Nice selection of women about whom to write. That's the good.
Poorly written, superficial, poorly edited, and significantly editorialized. As an essay by a high-school junior, it might earn a B. As a list of notable women, perhaps a C+, as these are certainly notable, but not necessarily the most adventurous or most exemplary. The easiest to "research", perhaps.
A good editor would have caught many of the "x proves y" errors ("illustrates" perhaps, "demonstrates" perhaps, not "proves") and poor word choice. A good editor would have noted that Bennet calls her subjects liars (she wrote about it, but there's no proof it happened?!). A good proofreader would have caught the errors in tense and grammar, and probably recognized that Earhart didn't fly at 14,000 miles, but at 14,000 feet.