Something Sweet is the debut novella by Jessica Brown. It is a shorter clean Christmas romance that could easily be made into a Hallmark movie.
Marley Winters' is a sweet and naïve bakery owner. She trusts her fiancé, Henry, to deposit her earnings while she bakes up delicious treats. Henry doesn’t appear to be employed. On December 1 Henry doesn’t return from making the deposit and Marley is served with an eviction notice because she is three months behind on her rent. She figures out that Henry has been stealing the store’s rent money. When she reaches Henry’s best friend, she finds out that he has run off with another woman in Marley’s car. Marley is told that she must be out of the bakery by the end of the year. She talks the handsome lawyer into letting her stay if she can get caught up on her back-rent by December 22.
John Klaus is an attorney working for his soon-to-be father-in-law, Mr. Ferrar. Mr. Ferrar really wants to evict all of the tenants so he can replace the building with luxury high-rise apartments. He tells John that if he fails, he will not be made a partner in the firm and his marriage won’t go through. John has been dating Cecelia Ferrar since they were 16 years old but they have recently gotten engaged and are planning a wedding on December 23. Cecelia seems more like a caricature of a spoiled rich girl than a real woman with feelings. Cecelia refers to John as “Johnbear,” and seems obsessed with her family’s social status. One week prior to their wedding, she goes to Marley’s bakery to order their wedding cake.
In spite of his pending marriage, John finds himself showing up for coffee day after day at Marley’s bakery, even helping her with her various fundraisers. He doesn’t mention his fiancée to Marley, and he tries to ignore his growing attraction to her. John’s older brother, James, can see that Marley is a better fit for him than Cecelia. Marley gets help at the bakery from her best friend and fellow evictee, Kelsey, and two regular customers, Mikey and Leo.
The tension grows as Marley and John fight their mutual attraction to each other. Will John break his engagement to Cecelia? Will Marley be able to raise the needed rent-money in time? What’s going to happen to John’s job with Mr. Ferrar?
I feel like there is a chapter missing from this story. Marley is a naïve business owner if she wasn’t reviewing her bank statements to ensure that her deposits were being made. Why didn’t her landlord, the evil Mr. Ferrar, contact her prior to her being 3 months behind on her rent? Why didn’t Marley try to track down Henry to recover her money and vehicle? Why didn’t she file a police report? Why didn’t John or Marley’s friends encourage her to do these things? Where is Marley’s anger towards Henry? The reader needs some kind of explanation, even if it’s that Marley is channeling all of her energy into saving the bakery and will mourn Henry after December 22.
Something Sweet is probably the most well-written debut story that I have read. The characters are interesting and the story is well-paced. Most debut authors have either too many or too few side characters, but Something Sweet has exactly enough. There is no profanity or sex, maybe a single kissing scene. Like I said earlier, this story could easily be made into a Hallmark movie.
Following the end of Something Sweet, there is the introductory chapter to Something Secret, which is Kelsey’s story. The male character appears to have a video pornography business, so I would assume that the next book is steamier.
I received an advance review copy (ARC) from BookSirens for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.