This is a very difficult book to grade because I believe that vastly different societal norms and expectations underlie the reception of this writing. As a document attesting to Japanese interest in social justice and personal beliefs about criminal reform, I'd probably rate this a 3.5 or 4; but as a volume of short detective or crime fiction stories, I can't give this more than a 2.
Yakumaru is a popular writer in Japan; his work is eagerly anticipated and television adaptations are made of most of his stories. He clearly speaks to something in Japanese popular culture. Readers like these stories; they respond to them and want more of them and they want to see them realized in different forms.
Sadly, I'm not a contemporary Japanese reader. I read these stories and what I see are threadbare plots and characterization that barely skims the surface. Reactions among the characters are stereotypical and there is no suspense. The reader knows from virtually the first or second page of these tales who the culprit is; even their motivation is telegraphed early on, and everyone ends up facing justice (such as it is). There are no surprises and no ambiguity. The best of these read like a television melodrama; the worst lack even that level of depth.
In Japan, Yakumaru is apparently lauded for his use of marginal, juvenile, and impoverished characters who have been through the justice system before, and it's clear that he cares about reform and social justice. This is commendable but it's not enough to make a story memorable or compelling. I wouldn't mind reading more about Natsume Nobuhito and his quest for true justice, but I'll need evidence of the author's desire to dig deeper and feel more before I'll commit to doing so.
i guess i'm just not a fan of the detective short story
the bulk of the time is given to establishing characters only to be quickly disposed/revealed and done away with. i rarely felt like i was given the opportunity to engage with the procedural but instead was made to watch each episode of soap opera unfold.
I don't really agree that a cop has to doubt everybody. Rather, a cop has to be able to see through the facade of everybody. Well, I think we all need to be able to do that.