1.5 stars rounded-up
Holy bollocks, was this bad.
It was my first story by this author, and needless to say, I won't be coming back for seconds from miss Claudia Y. Burgoa (even though this is a series and my annoying brain is usually set on making me finish those through all the misery, lol).
The first thing to know? Book's summary is a classic case of false advertising - summary focuses on family reunion and fake dating + commitment issues on MMC's side. Let me tell you, those things make for approximately 3% of the plot. And don't get me wrong, I don't want the story to be focusing solely on the tropes, or whatever. But if you're marketing your romance as fake-dating, then you'd better be utilizing that???! In case of this book, it's a total MISS - there's almost no tension, no struggling to hold back, no blossoming feelings.
We get two characters, and almost immediately, we are TOLD that they've been hot for each other for years. MMC is said to have commitment issues due to past relationship drama (we get an info dump in the very first chapter, I believe) but then after few chapters, it's like a switch, and suddenly he's all in love, all in, wants to be with FMC 4EVA. Most of their feelings seem to be worked through even before the family reunion, and said reunion takes up like 2 chapters?? And again, we are TOLD in descriptions what happened, we don't see actual action even once, apart from one out-of-nowhere no-build-up-whatsover lukewarm sex scene that was about exciting as scrubbing my shower clean.
Other random thoughts:
✘ no emotional stakes, weak characterization, weak pacing - overall, I think this author just doesn't have a lot of knowledge on how to build a story and its characters? conflicts got resolved within one chapter. fmc had a plethora of family problems and emotional baggage, but does it make a dent in a relationship? nope. mmc finds out her problems almost right away and fixes them in one heroic swoop, and that's all. the writing just felt lazy. the setup - weak as it was - was there, but there was no will to grow it into something actually emotional and conclude it in a real, rewarding way.
✘ abandoned plot points - what's the point of building all this drama around mmc's past relationship (he had a fiancee who cheated on this with his cousin and he caught them at his father's funeral - I mean, talk about torture porn, lol) and having that as one of the reasons for why he needs a fake girlfriend at that family reunion, if then the cheating fiancee doesn't even show up???! it's just one scene with the cousin, he complains to mmc about still being frozen out by most of the fam and that's it. no follow-up whatsoever.
✘ inconsistencies - e.g. in one chapter mmc clearly states it's wednesday and they're going back from reunion the next day (aka thursday???), the very next chapter in fmc pov she states it's wednesday and they're going back just now - it might be a small thing, but there were multiple small things like that, and it always drives me NUTS because it's YOUR STORY, how do you not pay attention to this shit???!
Anyway...this was dry AF, do not recommend.