A disappointment
I am always looking for another series of well written mysteries. I cannot find anything about this book that makes this feel well written or worthy of the reader’s time.
First, Victoria Sedgwick is rather FULL of herself, not terribly kind, sometimes caustic in her remarks to her servants, and even less than polite with the detective.
Second, most of the book involves Victoria’s discussions with her staff. One review mentioned that such a relationship between the upper crust and staff members would be totally incorrect, even historically inaccurate. As diverse a species as human beings are, no doubt there were probably some people… certainly have been many people in every generation… who do not conform to societal dictates. However, though they spoke as equals, the author never established a friendly environment in which such relationships would be natural. In fact, though the butler is very dedicated, the cook is the only one that seems to have any warmth. Most of the people in the story seemed very one-dimensional. There was very little interaction between Victoria and any other characters in the book *except* the servants.
The housekeeper was annoying, and Victoria had a hard time hiding her impatience with Mrs. Bell. But what would seem more unrealistic to me is that Victoria who seems to have such high expectations in terms of her social standing, would allow someone like the housekeeper – who is often seemingly argumentative – to continue behaving this way.
And the conversations between Victoria and the members of the staff were not intriguing at all. There also seem to be too many staff members (and therefore, that many more characters in the story) for such a small household, especially Adam, who comes across, early on, to be strongly opinionated, argumentative and sloppy. At one point, he trips over the rug and heaves a platter full of roasted vegetables onto the wall in the dining room.
The character development was not there. I felt that Victoria was just hard to like and demanding in her expectations of others. She did not seem to have a soft side.
There was absolutely no development of the inspector. He was very much a secondary character, even secondary to the members of Victoria’s staff. We see very little of him.
The only character in the book that I liked at all was Eliza who takes care of the baby. Victoria didn’t even seem to have motherly tendencies toward her child, even though she said often enough that she wanted to find justice for Duncan, for the baby’s sake. Early one in the story, Victoria refers to her child as “the infant.“
The father-in-law and brother-in-law were particularly unpleasant. And it was not at all satisfying to listen to Victoria rant about how much they hated her and how much they wanted to harm her, intending to control her; and it also seems unbelievable that they couldn’t possibly have known Duncan well enough to understand that he was a wastrel, a gambler, and a heroin user. And though those characters created conflict in the story, their presence (and her father-in-law‘s greediness) seemed an unnecessary element to move the plot forward— except as an excuse for Victoria to find a job.
There were very few elements developing the mood or the setting. While some authors pour on the details, Ms. Baker provided very little to add substantive literary structure to her story.
There seemed to be very little foreshadowing as to who might have been responsible for Duncan‘s death.
And the idea that Victoria believes that she has the wherewithal by the end to take up a trade, a job, with her meager talents and nonexistent qualifications, is just unbelievable… It just seems to be thrown in at the end to provide a reason for another book.
None of it rang true. The writing was stiff—one person in the reviews mentioned that it was a good introduction to a new series; this was the reason that I gave it a shot. But I must disagree; I could not read another book by this author. I didn’t like Victoria, I don’t think she’s especially talented, I don’t feel that she was especially nice. She is not presented as a character who elicits sympathy from the reader, at least not this reader!
It was a disappointment—so now I will continue my search for another writer like Anna Lee Huber or CS Harris, etc.