5 Stars for the actual story and 1 Star for the lack of editing.
I've watched several interviews with Charles J Hall. A lovable, friendly and honest man. I knew any book containing his experiences with the Tall Whites would have more details and I couldn't wait to get my hands on his book(s). I listened to the audio of this first book in a five book series.
The main story line was what I was interested in learning more about and I'm glad I purchased the book. I actually bought both the ebook and audio. I feel like this was a memoir. The end was not what I expected or satisfying like most books/memoirs are. I felt as if I was just reading a diary, with no goal and no real ending. Perhaps the remaining books will shed some light. I do want to read them and have already purchased the second book. Although the writing is bad, or should I say the lack of editing, the actual main story was good. Some areas I didn't understand because something was missing (plot holes) and I was left with questions that were not answered, which made me sad because I really wanted to know. Maybe the author just forgot to add those bits of information? Other times I wondered why Charlie Baker didn't ask certain questions, why he would never admit to what he was seeing or approach things a little differently and try to get to know the Tall Whites. Why did the men say Charlie was brave, when he was actually scared all the time and chose to ignore things right in front of him? Again, maybe the next books will answer my own questions. I sure hope they do.
Sometimes, we can look past the not-so-perfect book to get to the main story. Those books are worth the read and I'm glad I read it.
I don't want to hurt the author's feelings, but I have to be honest (in a good critical way).
If you can get past the bad self-editing, too much description, at home echoey studio, monotone reading level (some people do that when they read out-loud), the reading of the front pages (chapters, LCCN, copyright, etc.) which are not done, the overused and unnecessary adverbs, (repetitive) conversations that don't need to be explained twice, telling instead of showing, the clearing of his throat three times in chapter 22 (in the audio), and the uneven sound levels throughout (in the audio), you'll be fine. More times than I can remember, I was distracted while listening to the audio because in my mind I was fixing sentences, removing words or rewriting paragraphs. I'm actually surprised that all of the above, especially the sound levels and constant echoes, were even allowed to pass and be accepted on Audible. Also, the audio part that includes the reading of the chapters, the ISBN, the copyright, all those non-chapters are not supposed to be read. The actual chapters didn't start until chapter five in the audio.