the bestest of best friends, and she took me to see the place where she died ! :D Not even a hint of sadness in that girl when she tell's me the storry of how she was murdered. She must of been pre darn depressed. oh wait, no emotions, almost forgot :/ .
So on my third date with mister hottie, he kisses me. third date. and i know im in love. for sure this time. doesnt matter that im ruining his life. pfft. Then i figure out meen girl is gonna die because she is seeing the ghost that im seeing. that doesnt hint anything at aaaaaall. and suddenly oh my god! im feeling something! is that.. sadness?
Turns out that im gona die to though. shucks. thats okay auntie said maaybe ill die, ive got nothing to worry about (: So off i go to through beeds at people in the carnival, trying to catch miss meanie's eye, so that i can figure out if i will die or not, but nope missed her house. oops. and then a hand goes over my mouth and im kidnapped. oh no! the whole town wants to kill me! because my botfriend tatled on me. eh, whatevs. but dont worry here comes ghost girl to save the day, and a statue falls on mean girls head! She die's not me. what a happily ever after that was. *sigh* good times.
yup thats pre much the story of ruined,, whata great story that was! :/ lol seriously if you're gonna read it, i suggest going and getting it from the library, dont waste ur money or time.
thanks for reading(: