1.5 :lukewarm, flowery, skirtin around the issue scenes passin 4sex. I dint like Val&the plot was borin.
Pg2 divests this lil gem after a woman givs him her phone # &offers 2do anything he wants2: “But 36 was a long wy from those erly, wild yrs…&he was tired of wakin up next2 naked women whose names he dint rmbr,who had nvr made him laugh, whose families he’d nvr met.”
W/o even gettin 2no him we no all about his slutty ways. Right after women giv him ther phone #s V cums up&he asks if she or Tatiana needs anything. She c’s the#s in his hand&looks disgusted, which I liked. I thought it was way2 soon 2b noticin her&wantin her. I was hopin they’d ease in2 it or not like each other at 1st. I dint expect 2cum in2 it wher they’re alredy attracted. It was so hard 2get in2 ther attraction &y they liked each other bcuz they met off the pgs. We shud hav seen ther 1st meetin insted of bein told about it.
On set aftr a scene is ovr he givs her sis a kiss on the 4hed. Does his costar hav 2b her sis? That’s twisted. &I cud only dread wher it was goin2go in the romance department. &her sis likes him! V imm drags him off 2his trailer&tells him not2 seduce her sis. He’s insulted at his honor bein in?. He thinks Tatiana is butiful&that V isn’t as obv. butiful as her sis&a man had2 look deeper. He thought her eyes a duller green than T’s but they’re hazel insted. He thinks sum1 is mor butiful, esp. a fam. member. He says he duznt want T&it’s clear ther’s an unspoken “I want u.”
She goes2his house 4a meetin&a woman answers the door. V thinks he’s havin an orgy&continues 2think it even aftr Nicola&Marcus, his bro, kiss. It’s only wen Smith congratulates their engagement that she givs up her orgy theory. Wth is wrong w/her? That’s disgusting. &Nicola says the 1st night she&Marcus were 2gethr he only gav her a lil kiss even tho she begged 4mor. Who talks like that 2the guy’s brother? That’s sik.
“..it hit him that this was the 1st time in his life he’d evr experienced sumthin this warm, this sweet, w/a woman. Heck, now that he thought about it, this was act. the 2nd time he’d tried 2put this puzzle 2gthr. The last time it sat unfinished, the woman he’d mistakenly brought home had thought it wud b sexy 2swipe it off on2 the floor so that he cud do her on top of the coffee table. A while later, wen the woman had gone 2the bathroom 2straighten her hair&clothes b4 he sent her home, he’d imm picked up the pieces. Doin a woman he’d picked up at a Hollywood event on top of his coffee table was sumthin a movie star did.”
Wut a nice memory. That’s the same puzzle so that must hav ben recent. Who wants him 2hav a memory like this wen we’re tryin2 warm up 2him& Valentina? &“do” her? That’s such a crude way2 refer 2sex. &it’s even sicker bcuz it’s the puzzle his niece gav him&him&Valentina r workin on it. &doin a puzzle seems out of character4both of them.
T’s agent, who’s conveniently gay,is talkin2her &she repeats Smith puttin his hands up her skirt&Smith walks up&hears it. Thought it was gonna b a bigger deal but he dint even say anything. Wut a waste.
He cums 2her trailer&asks her out 4a date. She says she duznt date actors &he says “me either.” He’s undaunted wen she says she duznt want any1 in the business. He says wen he’s w/her he can b a director, screenwriter or producer which was cute bcuz he has a lot of titles. &he sed he’s also a son, brother &friend&he hopes 2b a father 1day2. She turns him down agin&he’s frustrated. She duznt want Tatiana 2b uncomfortable bcuz she thinks they hav sumthin goin on, bcuz he’s goin2b shootin a luv scene w/Tatiana—just wut I was afraid of, this is so twisted 2hav her sis his on-screen luv interest—&she thinks it’ll b impossible2 watch him tuch &kiss another woman. As usual she misses the point—it’s ur sister 4Pete’s sake! Do u want 2touch sum1 that tuched ur sis, even 4a movie?
The script was my least fav part.&the fact it was written like a story ¬ a script just bothered me mor. A script has lines, dialogues &directions, not sentences like this. This is a story in a story. &it rly turned me off of him that he wrote it.
“He’d grown mor&mor hollow, w/mor 1-night stands&wilder parties w/acquaintances &colleagues that ment nothin, in the hrs that wer left btwn women that dint matter…”
He goes 2the corner wher he crashed in2 her evry day—like The Man Who Can’t Be moved—ignorin calls from famly, for months. He finally c’s her in a coffee shop&she’s pregnant. He’s sick that he kickd her&cud’ve lost her baby. He wants 2tak care of her&c she duznt hurt agin&offers her1 of his apartments he’s rentin out, creepy &unrealistic,&her attitude is such a freakin turnoff. She’s crude&abrasive. I can’t beleve he wrote this crap. &baby bump? I can’t stand that phrase. It sounds so trashy.
The script was the worst part 4me, added 2the fact it was pg upon pg of italics. W/stupid words like booties &she tells Graham she asked not2no the gender&his eyes cloud ovr&he says it’s a girl. How wud he no the gender? That’s so stupid. He also gets her a new stroller &newborn baby seat. It’s just gross 2me, donning gifts on a yung pregnant stranger. She goes2his office&says it’s Jo, she duznt hav an appntmnt but he’ll c her. She tells him she can’t accept the gifts&then goes in2 labor so he arranges 4his private car 2b waitin downstairs &carries her in2 the hospital &it’s just all so disgusting 2me.
Smith givs her tickets 2Alcatraz &she invites him 2go—as if she’d tak his tickets ¬—&I liked wen at the table he says Tatiana told him she’s writin a script &she says no. She duznt want him 2c it. He says u love 2say no 2me, don’t u? He’s teasin but he’s frustrated &I liked that line. I also liked that she had the idea about the women on the island, that they might hav ben unhappily married &fallen in luv w/the prisoners &they both knew they cudn’t b 2gethr.
4dessert she opens a box&ther’s 2cupcakes, 1w/a frosting pic of Smith in jail bhind bars w/a cute&pleadin look on his face,&the other a cartoon V holdin the key 2/his cell w/1 finger,eyes wicked. That was a hot idea.
The sex was completely disappointing as I feared it wud b. More about the 4play&kissin &the sex itself only lasted a few lines. It was basically a few strokes &then they spun out of control 2gthr. Vry hot stuff. It’s so annoyin wen authors use empty, flowery phrases. &it’s even weirder bcuz u wud expect an author that talks about orgies &“doin” women on coffee tables wud b mor candid w/the MCs but it was so tame&lame, lukewarm w/no details. &4sum reason she’s caught on the word sweet. Sweet kisses, the sweet pull of his mouth on her, the sweetness of bein 2gthr, sweetness changed 2sexy, sweetness of his touch, they wer sweet 2gether, a wave of sweet sensation… it was just way 2much. Who wants the word sweet used so much? It isn’t sexy, it’s way 2tame. Oh&the word soft. Her soft curves, soft hips, soft body. Jeeze, some synonyms wud b great.
She goes 2the spa w/Tatiana &runs in2 Vicki, Smith’s soon 2b sister-in-law &Lori &Sophie, his sisters. Lori is the only other Sullivan that’s single beside Smith,&she asks Valentia if she’s fallin in luv like the rest of the Sullivan’s. Valentina, in a rly annying character trait, says she needs 2lie, figure out how 2tell a convincing lie, &“only wut came out insted was” &she tells them there’s a guy who’s interested but since she knows it isn’t gonna work out she’s ben tryin not2 encourage him. Y wud she say that? Lori asks if the guy is cute &V, like a lil bashful girl blushes &says yes. Lori says ur totally sleepin w/him, right? By Valentina’s reaction Lori can tell the answer’s yes&the sex is awesome. Y not lie, bcuz she’s talkin2 his sisters &wen they find out Valentina &Smith r2gthr they’re goin2no she was talkin about him, &wut sisters want2no or talk about their bro’s sex life?
A few days pass since she was at his house &as she’s leavin set 1day Smith cums up &gets in her car. He wants her 2go Christmas shoppin 4the crew, an excuse 2b w/her. She says they aren’t a good idea &he thinks “She was right. The 2of them weren’t a good idea. They were a great idea.” He holds her hand &says “I missed u the past 2nights. Badly.” He takes her 2this eclectic shop wher they buy every1 gifts &they finally get 2the floor he’s ben impatiently waitin4, the 5th floor sellin lingerie. He asks wut her fav class was&it’s physics. He says “”I alwys enjoyed anything wher I cud get up in front of the class &mak a fool of myself. Actin. Dancin. Glee club. The rest of the time I was on a soccer field or tryin2 hit a home run or tryin2 dunk a basketball. But if I’d known a girl like u was in the lab, physics wud hav def shot straight 2the top of my list.” She goes 2kiss him but his phone rings &there’s a prob on set. “I enjoyed spendin the afternoon w/u, Valentina. So much that it will make missin u 2night even harder.” She begs “Don’t miss me, Smith. Please don’t.” “Wud u b happier knowin that I’m waiting 4u 2come 2me insted?” Then he says “I shud warn u now that I’m no good at waitin. Esp not wen every single voice in my head is tellin me2 take wut I know is alredy mine.”
She finds a puzzle of Alcatraz at the shop &gets it4 Smith, &he’s alredy arranged 4all of the lingerie 2b packaged up 4her. The next day she goes in2 the screening room, where he’s sitting in the dark watchin scenes from the movie. She says him&Tatiana r perfect 2gethr &he says “Our characters r perfect 2gethr. But they aren’t real. U. Me. We’re wut’s real, Valentina. How much longer r u goin2 make me wait 4u?” She says the lingerie is beautiful. “I can’t possibly deny that, or lie 2u by sayin that I’m goin2 tak it bak 2the store. But the fact that I can’t resist wearin the beautiful things u bought 4me doesn’t change anything.” Idl her&I rly don’t like that she went 2c him knowin she was goin2 keep the gift from sum1 she plans not 2b with. It isn’t right 2accept his gift wen she doesn’t plan 2b w/him. &I expected him 2get mad that she’s still sayin she won’t b w/him. The next line sed he looked as if he was havin trouble breathin &I flipped the pg expectin him 2b mad but insted it was: “The storm gathered in even closer as he finally choked out, “Ur wearin them?”
That was completely not the reaction I thought he was goin2 hav. I dint think she was wearin them at that moment at all. &then she’s like, 4the 10th time, Oh God. Grow up&act like a woman &quit goin Oh God every time u say sumthin. Handle the situation &quit worryin if u sed sumthin, how u sed it&wantin 2run awy from the situation.
They’re havin sex agin&it’s lukewarm. Idc about the sex scenes bcuz they hav nothin 2offer in the way of heat.
“Ther mouths collided just as fiercly as the rest of them,the pull&thrust of his body aginst—&in2—hers a mirror of the way ther tungs wer strokin, slidin 2gthr.”
We no he’s goin in2 her body. We get that. We don’t need it clarified.
At the Christmas party on set she givs him the puzzle&he nos wut she’s tryin2 tell him bcuz everything changed 4them ther. He says “I luv it, Valentina.” 1word. All he wanted was 2change 1word. 2change it 2 u. She walks awy but he nos she herd wut he dint say.
Lori, his sister, cums 2set &says she’s ben dyin 4an update on the guy she duznt want2 encurage but she’s havin sex w/&asks or has he given up yet? Smith, in that way that’s overused, walks up&hears it. I think that’s happened 3 times. His dark eyes r on V the entire time. T cums up &Smith &V hav a chance 2look at each other. She shoots him a look that says I’ll explain wut Lori sed later, ok? Just don’t do or say anything we’re goin2 regret. Please, can we sav this 4wen it’s just the 2of us? He’s frustrated, another fav word, but I liked that he maks up a story that files she asked him 4r in his office so they cud b alone.
He locks the door bhind them &interrupts her explanation &says “Strip.” “&from his sure knowledge that she was not only goin2 obey his sensual command…but was goin2 absolutely luv every single sec of it.
So sure, in fact, that he dint wait 4her 2start takin off her clothes b4 he bgan 2remuv his own.” She can barely swallow wen he reached 4his belt&she tells him they’re goin 2b lookin 4him on set soon. “Then we’ll hav2mak this quick, won’t we?”
Graham gives Jo the apartment by a park, he brings nutritious dinners every night, just wut a new mom needed, &they become friends. She falls asleep after dinner, the baby girl—cuz somehow Graham knew the gender—&he gets a bottle of breast milk &feeds the baby. Make me freakin gag. He also tells the baby he luvs her&he won’t let any1 hurt her. Evr. Not creepy in the least that a stranger is in luv w/sum1 else’s baby—I just can’t get ovr the plot of this script, not romantic 2me in the least—&Jo hears it. She goes up 2him &kisses him, which means that Tatiana &Smith r kissin. Valentina felt the way I expected her2&the sex scene finally got here &she was sick about it&wanted 2leave. Her nails bit in2 her palms as she watches them kissin&them touchin each other &him kissin her sister’s skin. Wen it’s ovr him&Tatiana hug—he’d made it easy 4her by sayin they were goin2b playin Twister which was nice—but he c’s that Valentina is hurt &betrayed.
Her&her sister go2her trailer &as I knew a rly long time, Tatiana alredy knew about them. She tells her she walked in on Smith&her kissin in the screenin room&nos they had sex in the chair. They talk&her sis convinces Valentina 2giv Smith a chance, so wen he comes she’s sayin he dint hurt her, she did it2 herself. It was 2 fast a turnaround after she watched him hav a sex scene w/her sister, kissin her&her body, that’s way 2much 2get ovr. So it was the wrong time 4them 2hav sex, like rly wrong. I dint even want 2read the sex scene &was gettin tired of them havin sex so much, 1of the 1st times I’ve evr felt that way. Mostly bcuz of wut just happened w/him &her sister &it bein2 soon 4them 2touch, &bcuz the sex scenes suck. They rly do. They’re boring &it wud b almost as fulfilling if they just held hands. Other authors have made holdin hands &kissin sexier than this author’s sex scenes. It takes a tame author w/a way of skirtin around wut’s goin on2 mak the woman givin the man oral sex not even b hot.
After mini golf wher they tied—boring—she taks him home w/her 2the apartment she shares w/Ta. V asks if it’s ok if she has her bf ovr, &T says yeah, she’ll just need earplugs. Ew. Who talks about that w/her sis?! Gosh this is gross. The assistant calls her&tells Val a lot of ppl want her script. “She laughed as she danced around the room w/her sister, pullin him in so they were a happy, wiggling 3some.” Do u rly think it’s a good idea 2b usin the word 3some? Esp after he’s had sex w/Val & a sex scene w/Tatiana?
The next morn T has her look 4a “missin” earring so she can talk 2Smith, shows him a headline that he’s w/both sisters in a luv triangle. Tatiana puts her hand on his arm &a lil less tuchin btwn those 2wud b nice. Val walks in&he shows it 2her, she’s furious &her hands r cold, colder than they were outside at Alcatraz—I gess fury cools u down insted of heatin u up…--&wen they go outside ther’s paparazzi. Sum1 says he’s livin the dream by bangin 2 hot sisters &he punches the camera it hits the man’s jaw. &Val—4the millionth time—thinks Oh, God. Wth is wrong w/her? Ur an adult, get yr crap 2gthr &quit actin like a lil girl. He says “Ur right. I’m no good 4u. My life is no good 4u.” She’s afraid bcuz now it seems he’s the1 givin up. On the movie set ther r mor paparazzi. She nos she needs 2say sumthin &opens her mouth “but fear had them cloggin in her throat.” The hope in his eyes dies. Way 2go. I was so sik of her inability 2say the rite thing—or anything at all . How hard is it 2tell him u want 2b w/him? Ur a grown, supposedly mature woman. Use ur words.
He calls a quit2 shootin cuz his sis Sophie's in labor about 2hav twins. Val goes w/him. There we lern Sophie had a 1-night stand w/Jake, who’s a family friend she’s liked since she was a girl&got pregnant from it. Sounds like this whole series is messed up. Paparazzi cum in the hospital &r takin pics. Val goes 2handle the, says please leave, can’t he spend a few hrs w/his family? They don’t listen—no surprise there—so she offers 2giv them wutevr they want if they’ll leave. They ask ?s that seem unrealistic 2me—convenient more like. They ask if it’s true Smith has ben datin her& her sister, she says no. “Then who is he rly with?” She says just her. They ask how long she’s ben w/Smith,&she answers 4wks. They ask if they wer dating in secret&if her sister knew. Very on-the-nose questions they had the insight 2ask…They ask if he luvs her &she says Idk &then if she’s in luv w/him&she starts cryin &says yes, she luvs him. Wut a baby. &they leave, just like that. &wud any1 hav a guess wut happens next? Smith is right there of course, bcuz 4about the 4th time Smith walked up on a conversation. Everything is so convenient.
Tatiana is movin onto another movie w/o Val there 4the 1st time, Val&Smith r goin2b shootin the Alcatraz movie next year. It finally ends w/them engaged on Christmas, his brother’s marriage &them havin sex 4the millionth time in the laundry room at the wedding,&the whole book ends as a setup 4Lori’s book, a pet peeve of mine wen the main characters don’t get the final scene.
The word sweet drove me crazy as almost 400pgs were full of everything bein called sweet. I noticed it thruout the book&only started 2keep track now.
204 No, it was the sweet promise in his eyes..
229 .still shakin not only w/lust, but also w/sweet emotion..
231 Graham’s gentleness had ben so evident. So sweet.
235 ..hearin the sweet words..
271 He was cute&young&sweet.
284 He wud’ve smiled at the sweetness of her comment..
287 It had ben perfect.&so sweet.
290 Just the potent &oh-so-sweet pleasur.
320 there had nvr ben sweeter words spoken..
221 such a pure, sweet smile..
324 ..the vry, vry sweet knowledge that Valentina luvd him.
325 “That’s so sweet.”
328 His kiss was full of passion, but also sumthin so soft&sweet..
332 Smith took her mouth in a kiss so soft, so sweet..
333 as amazing as it had felt 2hear Smith say “I luv u,” it was not only a million times btr 2say it 2him…it was also easy. Sweet.
340 His mouth found hers then, at once gentle &firm, sweet &passionate..
344 “Wasn’t it so sweet..?”
It was. So sweet..
345 The kiss they shared after his proposal was sweet,&cud hav so easily turned in2 sumthin sweeter..
370 “Look at how sweet that is.”
372 ..makin sweet luv 2her..
Sweet. Sweet. Sweet. We don’t want sweet. We want sexy, hot. An editor shud hav 4bade her from usin the word sweet agin.
&she used the phrase “hart of harts” 3 times. Idl the phrase, but rly bcuz Valentina used it then Smith. Wut man says in his hart of harts? He sounds like a woman&then wen Jo sed it I cudnt tak it. Y do authors hav ther characters talk the same? it’s like a mono-personality.
The MC that annoyed &bored in equal measures. She analyzed ther relationship until almost the vry end figurin it out&needin help&comparin herself now 2who she had ben, marveling that she realized wut luv was&how 2get it, that she was w/an actor, I was just so sick&tired of her hangup over bein w/an actor. The whole bk she spent makin judgments about him based on his career,&lettin herself b vulnerable &showin her sensual side where b4 she held bak, it made 4 rly boring readin. I just wanted it 2b ovr alredy ¬ hav2 hear about it nemore. &the cover looks as lukewarm &stilted as ever &they in no way represent the main characters. &the pic is so misleading. It looks like a beach novel, so I saved it months 2read ovr the summer. They went2 Alcatraz, which duznt hav a beach&it was Nov or Dec—can’t b sure bcuz thers no sense of time in this bk—so ther wasn’t a tiki torch or a lapping sea on the sandy shoreline...