This novella is an addicting read. This is a short book and it’s on KU. The premise is a bit simple, but I think the story is decent if you enjoy dark romance. I wouldn’t say this is for dark romance newbies (otherwise you’re okay with jumping straight into the deep end), but the author does have a good list of content notes at the beginning of the book. I love when authors do that and I’ll always try to point that out.
This book pulled me out of a reading funk, so while I don’t think this is the most well-written book, I think the book is thoroughly enjoyable for what it is and I’m grateful for it. This book does end in a cliffhanger of sorts (no HFN or HEA here), but I’m looking forward to reading book 2!
Content notes include dubcon, suicidal ideation, mentions the death of a sibling, attempted rape, mentions of death by asphyxiation, and mentions of a previous “relationship” between a 15-year-old and a 45-year-old. The author includes additional notes at the front of the book.
The story starts with introducing us to 19-year-old Ian. Ian works at one of the seedier brothels in town, and as the only male prostitute in the house, he gets the WORST clients. And there’s nothing he can do about it because he has no one looking out for him.
I honestly feel like we didn’t need all the opening sex scenes with Ian and all those other men abusing him. It was just a lot. They don’t have much bearing on the story besides an excuse to get him kicked out with no prospects. But I guess this makes him very willing to then follow Earl Isak Larsen home (who is 31 years old).
And look. I am by no means an expert on royalty or even read all that many historical romances but the way the Earl is addressed in this book is weird to me. An Earl would normally be an Earl OF a place. That he owns. This book addresses the Earl as “Earl + last name.” At best, I thought it would be Lord Larsen. Earl Larsen is SO weird. I know, I know. This book isn’t historical romance but it is set in a vaguely histrom type world and in an English setting and I did get confirmation that this can be a normal form of address for ~men with titles~ but I wasn’t expecting it and just feels weird seeing him addressed this way in the book.
Anyways.
The story is pretty straightforward and there’s a lot to sex scenes. I wish the author expanded on the simple everyday scenes though because the story switches between an intimate third-person with Ian, and then holding us at arm’s length to indicate the passing of time. We don’t follow Ian to the well. We don’t really see him clean up around the Earl’s home, which is just unimaginatively named “the Castle.” The writing style feels a bit all over the place, and there’s quite a few noticeable typos throughout. The story is readable and I did find myself reading this book all in one sitting but still. I wish the mundane scenes were expanded a bit, and the story had another round of editing.
The ending is silly. It leads you to a cliffhanger and the whole thing is very forced. There’s a villain character (as it were) and the Earl has a secret now to keep you invested in reading the second book. I’m going to keep reading since the book is out, but I would just like to note that the ending felt very rushed.
Overall, I thought the story is just okay, but it’s strength is that it is short enough to read in one sitting and have you wanting to grab the next book to continue reading because the series is on Kindle Unlimited. I probably wouldn’t have picked this up otherwise. It got me out of a terrible reading funk, so I love this book for managing to do that at least.