This subset of fantasy books has certain expectations.
You expect a quick set up to the world state. There will be very convenient interactions ending in a quick relationship, or several. All of that is par for the course. What differentiates good from bad is well made characters and an interesting storyline. This has neither. The MC is written as a horndog, goodie two shoes heroic character. If you try to make someone into everyone, you usually get no one. His ability is very OP, and so vague that it comes off as a quick fix for a lack of creativity on the author's part. The story is bland throughout and the little bits that try to fill in a supernatural community are tacked on filler. All the characters need a detailed once over, none of them feel genuine as the flip flop through the book being whatever is needed for the specific scene they are currently in.