DNF after chapter 1
The first chapter ruined the entire book for me. The opening is literally one of the MMCs fucking the OW and showing how much of a manhoe he and his brothers are. He has slept with thousands of women, and apparently the FMC is the special one. Well, I’m not even going to bother because I hated the first chapter and yeah…😪
Here is the opening:
“Oh fuck! Oh yes, baby! YES!” Her screams were making my ears twitch, it was like nails on a chalkboard, and nothing about that was sexy. It almost wasn't worth the power dump. I was at the point that I was just fucking her fast and hard to get this shit over with. I was good at what I did though, so I made an effort. I lifted her leg to get the angle she needed and stuffed her good and deep until she squealed like a pig.”
“As soon as my power was trans yanked my dick out, tucked myself back in, and zipped up my pants as quickly as I could. She pushed up off the desk, breathy, eyes glazed, legs dangling over the edge I just fucked her on, and stuck her lip out. “Leaving so soon?”I resisted rolling my eyes at the idiot. This was also why my brothers and I usually stuck with our regulars—the ones who knew the deal and didn't try for what they wouldn't get—but my regular, Kara, was running a job for her master, and couldn't make our scheduled time. She promised me that this new girl could fulfill my needs, and she did, but I was accustomed to a much better level of service. Ugh. It’s just so hard to find adequate workers nowadays. “This is the deal, darling, but you should have a full tummy, so let's not complain.” 🤢