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The Great Balance World #1
A Princess of Vision
When the scales tilt, kingdoms teeter. Hearts falter. And change is inevitable.
Princess Josyn is excited to return home after years abroad. She rejoices in the chance to tackle the fractious council and treasonous plots threatening her brother, the king. But his enemies don’t hesitate to invoke a spell-prayer to strike her blind. Even with a new sense to Balance the loss of her sight, Josyn will need help from an old friend to navigate the court.
As a Beast, Aevin’s heightened senses and instincts are Balanced by the inability to suppress natural impulses. Knowing the effect Josyn has on him, he has avoided the princess on her visits home for years rather than risk losing control. But now she is back in Lyr for good, and his best friend, King Germein, has asked him to serve as her escort and bodyguard.
Josyn doesn’t know why Aevin pushed her away years ago. She is determined not to let him hurt her again, but it is hard to deny their attraction once their lives are entwined. As dangers mount and trust regrows, can they move beyond the past and make their own future?
***This is a full length novel set in The Great Balance World. It is steamy with a HEA and no cliffhangers.
Princess Josyn is excited to return home after years abroad. She rejoices in the chance to tackle the fractious council and treasonous plots threatening her brother, the king. But his enemies don’t hesitate to invoke a spell-prayer to strike her blind. Even with a new sense to Balance the loss of her sight, Josyn will need help from an old friend to navigate the court.
As a Beast, Aevin’s heightened senses and instincts are Balanced by the inability to suppress natural impulses. Knowing the effect Josyn has on him, he has avoided the princess on her visits home for years rather than risk losing control. But now she is back in Lyr for good, and his best friend, King Germein, has asked him to serve as her escort and bodyguard.
Josyn doesn’t know why Aevin pushed her away years ago. She is determined not to let him hurt her again, but it is hard to deny their attraction once their lives are entwined. As dangers mount and trust regrows, can they move beyond the past and make their own future?
***This is a full length novel set in The Great Balance World. It is steamy with a HEA and no cliffhangers.
309 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 23, 2023
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Jen Lynning
22 books89 followersJen Lynning never outgrew her love of fairy tales. (She may have studied German just so she could read the Brothers Grimm in the original.) When she wasn’t reading about life in a magical world, she was imagining it. Eventually she decided to start writing her own stories where magic and romance meet.
Jen lives in Northern Virginia with her two cats, who make their own contributions to her writing by walking across the keyboard, and her bird, who offers commentary on the whole process.
Jen lives in Northern Virginia with her two cats, who make their own contributions to her writing by walking across the keyboard, and her bird, who offers commentary on the whole process.
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May 23, 2023
I don't know how exactly I ended up reading two slow burn romances with miscommunication back to back, but I did it. This particular read was better, in my opinion, though in balancing out the miscommunication. I thought Josyn (h) and Aevin (H) were fantastic main characters. Josyn is struck blind at the start of the book in a mystical attack, but is given a new sense to balance that out. Aevin is brought in to be her guard/escort while she adjusts and also as court intrigue and danger swirl around them. These two have known each other since they were young and were friends before Aevin pushed Josyn away. But there's lots of simmering tension and attraction, which Josyn can visibly see because her new sense is a visual representation of people's emotions. Both have clearly loved each other for years and you do want to shake them at times. Written in first person, single POV of h's. Tiny bits of ow and om drama from courtiers who are interested in the H and h, but neither is interested in anyone else. The h is a virgin and the H is not (they do briefly discuss his history in that she was engaged to someone else, he was with others because he couldn't be with her, but she's the only who's really mattered to him and we see nothing on page).
The world building was confusing and I'm not sure if that's because I didn't read the book prior to this. Book 1 follows a different couple in another kingdom, but does have the h in this book as a side character from what I was able to tell. Information flows pretty steadily referencing some of the history of the world, religious beliefs, politics, etc. throughout. There is a map at the front, which my kindle didn't open to, but does layout the kingdoms on the continent. Even though the world building lost me a couple of times, I was able to pick up what was happening pretty easily. I probably did miss some things here and there that I glossed over, but I enjoyed this book and that's what mattered to me.
I loved all the political maneuvering that occurred in this world though. Josyn was blinded, trying to adapt to a completely new type of sight, and she was still a boss as she handled what was happening around her. Aevin was also amazing as a super protective H with a weak spot for the girl. He's a Beast so he has animal instincts too (the Beast part has to do with the world building and was one of the parts that I was confused somewhat on; he's not a shifter). Their romance is a slow burn even though Josyn and Aevin are on page *a lot* together. They have to clear the air about what happened a few years prior and where they stand in the present and neither races to do these things. There is on page steam in a couple of scenes and some references to other scenes. Most of the focus though is on the politics, the danger, and their emotional relationship. Cute moments of Aevin training Josyn, a couple of sweet wooing moments, how he needs her sometimes to maintain control of his Beast, and she needs him too.
Lots of side characters are moving about in this book. Josyn's brother (who's also Aevin's BFF) is the king and he has a council, lots of courtiers, potential bride candidates, staff, etc. Plus there are villains lurking about (mwahahahahaha, although one of the villains was not a laughing matter, I wanted to punch them, hard). I loved Josyn's maid, who's hilarious and also supportive, and her brother was equally amazing.
A few layers of plotting and possible dangers are involved, but all the plot lines are resolved and tied off by the end of the book. The main characters are danger and there is violence in a couple of scenes with side character death, but it's not graphic (although the h is threatened with sexual assault at one point and threatened with her maid also being assaulted, but the h's saved before anything happens more than being strip searched). Aevin and Josyn are absolutely adorable after all the danger part has passed and the epilogue was so cute, it was just a great way to end the book on a happy, heart-eye moment.
The world building was confusing and I'm not sure if that's because I didn't read the book prior to this. Book 1 follows a different couple in another kingdom, but does have the h in this book as a side character from what I was able to tell. Information flows pretty steadily referencing some of the history of the world, religious beliefs, politics, etc. throughout. There is a map at the front, which my kindle didn't open to, but does layout the kingdoms on the continent. Even though the world building lost me a couple of times, I was able to pick up what was happening pretty easily. I probably did miss some things here and there that I glossed over, but I enjoyed this book and that's what mattered to me.
I loved all the political maneuvering that occurred in this world though. Josyn was blinded, trying to adapt to a completely new type of sight, and she was still a boss as she handled what was happening around her. Aevin was also amazing as a super protective H with a weak spot for the girl. He's a Beast so he has animal instincts too (the Beast part has to do with the world building and was one of the parts that I was confused somewhat on; he's not a shifter). Their romance is a slow burn even though Josyn and Aevin are on page *a lot* together. They have to clear the air about what happened a few years prior and where they stand in the present and neither races to do these things. There is on page steam in a couple of scenes and some references to other scenes. Most of the focus though is on the politics, the danger, and their emotional relationship. Cute moments of Aevin training Josyn, a couple of sweet wooing moments, how he needs her sometimes to maintain control of his Beast, and she needs him too.
Lots of side characters are moving about in this book. Josyn's brother (who's also Aevin's BFF) is the king and he has a council, lots of courtiers, potential bride candidates, staff, etc. Plus there are villains lurking about (mwahahahahaha, although one of the villains was not a laughing matter, I wanted to punch them, hard). I loved Josyn's maid, who's hilarious and also supportive, and her brother was equally amazing.
A few layers of plotting and possible dangers are involved, but all the plot lines are resolved and tied off by the end of the book. The main characters are danger and there is violence in a couple of scenes with side character death, but it's not graphic (although the h is threatened with sexual assault at one point and threatened with her maid also being assaulted, but the h's saved before anything happens more than being strip searched). Aevin and Josyn are absolutely adorable after all the danger part has passed and the epilogue was so cute, it was just a great way to end the book on a happy, heart-eye moment.
January 18, 2024
This was good fun!! An interesting concept with unique worldbuilding and magic, and more political intrigue than I expected. Romance was cute, and characters were loveable. Overall I’m happy (especially for a “stuff your kindle day” read!).
May 9, 2023
[ BOOK INFO ]——————————————
★★★★☆ 4/5
Tags: historical fantasy, romance, f/m, slow-burn, political intrigue, brother’s best friend, childhood friend, first love, bodyguard romance, royalty
Pages:
Chapters: 28
👤POV(s): singular: Josyn
📝Ending: HEA (Happily ever after)
📚Series? Yes, but can be read as a standalone.
INCLUDES
+ a map of the fantasy world
+ an epigraph
+ link to get ‘A Lady of Truth’ for free (newsletter sign-up required)
+ sneak peak of ‘A Lady of Truth’
[ CONTENT WARNINGS ]—————————
[ Q’s ]—————————————————
Q: Sex scenes?
Q: Love triangle?
Q: virgin trope?
Q: Character death? (of those in main cast)
Q: Betrayals?
————————————————————
👤 👑 The Heroine: Josyn— determined, independent, likes being in control and skilled in the social and political game. Was previously in a political alliance that put her in line to be Empress in Moran. After sorting through the remaining affairs there, Josyn returns to her homeland, hoping to help her brother, the king, in his court.
👤 ⚔️ The hero: Aevin— reserved, contained, blunt and hates the social and political games. Highborn, but can’t inherit his family’s holding because he is a Beast (people born with the effects of an old korengal, giving them the instincts of a predator). Trains soldiers and guards for the royal family and childhood friends with the king. Strives for control over his life.
[ REVIEW ]————————————————
GENERAL
📓 I can see how the topic of respectful representation of disability might come up because Josyn’s sudden blindness an integral part of this story. However, I’m not qualified to comment on the representation.
📓 The romance is pretty straightforward and I’d say their main conflict comes from resolving their ‘conflict’ in the past and both being afraid to admit they like each other.
LIKES & DISLIKES/COULD BE IMPROVED
✅ plot pacing
✅ fantasy world building: their beliefs, 'deity', and magic system. Some steampunk vibes with the steam carriages and shadow-lights of crystals with pulleys and gears.
✅ protagonist. Liked Josyn and her personality and how she responded to different situations
✅ Holds similarities to the ‘alpha-hero’ trope but it’s more toned down where both get a say and the hero activity tries not to be overprotective and respects the heroine’s choices. A lot of compromise for both characters as well which is good to see.
✅ I like that the author didn’t create a whole conflict when Josyn’s brother finds them kissing. To which his response is amusement and happiness for them both.
✅ I really liked the concept of this book though I was a bit hesitant to see how the author would write from the perspective of a person who couldn’t see. The writing was consistent in a way that kept in mind the fact that she could only see people’s auras so there weren’t any scenes describing how people and things looked which was intentional. However…
❌ would have liked more emphasis on her other senses in setting descriptions (eg. clinking glasses, murmuring, shuffling, rustling dresses)
❌ Josyn going blind and her reaction felt a bit rushed. It was trying to emulate denial and her containing her distraught at the sudden change but it felt like there was something missing.
❌ The secondary romance between felt sudden. With the context of Josyn’s ability to see emotions, we know are already partially in love, but it doesn’t seem like they had any more interactions with one another apart from one dance.
❌ The ending for Aevin felt a little too perfect: Particularly, it was the way this future solution was introduced that made it feel like it was thrown in at the last second.
❌ how some of the antagonists were revealed felt off. eg. they confront in public and she just immediately confesses because she says something out of spite. The dialogue for that one just felt…off.
❌ To balance losing her sight, Josyn gains the ability to see people’s aura, which change colour based on what they are feeling. Because there are so many colours and their meanings, it was hard to keep up at the start.
To be fair, as she learns more about what the colours mean, we as the reader do as well which is when the author starts adding the emotion and colour together so we don’t have to guess. Eg:
Regardless, I would have liked to see a section with a key including the colours and what emotions it denotes. I’ve included my key of the colours and what emotion they mean below
NOTES FOR READERS ❗️
—————
📓 the epigraph was a bit confusing. After having read the book and looking back to it, it makes sense but starting the book, I had no idea what it meant. This is my take on what I think it means:
Basically, it’s about about the history of this idea of ‘Balance’ in the fantasy world. Saying that the world and its people were once in ‘True Balance’ where everything was equal: no wealth, higher status or illness but at the cost of free will, individuality, and change/progress.
With no free will or individuality, those people acted and thought like one being. That group of people were called the Koreini, who prayed to the Watcher (their version of a deity) for free will. Their wish was granted and they abandoned ‘True Balance’ but this idea of balance (the give and take) didn’t disappear.
People can still pray to the Watcher, ‘invoking’ a korengal (like a spell) where they can pray to get something, but something of equal value will be taken from them. Eg. to get the ability to always know when someone is lying, the person must give up the ability to lie completely.
📓 JOSYN’S ABILITY: colours and what emotions they represent.
Some colours were mentioned to have various meanings which I’ve separated with ‘/’. The few that were not directly confirmed and were based on context end in ‘?’ Hope this helps :)
RULES:
paler colours often mean a weaker emotion
Flaxen yellow = approval
Pale yellow = contentment
Chartreuse (yellow-green) = pleasure/happiness at another’s misfortune or unhappiness
Sky-blue = unease
Cerulean = speculation
Turquoise = confusion
Teal / blue = fear / trepidation
Deep teal = horrified / hurt
Navy = shame
Puce = similar to shame.
Periwinkle (blue-violet)= worry
Mauve = sadness? Dejection?
Aubergine (eggplant) = self-absorption / self-assurance [varies with shade]
Green = surprise
Coral = curiosity
Orange = excitement / anticipation
Scarlet / bright red = lust / desire
Vermillion = passion
Rust = jealousy
Amber = amusement
Burgundy = determined
Maroon = concentration
Beige = exasperated
Umber = annoyance
Brown = anger
Softer brown = frustration
White = love
Dark grey = dislike
Black = hatred
Pink = white (love) + red (desire) = half in love
Colourless = unconscious
No orb = dead
[ CONCLUSION ]———————————————-
a nice quick read. Liked the concept, execution could be improved in small places but overall, I liked it and would re-read. Recommend for those that like political intrigue and romance with a historical fantasy backdrop.
Disclaimer: I was given an ARC copy for review consideration but this is my freely given opinion.
★★★★☆ 4/5
Tags: historical fantasy, romance, f/m, slow-burn, political intrigue, brother’s best friend, childhood friend, first love, bodyguard romance, royalty
Pages:
Chapters: 28
👤POV(s): singular: Josyn
📝Ending: HEA (Happily ever after)
📚Series? Yes, but can be read as a standalone.
INCLUDES
+ a map of the fantasy world
+ an epigraph
+ link to get ‘A Lady of Truth’ for free (newsletter sign-up required)
+ sneak peak of ‘A Lady of Truth’
[ CONTENT WARNINGS ]—————————
[ Q’s ]—————————————————
Q: Sex scenes?
Q: Love triangle?
Q: virgin trope?
Q: Character death? (of those in main cast)
Q: Betrayals?
————————————————————
👤 👑 The Heroine: Josyn— determined, independent, likes being in control and skilled in the social and political game. Was previously in a political alliance that put her in line to be Empress in Moran. After sorting through the remaining affairs there, Josyn returns to her homeland, hoping to help her brother, the king, in his court.
👤 ⚔️ The hero: Aevin— reserved, contained, blunt and hates the social and political games. Highborn, but can’t inherit his family’s holding because he is a Beast (people born with the effects of an old korengal, giving them the instincts of a predator). Trains soldiers and guards for the royal family and childhood friends with the king. Strives for control over his life.
[ REVIEW ]————————————————
GENERAL
📓 I can see how the topic of respectful representation of disability might come up because Josyn’s sudden blindness an integral part of this story. However, I’m not qualified to comment on the representation.
📓 The romance is pretty straightforward and I’d say their main conflict comes from resolving their ‘conflict’ in the past and both being afraid to admit they like each other.
LIKES & DISLIKES/COULD BE IMPROVED
✅ plot pacing
✅ fantasy world building: their beliefs, 'deity', and magic system. Some steampunk vibes with the steam carriages and shadow-lights of crystals with pulleys and gears.
✅ protagonist. Liked Josyn and her personality and how she responded to different situations
✅ Holds similarities to the ‘alpha-hero’ trope but it’s more toned down where both get a say and the hero activity tries not to be overprotective and respects the heroine’s choices. A lot of compromise for both characters as well which is good to see.
✅ I like that the author didn’t create a whole conflict when Josyn’s brother finds them kissing. To which his response is amusement and happiness for them both.
✅ I really liked the concept of this book though I was a bit hesitant to see how the author would write from the perspective of a person who couldn’t see. The writing was consistent in a way that kept in mind the fact that she could only see people’s auras so there weren’t any scenes describing how people and things looked which was intentional. However…
❌ would have liked more emphasis on her other senses in setting descriptions (eg. clinking glasses, murmuring, shuffling, rustling dresses)
❌ Josyn going blind and her reaction felt a bit rushed. It was trying to emulate denial and her containing her distraught at the sudden change but it felt like there was something missing.
❌ The secondary romance between felt sudden. With the context of Josyn’s ability to see emotions, we know are already partially in love, but it doesn’t seem like they had any more interactions with one another apart from one dance.
❌ The ending for Aevin felt a little too perfect: Particularly, it was the way this future solution was introduced that made it feel like it was thrown in at the last second.
❌ how some of the antagonists were revealed felt off. eg. they confront in public and she just immediately confesses because she says something out of spite. The dialogue for that one just felt…off.
❌ To balance losing her sight, Josyn gains the ability to see people’s aura, which change colour based on what they are feeling. Because there are so many colours and their meanings, it was hard to keep up at the start.
To be fair, as she learns more about what the colours mean, we as the reader do as well which is when the author starts adding the emotion and colour together so we don’t have to guess. Eg:
“Multiple shades of purple—guilt, sadness, worry—fought with blue fear in its place” (chapter 22)
Regardless, I would have liked to see a section with a key including the colours and what emotions it denotes. I’ve included my key of the colours and what emotion they mean below
NOTES FOR READERS ❗️
—————
📓 the epigraph was a bit confusing. After having read the book and looking back to it, it makes sense but starting the book, I had no idea what it meant. This is my take on what I think it means:
Basically, it’s about about the history of this idea of ‘Balance’ in the fantasy world. Saying that the world and its people were once in ‘True Balance’ where everything was equal: no wealth, higher status or illness but at the cost of free will, individuality, and change/progress.
With no free will or individuality, those people acted and thought like one being. That group of people were called the Koreini, who prayed to the Watcher (their version of a deity) for free will. Their wish was granted and they abandoned ‘True Balance’ but this idea of balance (the give and take) didn’t disappear.
People can still pray to the Watcher, ‘invoking’ a korengal (like a spell) where they can pray to get something, but something of equal value will be taken from them. Eg. to get the ability to always know when someone is lying, the person must give up the ability to lie completely.
📓 JOSYN’S ABILITY: colours and what emotions they represent.
Some colours were mentioned to have various meanings which I’ve separated with ‘/’. The few that were not directly confirmed and were based on context end in ‘?’ Hope this helps :)
RULES:
paler colours often mean a weaker emotion
Flaxen yellow = approval
Pale yellow = contentment
Chartreuse (yellow-green) = pleasure/happiness at another’s misfortune or unhappiness
Sky-blue = unease
Cerulean = speculation
Turquoise = confusion
Teal / blue = fear / trepidation
Deep teal = horrified / hurt
Navy = shame
Puce = similar to shame.
Periwinkle (blue-violet)= worry
Mauve = sadness? Dejection?
Aubergine (eggplant) = self-absorption / self-assurance [varies with shade]
Green = surprise
Coral = curiosity
Orange = excitement / anticipation
Scarlet / bright red = lust / desire
Vermillion = passion
Rust = jealousy
Amber = amusement
Burgundy = determined
Maroon = concentration
Beige = exasperated
Umber = annoyance
Brown = anger
Softer brown = frustration
White = love
Dark grey = dislike
Black = hatred
Pink = white (love) + red (desire) = half in love
Colourless = unconscious
No orb = dead
[ CONCLUSION ]———————————————-
a nice quick read. Liked the concept, execution could be improved in small places but overall, I liked it and would re-read. Recommend for those that like political intrigue and romance with a historical fantasy backdrop.
Disclaimer: I was given an ARC copy for review consideration but this is my freely given opinion.
January 20, 2023
Rating: 3.5✨
Spice: 1.5 🌶
Before starting the review, I would like to thank the author for the eARC opportunity. As always, this
review is completely voluntary & honest. I overall enjoyed this book! It was a quick & fun read.
The pace of it felt quick & at bit rushed at times when it came to the romance part of the plot; however, the political intrigue part of the plot was developed well. I loved how the FMC was able to handle court life so well & is a mastermind when it comes to plotting & handling enemies & allies alike within her court. It was also my first steampunk book so I feel like it was a great book to start with.
Josyn was a likable character. I liked seeing her overcome the drastic change in her life after her sight
was taken from her & was given the gift of seeing & interpreting auras instead. I do wish I could've seen more of a character arc for her though. I don't feel like I connected with her as much as I would have liked due to the book length, but it did not make me root for her any less. Josyn was definitely a force to be reckoned with within her brother's court & one people should not underestimate.
Aevin, I enjoyed reading about him as well. However, like with Josyn, I feel I didn't know enough to connect with him. I enjoyed seeing how the struggles he faced with being a beast, in all aspects of his life, were tied together to the plot. I also loved seeing the different emotions he experienced that we were able to interpret with the different colors of his aura. It was a different way to appreciate a romantic relationship building throughout a book & I truly enjoyed it.
Some side characters had their own small storylines that you enjoy seeing unfold. The magical system & world the author built was different & intriguing. You should definitely check out this read!
Spice: 1.5 🌶
Before starting the review, I would like to thank the author for the eARC opportunity. As always, this
review is completely voluntary & honest. I overall enjoyed this book! It was a quick & fun read.
The pace of it felt quick & at bit rushed at times when it came to the romance part of the plot; however, the political intrigue part of the plot was developed well. I loved how the FMC was able to handle court life so well & is a mastermind when it comes to plotting & handling enemies & allies alike within her court. It was also my first steampunk book so I feel like it was a great book to start with.
Josyn was a likable character. I liked seeing her overcome the drastic change in her life after her sight
was taken from her & was given the gift of seeing & interpreting auras instead. I do wish I could've seen more of a character arc for her though. I don't feel like I connected with her as much as I would have liked due to the book length, but it did not make me root for her any less. Josyn was definitely a force to be reckoned with within her brother's court & one people should not underestimate.
Aevin, I enjoyed reading about him as well. However, like with Josyn, I feel I didn't know enough to connect with him. I enjoyed seeing how the struggles he faced with being a beast, in all aspects of his life, were tied together to the plot. I also loved seeing the different emotions he experienced that we were able to interpret with the different colors of his aura. It was a different way to appreciate a romantic relationship building throughout a book & I truly enjoyed it.
Some side characters had their own small storylines that you enjoy seeing unfold. The magical system & world the author built was different & intriguing. You should definitely check out this read!
January 22, 2023
3.5 ⭐️/1 🌶️!!
Thank you so much for sending me this arc, this was my first time reading anything by this author - and im thankful for the opportunity!
Upon beginning, we are thrown into the story with our MC immediately realizing she can no longer see. Instead, she sees orbs of light in each person that varies in colors and movements. Her brother is the king, and he sends for his best friend to come and be the bodyguard for Jos to keep her safe because they believe her loss of vision was an attack on her. Aevin and our MC have a history, where he rejected her when she came forward with her feelings.
The magic system and world building was unique and very interesting- but it was hard for me to understand and follow. It’s possibly bc this is my first story written by this author! 😂 I also had a hard time keeping up with the colors of the auras and their meanings, which I understand our MC was learning so we were also getting this info as she processes. I still struggled with it.
The romance was sweet, I do wish we had a bit more of it though! More banter and moments! The spice was a great bonus to the story.
Overall I did enjoy the book, the world and magic refreshing and creative!! Thank you so much!
Thank you so much for sending me this arc, this was my first time reading anything by this author - and im thankful for the opportunity!
Upon beginning, we are thrown into the story with our MC immediately realizing she can no longer see. Instead, she sees orbs of light in each person that varies in colors and movements. Her brother is the king, and he sends for his best friend to come and be the bodyguard for Jos to keep her safe because they believe her loss of vision was an attack on her. Aevin and our MC have a history, where he rejected her when she came forward with her feelings.
The magic system and world building was unique and very interesting- but it was hard for me to understand and follow. It’s possibly bc this is my first story written by this author! 😂 I also had a hard time keeping up with the colors of the auras and their meanings, which I understand our MC was learning so we were also getting this info as she processes. I still struggled with it.
The romance was sweet, I do wish we had a bit more of it though! More banter and moments! The spice was a great bonus to the story.
Overall I did enjoy the book, the world and magic refreshing and creative!! Thank you so much!
January 19, 2023
3.75/5 ⭐️
.5-1 🌶️
First I’d like to thank the author for the e-ARC opportunity. That said all thoughts are my honest opinion.
This was a quick read for me and I really enjoyed it. The world had a unique Magic system with the thought of when something is taken it’s balanced out with a gift. The main character, Josyn, is blinded and what replaces her sight is seeing other’s auras. It was a unique exchange. The story followed a more telling than showing writing style because of this. I didn’t mind it since I was still intrigued with the political/court intrigue. But I would’ve liked to see more of Josyn’s other senses to more explained the world around her she and we couldn’t see.
Aevin was our grumpy secret cinnamon roll MMC. I like him and enjoyed seeing him try and teach Josyn how to protect herself now that she’d lost her sight, even thought he struggled with his own feelings towards her. It was a cute friends to lovers in this steampunk like fantasy.
There were a lot of colors to keep track of also so I read to highlight them to remember them 😅 I highly recommend doing that if you’re easy to forget this information, since there’s no guide in the book.
I do plan to pick up the novella soon to see more of the world.
.5-1 🌶️
First I’d like to thank the author for the e-ARC opportunity. That said all thoughts are my honest opinion.
This was a quick read for me and I really enjoyed it. The world had a unique Magic system with the thought of when something is taken it’s balanced out with a gift. The main character, Josyn, is blinded and what replaces her sight is seeing other’s auras. It was a unique exchange. The story followed a more telling than showing writing style because of this. I didn’t mind it since I was still intrigued with the political/court intrigue. But I would’ve liked to see more of Josyn’s other senses to more explained the world around her she and we couldn’t see.
Aevin was our grumpy secret cinnamon roll MMC. I like him and enjoyed seeing him try and teach Josyn how to protect herself now that she’d lost her sight, even thought he struggled with his own feelings towards her. It was a cute friends to lovers in this steampunk like fantasy.
There were a lot of colors to keep track of also so I read to highlight them to remember them 😅 I highly recommend doing that if you’re easy to forget this information, since there’s no guide in the book.
I do plan to pick up the novella soon to see more of the world.
January 13, 2023
Thank you to the author for granting me an ARC copy.
A very solid romantasy, with a hint of spice. While the plot was quite predictable it was still very much enjoyable and I liked the political intrigue aspect.
I loved the romance between Jos and Aevin. I thought they really balanced each other well.
Would definitely be interested in reading other books by this author!
A very solid romantasy, with a hint of spice. While the plot was quite predictable it was still very much enjoyable and I liked the political intrigue aspect.
I loved the romance between Jos and Aevin. I thought they really balanced each other well.
Would definitely be interested in reading other books by this author!
November 22, 2023
I stayed up until 2:30 am finishing this! The magic system was very cool and I appreciate how Lynning didn't expect the reader to remember every single color that Josyn did--we got reminders for the important things.
I also loved the balance (hah) that Josyn learned to strike between her "ice princess" persona and simply not letting everything she felt cross her expression. Aevin (LI) was wonderful and Germein (her brother) was awesome in that he fully and completely trusted her take on political mechanisms, no questions asked. (Other than "are you scheming this way? no? okay, thanks for clarifying.") Excellent sibling relationship.
I also loved the balance (hah) that Josyn learned to strike between her "ice princess" persona and simply not letting everything she felt cross her expression. Aevin (LI) was wonderful and Germein (her brother) was awesome in that he fully and completely trusted her take on political mechanisms, no questions asked. (Other than "are you scheming this way? no? okay, thanks for clarifying.") Excellent sibling relationship.
January 13, 2025
Simply lovely!!
The characters were easy to love right off the bat, the magical system is really unique and easy to understand which is a bonus. I loved how much focus there was on the love story with a good storyline and intrigue. I wish we had a little more insight into the world around them just for details sake, I’m sucker for wanting to know more.
Definitely a recommend from me! And it’s a standalone interconnected series which is a huge plus for me! Diving into #2 right away!
I will forever imagine Aevin reading to her because he knows how much she misses it!
The characters were easy to love right off the bat, the magical system is really unique and easy to understand which is a bonus. I loved how much focus there was on the love story with a good storyline and intrigue. I wish we had a little more insight into the world around them just for details sake, I’m sucker for wanting to know more.
Definitely a recommend from me! And it’s a standalone interconnected series which is a huge plus for me! Diving into #2 right away!
I will forever imagine Aevin reading to her because he knows how much she misses it!
April 7, 2024
3.5⭐️
January 13, 2023
A new Jen Lynning book is a bit like getting a perfectly wrapped chocolate - a small treat just for yourself. I've read everything she's published to date, and I feel like she's just consistently great at putting unique worlds and set-ups and beautifully strong heroines in front of her readers. A Princess of Vision is no exception to that rule.
Josyn was my favourite character in A Lady of Truth (the prequel novella to this series) and continues to be excellent here. She's crafty - a spy in Princess clothing - but also strong and kind. Like all of Jen Lynning's heroines, she knows her own mind and fights to retain her agency (rightfully calling out other characters when they impinge upon it). A Princess of Vision starts with a life-altering change in Josyn's circumstances and at first it felt as if her reaction to that change was a little matter-of-fact - but Lynning weaves through Josyn's slow emotional processing throughout the novel in a way that, by the end, felt very reflective of her character.
Aevin was not my favourite Lynning hero - he was nice enough, but beyond his 'Beast' characteristics it felt like we didn't get masses of insight into him as a person. The whole 'Beast' side of things was a lovely and loving send up of Beauty and the Beast though, and I really hope we get to find out even more about it later in the series.
The premise for The Great Balance World and A Princess of Vision is multilayered and really original. I've never encountered a fantasy world like it before, and Jen Lynning's world building and exploration of the culture and politics in the world she has built is just as complex and good as for the Treaties of Moial series. Like the Treaties of Moial, she does throw you in the deep end a bit. You're thrust into the middle of a fully built out fantasy world and instead of gently introducing concepts Lynning writes as if you know how the world works already and just trusts that you'll be able to catch up. It's a testament to her skill as a world builder that you can! But like Empath's Lure before it, I felt like I spent the first half of A Princess of Vision getting to grips with what was going on and why it was important; I think you would struggle even more without the context gained from reading A Lady of Truth first.
Overall a very solid 4 stars. If you're looking for consistently fun, well-written, unique fantasy romances with rounded, strong heroines that have actual character, then you really can't go wrong with Jen Lynning.
*Disclaimer: I received an advance copy of this title from the author in exchange for an honest review*
Josyn was my favourite character in A Lady of Truth (the prequel novella to this series) and continues to be excellent here. She's crafty - a spy in Princess clothing - but also strong and kind. Like all of Jen Lynning's heroines, she knows her own mind and fights to retain her agency (rightfully calling out other characters when they impinge upon it). A Princess of Vision starts with a life-altering change in Josyn's circumstances and at first it felt as if her reaction to that change was a little matter-of-fact - but Lynning weaves through Josyn's slow emotional processing throughout the novel in a way that, by the end, felt very reflective of her character.
Aevin was not my favourite Lynning hero - he was nice enough, but beyond his 'Beast' characteristics it felt like we didn't get masses of insight into him as a person. The whole 'Beast' side of things was a lovely and loving send up of Beauty and the Beast though, and I really hope we get to find out even more about it later in the series.
The premise for The Great Balance World and A Princess of Vision is multilayered and really original. I've never encountered a fantasy world like it before, and Jen Lynning's world building and exploration of the culture and politics in the world she has built is just as complex and good as for the Treaties of Moial series. Like the Treaties of Moial, she does throw you in the deep end a bit. You're thrust into the middle of a fully built out fantasy world and instead of gently introducing concepts Lynning writes as if you know how the world works already and just trusts that you'll be able to catch up. It's a testament to her skill as a world builder that you can! But like Empath's Lure before it, I felt like I spent the first half of A Princess of Vision getting to grips with what was going on and why it was important; I think you would struggle even more without the context gained from reading A Lady of Truth first.
Overall a very solid 4 stars. If you're looking for consistently fun, well-written, unique fantasy romances with rounded, strong heroines that have actual character, then you really can't go wrong with Jen Lynning.
*Disclaimer: I received an advance copy of this title from the author in exchange for an honest review*
February 1, 2023
This was a fun fantasy romance novel set in a world where people can make an appeal, through something called a korengal, to change something about the world so long as an equal tradeoff is made; it can concentrate the efficacy of medicines, heal people, and give them new abilities.
In the first chapter, Josyn, the king's sister, has just come back home after spending much time in a foreign court, her betrothal just having fallen through with the death of her betrothed. She's not super upset about it -- it was a political marriage -- and she's eager to get back into the thick of court politics, an environment she thrives in, and something that would really help her brother. Suddenly, though, her sight is taken away from her and replaced with an odd magical talent, an ability to see people's emotions. She knows someone must have invoked a korengal on her "behalf," but even as she's mourning the loss of her sight she knows her new sense can be of use, once she learns how to interpret it.
Her love interest, Aevin, is her brother's best friend, who is asked to be her escort and bodyguard. Aevin and Josyn have some history; they were childhood friends, and then... something happened, and now they don't get along, and now there's tension. Plus, Aevin doesn't really enjoy court life. He is affected by an old, old korengal that transformed all the men in his mother's country of origin into "Beasts" in a misguided attempt to create supersoldiers; what instead happened was that these men had their senses and instincts enhanced, but their impulse control greatly reduced. So Aevin can be short-tempered and impatient, and he isn't legally allowed to inherit his father's title.
Aevin isn't a controlling asshole alpha guy, though; while he's very protective of Josyn he's also deeply ashamed of many of his impulses (which causes some problems down the line) and has a set of routines and coping methods to keep his aggression and other potentially harmful impulses in check. (This may be a disappointment to some readers, but I was pleasantly surprised; I grabbed it off of Kindle Unlimited because I thought the cover was pretty.) In general I liked the way the text handled this; it is very much treated as a thing about him that can be helpful but also a huge disadvantage, which is both true to the worldbuilding and also honestly pretty relatable to me as someone who's got a whole host of weird mental health nonsense and has had to develop coping mechanisms for same. (I'm not great in a fight, though, that part's less relatable. Which is fine, actually.) I also liked that in the country where Beasts are most prevalent, it's clear that the entire culture had to adapt around the tradeoff and that little bits of it have made it to other countries as well.
Josyn's blindness is also done super well, I think; I don't want to say "yeah it's exactly like real blindness," because a. I am not blind, and b. it definitely isn't anything like that, she gets a magical ability that gives her some social advantages and also some idea of where everyone is standing relative to herself. I think she gets over it faster than most real people would -- partly because she has to, because someone is apparently gunning for her and/or her brother -- but I appreciate that the book is not focused on the tragedy of not being able to see. And she is definitely still upset about no longer having the same amount of independence she is used to as she adapts, and not being able to read by herself or paint or dance most dances.
Also, this is maybe an odd thing to praise, but I feel like a lot of romance novels really dwell on how physically attractive the man is, which is fine and all, but it's no substitute for actual sexual tension. Josyn's blindness and empathy sense means that we don't get much about what Aevin looks like, but we get a good amount about how it feels to be escored around by him, and in close proximity, and also descriptions of his aura where Josyn is forced to puzzle out what they mean about how he's feeling. I was able to connect much more with that than with descriptions of his stunning eye-colored eyes.
I do have a couple of criticisms, but they're pretty minor if you'd like a story about romance with some court intrigue on the side. Firstly, Josyn is blind but I would've appreciated more descriptions of the sounds, smells, tactile feelings, etc. of the world she inhabits. Second, the court intrigue plotline .
And just a few brief notes on sexual content: the book has some brief but happy sex -- other reviews describe it as "detailed" but I am very spoiled by fanfiction and I feel like I'd have only rated it Mature on AO3 -- and Josyn also suffers some sexual peril, but it's more threat than anything, and it's at the hands of a villain, not Aevin. Specifically, I am not super clear on how this world's sexual morality operates, but it also seems like they don't really have a taboo about premarital sex; I get the impression they might have more reliable birth control than your average kings-and-princesses fantasy setting, but that's just my conjecture based on the sample chapter for A Lady of Truth at the end. (I'll probably be reading that at some point; this was fun.)
In the first chapter, Josyn, the king's sister, has just come back home after spending much time in a foreign court, her betrothal just having fallen through with the death of her betrothed. She's not super upset about it -- it was a political marriage -- and she's eager to get back into the thick of court politics, an environment she thrives in, and something that would really help her brother. Suddenly, though, her sight is taken away from her and replaced with an odd magical talent, an ability to see people's emotions. She knows someone must have invoked a korengal on her "behalf," but even as she's mourning the loss of her sight she knows her new sense can be of use, once she learns how to interpret it.
Her love interest, Aevin, is her brother's best friend, who is asked to be her escort and bodyguard. Aevin and Josyn have some history; they were childhood friends, and then... something happened, and now they don't get along, and now there's tension. Plus, Aevin doesn't really enjoy court life. He is affected by an old, old korengal that transformed all the men in his mother's country of origin into "Beasts" in a misguided attempt to create supersoldiers; what instead happened was that these men had their senses and instincts enhanced, but their impulse control greatly reduced. So Aevin can be short-tempered and impatient, and he isn't legally allowed to inherit his father's title.
Aevin isn't a controlling asshole alpha guy, though; while he's very protective of Josyn he's also deeply ashamed of many of his impulses (which causes some problems down the line) and has a set of routines and coping methods to keep his aggression and other potentially harmful impulses in check. (This may be a disappointment to some readers, but I was pleasantly surprised; I grabbed it off of Kindle Unlimited because I thought the cover was pretty.) In general I liked the way the text handled this; it is very much treated as a thing about him that can be helpful but also a huge disadvantage, which is both true to the worldbuilding and also honestly pretty relatable to me as someone who's got a whole host of weird mental health nonsense and has had to develop coping mechanisms for same. (I'm not great in a fight, though, that part's less relatable. Which is fine, actually.) I also liked that in the country where Beasts are most prevalent, it's clear that the entire culture had to adapt around the tradeoff and that little bits of it have made it to other countries as well.
Josyn's blindness is also done super well, I think; I don't want to say "yeah it's exactly like real blindness," because a. I am not blind, and b. it definitely isn't anything like that, she gets a magical ability that gives her some social advantages and also some idea of where everyone is standing relative to herself. I think she gets over it faster than most real people would -- partly because she has to, because someone is apparently gunning for her and/or her brother -- but I appreciate that the book is not focused on the tragedy of not being able to see. And she is definitely still upset about no longer having the same amount of independence she is used to as she adapts, and not being able to read by herself or paint or dance most dances.
Also, this is maybe an odd thing to praise, but I feel like a lot of romance novels really dwell on how physically attractive the man is, which is fine and all, but it's no substitute for actual sexual tension. Josyn's blindness and empathy sense means that we don't get much about what Aevin looks like, but we get a good amount about how it feels to be escored around by him, and in close proximity, and also descriptions of his aura where Josyn is forced to puzzle out what they mean about how he's feeling. I was able to connect much more with that than with descriptions of his stunning eye-colored eyes.
I do have a couple of criticisms, but they're pretty minor if you'd like a story about romance with some court intrigue on the side. Firstly, Josyn is blind but I would've appreciated more descriptions of the sounds, smells, tactile feelings, etc. of the world she inhabits. Second, the court intrigue plotline .
And just a few brief notes on sexual content: the book has some brief but happy sex -- other reviews describe it as "detailed" but I am very spoiled by fanfiction and I feel like I'd have only rated it Mature on AO3 -- and Josyn also suffers some sexual peril, but it's more threat than anything, and it's at the hands of a villain, not Aevin. Specifically, I am not super clear on how this world's sexual morality operates, but it also seems like they don't really have a taboo about premarital sex; I get the impression they might have more reliable birth control than your average kings-and-princesses fantasy setting, but that's just my conjecture based on the sample chapter for A Lady of Truth at the end. (I'll probably be reading that at some point; this was fun.)
July 8, 2023
Creative story
I would like to thank booksirens for sending me an ARC copy of this book. This book is an enchanting fantasy novel with some romance and I felt that the plot was quite interesting. Josyn who is the heroine of the story, is the sister of the king. She was struck blind because of a magical prayer but even after being blind she gets some magical abilities like understanding the Aura of people without seeing them.
Josyn has a crush on Aevin who is her brother's childhood friend. He is a human with beastly powers and I really loved the development of their relationship. I also loved the brother sister relationship portrayed in this book. Each and every relationship has been portrayed in a wonderful way. The plot is very creative and I really enjoyed reading it.
I would like to thank booksirens for sending me an ARC copy of this book. This book is an enchanting fantasy novel with some romance and I felt that the plot was quite interesting. Josyn who is the heroine of the story, is the sister of the king. She was struck blind because of a magical prayer but even after being blind she gets some magical abilities like understanding the Aura of people without seeing them.
Josyn has a crush on Aevin who is her brother's childhood friend. He is a human with beastly powers and I really loved the development of their relationship. I also loved the brother sister relationship portrayed in this book. Each and every relationship has been portrayed in a wonderful way. The plot is very creative and I really enjoyed reading it.
January 9, 2024
This was beautiful. A princess who not only isn't useless, but she's strong and determined and intelligent instead! We get to see the world as she's exploring it through her new 'eyes'. A love interest who isn't an asshole, and a system for making his gruff personality more interesting. I normally don't care about court machinations, but this was smartly done as well.
The title says it's 'steamy' but I wouldn't say that at all.
The title says it's 'steamy' but I wouldn't say that at all.
November 20, 2024
2 ⭐️
Disclaimer: I’m going to review it without spoilers at the top, then create a line and anything below that line will be spoilers. Do with that what you will.
This book had so much potential to be good, but overall it really just flopped. I wanted SO MUCH for this book to be good, because it has such an interesting premise. But wow, was it boring until like ~70% into the book. If I didn’t love Aevin and Jos together and the unique concept involved in this book, it would be an even lower rating.
What I liked:
- The concept of Balance and Jos going blind but getting another sense was such a unique idea.
- Inclusion of other Balanced specialties like Aevin’s and others.
- Alternate world, customs, etc.
- I loooooove the flower concept—I’ll explain further in the spoiler section
- Favorite quote: I tumbled into a blackness that was a profusion of color for the second time in my life. But this time, sensation reigned supreme while the world lost meaning.
- This wasn’t instalove and there was some back and forth which I appreciated.
- I love how the author consistently proved that Jos had a strength to herself even before she was blinded. Her drive and passion to help her brother was admirable and I loved how well she navigated being a royal. There wasn’t the typical “oh I’m bumbling around” type of helpless idea of an FMC that so many authors create.
- I loved how often shame was brought up. This isn’t a standard emotion I see in books.
What I didn’t like:
- I’m all for slowburn, but the pacing of this book was extremely dull. Like almost DNF’d the book several times. I was just bored.
- The name choices are just atrocious. I’m all for a creative name, but they honestly distracted from the book in this case.
- The world building needed to be ramped up. You were occasionally dropped information and it seemed very abrupt and jarring. Again, a distraction from the book itself.
- There were several very anticlimactic scenes that should have had a longer scene.
- The HEA ending felt very rushed. There’s so many ways this could have been built into more vs the abrupt “and they live happily ever after” wrap up that happened.
SPOILERS BEYOND THIS POINT
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What I liked:
- The flower concept was so unique and I loved it. And how it didn’t mean always a real flower but somehow a flower involved. Aevin giving it to her and not admitting his intentions was oddly sweet too. For a tough guy, he was very bashful.
- Aevin and the inclusion of shame. I feel like shame as a motivator is rarely written and it was so interesting to see it written AND it being the guy vs the girl.
- The scenes weren’t too spicy, but I loooooved their first actual sex scene. It was beautifully written, poetic, and I definitely cried some 😅
- Jos clenching when she told him to go faster and he wouldn’t, all to get him to do what she wanted. It was so manipulative and funny and hot.
What I didn’t like:
- Her brother meeting Bryn and instantly there’s pink (love) in their auras? It seemed a tactic to have Jos realize what was missing in her situation and I didn’t really care for it. I was disappointed that their story wasn’t left alone to grow more in another book because I feel like I really like Bryn.
- This was more angst vs not enjoying it, because I did. But dammit Aevin, you’ve got the girl and your little bashful/shameful energy has you running away 😭
- The scene where Rickart died was SO anticlimactic. Hell, everything with this treason plot kinda was. Some things happened but they really just wrapped everything up so easily and with little challenge or dialogue. It was a bummer this plot didn’t get further entertained vs just boom he’s shot and dead.
Disclaimer: I’m going to review it without spoilers at the top, then create a line and anything below that line will be spoilers. Do with that what you will.
This book had so much potential to be good, but overall it really just flopped. I wanted SO MUCH for this book to be good, because it has such an interesting premise. But wow, was it boring until like ~70% into the book. If I didn’t love Aevin and Jos together and the unique concept involved in this book, it would be an even lower rating.
What I liked:
- The concept of Balance and Jos going blind but getting another sense was such a unique idea.
- Inclusion of other Balanced specialties like Aevin’s and others.
- Alternate world, customs, etc.
- I loooooove the flower concept—I’ll explain further in the spoiler section
- Favorite quote: I tumbled into a blackness that was a profusion of color for the second time in my life. But this time, sensation reigned supreme while the world lost meaning.
- This wasn’t instalove and there was some back and forth which I appreciated.
- I love how the author consistently proved that Jos had a strength to herself even before she was blinded. Her drive and passion to help her brother was admirable and I loved how well she navigated being a royal. There wasn’t the typical “oh I’m bumbling around” type of helpless idea of an FMC that so many authors create.
- I loved how often shame was brought up. This isn’t a standard emotion I see in books.
What I didn’t like:
- I’m all for slowburn, but the pacing of this book was extremely dull. Like almost DNF’d the book several times. I was just bored.
- The name choices are just atrocious. I’m all for a creative name, but they honestly distracted from the book in this case.
- The world building needed to be ramped up. You were occasionally dropped information and it seemed very abrupt and jarring. Again, a distraction from the book itself.
- There were several very anticlimactic scenes that should have had a longer scene.
- The HEA ending felt very rushed. There’s so many ways this could have been built into more vs the abrupt “and they live happily ever after” wrap up that happened.
SPOILERS BEYOND THIS POINT
————————————————————
What I liked:
- The flower concept was so unique and I loved it. And how it didn’t mean always a real flower but somehow a flower involved. Aevin giving it to her and not admitting his intentions was oddly sweet too. For a tough guy, he was very bashful.
- Aevin and the inclusion of shame. I feel like shame as a motivator is rarely written and it was so interesting to see it written AND it being the guy vs the girl.
- The scenes weren’t too spicy, but I loooooved their first actual sex scene. It was beautifully written, poetic, and I definitely cried some 😅
- Jos clenching when she told him to go faster and he wouldn’t, all to get him to do what she wanted. It was so manipulative and funny and hot.
What I didn’t like:
- Her brother meeting Bryn and instantly there’s pink (love) in their auras? It seemed a tactic to have Jos realize what was missing in her situation and I didn’t really care for it. I was disappointed that their story wasn’t left alone to grow more in another book because I feel like I really like Bryn.
- This was more angst vs not enjoying it, because I did. But dammit Aevin, you’ve got the girl and your little bashful/shameful energy has you running away 😭
- The scene where Rickart died was SO anticlimactic. Hell, everything with this treason plot kinda was. Some things happened but they really just wrapped everything up so easily and with little challenge or dialogue. It was a bummer this plot didn’t get further entertained vs just boom he’s shot and dead.
October 8, 2024
I was stuck between 3 and 4 so I decided to give it a 4.
I enjoyed the writing and the plot, the draw back for me was that it felt like I was coming into a second stand alone in a world instead of the first. You are thrown into the world with little information about how it works with only some history/information is provided as you go along - this can be fine, except this was the first and it felt like we were expected to know what things were and what the history was. I almost went back and read the prequel I found out about through another review, but decided to just push through.
As mentioned, the story is still enjoyable and you can follow along and pick up most of what you need to know as you go. I'm going to go back and read the prequel as well as read the next in the series. I thought it was an interesting choice to throw in the subplot of Ger finding his bride without any of their courtship even though he is such an integral character.
There is no other man/woman drama besides other characters who desire the main pair. However, the main pair make it known they are not interested.
There is unprotected sex with no talk of protection or potential outcomes.
I enjoyed the writing and the plot, the draw back for me was that it felt like I was coming into a second stand alone in a world instead of the first. You are thrown into the world with little information about how it works with only some history/information is provided as you go along - this can be fine, except this was the first and it felt like we were expected to know what things were and what the history was. I almost went back and read the prequel I found out about through another review, but decided to just push through.
As mentioned, the story is still enjoyable and you can follow along and pick up most of what you need to know as you go. I'm going to go back and read the prequel as well as read the next in the series. I thought it was an interesting choice to throw in the subplot of Ger finding his bride without any of their courtship even though he is such an integral character.
There is no other man/woman drama besides other characters who desire the main pair. However, the main pair make it known they are not interested.
There is unprotected sex with no talk of protection or potential outcomes.
June 26, 2024
tropes:
▸steampunk romantasy
▸brother's best friend
▸bodyguard romance
▸slow burn
▸political intrigue
Princess Josyn is return home after years abroad. she rejoices in the chance to tackle the fractious council and treasonous plots threatening her brother, the king. but when she returned home their enemies invoke a spell-prayer to strike her blind. in this world of 'True Balance' where everything was equal: no wealth, higher status or illness but at the cost of free will, individuality, and change/progress, in exchange of her blindness, she gained a new ability to sense people's thoughts or emotions through colours represent them. the king asked his best friend, Aevin, to serve as her escort and bodyguard to help her navigate the court as she's trying to find the traitor that responsible of her blindness and a treason against the crown.
I love this book, but I just dislike how this book end. I can't say the reasons because I don't want to share spoilers. this book was so well written, the worldbuilding and the magic system there was great, unique and very interesting and it's not hard to follow though sometimes I forgot what emotions that the colours represent by Josyn perspectives. I loved the development of Josyn and Aevin relationship, Josyn has a crush on Aevin since childhood, but Aevin has been pushing her away for three years so there's a lot of good slow burn tensions between them, plus their banter was delightful.
this is the first book in The Great Balance World Series. while technically they can be read as standalone's, I do recommend reading A Lady of Truth first. you will get a better feel of the world by reading them in order and to not confused by the talk of Balance. overall, good plot and very good characters. it leads you to want to read more of her work. recommended!
▸steampunk romantasy
▸brother's best friend
▸bodyguard romance
▸slow burn
▸political intrigue
Princess Josyn is return home after years abroad. she rejoices in the chance to tackle the fractious council and treasonous plots threatening her brother, the king. but when she returned home their enemies invoke a spell-prayer to strike her blind. in this world of 'True Balance' where everything was equal: no wealth, higher status or illness but at the cost of free will, individuality, and change/progress, in exchange of her blindness, she gained a new ability to sense people's thoughts or emotions through colours represent them. the king asked his best friend, Aevin, to serve as her escort and bodyguard to help her navigate the court as she's trying to find the traitor that responsible of her blindness and a treason against the crown.
I love this book, but I just dislike how this book end. I can't say the reasons because I don't want to share spoilers. this book was so well written, the worldbuilding and the magic system there was great, unique and very interesting and it's not hard to follow though sometimes I forgot what emotions that the colours represent by Josyn perspectives. I loved the development of Josyn and Aevin relationship, Josyn has a crush on Aevin since childhood, but Aevin has been pushing her away for three years so there's a lot of good slow burn tensions between them, plus their banter was delightful.
this is the first book in The Great Balance World Series. while technically they can be read as standalone's, I do recommend reading A Lady of Truth first. you will get a better feel of the world by reading them in order and to not confused by the talk of Balance. overall, good plot and very good characters. it leads you to want to read more of her work. recommended!
February 11, 2023
This is an enchanting fantasy romance that follows a blind heroine, Josyn, sister to the King, who is suddenly struck blind because of a magical prayer. Because this prayer is granted by a 'fair' god, her blindness is balanced by a gift of magical powers.
Josyn must navigate her newfound abilities while trying to find out who conspired against her, all with the help of her childhood crush and her brother's best friend, Aevin.
Aevin is a Beast, a human who has beastly powers and operates more on instinct, and he's been pushing her away for three years now.
So asking for his help now is making things awkward for Jos, but she has no choice. (Delicious romantic tension!)
The representation of the blind heroine, Jos, is handled with sensitivity and nuance, and the author does an excellent job of showcasing her strengths and challenges as a person who is visually impaired. The scenes in which Jos learns to use her new powers are particularly intriguing, and the reader is fully invested in her journey of self-discovery. The magic elements in the book are well thought out and add a unique and exciting layer to the story.
I also liked the political intrigue and the conspiracy at the heart of the story. All those people doing things for their own very different motives. I loved how Jos was able to use her wits to deduce it all.
Overall, this book is a must-read for fans of fantasy romance. The love story is engaging and interesting, the blind heroine is represented well, and the magic aspects and her learning to use her new powers are both fascinating and empowering. Definitely recommend!
Josyn must navigate her newfound abilities while trying to find out who conspired against her, all with the help of her childhood crush and her brother's best friend, Aevin.
Aevin is a Beast, a human who has beastly powers and operates more on instinct, and he's been pushing her away for three years now.
So asking for his help now is making things awkward for Jos, but she has no choice. (Delicious romantic tension!)
The representation of the blind heroine, Jos, is handled with sensitivity and nuance, and the author does an excellent job of showcasing her strengths and challenges as a person who is visually impaired. The scenes in which Jos learns to use her new powers are particularly intriguing, and the reader is fully invested in her journey of self-discovery. The magic elements in the book are well thought out and add a unique and exciting layer to the story.
I also liked the political intrigue and the conspiracy at the heart of the story. All those people doing things for their own very different motives. I loved how Jos was able to use her wits to deduce it all.
Overall, this book is a must-read for fans of fantasy romance. The love story is engaging and interesting, the blind heroine is represented well, and the magic aspects and her learning to use her new powers are both fascinating and empowering. Definitely recommend!
June 10, 2024
Not being one for excess steam in my steampunk, this book was a wonderful surprise. It's a little steamy, a little 'punky, and a whole lot of magical mystery, politics and friends to lovers slow burn to savor.
While the drop you on at the deep end begging left me feeling jarred (if I hadn't read the prequel I might have been more confused by the talk of Balance or what Princess Josyn's history was beyond the blurb), it grew into a sweet love story with a whole lot of intrigue. I loved the evolution of Josyn and Aevin's relationship as they explored the twisted machinations going on in her brother's court.
As our MC is blind, the world building couldn't rely on physical description. While I wish the world's steampunk concept and period setting had been expanded upon, there's a clever use of Josyn's narration to guide us seemlessly around. Nor are we hung up on descriptions of floofy dresses or tight uniforms that can get repetitive in the romance genre. No, we build a close relationship with everything via Josyn's point of view, including her Balance-given ability to sense people's auras and emotions. The mechanic is cleverly done, and I enjoyed learning more about her as time went on.
The beginning could have used a little more lead in to establish the characters and what was going on, but otherwise I found this a nice balance of romance and mystery with only a little strife from miscommunication. Recommended for those who want a softer sort of steamy romance with cozy vibes.
While the drop you on at the deep end begging left me feeling jarred (if I hadn't read the prequel I might have been more confused by the talk of Balance or what Princess Josyn's history was beyond the blurb), it grew into a sweet love story with a whole lot of intrigue. I loved the evolution of Josyn and Aevin's relationship as they explored the twisted machinations going on in her brother's court.
As our MC is blind, the world building couldn't rely on physical description. While I wish the world's steampunk concept and period setting had been expanded upon, there's a clever use of Josyn's narration to guide us seemlessly around. Nor are we hung up on descriptions of floofy dresses or tight uniforms that can get repetitive in the romance genre. No, we build a close relationship with everything via Josyn's point of view, including her Balance-given ability to sense people's auras and emotions. The mechanic is cleverly done, and I enjoyed learning more about her as time went on.
The beginning could have used a little more lead in to establish the characters and what was going on, but otherwise I found this a nice balance of romance and mystery with only a little strife from miscommunication. Recommended for those who want a softer sort of steamy romance with cozy vibes.
February 8, 2023
This story brings magical kingdoms to life. Court intrigue, magic spells, a world out of balance makes for a great read. Well written it brings you into a magical world and weaves a spell. Brother and Sister, Prince Germein and Princess Josyn are steadfast, loyal and truly bound to their kingdom. A threat to the throne, has taken away her sight. However, to keep balance another ‘gift’ was left in its place. She may be blind but she can see aura’s. The trick is how to interpret those colors and how to stay safe at the same time. Luckily she is adept at court life, has a stalwart maid, Mili and Aevin. Aevin, a ‘beast’ and best friend to her brother, Germein. Josyn and Aevin have a history and that spurs each into some soul searching and of course, danger. Joysn is intelligent, strong, loyal and always ready to do battle. She is excellent in court intrigue, another great skill. She is surrounded by supportive men, occasionally a bit too protective if well meaning. In between all that is happening to her, lost sight, new sense, intrigues, attraction to Aevin, she finds some time for match matching. She is unstoppable, brave and with so much heart. I look forward to reading more books in this series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
August 14, 2023
This one follows Josyn, former empress in training, after she's returned to Lyr as a result of her fiancée's passing and her desire to not marry his brother, Dmir. She's with her brother Ger, the king, and things seem to be going back to normal for her. Until she suddenly goes blind. Much to her chagrine, her brother calls in his best friend, and her former...friend? She hoped he'd have been more, but he pushed her away three years ago, and now she's forced to be with him every day as her escort.
Aevin is a Beast, having more natural instincts than most as the result of a korengal in his home city. He's the best choice of protection for Josyn. But he seems less than pleased to be in her presence, even though she sees it as an opportunity to try and bridge the gap that's grown between the two of them and find out why he pushed her away.
As Jos and Aevin spend more time together trying to help her learn about her new Sight, enemies are revealed one after another, threatening not only Josyn but the crown itself. As they navigate treasonous zealots, they also find their way back to one another. Will they become closer and finally realize their love for each other, or will they simply be friends?
Their banter is funny, spicy, and so great to watch unfold. I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next.
Aevin is a Beast, having more natural instincts than most as the result of a korengal in his home city. He's the best choice of protection for Josyn. But he seems less than pleased to be in her presence, even though she sees it as an opportunity to try and bridge the gap that's grown between the two of them and find out why he pushed her away.
As Jos and Aevin spend more time together trying to help her learn about her new Sight, enemies are revealed one after another, threatening not only Josyn but the crown itself. As they navigate treasonous zealots, they also find their way back to one another. Will they become closer and finally realize their love for each other, or will they simply be friends?
Their banter is funny, spicy, and so great to watch unfold. I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next.
January 26, 2023
This book had me hooked from the very beginning. It jumps right into Josyn’s devastating loss and the political intrigue that plagues both her and her brother Germein, who is the ruling king.
Right away, I really enjoyed Josyn’s character. Her quick thinking helps her brother manage this attack to the throne while he seeks help from their longtime friend, Aevin. It’s a completely life altering event for her and she maintains calm (with the help of her maid who’s a fantastic sassy side character). Aevin is a complicated character for me-he’s aloof and gives the impression that he doesn’t want to be around Josyn when he first arrives but there’s something simmering underneath the surface. Although she’s lost one sense, she has received another and she’s trying to figure it out in the midst of everything else going on around her. His words and his aura/energy are sometimes two different things and it’s just one more thing for her to struggle to figure out.
I enjoyed seeing their relationship grow from strained and uncomfortable to finally accepting of what they feel for each other. I enjoyed their ending and loved what a quite romantic Aevin really ends up being. I received a complimentary copy of this book and this is my honest and fair review.
Right away, I really enjoyed Josyn’s character. Her quick thinking helps her brother manage this attack to the throne while he seeks help from their longtime friend, Aevin. It’s a completely life altering event for her and she maintains calm (with the help of her maid who’s a fantastic sassy side character). Aevin is a complicated character for me-he’s aloof and gives the impression that he doesn’t want to be around Josyn when he first arrives but there’s something simmering underneath the surface. Although she’s lost one sense, she has received another and she’s trying to figure it out in the midst of everything else going on around her. His words and his aura/energy are sometimes two different things and it’s just one more thing for her to struggle to figure out.
I enjoyed seeing their relationship grow from strained and uncomfortable to finally accepting of what they feel for each other. I enjoyed their ending and loved what a quite romantic Aevin really ends up being. I received a complimentary copy of this book and this is my honest and fair review.
February 1, 2023
An intriguing idea this - to see the world through colors of feelings and the memories of eyesight forever gone. Her training and the Ice Princess façade helped her to keep her decorum, but her inner devastation is described well with few words and in various ways, and her political acumen is remarkable for a character in a romance book.
Talking about balance and the forever duality of this world we live in, I think it's easy to see royalty either as a fairytale life of plenty or a privilege bestowed unfairly on a birthright rule. But it's not that simple - a good ruler has to be a good person, and a bad ruler is maybe weak, greedy or simply stupid, and that applies to all rulers regardless of status, be they royal or elected.
King Germein and Joslyn are good rulers, the kind that strives for good for all. They clearly understand that royalty does not only mean rights (wealth, power, privilege or such), but also weighty obligations. They had a lot of duties, one of which was to play political games during every event of every day - exhausting, right? They are willing to sacrifice personal happiness for duty, but still human enough to wish for both - and bravo to the author that she imagined them lucky enough to find this balance in the end.
Talking about balance and the forever duality of this world we live in, I think it's easy to see royalty either as a fairytale life of plenty or a privilege bestowed unfairly on a birthright rule. But it's not that simple - a good ruler has to be a good person, and a bad ruler is maybe weak, greedy or simply stupid, and that applies to all rulers regardless of status, be they royal or elected.
King Germein and Joslyn are good rulers, the kind that strives for good for all. They clearly understand that royalty does not only mean rights (wealth, power, privilege or such), but also weighty obligations. They had a lot of duties, one of which was to play political games during every event of every day - exhausting, right? They are willing to sacrifice personal happiness for duty, but still human enough to wish for both - and bravo to the author that she imagined them lucky enough to find this balance in the end.
February 5, 2023
I really enjoyed this magical world. I was surprised when the main character was blinded on practically the first page but I was drawn in as she learned to interpret the new sense that replaced it, reading auras. The magic of this world is all about balance so when one thing is taken something of equal value must replace it. However, nothing is completely even or balanced. There are religious extremists who want to bring the world into "True Balance," but this would remove all extremes (no greatness, no mediocrity, everyone would have average abilities at everything). There's lots of political, religious, and personal intrigue to navigate as the princess tries to determine who prayed her sight away. She has to rely on her childhood friend to keep her safe and learn to navigate the world again but their relationship is complicated. This could have easily been an overly complicated story with learning about her new sense, the magic of the world, as well as court proceedings and more but the author did a great job feeding the reading what we needed to know in manageable (enjoyable) doses. I look forward to reading the next book in the series. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 28, 2025
The first half was absolutely delightful, the second half was still good.
The first half:
Likeable characters!
Not one, but TWO plots in addition to the romance plotline
Good writing, with lots of fun lines
Could have been better:
The second half was a bit more disappointing, because the focus turned more to the romance plotline, which meant the other plots were solved more easily, and with less twists and turns than I was hoping for.
If you want a steampunk story, be aware it IS a steampunk world, but that aspect isn't very important to the story.
Although the main character was blind, I did not feel this was a disability-inclusive story. She was given another sense to keep her lack of sight "in Balance," which isn't exactly magical healing, but it's not NOT magical healing either. Also, for most of the story, she just hung onto Aevin's arm to deal with her lack of sight. The blindness was mostly a plot device for forced proximity rather than a genuine exploration of life without sight.
Cleanliness: Some in-world language, some on-page violence, not graphic or gory.
A fair bit of pining, two on-page explicit scenes that were easily avoided by "skip to next chapter".
A few scenes with varying levels of sexual harrassment
The first half:
Likeable characters!
Not one, but TWO plots in addition to the romance plotline
Good writing, with lots of fun lines
Could have been better:
The second half was a bit more disappointing, because the focus turned more to the romance plotline, which meant the other plots were solved more easily, and with less twists and turns than I was hoping for.
If you want a steampunk story, be aware it IS a steampunk world, but that aspect isn't very important to the story.
Although the main character was blind, I did not feel this was a disability-inclusive story. She was given another sense to keep her lack of sight "in Balance," which isn't exactly magical healing, but it's not NOT magical healing either. Also, for most of the story, she just hung onto Aevin's arm to deal with her lack of sight. The blindness was mostly a plot device for forced proximity rather than a genuine exploration of life without sight.
Cleanliness: Some in-world language, some on-page violence, not graphic or gory.
A fair bit of pining, two on-page explicit scenes that were easily avoided by "skip to next chapter".
A few scenes with varying levels of sexual harrassment
March 5, 2024
DNF, page 151.
Unfortunately, this fell flat for me despite being really interested initially.
The pace starts off well enough, with a lot of action at the start. After the first 40 pages, I found that this didn’t flow quite as well and things felt really stunted. Things picked up again around the hundred page mark, but I felt really bored reading this because not all that much was happening. I just couldn’t get back into it.
The characters were a somewhat basic, and I think a bit more development would have been a good idea to give them some depth.
In my opinion, the ‘romance’ elements were non existent in terms of where I read up to, I didn’t get any chemistry from this. I also struggled with what about this book was actually ‘steampunk’ themed. I think these aspects could have been better executed.
I like the unusual concept of the need for a ‘balance,’ but it just fell short of my expectations.
I’ve given this two stars because it wasn’t the worst thing I’ve read, but I won’t score any higher because it was a DNF.
Unfortunately, this fell flat for me despite being really interested initially.
The pace starts off well enough, with a lot of action at the start. After the first 40 pages, I found that this didn’t flow quite as well and things felt really stunted. Things picked up again around the hundred page mark, but I felt really bored reading this because not all that much was happening. I just couldn’t get back into it.
The characters were a somewhat basic, and I think a bit more development would have been a good idea to give them some depth.
In my opinion, the ‘romance’ elements were non existent in terms of where I read up to, I didn’t get any chemistry from this. I also struggled with what about this book was actually ‘steampunk’ themed. I think these aspects could have been better executed.
I like the unusual concept of the need for a ‘balance,’ but it just fell short of my expectations.
I’ve given this two stars because it wasn’t the worst thing I’ve read, but I won’t score any higher because it was a DNF.
January 26, 2023
Love love love love love!!!
I had the absolute pleasure of reading this as an arc book and I am so glad I did. The imagery, the romance, the adventure all tied together with a colourful bow. We are thrown right into the story from the get go, Josyn our protagonist realises that she is blind and has to navigate the book in a whole new way which I love. This for me is the first book where there has been a character with a disability, it's also the first one I have read where a character is blind. Having friends who are blind and have disabilities it is lovely to see that Josyn doesn't let her disability stop her, she carries on regardless and doesn't let it phase her just like my friends. This along with an amazing storyline gives this book a strong 5 star review from me, also earning a spot in my top three arc books of the year so far! Congrats Jen on such an amazing book and thank you again for giving me the opportunity to read it in advance!
I had the absolute pleasure of reading this as an arc book and I am so glad I did. The imagery, the romance, the adventure all tied together with a colourful bow. We are thrown right into the story from the get go, Josyn our protagonist realises that she is blind and has to navigate the book in a whole new way which I love. This for me is the first book where there has been a character with a disability, it's also the first one I have read where a character is blind. Having friends who are blind and have disabilities it is lovely to see that Josyn doesn't let her disability stop her, she carries on regardless and doesn't let it phase her just like my friends. This along with an amazing storyline gives this book a strong 5 star review from me, also earning a spot in my top three arc books of the year so far! Congrats Jen on such an amazing book and thank you again for giving me the opportunity to read it in advance!
August 3, 2025
3.5 🌟
The synopsis introduced a really intriguing concept when our FMC loses her literal sight but gains a different kind of vision. Faces can lie, but emotion is instinctive, like a Beast’s (iykyk). The political aspects were well integrated, and I enjoyed the strategy and tension during the mission to uncover a traitor.
That said, I wish her new ability had been explored a bit more deeply. While I didn’t dislike how it was handled, it was definitely interesting at first, but it eventually plateaued because there just wasn’t much more to uncover about it as the story went on. Still, the story does a good job portraying the disorientation and frustration of not being able to see, which added emotional depth. The romance also plays a significant role, though it doesn’t overpower the main plot.
Overall, a solid read. A protective MMC and a friends-to-lovers dynamic definitely added to the appeal, even if the execution didn’t fully blow me away.
The synopsis introduced a really intriguing concept when our FMC loses her literal sight but gains a different kind of vision. Faces can lie, but emotion is instinctive, like a Beast’s (iykyk). The political aspects were well integrated, and I enjoyed the strategy and tension during the mission to uncover a traitor.
That said, I wish her new ability had been explored a bit more deeply. While I didn’t dislike how it was handled, it was definitely interesting at first, but it eventually plateaued because there just wasn’t much more to uncover about it as the story went on. Still, the story does a good job portraying the disorientation and frustration of not being able to see, which added emotional depth. The romance also plays a significant role, though it doesn’t overpower the main plot.
Overall, a solid read. A protective MMC and a friends-to-lovers dynamic definitely added to the appeal, even if the execution didn’t fully blow me away.
January 12, 2023
I had enjoyed the first book, A Lady of Truth, a lot and was looking forward to the next entry in this series. A Princess of Vision worked well as a sequel, it does what I was looking for in this universe. I had enjoyed getting to know Princess Josyn as a main character, she worked well in the world. It had what I was looking for and am excited to read more in this universe.
"The worry in Aevin’s aura kept me from snapping at him again. I breathed deeply, getting my anger under control. “While I appreciate your concern, nothing happened. I’m not going to just sit in my room while you and Germein are off doing other things. If I couldn’t know the results of the council session, then at least I could learn more from the courtiers.”
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
"The worry in Aevin’s aura kept me from snapping at him again. I breathed deeply, getting my anger under control. “While I appreciate your concern, nothing happened. I’m not going to just sit in my room while you and Germein are off doing other things. If I couldn’t know the results of the council session, then at least I could learn more from the courtiers.”
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
June 24, 2024
A fun, lovely, low fantasy novel that had me kicking my feet and giggling.
I really like this! I was originally drawn to it by the cover cause it's stunning and decided to pick it up. After a reading slump I could not put this book down!
Aevin and Josyn were so damn cute oh my goodness. They're that couple that you're like just kiss all ready, and when they do you're like pumping your fist in the air and giggling.
The story itself is super exciting, outside of the romance aspect. I was intrigued by the world this author had built. I loved how the character adapted and how she can see emotions. It was just so .well told. With world building that didn't bog you down but enough to get a sense of the world.
Spice rating: 1.5/ 5🌶 not super spicy. Definitely wished it had more.
Romance rating: 4/5 💜
Enjoyment rating: 5/5 ✨️
Story rating: 4/5 ⭐️
I really like this! I was originally drawn to it by the cover cause it's stunning and decided to pick it up. After a reading slump I could not put this book down!
Aevin and Josyn were so damn cute oh my goodness. They're that couple that you're like just kiss all ready, and when they do you're like pumping your fist in the air and giggling.
The story itself is super exciting, outside of the romance aspect. I was intrigued by the world this author had built. I loved how the character adapted and how she can see emotions. It was just so .well told. With world building that didn't bog you down but enough to get a sense of the world.
Spice rating: 1.5/ 5🌶 not super spicy. Definitely wished it had more.
Romance rating: 4/5 💜
Enjoyment rating: 5/5 ✨️
Story rating: 4/5 ⭐️
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