Jordyn didn’t always plan to be a Boot Mage, but when events beyond their control forced them to make a change, they discovered their passion for boots. After struggling to set up a boot business in a busy town, they find themselves summoned by a mysterious patron with the promise of great riches and the chance to work on magnificent boots. But when they arrive at the described location, they find themselves in the company of someone from their past, someone they hate with a passion. Will Jordyn be able to put aside past differences to make the greatest pair of boots ever known in this world?
I did quite like the unique concept of this work, but its execution fell short for me. This book was not immersive, and I think it was largely due to the writing style. It was told in the first person and included long bouts of the protagonist’s opinions and thoughts, which were generally not that interesting. It was also difficult to find the protagonist’s hate of shoe mages believable or compelling, and it felt like that was their sole personality/character trait.
The world itself was interesting and the author did a decent job at incorporating relevant worldbuilding throughout the story. Again though, with how the tale was written, the setting and world never felt alive or compelling, which greatly detracted from my enjoyment. The journeys of this mage should have been dangerous as they were travelling all over this world, but these events were bogged down with the repetitive monologue of the MC, killing any tension or immersion that could have been present.
A couple more nitpicky complaints: the MC seems to be nonbinary based on the pronouns they use to describe themselves. Somehow, everyone around them just knows how to refer to them – even people who have just met them and know literally nothing about them. There were also several errors throughout the work. As it was so short, it was frustrating that there were any errors present.
This was an okay fantasy read overall that could use some reworking. I do love the premise of this work and it is a short read, so if it sounds interesting to you, you should check it out.