I think it was inevitable that after Ed Brubaker and Matt Fraction's incredible run The Immortal Iron Fist would take a dip. Duane Swierczynski does an admirable job of contuining in their Shou-Lao-sized footsteps, and he isn't the one to blame for the decline in quality at all.
Let's start with the good. The idea of every Iron Fist dying at the age of 33 is an efficiently scary one, and landing on Danny Rand's very own 33th birthday, it immediately pushes the drama into high gear. Danny works best as a character when he's facing the unknown, because it gives him the chance to showcase his immense adaptability, perseverance, and strength, and this might be an even greater and more personal challenge than the Tournament, drawing in his various friends from Heroes For Hire, employees of Rand Inc., and most terrifyingly of all, the kids at his dojo.
Why then does none of it feel like it matters all that much? The story is perfectly fine, building on what came before, and setting up what comes next, with a pretty monstrous villain in the middle, and some imaginative imagery surrounding it. Why does an Iron Fist dying in an old 19th century Texas town come across as so flat, or a hundred warriors trained since childhood to protect a dragon's egg from said monstrous villain feel not as epic as it sounds?
It's the art. Travel Foreman seems to want to imitate David Aja's stellar work on the previous arc, but most of it is blurry, disproportionate, and sometimes downright ugly. None of the punches hit like they should, none of the incredible fantasies that make The Immortal Iron Fist so wonderful take your breath away. I get he wanted to create a sense of otherworldliness, and to a certain extent he succeeded, but it crossed the line between "weird" and "incomprehensible".
Following The Seven Capital Cities of Heaven would always have been an unenviable task, but Swierczynski gave it his best shot. If only the same could be said about Foreman. This is a missed opportunity, and I'm already glad Foreman didn't return for the conclusion of this series. Let's hope the new guy gets it right.