In the late 1700s, Suzanna arrives on St. John’s Island as a botanist, however she is forced to face the harsh realities of the island where many of the inhabitants have slaves that they are unwilling to give up. Suzanna feels called to action and gathers support from unexpected places.
There were a lot of POVs in this book (I think around 11), which seemed to work for the story but I think it would have been better if it focused solely on 1 or 2 POVs (Suzanna and Walter) as I felt like the reader doesn't get much of a chance to learn more about the characters, especially the POVs of any of the characters who weren't Suzanna and Walter. I felt like at the end of the book, I knew the most about those two. There's some likeable characters like Suzanna, Nellie and Ian but the rest I either didn't know enough about them to form an opinion or I didn't like them.
I did find this book hard to get into as the pace was quite slow. There were places where it felt like the pace increased but even then, it felt too slow for my preference. I kept finding myself wanting the book to get to the point it was trying to make instead of it being so drawn out. However, I was interested in this book and the direction it was going to take.
The ending left me with a lot of unanswered questions, which made me feel unsatisfied. I had questions about John, the slaves, Walter, the colony and Freelove and her situation with the Reverend.
There were some things that needed fixing like missing speech marks, punctuation, wrong use of words (e.g. has instead of had), the wording being awkward at times (e.g. being with child), words that needed removed, putting the words Walter wrote in a letter in italics (to easier distinguish between the letter and story) and some repetition.
⚠️ CWs: animal death, cheating, colonisation, profanity, slavery, racism, derogatory language, alcohol use, physical assault, emancipation, immigration, pregnancy, body injury, misogyny, whipping; mentions death and abortion ⚠️