✩ 3 stars ✩
What to Expect:
➼ Fated Mates
➼ Fae Royalty
➼ One Horse
➼ Fake Engagement
➼ One Bed
➼ He’s Fae/She’s Human
➼ Grumpy x Sunshine
➼ Dual POV
I never really think of myself as a mood reader, but I must have been in the mood for this. That’s the only explanation I can come up with for actually enjoying this even as the plot and the FMC drove me insane. I’ll be sharing some plot details in this review, so continue reading at your own risk…
Our FMC is a human servant living in the palace with two Fae Princes (of course there are two). She has been desperately in love with the younger prince all her life. They played together as children but after his mother died, he forgot she existed and slept his way through the entire kingdom of fae females. Now, that detail alone is enough to shoot a massive hole in this plot. Sure, they live in a castle, but they do in fact live under the same roof, and the author expects the reader to accept that they haven’t spoken in literal years. I think not.
The FMC tries to orchestrate an encounter between herself and the prince by lurking outside of an event that is only for the fae. The crown prince finds her instead but so does another fae male who attacks her because she’s human. The older prince protects her, but since she broke the rules they decide to send her away to her “family.” She is an orphan at this point and both her parents have been dead for a while, but I’m supposed to believe she has all this family she has never met? They teach her self defense and basically torture her to make her strong and then send her back to the castle a few years later. She thinks they do all this because she was attacked but you’d think she’d at least question the torture or the fact that they send her back, but no, not our FMC. She questions nothing. (They are rebels).
The crown prince is of course the responsible one who has been trying to protect his brother from their angry and abusive father since their mother died. He decides that it’s time for his brother to grow up and when his father decides the younger prince must marry the princess of another kingdom, the crown prince is fully on board. This also bothered me, because the older prince mentioned on several occasion that he wanted to wait for his mate, but he acts like his younger brother is a brat for not accepting an arranged marriage. Seems hypocritical.
The FMC and the younger prince finally bump into each other again and start spending time together. There are rules against human and fae relationships and he is meant to marry the fae princess so they try to keep their relationship secret but they are of course discovered. He gets beaten by his dad and then accepts his fate and they break it off after only a kiss. This is where the FMC gets really annoying because she says stuff like “he’s my best friend” when he literally ignored her for years and they don’t even know each other as adults. She keeps pining over him and acting exceedingly delulu.
Then one night the bad fae guy finds her again and attacks her and she manages to kill him. It’s self defense but she’s brought before the king who decides to make an example of her and have her killed. She expects her prince to stand up for her. He says nothing, but of course, the crown prince with the savior complex decides to save her by saying that she is his fiancé. Now this my friends, makes zero sense. There is literally no way this would get her out of trouble with this particular king. He would absolutely want to have a say in who the future ruler of his kingdom married and again, there are rules preventing humans and fae from dating. The author just expects us to believe that the prince is like, I’ll explain later dad and the king just accepts that? Not a chance. Especially after she literally passes out when he makes this pronouncement. Then basically everyone including the king knows it’s a sham but they decide to go through with it for various reasons, some of which make more sense than others.
At this point in the plot, I started to enjoy it a little more. I maybe just accepted that it was a super cheesy book with a silly plot and just went with it. I will say that most of the characters including the side characters were very likable and well developed. Our FMC got less annoying when she stopped pining for the other prince but she still wasn’t my favorite. I especially enjoyed the relationship between the crown prince and his best friend. They had great banter and camaraderie which felt realistic and warm.
If the mood strikes, maybe I’ll even read book two. I do really wish the author would have workshopped the first 1/3 of this book more. I also think she relied heavily on other similar fae books. She really did not do much world building or explain the magic system at all. It kind of felt like she just assumed she didn’t have to because her readers would just make assumptions based on their existing knowledge from other books. This is honestly likely true, but it still felt a little lazy to me. The characters also kind of alluded to other races beyond human and fae without labeling them which felt a little sly to me. It almost felt like the author wanted to leave that door open so she could decide to add them in later if she felt like it.
Anyway, grudgingly giving this a very generous 3 stars. It’s always the reviews I don’t even want to write that end up being stupidly long. 😅