Almira, raised from childhood to become a wise and determined leader, ultimately decides to marry King Alton in order to secure peace and forge a lasting alliance between her homeland and his kingdom.
Yet during their first encounter, Alton leaves a distinctly poor impression. This unexpected disappointment causes a tense distance between them, making every interaction feel cautious and strained, as if they were treading on thin ice.
To begin with, I’ve always been a big fan of strong personalities, and Almira is definitely a woman one can’t help but admire. She knows her strengths as well as her weaknesses, and she fiercely protects the people she loves. Her closest ally, Sanaa, who has sworn unwavering loyalty to her, assembles a group of women called the Red Guard to protect Almira. Among them is Almira’s cousin, who wants to escape the duties of a High Lady and instead learn what true leadership looks like by working in Almira’s shadow.
So the focus on powerful women is already a major bonus for me. What intrigued me far more, and what ultimately made me pick up the book, was the dynamic between Almira and Alton and how their relationship would unfold. I’m a huge Enemies-to-Lovers fan, after all.
The first chapters didn’t disappoint. The playful back-and-forth between them was genuinely entertaining. Alton, however, came across as a bit too childish for my taste. What kind of king skips war councils? Almira ends up having to handle things for him. And then there’s this competition, which suddenly becomes Alton’s main focus as he trains for it. Somehow, one single match — in which he gets seriously injured — is enough to flip the switch from enemies to lovers. Yet up to that point, they had barely spoken, and their relationship hadn’t developed nearly enough for Almira to plausibly feel affection for him. That shift happened far too quickly for me.
Then there are the side plots, which were exciting in parts but also felt somewhat flat and overused — as if I’d read versions of them before.
And in the final third of the book, the pacing became much too fast. I devoured the story, yes, but the underlying foundation just wasn’t strong enough.