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Pride Before a Fall: A Variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice
To think that Mr Darcy considers himself in love with me!
ELIZABETH BENNET IS HORRIFIED when, during a walk in Netherfield’s gardens with her sister Jane, she witnesses Mr Darcy take a fall from his horse. Rushing to his aid, she is bewildered when he–seeming quite out of his wits–declares himself to her. Deciding the proposal was the product of a confused mind, she decides to disregard it.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY HAD ALREADY DISMISSED any thoughts of an alliance with the enchanting Miss Elizabeth Bennet. When he learns of his addled declaration, however, he decides that his accident was a most fortunate one, revealing the true desires of his heart over more prudent objections. Alas, the object of his affections is less ready to accede, however, and so he finds he must win her as a proper suitor should.
MOVED BY DARCY’S SINCERITY AND PERSISTENCE, Elizabeth agrees to allow him the chance to court her properly before giving her final answer to his proposal. Darcy sets out to prove his lasting devotion and persuade Elizabeth they will be happy together. With various antagonists standing in the way of their happily ever after, it will prove to be no easy task!
PRIDE BEFORE A FALL is a lighthearted, humor filled Pride and Prejudice variation
ELIZABETH BENNET IS HORRIFIED when, during a walk in Netherfield’s gardens with her sister Jane, she witnesses Mr Darcy take a fall from his horse. Rushing to his aid, she is bewildered when he–seeming quite out of his wits–declares himself to her. Deciding the proposal was the product of a confused mind, she decides to disregard it.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY HAD ALREADY DISMISSED any thoughts of an alliance with the enchanting Miss Elizabeth Bennet. When he learns of his addled declaration, however, he decides that his accident was a most fortunate one, revealing the true desires of his heart over more prudent objections. Alas, the object of his affections is less ready to accede, however, and so he finds he must win her as a proper suitor should.
MOVED BY DARCY’S SINCERITY AND PERSISTENCE, Elizabeth agrees to allow him the chance to court her properly before giving her final answer to his proposal. Darcy sets out to prove his lasting devotion and persuade Elizabeth they will be happy together. With various antagonists standing in the way of their happily ever after, it will prove to be no easy task!
PRIDE BEFORE A FALL is a lighthearted, humor filled Pride and Prejudice variation
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Published October 24, 2022
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Mary Smythe
18 books54 followersMary Smythe is a homemaker living in South Carolina with a rather useless BA in English collecting dust in a closet somewhere. She discovered the works of Jane Austen as a teenager, thanks to the 1995 BBC Pride and Prejudice miniseries featuring Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle, and has since gone on to read everything written by Ms Austen at least once yearly, always wishing that there were more. She has been writing since 2001, but only discovered Jane Austen Fanfiction in the summer of 2018.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
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November 20, 2025
Know thyself, still the best antidote to a sense of moral superiority. ~ Robert Brault
“Pride Before a Fall” begins with Darcy struggling with his sense of superiority: both moral and otherwise.
In canon P&P, we all remember the scene in the Netherfield Library where Fitzwilliam Darcy ignores Miss Elizabeth Bennet for an entire half-hour. But, the reader knows Darcy was struggling to remain “steady to his purpose” until the lady returned to her home.
In an attempt to control his attraction, Darcy takes his horse out for a gallop. Returning to the house, he spies the Bennet sisters taking a slow walk through the garden. Darcy is unable to resist showing off for his lady. A green-broke horse and a pheasant spell disaster.
Jane goes to the house to get help for the injured man. Elizabeth goes directly to Darcy to render aid. Sliding in and out of consciousness, Darcy kisses his love and proposes.
When he has recovered enough to understand what he did, Darcy is relieved that the issue is resolved and vows to move forward. Elizabeth, graciously, she believes, releases him from any promise. Only four people know of the kiss and all four can be trusted not to gossip.
Do not underestimate, in a world of self-confident bluster, the sexiness of being quiet and unassuming and, at times, a little lost. ~ Robert Brault
Darcy is determined to make a formal proposal when he and Bingley make a call at Longbourn. He rehearses for Bingley on the ride over.
Oh, that Charles Bingley! This time he is the giver of advice and he does a better job than Darcy! Here is the Bingley humility:
Make no mention of Miss Elizabeth’s status — you are a gentleman, she is a gentleman’s daughter, so in that sense you are equals … Secondly, do not insult her family ... Finally, do not focus on any of the reasons that you should not marry Miss Elizabeth, but instead emphasise those that make you want to … Oh, and one last piece of advice. Do not scowl at her when you make your offer. Women prefer a more friendly aspect.
Nailed it!
There is in some people a quietly unassuming pride that no misfortune can humble, and it goes by the name of humility. ~ Robert Brault
Despite Bingley’s advice, Elizabeth is unconvinced. She agrees to a period of (unacknowledged) courtship. Darcy is at his best in his wooing. By the halfway point, Elizabeth makes her decision. But happy-ending music is delayed by acts of villainy.
This sweet love story is complicated by dastardly plots hatched by those who place their interests above the happiness of our dear couple.
I usually like a bit more angst than this story shows through the first half, but the finale makes up for any early lacking. Choose this one when you are needing a bit of sugar!
In phrases like, "quiet courage" and "quiet endurance" and "quiet resolve," we are reminded of how much of any trait we admire in a human being has to do with its quietness. ~ Robert Brault
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
“Pride Before a Fall” begins with Darcy struggling with his sense of superiority: both moral and otherwise.
In canon P&P, we all remember the scene in the Netherfield Library where Fitzwilliam Darcy ignores Miss Elizabeth Bennet for an entire half-hour. But, the reader knows Darcy was struggling to remain “steady to his purpose” until the lady returned to her home.
In an attempt to control his attraction, Darcy takes his horse out for a gallop. Returning to the house, he spies the Bennet sisters taking a slow walk through the garden. Darcy is unable to resist showing off for his lady. A green-broke horse and a pheasant spell disaster.
Jane goes to the house to get help for the injured man. Elizabeth goes directly to Darcy to render aid. Sliding in and out of consciousness, Darcy kisses his love and proposes.
When he has recovered enough to understand what he did, Darcy is relieved that the issue is resolved and vows to move forward. Elizabeth, graciously, she believes, releases him from any promise. Only four people know of the kiss and all four can be trusted not to gossip.
Do not underestimate, in a world of self-confident bluster, the sexiness of being quiet and unassuming and, at times, a little lost. ~ Robert Brault
Darcy is determined to make a formal proposal when he and Bingley make a call at Longbourn. He rehearses for Bingley on the ride over.
Oh, that Charles Bingley! This time he is the giver of advice and he does a better job than Darcy! Here is the Bingley humility:
Make no mention of Miss Elizabeth’s status — you are a gentleman, she is a gentleman’s daughter, so in that sense you are equals … Secondly, do not insult her family ... Finally, do not focus on any of the reasons that you should not marry Miss Elizabeth, but instead emphasise those that make you want to … Oh, and one last piece of advice. Do not scowl at her when you make your offer. Women prefer a more friendly aspect.
Nailed it!
There is in some people a quietly unassuming pride that no misfortune can humble, and it goes by the name of humility. ~ Robert Brault
Despite Bingley’s advice, Elizabeth is unconvinced. She agrees to a period of (unacknowledged) courtship. Darcy is at his best in his wooing. By the halfway point, Elizabeth makes her decision. But happy-ending music is delayed by acts of villainy.
This sweet love story is complicated by dastardly plots hatched by those who place their interests above the happiness of our dear couple.
I usually like a bit more angst than this story shows through the first half, but the finale makes up for any early lacking. Choose this one when you are needing a bit of sugar!
In phrases like, "quiet courage" and "quiet endurance" and "quiet resolve," we are reminded of how much of any trait we admire in a human being has to do with its quietness. ~ Robert Brault
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 4, 2022
If you’re fighting for your betrothed, you definitely want Mrs. Bennet in your corner.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain ***SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: clean >>Angst Level: stressful when ODC were separated
>>Source: I received an ARC via Booksprout [9-18-22] for an honest review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. >>Timeline: Netherfield during Jane’s illness. 24 chapters plus an epilogue two years later.
Jane had recovered enough that she and Elizabeth had actually taken a stroll outside. As they drew near the stables, Darcy approached on his horse. The creature was still in training and Darcy had to maintain control at all times. As he and his horse took a hedge, Elizabeth and Jane clapped in approval. To show his horse to his best advantage, Darcy circled around and approached another. His eyes were on Elizabeth and didn’t see the pheasant fly out of the hedge until it was too late. The horse spooked and down Darcy went with a hard fall.
Elizabeth was horrified as she watched Mr. Darcy fall from his horse. She ran to the hedge and looked over and saw him unmoving on the ground. She admonished Jane to go to the house for help. Elizabeth then crawled through the hedge and went to Mr. Darcy’s side. Just as Jane and Bingley arrived and looked over the hedge, Darcy awoke dazed and confused. They watched as he kissed Elizabeth and asked her to marry him. He then passed out. Caroline finally made it to the hedge and when she saw the body of Mr. Darcy on the ground and unmoving, she promptly swooned.
Once Darcy regained consciousness, Bingley had the job of ‘splaining what happened to his friend. Darcy’s patchy memory of kissing Elizabeth, which seemed like such a wonderful dream, turned out to be very real. So, we have the start of a long story where Darcy feels his honor has been engaged. Unfortunately, before Elizabeth and Jane left Netherfield, she told both Darcy and Bingley that she did not hold Darcy to it. No one, other than the four of them, knew what happened.
How to win the heart of a woman worthy of being loved? Darcy had never pursued a woman before. He needed help and Fitzwilliam was away. He turned to Bingley.
“He must concede authority to Bingley, who had had more infatuations than Darcy had servants – at least in his London establishment.” Quote from the book.
The story followed Austen’s timeline to a point. Mr. Collins arrived and caused trouble.
The walk to Meryton introduced the Wickham character. Darcy got off his horse this time and escorted the ladies to their aunt Phillips. There was a delightful scene between Darcy and Mrs. Phillips that was an aaahhh moment. Even Mrs. Bennet was impressed when she heard of it.
Throughout the story we had the following:
Mr. Bennet was enjoying the spectacle of his family
Elizabeth vs her mother
Mrs. Bennet vs Mr. Collins
Mr. Collins vs Darcy
Darcy vs Lady Catherine
ODC vs the societal gossip fueled by Miss Bingley and Mr. Wickham
Whew! Everything was going along swimmingly when… BAM! Something happened and we suddenly had a mystery that caused a misunderstanding between ODC. What the heck happened? I missed the clues as they sailed right over my head. WOW! I did not see that coming. I should have. It was as plain as day. I fell for it hook, line, and sinker. I can’t be mad at Darcy. However, when he discovered it, his opinion once lost… yeah, that.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain ***SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: clean >>Angst Level: stressful when ODC were separated
>>Source: I received an ARC via Booksprout [9-18-22] for an honest review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. >>Timeline: Netherfield during Jane’s illness. 24 chapters plus an epilogue two years later.
Jane had recovered enough that she and Elizabeth had actually taken a stroll outside. As they drew near the stables, Darcy approached on his horse. The creature was still in training and Darcy had to maintain control at all times. As he and his horse took a hedge, Elizabeth and Jane clapped in approval. To show his horse to his best advantage, Darcy circled around and approached another. His eyes were on Elizabeth and didn’t see the pheasant fly out of the hedge until it was too late. The horse spooked and down Darcy went with a hard fall.
Elizabeth was horrified as she watched Mr. Darcy fall from his horse. She ran to the hedge and looked over and saw him unmoving on the ground. She admonished Jane to go to the house for help. Elizabeth then crawled through the hedge and went to Mr. Darcy’s side. Just as Jane and Bingley arrived and looked over the hedge, Darcy awoke dazed and confused. They watched as he kissed Elizabeth and asked her to marry him. He then passed out. Caroline finally made it to the hedge and when she saw the body of Mr. Darcy on the ground and unmoving, she promptly swooned.
Once Darcy regained consciousness, Bingley had the job of ‘splaining what happened to his friend. Darcy’s patchy memory of kissing Elizabeth, which seemed like such a wonderful dream, turned out to be very real. So, we have the start of a long story where Darcy feels his honor has been engaged. Unfortunately, before Elizabeth and Jane left Netherfield, she told both Darcy and Bingley that she did not hold Darcy to it. No one, other than the four of them, knew what happened.
How to win the heart of a woman worthy of being loved? Darcy had never pursued a woman before. He needed help and Fitzwilliam was away. He turned to Bingley.
“He must concede authority to Bingley, who had had more infatuations than Darcy had servants – at least in his London establishment.” Quote from the book.
The story followed Austen’s timeline to a point. Mr. Collins arrived and caused trouble.
The walk to Meryton introduced the Wickham character. Darcy got off his horse this time and escorted the ladies to their aunt Phillips. There was a delightful scene between Darcy and Mrs. Phillips that was an aaahhh moment. Even Mrs. Bennet was impressed when she heard of it.
Throughout the story we had the following:
Mr. Bennet was enjoying the spectacle of his family
Elizabeth vs her mother
Mrs. Bennet vs Mr. Collins
Mr. Collins vs Darcy
Darcy vs Lady Catherine
ODC vs the societal gossip fueled by Miss Bingley and Mr. Wickham
Whew! Everything was going along swimmingly when… BAM! Something happened and we suddenly had a mystery that caused a misunderstanding between ODC. What the heck happened? I missed the clues as they sailed right over my head. WOW! I did not see that coming. I should have. It was as plain as day. I fell for it hook, line, and sinker. I can’t be mad at Darcy. However, when he discovered it, his opinion once lost… yeah, that.
November 1, 2022
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars.
Jane and Elizabeth are at Netherfield where Jane is recovering from her "bad cold". They take a walk outside and observe Darcy riding a horse he is attempting to train. After successfully making one jump he decides to show off his skills with a repeat. A moment of distraction and a pheasant startles his horse and he is thrown. Jane goes for help. Elizabeth pushes through a hedge to get to him. He gains consciousness just long enough to kiss her and propose!
Elizabeth does not hold Darcy to that proposal. And as only four people are aware of it, her reputation is safe. However, Darcy is serious and gains the week before the Netherfield Ball to unofficially court her. (Love how Bingley edits Darcy's planned second proposal!) Things go well...they come to an agreement.
However, he goes to London to take care of some business and now we have some angst in the story. He is expected back within 2 or 3 days and not only does he not come back when expected but also no one hears from him! And in London Darcy has not heard from Elizabeth. What is going on?
I won't spoil the story for you by revealing not only the surprise as to who is plotting but also how that person manages to put the plan into effect.
There are moments of romance and some teasing. Collins is even more of a bumbling fool in this variation and, for once, Mrs. Bennet sees other possibilities for her second daughter. (Laughable how she again claims that she predicted various outcomes when they come about.)
Wickham is part of the story and although he doesn't run off with Lydia he does get himself into deep trouble.
There is also an epilogue which does not go on and on about who married who and how many children they had but actually gives us a taste of the relationship within marriage a year or so after they married.
Jane and Elizabeth are at Netherfield where Jane is recovering from her "bad cold". They take a walk outside and observe Darcy riding a horse he is attempting to train. After successfully making one jump he decides to show off his skills with a repeat. A moment of distraction and a pheasant startles his horse and he is thrown. Jane goes for help. Elizabeth pushes through a hedge to get to him. He gains consciousness just long enough to kiss her and propose!
Elizabeth does not hold Darcy to that proposal. And as only four people are aware of it, her reputation is safe. However, Darcy is serious and gains the week before the Netherfield Ball to unofficially court her. (Love how Bingley edits Darcy's planned second proposal!) Things go well...they come to an agreement.
However, he goes to London to take care of some business and now we have some angst in the story. He is expected back within 2 or 3 days and not only does he not come back when expected but also no one hears from him! And in London Darcy has not heard from Elizabeth. What is going on?
I won't spoil the story for you by revealing not only the surprise as to who is plotting but also how that person manages to put the plan into effect.
There are moments of romance and some teasing. Collins is even more of a bumbling fool in this variation and, for once, Mrs. Bennet sees other possibilities for her second daughter. (Laughable how she again claims that she predicted various outcomes when they come about.)
Wickham is part of the story and although he doesn't run off with Lydia he does get himself into deep trouble.
There is also an epilogue which does not go on and on about who married who and how many children they had but actually gives us a taste of the relationship within marriage a year or so after they married.
December 8, 2022
Loved the premise!
This wonderfully-lighthearted story begins at Netherfield while Jane is recovering from her cold. She and Elizabeth are walking in the gardens and observing Darcy’s riding skills. When noticing the applause he is receiving from them, Darcy’s self-pride has him lose focus when his eyes meet Elizabeth’s. Simultaneously, a pheasant frightens his horse and he is thrown. Elizabeth runs to give aid and a semi-conscious Darcy proposes and passes out again.
“Dearest…loveliest Elizabeth…be my wife.”—quote from book.
I love the quite literal circumstances that provide the perfect title of this book.
Darcy has no memory of the proposal. When Bingley, who, along with Jane witnessed the proposal, makes him aware of what happened and what he said, he decides to stand by his proposal.
As always, Darcy has been struggling with his feelings for Elizabeth. On the way to Longbourn, Bingley asks what he will say and is shocked to hear how he will speak about overcoming his scruples, and unaware as he is, demeaning her and her family in the process.
“Are you daft, man? You are not actually going to say that to Miss Elizabeth, are you?”—quote from book
What follows is some very good advice from Bingley which Darcy accepts. I love it when Bingley plays a key role. However, Elizabeth doesn’t exactly provide the response Darcy wants. Time to woo her properly is eventually granted and a quiet courtship begins. Working their way through past misunderstandings and the interference of those who do not wish for their attachment at all provides the reader with hours of page-turning entertainment.
I really loved this well-written novel. I found myself smiling—a lot. The plot is engaging, the romance sweet, and this Darcy is charming. The happy ending will come, but not before the author provides just the right amount of mild to moderately angst-filled moments—at least for me.
One tiny quibble—I would have enjoyed a bit more dialogue, as the writing leans more towards the narrative style. There’s a lot of telling. What dialogue does exist is well done, so I would encourage more of it, as I find good dialogue among the characters brings them even more to life.
Another great read from Ms. Smythe. Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library and the audiobook.
December 8, 2022 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman comes through once again with a superb narration and performance. I have listened to so many of her audiobooks now, that I’m running out of great things to say without sounding repetitive. She is a guaranteed satisfaction for me.
This wonderfully-lighthearted story begins at Netherfield while Jane is recovering from her cold. She and Elizabeth are walking in the gardens and observing Darcy’s riding skills. When noticing the applause he is receiving from them, Darcy’s self-pride has him lose focus when his eyes meet Elizabeth’s. Simultaneously, a pheasant frightens his horse and he is thrown. Elizabeth runs to give aid and a semi-conscious Darcy proposes and passes out again.
“Dearest…loveliest Elizabeth…be my wife.”—quote from book.
I love the quite literal circumstances that provide the perfect title of this book.
Darcy has no memory of the proposal. When Bingley, who, along with Jane witnessed the proposal, makes him aware of what happened and what he said, he decides to stand by his proposal.
As always, Darcy has been struggling with his feelings for Elizabeth. On the way to Longbourn, Bingley asks what he will say and is shocked to hear how he will speak about overcoming his scruples, and unaware as he is, demeaning her and her family in the process.
“Are you daft, man? You are not actually going to say that to Miss Elizabeth, are you?”—quote from book
What follows is some very good advice from Bingley which Darcy accepts. I love it when Bingley plays a key role. However, Elizabeth doesn’t exactly provide the response Darcy wants. Time to woo her properly is eventually granted and a quiet courtship begins. Working their way through past misunderstandings and the interference of those who do not wish for their attachment at all provides the reader with hours of page-turning entertainment.
I really loved this well-written novel. I found myself smiling—a lot. The plot is engaging, the romance sweet, and this Darcy is charming. The happy ending will come, but not before the author provides just the right amount of mild to moderately angst-filled moments—at least for me.
One tiny quibble—I would have enjoyed a bit more dialogue, as the writing leans more towards the narrative style. There’s a lot of telling. What dialogue does exist is well done, so I would encourage more of it, as I find good dialogue among the characters brings them even more to life.
Another great read from Ms. Smythe. Highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library and the audiobook.
December 8, 2022 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman comes through once again with a superb narration and performance. I have listened to so many of her audiobooks now, that I’m running out of great things to say without sounding repetitive. She is a guaranteed satisfaction for me.
October 22, 2022
"...no matter how beguiling, enchantingly clever, or warmly kind Miss Elizabeth proved to be, he could never marry her." (quote from the book)
Or so Mr. Darcy tells himself! But showing off his riding skills while Miss Elizabeth and Miss Bennet are walking the gardens of Netherfield Park, his horse spooks and Mr. Darcy falls. Elizabeth has Jane go for help while she crawls through the hedges to Mr. Darcy. Just as Jane and Mr. Bingley appear, Mr. Darcy opens his eyes, promptly kisses Elizabeth and asks her to marry him before passing out again.
"If only he was as attractive on the inside as he was outwardly, he would have made an excellent husband." (quote from the book)
So begins another wonderful story by Ms. Smythe! I was chuckling and smiling throughout. There are some epic scenes in this story that came vividly to life for me. Picture the 1995 Pride & Prejudice mini-series with Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle and all the accompanying cast. They were flashing before my eyes as the story unfolded.
"Do not scowl at her when you make your offer. Women prefer a more friendly aspect." (quote from the book)
Mr. Darcy has his work cut out for him in convincing Miss Elizabeth that he is serious about marrying her! With sage advice from Mr. Bingley and Miss Bennet, Mr. Darcy slowly makes his moves with the added help of Mrs. Bennet. Elizabeth agrees to a courtship.
"The spark of calculation Darcy had previously noted in Mrs. Bennet's eyes flared into an inferno at this new information." (quote from the book)
However, all is not smooth sailing. Mr. Collins is a bumbling force to be reckoned with and Miss Bingley is certain she can still win the prize. But there is one who refuses to be denied.
"If he could make Elizabeth love him, he truly would have everything a man could desire." (quote from the book)
I highly recommend this new variation from Ms. Smythe. It is highly diverting!
I received an ARC of this book from Booksprout. I am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 2, 2022
When asking someone to marry you is the easy part
Mr. Darcy falls off the horse, loses consciousness and the accident is witnessed by the two oldest of the Bennet sisters. He recovers the senses for a few moments, but long enough to propose to Elizabeth and still compromise her. Then they will have to face the actions of several people, who try to initially disrupt the proud Mr. Darcy's attempt to win over the reluctant Lizzy and then to pursue the engagement.
A Mrs. Bennet at the height of the inadequacy of her behavior that interspersed moments when she should simply disappear from the face of the Earth with others when she was the person who most helped Mr. Darcy's claim.
Of those books that we read easy many pages without even realizing so pleasant is the text, very witty at various times.
In time: Lady Catherine, what a shame!
4.5 stars.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Mr. Darcy falls off the horse, loses consciousness and the accident is witnessed by the two oldest of the Bennet sisters. He recovers the senses for a few moments, but long enough to propose to Elizabeth and still compromise her. Then they will have to face the actions of several people, who try to initially disrupt the proud Mr. Darcy's attempt to win over the reluctant Lizzy and then to pursue the engagement.
A Mrs. Bennet at the height of the inadequacy of her behavior that interspersed moments when she should simply disappear from the face of the Earth with others when she was the person who most helped Mr. Darcy's claim.
Of those books that we read easy many pages without even realizing so pleasant is the text, very witty at various times.
In time: Lady Catherine, what a shame!
4.5 stars.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 19, 2022
A charming variation with a wry humour throughout
A very well written “what if” where Darcy declares himself whilst still at Netherfield. Elizabeth is far from convinced but she allows him to prove himself. Thus we see Darcy at his most charming, seeking to woo his lady-love despite rain, mud and a very persistent Mr Collins.
This period of courtship is sweetly written with just the right amount of humour to keep it from being too much. This rather more vulnerable, but still very recognisable, Darcy is a delight.
As we all know, the good times seldom last for ever and there is a bump on the road at about the 75% mark. This didn’t quite ring true for me as suddenly our dynamic Darcy became a little too passive and allowed himself to be manipulated rather more than I would have expected. Mrs Bennet’s response to all of this was a little too much for me too.
Despite my slight reservations this is an extremely enjoyable story which I would highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A very well written “what if” where Darcy declares himself whilst still at Netherfield. Elizabeth is far from convinced but she allows him to prove himself. Thus we see Darcy at his most charming, seeking to woo his lady-love despite rain, mud and a very persistent Mr Collins.
This period of courtship is sweetly written with just the right amount of humour to keep it from being too much. This rather more vulnerable, but still very recognisable, Darcy is a delight.
As we all know, the good times seldom last for ever and there is a bump on the road at about the 75% mark. This didn’t quite ring true for me as suddenly our dynamic Darcy became a little too passive and allowed himself to be manipulated rather more than I would have expected. Mrs Bennet’s response to all of this was a little too much for me too.
Despite my slight reservations this is an extremely enjoyable story which I would highly recommend.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 29, 2022
Review also posted on my blog
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
During their stay at Netherfield Park, Jane and Elizabeth Bennet take a turn about the gardens.
Fitzwilliam Darcy, is enamoured of Elizabeth but due to her social status, he has no intention to propose. She is not overly impressed with him!
Darcy is returning from a ride, when he sees the sisters and decides to demonstrate his prowess as a horseman.
Unfortunately, the jump goes badly and Darcy falls.
Jane goes for help, while Elizabeth rushes to assist Mr Darcy. His head injury removes his inhibitions, resulting in a declaration of love, a proposal and a passionate kiss. He then passes out.
Elizabeth wants to hush this up, as she doesn’t want to be forced to marry a man she dislikes.
Darcy recovers and is determined that, for the sake of his honour, he must make a formal offer of marriage.
What follows is a gentle courtship and a growing understanding between the couple.
A little angst towards the end adds a little spice.
Thoroughly enchanting!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
During their stay at Netherfield Park, Jane and Elizabeth Bennet take a turn about the gardens.
Fitzwilliam Darcy, is enamoured of Elizabeth but due to her social status, he has no intention to propose. She is not overly impressed with him!
Darcy is returning from a ride, when he sees the sisters and decides to demonstrate his prowess as a horseman.
Unfortunately, the jump goes badly and Darcy falls.
Jane goes for help, while Elizabeth rushes to assist Mr Darcy. His head injury removes his inhibitions, resulting in a declaration of love, a proposal and a passionate kiss. He then passes out.
Elizabeth wants to hush this up, as she doesn’t want to be forced to marry a man she dislikes.
Darcy recovers and is determined that, for the sake of his honour, he must make a formal offer of marriage.
What follows is a gentle courtship and a growing understanding between the couple.
A little angst towards the end adds a little spice.
Thoroughly enchanting!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 28, 2022
low-angst loveliness
Writing a review for Pride Before a Fall is difficult. While it’s easy to extol Ms Smythe’s style, particularly her delicious word choice and delightful turn of phrase (not to mention superior editing), my favorite part of this one came at the end and is a twist I haven’t seen before. This is saying something, considering the amount of JAFF I read. However, I don’t want to give anything away. It’s too lovely and you simply must read it for yourself! I recommend this book to anyone who loves a good P&P variation, and also anyone who appreciates good writing. In my opinion, Ms Smythe’s books get better each time she publishes. You really can’t go wrong choosing any of her books.
Writing a review for Pride Before a Fall is difficult. While it’s easy to extol Ms Smythe’s style, particularly her delicious word choice and delightful turn of phrase (not to mention superior editing), my favorite part of this one came at the end and is a twist I haven’t seen before. This is saying something, considering the amount of JAFF I read. However, I don’t want to give anything away. It’s too lovely and you simply must read it for yourself! I recommend this book to anyone who loves a good P&P variation, and also anyone who appreciates good writing. In my opinion, Ms Smythe’s books get better each time she publishes. You really can’t go wrong choosing any of her books.
November 1, 2022
A Humor-Filled Romantic Pride and Prejudice Variation that had me smiling as I read. Lady Catherine is at it again with her troublemaking. I enjoyed reading this variation. I received a copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 29, 2022
4.5. This was a fun story that shows a more vulnerable and tender side of Darcy. Darcy gets a bump on the head due to a riding accident, and just before the lights go out, he offers Elizabeth a proposal and a kiss. The scene is now set for an early chance to clear up the misunderstandings and prejudices between them and have a fresh start.
This book centers around the courtship of Darcy and Elizabeth. When Darcy repeats his proposal once he is in his right mind, he realizes Elizabeth doesn’t hold him in the same high esteem he does her. Once some misconceptions are cleared up, instead of refusing his offer, she gives him the chance to court her so they can have a chance to truly get to know one another. It is a sweet story and I enjoyed seeing Darcy wooing his lady and trying to earn her love and win her hand. There were some sweet moments of blossoming romance and affection that were very enjoyable to read. I enjoyed the courtship very much, but wish we would have gotten to enjoy a little more of the romance end of things.
The usual gang is all here and, it surprises me to say it, but Mrs. Bennet was a favorite in this story, at least for the season of courtship. I smiled at how savvy and effective Mrs. B can be when she puts her mind to it-especially when there are rich, single men on the loose around Longbourn. Never one to pass up a chance to capitalize on the attention of said young men, she really became Darcy’s unspoken ally with her fancy maneuvering to disentangle and redirect Mr. Collins from Elizabeth, leaving the field wide open for Darcy.😂 Another thing I appreciated was Wickham’s abbreviated appearance and influence in this book. Sometimes it’s really nice to almost completely bypass the whole Lydia/Wickham drama. Colonel Fitzwilliam is not a character in this book, but he does gets mentioned towards the end and kind of gets the short end of the stick if you ask me! Haha
There was little angst during the first 75% of this book. When the angst hits, even though weeks pass in the timeline of the book, the page time is short before things are resolved. I admit that I found it a bit hard to imagine that Darcy would let the situation stand and worsen for as long as he did without taking some sort of action, but I was satisfied with how things worked out and am glad it didn’t get dragged out unnecessarily.
Overall, this was a fun and enjoyable story. It was well written and well paced and kept my interest. I look forward to reading more from this author.
This book centers around the courtship of Darcy and Elizabeth. When Darcy repeats his proposal once he is in his right mind, he realizes Elizabeth doesn’t hold him in the same high esteem he does her. Once some misconceptions are cleared up, instead of refusing his offer, she gives him the chance to court her so they can have a chance to truly get to know one another. It is a sweet story and I enjoyed seeing Darcy wooing his lady and trying to earn her love and win her hand. There were some sweet moments of blossoming romance and affection that were very enjoyable to read. I enjoyed the courtship very much, but wish we would have gotten to enjoy a little more of the romance end of things.
The usual gang is all here and, it surprises me to say it, but Mrs. Bennet was a favorite in this story, at least for the season of courtship. I smiled at how savvy and effective Mrs. B can be when she puts her mind to it-especially when there are rich, single men on the loose around Longbourn. Never one to pass up a chance to capitalize on the attention of said young men, she really became Darcy’s unspoken ally with her fancy maneuvering to disentangle and redirect Mr. Collins from Elizabeth, leaving the field wide open for Darcy.😂 Another thing I appreciated was Wickham’s abbreviated appearance and influence in this book. Sometimes it’s really nice to almost completely bypass the whole Lydia/Wickham drama. Colonel Fitzwilliam is not a character in this book, but he does gets mentioned towards the end and kind of gets the short end of the stick if you ask me! Haha
There was little angst during the first 75% of this book. When the angst hits, even though weeks pass in the timeline of the book, the page time is short before things are resolved. I admit that I found it a bit hard to imagine that Darcy would let the situation stand and worsen for as long as he did without taking some sort of action, but I was satisfied with how things worked out and am glad it didn’t get dragged out unnecessarily.
Overall, this was a fun and enjoyable story. It was well written and well paced and kept my interest. I look forward to reading more from this author.
September 7, 2023
What If, After Falling from a Horse, Mr. Darcy Immediately Declares Himself?
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Mr. Darcy isn’t too disappointed to discover he has unintentionally declared himself to Elizabeth Bennet after falling from his horse. He is ready to honor the proposal he made – especially when he realizes it is truly his heart’s secret wish. However, Elizabeth has already formed an unlikable opinion about him. But she realizes that her character sketch of him may be a little wanting…. Can Mr. Darcy prove his worth to Elizabeth and convince her to accept his earnest suit by the Netherfield Ball?
MY THOUGHTS:
This was such a fun twist to explore! I love when Elizabeth sees another side of Mr. Darcy – especially early on in their relationship. And I love the change of Elizabeth being aware of Mr. Darcy’s interest and feelings, and Mr. Darcy being aware of Elizabeth’s dislike and disinterest. It’s a refreshing change to have most of the misunderstandings cleared up so early in the story-line!
What I loved most about this story was Mr. Darcy. Readers see a temporarily addled Mr. Darcy, a sincere and courting Mr. Darcy, and a vulnerable and irrevocably in love Mr. Darcy. All my favorites! 🥰 Mr. Darcy did so many things to win my heart in this story – with his determination to see Elizabeth during inclement weather, his ebullient joy after spending any time with her, his thwarting of Mr. Collins’s suit, his total acceptance of Mrs. Bennet and Elizabeth’s embarrassing siblings, and his actions to protect others from Mr. Wickham. In addition, I loved seeing Elizabeth observe and ponder over all these admirable qualities about Mr. Darcy. I appreciated her gradual journey to understanding him better and falling in love with him. Special shout out to Mr. Bingley for his vital assistance with proposal coaching!
While I loved the first half of the book, I must admit I wasn’t as fond of the drama that sprang up towards the end. (SPOILER ALERT!) I understand with an engagement occurring 90 pages before the close of the story, maybe it felt like some new tension or conflict is needed. But I’m not sure if this scenario served so well. I don’t think Mr. Darcy would be so easily controlled and outwitted in his own home. I don’t blame Elizabeth one bit for thinking and acting as she did. Also, Mr. Darcy is a man of action…it feels implausible that he would have stayed away from Meryton as long as he did. He would have contrived away to somehow see and speak with Elizabeth. And while all is eventually resolved happily, the epilogue ended up being a little bit of a downer because it dwelt on the guilt and misery of all the antagonists in this story (including their deaths and downfalls) and not as much said about the happy couples.
Pride Before a Fall takes readers on a delightful and romantic journey that follows Mr. Darcy as he literally and figuratively gets back on his horse again after experiencing some falls! I greatly appreciated the unique premies, the satisfying character development, and the ardent love Mary Smythe brought forth in this novel! I cannot wait to read her upcoming release – Prevailed Upon to Marry.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Mr. Darcy isn’t too disappointed to discover he has unintentionally declared himself to Elizabeth Bennet after falling from his horse. He is ready to honor the proposal he made – especially when he realizes it is truly his heart’s secret wish. However, Elizabeth has already formed an unlikable opinion about him. But she realizes that her character sketch of him may be a little wanting…. Can Mr. Darcy prove his worth to Elizabeth and convince her to accept his earnest suit by the Netherfield Ball?
MY THOUGHTS:
This was such a fun twist to explore! I love when Elizabeth sees another side of Mr. Darcy – especially early on in their relationship. And I love the change of Elizabeth being aware of Mr. Darcy’s interest and feelings, and Mr. Darcy being aware of Elizabeth’s dislike and disinterest. It’s a refreshing change to have most of the misunderstandings cleared up so early in the story-line!
What I loved most about this story was Mr. Darcy. Readers see a temporarily addled Mr. Darcy, a sincere and courting Mr. Darcy, and a vulnerable and irrevocably in love Mr. Darcy. All my favorites! 🥰 Mr. Darcy did so many things to win my heart in this story – with his determination to see Elizabeth during inclement weather, his ebullient joy after spending any time with her, his thwarting of Mr. Collins’s suit, his total acceptance of Mrs. Bennet and Elizabeth’s embarrassing siblings, and his actions to protect others from Mr. Wickham. In addition, I loved seeing Elizabeth observe and ponder over all these admirable qualities about Mr. Darcy. I appreciated her gradual journey to understanding him better and falling in love with him. Special shout out to Mr. Bingley for his vital assistance with proposal coaching!
While I loved the first half of the book, I must admit I wasn’t as fond of the drama that sprang up towards the end. (SPOILER ALERT!) I understand with an engagement occurring 90 pages before the close of the story, maybe it felt like some new tension or conflict is needed. But I’m not sure if this scenario served so well. I don’t think Mr. Darcy would be so easily controlled and outwitted in his own home. I don’t blame Elizabeth one bit for thinking and acting as she did. Also, Mr. Darcy is a man of action…it feels implausible that he would have stayed away from Meryton as long as he did. He would have contrived away to somehow see and speak with Elizabeth. And while all is eventually resolved happily, the epilogue ended up being a little bit of a downer because it dwelt on the guilt and misery of all the antagonists in this story (including their deaths and downfalls) and not as much said about the happy couples.
Pride Before a Fall takes readers on a delightful and romantic journey that follows Mr. Darcy as he literally and figuratively gets back on his horse again after experiencing some falls! I greatly appreciated the unique premies, the satisfying character development, and the ardent love Mary Smythe brought forth in this novel! I cannot wait to read her upcoming release – Prevailed Upon to Marry.
Austenesque Reviews
October 5, 2023
I’ve enjoyed all of this author’s P&P variations. I especially liked the way alternating chapters were told from Darcy or Elizabeth’s point of view. Lady Catherine and Mr Collins are both trouble makers. Caroline is hysterical (literally and figuratively). The epilogue is very thorough and wraps everything up nicely.
October 14, 2023
I felt like this could have been a lighthearted early resolution story, but it is too long and repetitive (both E & D’s POV shown and we go back in time a lot to change POV) and has a number of anachronisms that slow the story down, before randomly tacking on manufactured angst at the end to its own detriment.
E & D’s reactions to their separation and how they dealt with lack of communication, followed by easy reassurance after an accidental meeting, made me feel that neither are ready to marry, and certainly not to each other, which rather undermines the romance.
The villains are also a bit too much. Miss Bingley is particularly ridiculous and the fact that Bingley never intervenes makes him seem oblivious and selfish. That E falls so quickly for Wickham’s insinuations and D allows Lady C to manipulate him so easily feels incredibly OOC. Their cartoonishness makes the “angst” more eye-rolling than anxiety-inducing!
Wouldn’t re-read.
Audible - Stevie Zimmerman. I like how Stevie reads and gives stories and I think she improved the readability of this story, I stuck with it because of her.
E & D’s reactions to their separation and how they dealt with lack of communication, followed by easy reassurance after an accidental meeting, made me feel that neither are ready to marry, and certainly not to each other, which rather undermines the romance.
The villains are also a bit too much. Miss Bingley is particularly ridiculous and the fact that Bingley never intervenes makes him seem oblivious and selfish. That E falls so quickly for Wickham’s insinuations and D allows Lady C to manipulate him so easily feels incredibly OOC. Their cartoonishness makes the “angst” more eye-rolling than anxiety-inducing!
Wouldn’t re-read.
Audible - Stevie Zimmerman. I like how Stevie reads and gives stories and I think she improved the readability of this story, I stuck with it because of her.
October 24, 2022
Much of this was great, but it declined once the engagement had come about and the story dragged on unnecessarily. The post-engagement section lacked creativity, was rather trite, and ineffective, bringing down the rating.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 30, 2022
Wonderful
Darcy, who has been struggling with his attraction to Elizabeth during her stay at Netherfield to nurse Jane, is thrown from his horse and hits his head, an accident witnessed by Elizabeth and Jane. While Jane runs to get help, Elizabeth goes to see if Darcy is injured. In his shaken and confused state, Darcy blurts out a marriage proposal to Elizabeth, and his words are heard by Jane and Bingley. Elizabeth, who has no good opinion of Darcy, decides that Darcy is befuddled, and dismisses the proposal as evidence of a head injury. After Darcy's recovery, he lets Elizabeth know that he really does wish to marry her. Darcy begins a campaign to improve Elizabeth's opinion of himself, while several outside influences conspire to make this an uphill battle.
This is a fun, amusing and heartwarming tale about how our dear couple must contend with one complication after another, and hope that love will prevail. I love Darcy in this story. He is absolutely swoon worthy, and it's wonderful how he knows what he wants right from the beginning. Elizabeth is also admirable, although she does have some scenes in which her nerves rival Mrs Bennett's. Mrs Bennett is a piece of work, and way over-the-top at times, but since the book is written in a rather tongue-in-cheek way, I let it slide. The humor is superb.
The book is well written and well edited. It's a great way to pass some time, and lots of fun to read. I recommend it highly.
Darcy, who has been struggling with his attraction to Elizabeth during her stay at Netherfield to nurse Jane, is thrown from his horse and hits his head, an accident witnessed by Elizabeth and Jane. While Jane runs to get help, Elizabeth goes to see if Darcy is injured. In his shaken and confused state, Darcy blurts out a marriage proposal to Elizabeth, and his words are heard by Jane and Bingley. Elizabeth, who has no good opinion of Darcy, decides that Darcy is befuddled, and dismisses the proposal as evidence of a head injury. After Darcy's recovery, he lets Elizabeth know that he really does wish to marry her. Darcy begins a campaign to improve Elizabeth's opinion of himself, while several outside influences conspire to make this an uphill battle.
This is a fun, amusing and heartwarming tale about how our dear couple must contend with one complication after another, and hope that love will prevail. I love Darcy in this story. He is absolutely swoon worthy, and it's wonderful how he knows what he wants right from the beginning. Elizabeth is also admirable, although she does have some scenes in which her nerves rival Mrs Bennett's. Mrs Bennett is a piece of work, and way over-the-top at times, but since the book is written in a rather tongue-in-cheek way, I let it slide. The humor is superb.
The book is well written and well edited. It's a great way to pass some time, and lots of fun to read. I recommend it highly.
October 29, 2022
Excellent variation
Well written with unique storyline for our favourite characters. Darcy's character development was well played given one problem after the other to resolve and move forward. Elizabeth had fewer challenges, but her character development was refreshing. Enjoy.
Well written with unique storyline for our favourite characters. Darcy's character development was well played given one problem after the other to resolve and move forward. Elizabeth had fewer challenges, but her character development was refreshing. Enjoy.
October 31, 2022
3 & 1/2 rounded to 4. I really really loved this one up until the "complication" - the angst wasn't necessary to me and most of the epilogue I skimmed over.
November 9, 2022
cute read at first glance
But the forced separation scenario was really not needed and stupid. I was tolling my eyes while reading it, debating on whether or not to skip ahead because it was so predictable. Another star deduction was for the modern use of “literally”. I literally hat that term and the author literally used it several times. Literally! Yes. I’m still upset about it.
But the forced separation scenario was really not needed and stupid. I was tolling my eyes while reading it, debating on whether or not to skip ahead because it was so predictable. Another star deduction was for the modern use of “literally”. I literally hat that term and the author literally used it several times. Literally! Yes. I’m still upset about it.
September 26, 2024
Too many words.
I hate when an author forces me to even think those words but there are some who truly don't understand when they've added too many. Annoyed by pointless, and yes it is pointless, angst and being forced to jump back in time, time and time again, I found myself skimming far too often.
CAUTION: SPOILERS AHEAD
There was no reason Darcy, madly in love with Elizabeth Darcy, wouldn't have noticed the lack of correspondence from not just Elizabeth but Mr. Bennett and certainly Bingley and investigated further. There was nothing his aunt and cousin could have done to stop that. He could have nay would have done more so this was an unnecessary and extremely annoying last little angsty foil in Elizabeth and Darcy's love story. Also very disappointed in the set down he gave Lady Catherine after she caused Elizabeth that much pain.
This wasn't necessarily a bad book but it definitely had too many inane words.
I hate when an author forces me to even think those words but there are some who truly don't understand when they've added too many. Annoyed by pointless, and yes it is pointless, angst and being forced to jump back in time, time and time again, I found myself skimming far too often.
CAUTION: SPOILERS AHEAD
There was no reason Darcy, madly in love with Elizabeth Darcy, wouldn't have noticed the lack of correspondence from not just Elizabeth but Mr. Bennett and certainly Bingley and investigated further. There was nothing his aunt and cousin could have done to stop that. He could have nay would have done more so this was an unnecessary and extremely annoying last little angsty foil in Elizabeth and Darcy's love story. Also very disappointed in the set down he gave Lady Catherine after she caused Elizabeth that much pain.
This wasn't necessarily a bad book but it definitely had too many inane words.
November 1, 2022
A slower read. First half was humorous, but for me the book could have wrapped up after the engagement. The "angst" scenario seemed forced.
October 15, 2022
🐎 Pride Before a Fall 💍
A Pride & Prejudice Variation
✒️ Mary Smythe
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Release Date 10/24/2022
Publisher Quills and Quartos
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𝗕𝗹𝘂𝗿𝗯
To think that Mr Darcy considers himself in love with me!
ELIZABETH BENNET IS HORRIFIED when, during a walk in Netherfield’s gardens with her sister Jane, she witnesses Mr Darcy take a fall from his horse. Rushing to his aid, she is bewildered when he–seeming quite out of his wits–declares himself to her. Deciding the proposal was the product of a confused mind, she decides to disregard it.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY HAD ALREADY DISMISSED any thoughts of an alliance with the enchanting Miss Elizabeth Bennet. When he learns of his addled declaration, however, he decides that his accident was a most fortunate one, revealing the true desires of his heart over more prudent objections. Alas, the object of his affections is less ready to accede, however, and so he finds he must win her as a proper suitor should.
MOVED BY DARCY’S SINCERITY AND PERSISTENCE, Elizabeth agrees to allow him the chance to court her properly before giving her final answer to his proposal. Darcy sets out to prove his lasting devotion and persuade Elizabeth they will be happy together. With various antagonists standing in the way of their happily ever after, it will prove to be no easy task!
PRIDE BEFORE A FALL is a lighthearted, humor filled Pride and Prejudice variation
𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄
Will seeing early the goodness of his soul be enough to alter her view of him…
This story is my second read by the author and is as good as the first one.
The timeline, plot and circumstances are much different with only one common point : no awful “first” proposal from Darcy, as this time instead of being corrected by a lost diary’s words, it is Bingley who steps in to make him see reason about how to breach the subject of marriage without demeaning the potentiel intended.
This storyline is what if Darcy proposed during his first stay at Netherfield. Thus it changes everything in the narrative, from Elizabeth’s distrust of Darcy, Whickam’s offending lies to even Bingley and Jane’s romance.
Their courtship timeline instead of overlapping many months takes place in a matter of days with of course a final twist, as they needed to ensure the strength of their feelings.
With Darcy’s proposing much early that he is known to have, his reserved behavior among folks did not have time to write him as a haughty disdainful fellow.
To woo Elizabeth, Darcy has to explain himself face to face and let her glimpse the honorable man behind the awkward being when meddling with strangers.
All the while pursued by a Mr Collins worse than his original self and a Wickham that tempts her new found trust in Darcy’s character.
Elizabeth must dig into her heart to unknot all her confused feelings, setting aside her wounded pride, seeing under a new light a man she thought disliked her, decide her future in just a matter of days …
I loved this Bingley and Jane, they work together to make things happen, and while their own romance is kept in the shadow, theirs is not thwarted by meddlers.
5 stars for this heartwarming tale nearly free of angst if not for a last minute deceit orchestrated by some scheming characters.
𝗦𝘁𝗲𝗮𝗺 𝗹𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗹 kisses
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A Pride & Prejudice Variation
✒️ Mary Smythe
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Release Date 10/24/2022
Publisher Quills and Quartos
➪ https://a.co/d/c6vf9rI
𝗕𝗹𝘂𝗿𝗯
To think that Mr Darcy considers himself in love with me!
ELIZABETH BENNET IS HORRIFIED when, during a walk in Netherfield’s gardens with her sister Jane, she witnesses Mr Darcy take a fall from his horse. Rushing to his aid, she is bewildered when he–seeming quite out of his wits–declares himself to her. Deciding the proposal was the product of a confused mind, she decides to disregard it.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY HAD ALREADY DISMISSED any thoughts of an alliance with the enchanting Miss Elizabeth Bennet. When he learns of his addled declaration, however, he decides that his accident was a most fortunate one, revealing the true desires of his heart over more prudent objections. Alas, the object of his affections is less ready to accede, however, and so he finds he must win her as a proper suitor should.
MOVED BY DARCY’S SINCERITY AND PERSISTENCE, Elizabeth agrees to allow him the chance to court her properly before giving her final answer to his proposal. Darcy sets out to prove his lasting devotion and persuade Elizabeth they will be happy together. With various antagonists standing in the way of their happily ever after, it will prove to be no easy task!
PRIDE BEFORE A FALL is a lighthearted, humor filled Pride and Prejudice variation
𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄
Will seeing early the goodness of his soul be enough to alter her view of him…
This story is my second read by the author and is as good as the first one.
The timeline, plot and circumstances are much different with only one common point : no awful “first” proposal from Darcy, as this time instead of being corrected by a lost diary’s words, it is Bingley who steps in to make him see reason about how to breach the subject of marriage without demeaning the potentiel intended.
This storyline is what if Darcy proposed during his first stay at Netherfield. Thus it changes everything in the narrative, from Elizabeth’s distrust of Darcy, Whickam’s offending lies to even Bingley and Jane’s romance.
Their courtship timeline instead of overlapping many months takes place in a matter of days with of course a final twist, as they needed to ensure the strength of their feelings.
With Darcy’s proposing much early that he is known to have, his reserved behavior among folks did not have time to write him as a haughty disdainful fellow.
To woo Elizabeth, Darcy has to explain himself face to face and let her glimpse the honorable man behind the awkward being when meddling with strangers.
All the while pursued by a Mr Collins worse than his original self and a Wickham that tempts her new found trust in Darcy’s character.
Elizabeth must dig into her heart to unknot all her confused feelings, setting aside her wounded pride, seeing under a new light a man she thought disliked her, decide her future in just a matter of days …
I loved this Bingley and Jane, they work together to make things happen, and while their own romance is kept in the shadow, theirs is not thwarted by meddlers.
5 stars for this heartwarming tale nearly free of angst if not for a last minute deceit orchestrated by some scheming characters.
𝗦𝘁𝗲𝗮𝗺 𝗹𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗹 kisses
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May 20, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a standalone story that is part of the In Love With Mr Darcy series. This is a lighthearted, humor filled story. To think that Mr Darcy considers himself in love with Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth Bennet is horrified when, during a walk in Netherfield’s gardens with her sister Jane, she witnesses Mr Darcy take a fall from his horse. Rushing to his aid, she is bewildered when he, seeming quite out of his wits, declares himself to her. Deciding the proposal was the product of a confused mind, she decides to disregard it. Fitzwilliam Darcy had already dismissed any thoughts of an alliance with the enchanting Miss Elizabeth Bennet. When he learns of his addled declaration, however, he decides that his accident was a most fortunate one, revealing the true desires of his heart over more prudent objections.
Alas, the object of his affections is less ready to accede, however, and so he finds he must win her as a proper suitor should. Moved by Darcy’s sincerity and persistence, Elizabeth agrees to allow him the chance to court her properly before giving her final answer to his proposal. Darcy sets out to prove his lasting devotion and persuade Elizabeth they will be happy together. With various antagonists standing in the way of their happily ever after, it will prove to be no easy task. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is a standalone story that is part of the In Love With Mr Darcy series. This is a lighthearted, humor filled story. To think that Mr Darcy considers himself in love with Miss Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth Bennet is horrified when, during a walk in Netherfield’s gardens with her sister Jane, she witnesses Mr Darcy take a fall from his horse. Rushing to his aid, she is bewildered when he, seeming quite out of his wits, declares himself to her. Deciding the proposal was the product of a confused mind, she decides to disregard it. Fitzwilliam Darcy had already dismissed any thoughts of an alliance with the enchanting Miss Elizabeth Bennet. When he learns of his addled declaration, however, he decides that his accident was a most fortunate one, revealing the true desires of his heart over more prudent objections.
Alas, the object of his affections is less ready to accede, however, and so he finds he must win her as a proper suitor should. Moved by Darcy’s sincerity and persistence, Elizabeth agrees to allow him the chance to court her properly before giving her final answer to his proposal. Darcy sets out to prove his lasting devotion and persuade Elizabeth they will be happy together. With various antagonists standing in the way of their happily ever after, it will prove to be no easy task. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
February 26, 2023
This story starts similar to cannon P&P at the point when Mr. Darcy is ignoring Elizabeth in the Netherfield Library for a half hour while trying to remain steady in his purpose, and keep himself from feeling the things he felt for Elizabeth. The story veers from cannon P&P with Mr. Darcy leaving the library to go out riding his horse to get some exercise and try to get Elizabeth out of his head. He returns to the house just as Lizzie and Jane came outside for a short walk. Mr. Darcy does a little showing off, which goes awry, leaving him thrown from the horse.
Mr. Darcy is knocked out, but as he comes to, he kisses Elizabeth and asks her to marry him. Elizabeth is shocked and has no intention of holding him to something he did and said while clearly not having control of himself. As only the two of them plus Jane and Bingley know of what happened, she sees no reason that they can't keep it a secret. Mr. Darcy is honorable and also somewhat relived that he can just marry Elizabeth and not have to feel so conflicted about it. One of the differences from cannon is that Bingley and Jane are aware of the situation, so they are able to be confidants for Darcy and Elizabeth. It was great seeing Bingley giving Darcy the sage advice in this story, with clearly knowing what Darcy shouldn't say to Elizabeth about her status and family in this situation.
Will Darcy win over Elizabeth, or will his pride that has yet to be quashed or other people push them apart? I suspect that you know how this is going to end, but it's a fun journey getting there.
Mr. Darcy is knocked out, but as he comes to, he kisses Elizabeth and asks her to marry him. Elizabeth is shocked and has no intention of holding him to something he did and said while clearly not having control of himself. As only the two of them plus Jane and Bingley know of what happened, she sees no reason that they can't keep it a secret. Mr. Darcy is honorable and also somewhat relived that he can just marry Elizabeth and not have to feel so conflicted about it. One of the differences from cannon is that Bingley and Jane are aware of the situation, so they are able to be confidants for Darcy and Elizabeth. It was great seeing Bingley giving Darcy the sage advice in this story, with clearly knowing what Darcy shouldn't say to Elizabeth about her status and family in this situation.
Will Darcy win over Elizabeth, or will his pride that has yet to be quashed or other people push them apart? I suspect that you know how this is going to end, but it's a fun journey getting there.
October 21, 2024
Its a good book. The book starts off when Elizabeth is staying at Netherfield park to tend to Jane. Darcy is losing the battle between his heart and mind and to avoid blurting out his feeling to E he takes a ride. When he is back and jumps a hedge, E and Jane are in garden and politely applause his abilities. He tries to show off and while jumping the hedge again, a bird scares the horse and Darcy falls hard. while Jane runs to house to get help, E braves the hedge and is tending to him where Darcy in semi conscious state proposes her. Only Jane and Bingley witness this so Elizabeth tells bingley she is releasing Darcy of this proposal.
Now once Darcy awakes and realises E doesn't want to marry him, we see him changing his judgement. he proposes again but E tells him she doesn't want to marry him. D is devastated and they talk and he succeeds in getting E to think again and get to know him for a week before the Netherfield ball. As D has seen E talking to Wickham, he tells her all his history putting her on her guard
all this behavior makes E start thinking on her earlier prejudices and she starts seeing him for the man he is
Both of them are very insecure because of their flaws. D is aware he did not come off well and E disliked him intensely initially so he is always afraid because of his pride E might start hating him again
E thinks she is below him in status and wealth and her family is too vulgar and Darcy will regret tying down to Bennets. How they overcome the challenges created by their own thinking and some usual villains is the story.
A good read
Now once Darcy awakes and realises E doesn't want to marry him, we see him changing his judgement. he proposes again but E tells him she doesn't want to marry him. D is devastated and they talk and he succeeds in getting E to think again and get to know him for a week before the Netherfield ball. As D has seen E talking to Wickham, he tells her all his history putting her on her guard
all this behavior makes E start thinking on her earlier prejudices and she starts seeing him for the man he is
Both of them are very insecure because of their flaws. D is aware he did not come off well and E disliked him intensely initially so he is always afraid because of his pride E might start hating him again
E thinks she is below him in status and wealth and her family is too vulgar and Darcy will regret tying down to Bennets. How they overcome the challenges created by their own thinking and some usual villains is the story.
A good read
August 12, 2024
The premise of this variation is that Darcy falls from a horse during the time Jane and Elizabeth are at Netherfield. The collision with the ground rings his bell and he's out of it, but in a moment of consciousness, he kisses Elizabeth who stayed behind to attend him, and then offers marriage before promptly passing out. Even though she releases him from any obligation, this sets Darcy to be more serious and pursue her in earnest. It's a slow build of her changing her mind about him, while evading the nonsense of Caroline and Mr Collins.
Smythe is the kind of JAFF written who loves to settle into the internal reflection of Elizabeth and Darcy; as a result, her books have a slower pace than a lot of other variations. More long paragraphs, less in-scene badinage. In some of her books, it's a pacing problem, but in this book, I thought it was a good choice.
A few things of note that I liked: the internal dialogue is suitable to this structure of story, Mrs Bennet is used to her fullest potential when she suspects Darcy likes Elizabeth, Bingley isn't useless and purely a doe-eyed fool like in the original, Elizabeth changes her mind over the course of a week but it doesn't seem extremely sudden (a credit to Smythe), and Darcy does a good job dealing with the Bennets' silliness without having a personality 180. However, one thing I didn't care for was the interference from Lady Catherine in final quarter of the book. I've read this exact scheme in several variations but don't understand how it would be feasible to accomplish in Darcy House. The last chunk really dragged and seemed completely superfluous given the way things stood between ODC. Regardless, I enjoyed this one a lot.
Smythe is the kind of JAFF written who loves to settle into the internal reflection of Elizabeth and Darcy; as a result, her books have a slower pace than a lot of other variations. More long paragraphs, less in-scene badinage. In some of her books, it's a pacing problem, but in this book, I thought it was a good choice.
A few things of note that I liked: the internal dialogue is suitable to this structure of story, Mrs Bennet is used to her fullest potential when she suspects Darcy likes Elizabeth, Bingley isn't useless and purely a doe-eyed fool like in the original, Elizabeth changes her mind over the course of a week but it doesn't seem extremely sudden (a credit to Smythe), and Darcy does a good job dealing with the Bennets' silliness without having a personality 180. However, one thing I didn't care for was the interference from Lady Catherine in final quarter of the book. I've read this exact scheme in several variations but don't understand how it would be feasible to accomplish in Darcy House. The last chunk really dragged and seemed completely superfluous given the way things stood between ODC. Regardless, I enjoyed this one a lot.
June 7, 2023
Enjoyable and well-written variation
This is a pleasant and enjoyable read. The beginning is fast-paced, and engages the reader immediately. The middle is somewhat too drawn out, although the author’s goal may have been to build a solid foundation of the love affair between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, enough to justify their feelings for each other in the end. There were pages though when one may beg the question, “what else is there to talk about? But then there must be some angst coming.” The ending satisfies this expectation of a bit of angst before the beloved couple’s happily ever after.
This reader loved the way Elizabeth stood her uncompromising ground when her feelings towards Mr. Darcy is concerned at the beginning of this story. But as time passes when the gentleman works to prove himself to her, one can feel and sense the change in Elizabeth’s feelings for Mr. Darcy. I suppose this is a good evidence how ladies deeply in love become weakened in face of doubts. Yet, Elizabeth Bennet’s heart knew what it wanted as proven by the token of Mr. Darcy’s love and promise that was kept close to it.
The exchanges between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are endearing, and so relatable. Definitely a highly recommended read.
This is a pleasant and enjoyable read. The beginning is fast-paced, and engages the reader immediately. The middle is somewhat too drawn out, although the author’s goal may have been to build a solid foundation of the love affair between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, enough to justify their feelings for each other in the end. There were pages though when one may beg the question, “what else is there to talk about? But then there must be some angst coming.” The ending satisfies this expectation of a bit of angst before the beloved couple’s happily ever after.
This reader loved the way Elizabeth stood her uncompromising ground when her feelings towards Mr. Darcy is concerned at the beginning of this story. But as time passes when the gentleman works to prove himself to her, one can feel and sense the change in Elizabeth’s feelings for Mr. Darcy. I suppose this is a good evidence how ladies deeply in love become weakened in face of doubts. Yet, Elizabeth Bennet’s heart knew what it wanted as proven by the token of Mr. Darcy’s love and promise that was kept close to it.
The exchanges between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are endearing, and so relatable. Definitely a highly recommended read.
October 23, 2025
It went to boring to bad with the misunderstanding plot.
Darcy doesn't get a reply for any letters he sends to Elizabeth or Mr. Bennet or Bingley for a month but doesn't think to actually go and see why? Since London to Longbourn is few hours travel, no matter how busy he is with taking caring of Lady C, he could have simply gone to her one day to ask why she is not replying to him. Even worse, Bingley doesn't think to come to darcy directly and confront him for jilting Elizabeth without any word? Its completely nonsensical and feels like author just wanted to finish the book so quick that no effort was put into creating even a mildly plausible scenario.
The book was also too wordy, but lacked substance. We see the same conversations from both Elizabeth and Darcy's pov even though nothing of interest happened in those scenes. However, there is no dialogues between E and D showing how she went from hating him to loving him in few meetings. We are just given short paragraphs to tell us that they talked and Elizabeth began to like him more. What's the point if the book is not showing how she began to change? Since the main plot is about Elizabeth's changed feelings, i feel like the book made no sense at all without these dialogues.
Darcy doesn't get a reply for any letters he sends to Elizabeth or Mr. Bennet or Bingley for a month but doesn't think to actually go and see why? Since London to Longbourn is few hours travel, no matter how busy he is with taking caring of Lady C, he could have simply gone to her one day to ask why she is not replying to him. Even worse, Bingley doesn't think to come to darcy directly and confront him for jilting Elizabeth without any word? Its completely nonsensical and feels like author just wanted to finish the book so quick that no effort was put into creating even a mildly plausible scenario.
The book was also too wordy, but lacked substance. We see the same conversations from both Elizabeth and Darcy's pov even though nothing of interest happened in those scenes. However, there is no dialogues between E and D showing how she went from hating him to loving him in few meetings. We are just given short paragraphs to tell us that they talked and Elizabeth began to like him more. What's the point if the book is not showing how she began to change? Since the main plot is about Elizabeth's changed feelings, i feel like the book made no sense at all without these dialogues.
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November 7, 2022
I've read a few stories by this author, all of which are well-written and this story is no different. ***Spoilers ahead***
The story opens while Jane is sick at Netherfield. During this time, the reader is provided a look into Mr. Darcy's struggle with his feelings for Elizabeth. A riding accident leads to a surprise proposal that Elizabeth would like to forget, but Darcy - as an honorable gentleman as well as someone in love - does not want to forget. Elizabeth is reluctant at first to accept but ultimately does as she quickly falls in love with Darcy once he shows his true self. The surprise to this story is that the most angst is actually very late in the story with a not so surprising culprit - I won't reveal who it is but take your pick between the usual suspects.
I really enjoyed the portrayal of Darcy and Elizabeth as well as Bingley who who showed surprising strength of character. Overall a very good story that was very fun to read.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The story opens while Jane is sick at Netherfield. During this time, the reader is provided a look into Mr. Darcy's struggle with his feelings for Elizabeth. A riding accident leads to a surprise proposal that Elizabeth would like to forget, but Darcy - as an honorable gentleman as well as someone in love - does not want to forget. Elizabeth is reluctant at first to accept but ultimately does as she quickly falls in love with Darcy once he shows his true self. The surprise to this story is that the most angst is actually very late in the story with a not so surprising culprit - I won't reveal who it is but take your pick between the usual suspects.
I really enjoyed the portrayal of Darcy and Elizabeth as well as Bingley who who showed surprising strength of character. Overall a very good story that was very fun to read.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 2, 2023
What if Darcy had an accident that momentarily lowered his inhibition and led to him proposing to Elizabeth while she stayed at Netherfield? He sticks by his proposal while Lizzy initially refuses. His declaration of love stirs feelings in her so she allows him to court her.
It's not the smoothest of changes - Darcy's struggles with his attraction to Elizabeth suddenly switch after his accident and he is "ardently" in love. He opens up to Bingley - Bingley and Jane being the only witnesses to his addled proposal - and he gets advice on proposing properly so mostly manages to avoid insulting Lizzy too much. The focus on wooing Lizzy means Bingley and Jane are unimpeded in their courtship.
The conflict comes from Collins' attempts to woo Lizzy despite Mrs Bennet trying to steer him to Mary. Miss Bingley is catty but not overly threatening. Wickham is dealt with fairly swiftly. Lady Catherine becomes a danger to our dear couple.
It's a short read with charming dialogue and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
It's not the smoothest of changes - Darcy's struggles with his attraction to Elizabeth suddenly switch after his accident and he is "ardently" in love. He opens up to Bingley - Bingley and Jane being the only witnesses to his addled proposal - and he gets advice on proposing properly so mostly manages to avoid insulting Lizzy too much. The focus on wooing Lizzy means Bingley and Jane are unimpeded in their courtship.
The conflict comes from Collins' attempts to woo Lizzy despite Mrs Bennet trying to steer him to Mary. Miss Bingley is catty but not overly threatening. Wickham is dealt with fairly swiftly. Lady Catherine becomes a danger to our dear couple.
It's a short read with charming dialogue and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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