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The Revenant's Bargain
Since her abduction as a child, Kacela has learned to be a diplomat and a warrior. She trains with the best and practices politics with the worst. As the royal commander's ward, she returns to her native war camp to strike a deal with her mother's murderers. But revenge is secondary to the ploy for female equality she's bet her life on.
When Kacela becomes the first female in the annual, coming-of-age sacrament in over a thousand years, she's pit against hundreds of trained warriors whose aim is to bathe the sacred mountain in her blood. Her survival of thirty-eight days would ensure females are allowed to train, while her death would blot her efforts from history.
Kacela quickly learns that despite the straightforward terms of her bargain, battles are never so simple. Especially when her growing relationship with a celebrated general slights his upbringing and threatens to unveil kingdom-shattering secrets.
Survive thirty-eight days of bloodshed and create a bastion for equality.
Die and condemn all females to lives of servitude.
When Kacela becomes the first female in the annual, coming-of-age sacrament in over a thousand years, she's pit against hundreds of trained warriors whose aim is to bathe the sacred mountain in her blood. Her survival of thirty-eight days would ensure females are allowed to train, while her death would blot her efforts from history.
Kacela quickly learns that despite the straightforward terms of her bargain, battles are never so simple. Especially when her growing relationship with a celebrated general slights his upbringing and threatens to unveil kingdom-shattering secrets.
Survive thirty-eight days of bloodshed and create a bastion for equality.
Die and condemn all females to lives of servitude.
- GenresFantasyEnemies To Lovers
332 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 14, 2022
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December 3, 2022
3.5
"Bored?"
"Intrigued. To hear an Altun brat beg."
I received an ARC for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The Revenant's Bargin is Molly Adaza's debut novel in The Revenant Series and honestly it is a lot right away but if you can make it through the first couple of chapters you will fall for every single character within this book..
Okay... okay.. Let me explain
Within our novel we follow our MCs:
Kacela:
A ward who has grown up Atlun her entire life. Knowing she hasn't always been on easy ground she makes sure to train and ready herself for a battle that she is sure is coming. When the opportunity arises and she is able to show everything she has trained for she becomes aware of someone that should never be there. Her mate. With her last will she defends them both and allows herself to fall into something she never truly understands. When lines are crossed and bets and bonds are made will Kacela stay true to her ties or show everyone what truly lies beneath.
Easton:
A Forterian honored General is blessed with having his mate to help him on the front lines in the first battle of the Demon war but when things are said and boundaries are made, will the bond between Easton and Kacela grow or will they both suffer the consequences.... Did I mention he's hot... and has wings..
Within this book we are blessed with some amazing world building as well as character building, but we are also left to our own demise to wonder who, what and how things fit and when you get to the end you will be left trying to put the pieces together..
Tropes:
-Fantasy Romance
-Alpha FMC
-Fantasy
-Fated Mates
-Destined Quests
-Fantasy Adventure
Smut Rating:
45%
Tension Rating:
90%
"Bored?"
"Intrigued. To hear an Altun brat beg."
I received an ARC for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The Revenant's Bargin is Molly Adaza's debut novel in The Revenant Series and honestly it is a lot right away but if you can make it through the first couple of chapters you will fall for every single character within this book..
Okay... okay.. Let me explain
Within our novel we follow our MCs:
Kacela:
A ward who has grown up Atlun her entire life. Knowing she hasn't always been on easy ground she makes sure to train and ready herself for a battle that she is sure is coming. When the opportunity arises and she is able to show everything she has trained for she becomes aware of someone that should never be there. Her mate. With her last will she defends them both and allows herself to fall into something she never truly understands. When lines are crossed and bets and bonds are made will Kacela stay true to her ties or show everyone what truly lies beneath.
Easton:
A Forterian honored General is blessed with having his mate to help him on the front lines in the first battle of the Demon war but when things are said and boundaries are made, will the bond between Easton and Kacela grow or will they both suffer the consequences.... Did I mention he's hot... and has wings..
Within this book we are blessed with some amazing world building as well as character building, but we are also left to our own demise to wonder who, what and how things fit and when you get to the end you will be left trying to put the pieces together..
Tropes:
-Fantasy Romance
-Alpha FMC
-Fantasy
-Fated Mates
-Destined Quests
-Fantasy Adventure
Smut Rating:
45%
Tension Rating:
90%
October 29, 2022
I received an e-ARC via BookSirens in return for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions remain my own.
Kacela has always been an outcast. The ward of a general, she walks the line between courtier and warrior, especially as her engagement to a lordling approaches. But upon a visit to a clan of warriors under the king's banner, the mate bond snaps into place… with Easton, one of the barbarians she has been taught to despise. Denying parts of her heritage and her desire, Kacela starts to toe the line she has balanced her entire life until a series of fatal errors finds her in Easton’s tent. But old gods are stirring in the shadows of an ancient mountain, and the fabric between her world and the next has never been thinner. With danger lurking around every corner, Kacela’s only hope of survival may lie with Easton, the person she has sworn to hate.
The Revenant’s Bargain was essentially every New Adult Fantasy novel I’ve ever read. Enemies-to-lovers, forced proximity, fated mates, hurt comfort, kingdoms on the verge of war, and the main character with a hidden destiny were all major plot elements. Each element was delivered rather well, but there was no real substance beyond all the tropes. That being said, the book's ending did something original, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. Was the novel predictable? Yes. Was it still fun to read? Absolutely.
Additionally, the worldbuilding of the novel was eerily similar to A Court of Silver Flames by Sarah J. Maas. Both books had a Blood Rite, a clan of patriarchal winged warriors, a main character with hidden power, a general love interest who struggled with his heritage, forced proximity in the name of training, and a mate bond that was obvious but hated for various reasons. As a writer, I understand that originality is difficult, but blatantly copying another author’s work is a line that shouldn’t be crossed.
As for the characters themselves, Kacela was interesting. Though she was a fighter, she was also politically savvy, knowing when not to fight, and using diplomacy just as adequately as violence. I appreciated her character growth, especially since it didn’t come out of nowhere. I wasn’t as big a fan of Easton, mainly because he was unnecessarily misogynistic at times, but that does come with the territory of fantasy romance, so I wasn’t surprised.
I enjoyed the last 100 pages of The Revenant’s Bargain immensely. With fast action scenes, great dialogue, and the makings of a friend group that will support Kacela independent of Easton, (not to mention a jaw-dropping ending), Molly Adaza sets up a spectacular sequel. If you’re interested in returning to a familiar fantasy with all the best tropes, The Revenant’s Bargain comes out on December 14, 2022!
Kacela has always been an outcast. The ward of a general, she walks the line between courtier and warrior, especially as her engagement to a lordling approaches. But upon a visit to a clan of warriors under the king's banner, the mate bond snaps into place… with Easton, one of the barbarians she has been taught to despise. Denying parts of her heritage and her desire, Kacela starts to toe the line she has balanced her entire life until a series of fatal errors finds her in Easton’s tent. But old gods are stirring in the shadows of an ancient mountain, and the fabric between her world and the next has never been thinner. With danger lurking around every corner, Kacela’s only hope of survival may lie with Easton, the person she has sworn to hate.
The Revenant’s Bargain was essentially every New Adult Fantasy novel I’ve ever read. Enemies-to-lovers, forced proximity, fated mates, hurt comfort, kingdoms on the verge of war, and the main character with a hidden destiny were all major plot elements. Each element was delivered rather well, but there was no real substance beyond all the tropes. That being said, the book's ending did something original, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. Was the novel predictable? Yes. Was it still fun to read? Absolutely.
Additionally, the worldbuilding of the novel was eerily similar to A Court of Silver Flames by Sarah J. Maas. Both books had a Blood Rite, a clan of patriarchal winged warriors, a main character with hidden power, a general love interest who struggled with his heritage, forced proximity in the name of training, and a mate bond that was obvious but hated for various reasons. As a writer, I understand that originality is difficult, but blatantly copying another author’s work is a line that shouldn’t be crossed.
As for the characters themselves, Kacela was interesting. Though she was a fighter, she was also politically savvy, knowing when not to fight, and using diplomacy just as adequately as violence. I appreciated her character growth, especially since it didn’t come out of nowhere. I wasn’t as big a fan of Easton, mainly because he was unnecessarily misogynistic at times, but that does come with the territory of fantasy romance, so I wasn’t surprised.
I enjoyed the last 100 pages of The Revenant’s Bargain immensely. With fast action scenes, great dialogue, and the makings of a friend group that will support Kacela independent of Easton, (not to mention a jaw-dropping ending), Molly Adaza sets up a spectacular sequel. If you’re interested in returning to a familiar fantasy with all the best tropes, The Revenant’s Bargain comes out on December 14, 2022!
November 23, 2022
I was lucky enough to be an ARC reader for this book. I finished it in about 2 days, probably could’ve finished quicker if I had more time to sit and read it.
I wanted to give it 5 stars but it had a few flaws, it was still a great read though.
The magic was pretty unique in comparison to the vast majority of fantasy. I really enjoyed reading a book that had differing magic systems, born with and earned. The MC did have a typical started poor trope, BUT I liked that she wasn’t a clueless human or just completely untrained and useless. I think a flaw for the MC was that she was so naive while also being intelligent, which happens pretty often in fantasy romance. I would’ve liked seeing her question things a bit sooner, but it’s nothing that I would truly complain about it a book. I did like that she didn’t immediately give up everything for her mate and was a bit of a feminist.
Now I may be a bit of an odd one out for this, but as someone with aphantasia, I actually enjoyed some of the excessive details. For many it may be repetitive or seem unnecessary. I personally enjoy when a book may describe characters and their surroundings more than others will.
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There were 2 big downfalls for me that held me back from 5 stars. There was the sacrament which was just a bit too similar of the ACOTAR Illyrian Blood Rite. I could tell that the author tried to make it a bit different by adding in some new elements, but it still came off a little too comparable to eachother. Then there was the “Her dad is a God and she’s a direct descendant with insane power levels” trope. I feel like I’ve read about 15 books this year with that same MC trait and it has grown a little tired for me.
These are really only 2 major plot cons for me though and it didn’t make it an unenjoyable read or anything.
All in all I liked the book and won’t hesitate to pick up the next one when it comes out, I would recommend this book so 4 stars from me
I wanted to give it 5 stars but it had a few flaws, it was still a great read though.
The magic was pretty unique in comparison to the vast majority of fantasy. I really enjoyed reading a book that had differing magic systems, born with and earned. The MC did have a typical started poor trope, BUT I liked that she wasn’t a clueless human or just completely untrained and useless. I think a flaw for the MC was that she was so naive while also being intelligent, which happens pretty often in fantasy romance. I would’ve liked seeing her question things a bit sooner, but it’s nothing that I would truly complain about it a book. I did like that she didn’t immediately give up everything for her mate and was a bit of a feminist.
Now I may be a bit of an odd one out for this, but as someone with aphantasia, I actually enjoyed some of the excessive details. For many it may be repetitive or seem unnecessary. I personally enjoy when a book may describe characters and their surroundings more than others will.
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There were 2 big downfalls for me that held me back from 5 stars. There was the sacrament which was just a bit too similar of the ACOTAR Illyrian Blood Rite. I could tell that the author tried to make it a bit different by adding in some new elements, but it still came off a little too comparable to eachother. Then there was the “Her dad is a God and she’s a direct descendant with insane power levels” trope. I feel like I’ve read about 15 books this year with that same MC trait and it has grown a little tired for me.
These are really only 2 major plot cons for me though and it didn’t make it an unenjoyable read or anything.
All in all I liked the book and won’t hesitate to pick up the next one when it comes out, I would recommend this book so 4 stars from me
July 19, 2023
The beginning of this was a bit boring and slow. I found myself annoyed with the FMC almost constantly. The erring at times didn’t make sense. I feel like the author may have gotten a little carried away with using the old timey language and sentence structure. The Sacrament battle/trial/challenge/rite at the end was incredible and what directly saved this book for me. I almost DNFed but then that started and it got GOOD. The ending was expected. Never trusted them.
December 13, 2022
I was lucky enough to receive an ARC and am leaving this review voluntarily.
I really enjoyed Molly Adaza’s debut novel. It’s fast pace and the character building is phenomenal. I finished it within about 3 days of starting the book as it is incredibly fast paced once you get through the first few chapters.
I really wanted to give it 5 stars but there were some errors and places where I felt revisiting the story would have helped the development and flow. There were times where the world building felt rough and choppy, as well as areas when it felt like the story was bouncing around too much.
Overall though it is a wonderful story and I can’t wait to see where how it continues in the next books. If you’re a fan of Sarah J. Maas I feel you’ll really enjoy reading The Revenant’s Bargain as it’s influenced by her works.
I really enjoyed Molly Adaza’s debut novel. It’s fast pace and the character building is phenomenal. I finished it within about 3 days of starting the book as it is incredibly fast paced once you get through the first few chapters.
I really wanted to give it 5 stars but there were some errors and places where I felt revisiting the story would have helped the development and flow. There were times where the world building felt rough and choppy, as well as areas when it felt like the story was bouncing around too much.
Overall though it is a wonderful story and I can’t wait to see where how it continues in the next books. If you’re a fan of Sarah J. Maas I feel you’ll really enjoy reading The Revenant’s Bargain as it’s influenced by her works.
August 20, 2024
I received this book as a eARC for free in exchange for a fair and honest review.
My honest take is that the book had potential, but Molly needs to spend some more time in revision and world development. The development of the world was choppy, relied to much on characters telling us what is happening when they shouldn’t be, and too much information was missing. There were also countless scenes that felt like they were not fully fleshed out. Plus too many spelling and grammatical errors.
The plot was good. Most of the characters were like able, except the main character. Kacela was just annoying and her development felt stunted. She thought she was the best person but she kept screwing up and not listening to advice. Also, it felt like lazy writing that this one character can completely change a society’s traditions after one battle.
Overall, I had to give it 2 stars because it’s just not finished. The potential is there, but a major rewrite is needed. I’d definitely reread this book if Molly did some revisions on it.
My honest take is that the book had potential, but Molly needs to spend some more time in revision and world development. The development of the world was choppy, relied to much on characters telling us what is happening when they shouldn’t be, and too much information was missing. There were also countless scenes that felt like they were not fully fleshed out. Plus too many spelling and grammatical errors.
The plot was good. Most of the characters were like able, except the main character. Kacela was just annoying and her development felt stunted. She thought she was the best person but she kept screwing up and not listening to advice. Also, it felt like lazy writing that this one character can completely change a society’s traditions after one battle.
Overall, I had to give it 2 stars because it’s just not finished. The potential is there, but a major rewrite is needed. I’d definitely reread this book if Molly did some revisions on it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 5, 2022
One major downside to being selected as an ARC reader is having to wait even longer than everyone else to read a sequel. Honestly, I need the next book NOW. I have so many working theories that need answering, so if you can please hurry that along, that would be great :).
The only thing that held me back from a five star review are the numerous typos / editing mistakes (at least 28) and the writing style isn't what I usually prefer. There's nothing wrong with it per say, but it's just not usually a style I can enjoy - it seems disjointed at times. But honestly, that's fine with me. I loved this story and the characters. It has all of my favorite tropes: enemies to lovers, slow burn, one bed, mating bonds, found family, grumpy warrior man with found orphaned daughter who he trains to be a killer. They're all there.
If you want to avoid reading my very lengthy and in depth review, just know that I recommend this to anyone who loves ACOTAR, fae, high fantasy, and female characters knowing their worth and realizing the strength of their full potential.
Now, a more detailed review. First off, great opening line. "I was five when I killed my mother" is definitely an attention grabber. I definitely see the ACOTAR inspiration throughout and it gives a more in depth view of how shitty the Ilyerians could be but in this series they are the Forterians. I also see how the Mate Bond between drew inspiration from Cassian and Nesta (we love a good slow burn with spiteful banter) and is definitely just the rotten form of Ianthe (the way she truly was). I also liked the direct reference,
I knew that from the beginning, but I still was rooting for them...and then my opinion flopped between about a thousand times before . The following are my notes from the experience:
My thoughts stayed pretty consistent after that...along with one more:
Neira gives me evil Effie Trinket vibes too.
I also definitely called being complete shit bags. I just hope that .
Now, let's address (spoiler for last 25% of book)
You know an author did great when you're literally cursing their name with tears streaming down your face. This book did a great job at filling the void that finishing ACOTAR has left, and now I hope that this series creates its own special void in my soul once it's finished. I fully recommend this to anyone who enjoys a good high fantasy.
The only thing that held me back from a five star review are the numerous typos / editing mistakes (at least 28) and the writing style isn't what I usually prefer. There's nothing wrong with it per say, but it's just not usually a style I can enjoy - it seems disjointed at times. But honestly, that's fine with me. I loved this story and the characters. It has all of my favorite tropes: enemies to lovers, slow burn, one bed, mating bonds, found family, grumpy warrior man with found orphaned daughter who he trains to be a killer. They're all there.
If you want to avoid reading my very lengthy and in depth review, just know that I recommend this to anyone who loves ACOTAR, fae, high fantasy, and female characters knowing their worth and realizing the strength of their full potential.
Now, a more detailed review. First off, great opening line. "I was five when I killed my mother" is definitely an attention grabber. I definitely see the ACOTAR inspiration throughout and it gives a more in depth view of how shitty the Ilyerians could be but in this series they are the Forterians. I also see how the Mate Bond between drew inspiration from Cassian and Nesta (we love a good slow burn with spiteful banter) and is definitely just the rotten form of Ianthe (the way she truly was). I also liked the direct reference,
I knew that from the beginning, but I still was rooting for them...and then my opinion flopped between about a thousand times before . The following are my notes from the experience:
My thoughts stayed pretty consistent after that...along with one more:
Neira gives me evil Effie Trinket vibes too.
I also definitely called being complete shit bags. I just hope that .
Now, let's address (spoiler for last 25% of book)
You know an author did great when you're literally cursing their name with tears streaming down your face. This book did a great job at filling the void that finishing ACOTAR has left, and now I hope that this series creates its own special void in my soul once it's finished. I fully recommend this to anyone who enjoys a good high fantasy.
October 26, 2022
I'm very excited to announce that I have been lucky enough to be chosen to receive an arc from author Molly Adaza. She put up a call on tiktok for readers and I was so lucky to be one of them who was chosen to be one of the first to read The Revenant's Bargain. The hardcover of this book will be published on December 7th. The eBook and paperback would be available on December 14th.
"Kacela," he whispered, voice as weak as I felt. "I do not run from battles. I do not surrender. My soul has allied with yours. I will not lose you."
CONTENT WARNINGS:
Physical Violence, Mention of abortion via tonic
RATING: 4/5
SPICE LEVEL: 2/5
On tiktok, the author said this book is "inspired by the acotar Illyrian Blood Rite." I do get that vibe but if you're looking for characters to match the acotar counterparts, you would be completely wrong. These characters all stand on their own. While you may feel that Amaury has some Cassian in his color pallet of clothing, that's about as close as it gets. Griffin is a powerful, bordering on terrifying king. The Sacrament and the Blessing Ceremony are both so interesting. The Sacrament is where we get those acotar vibes but the mountain has four different terrains: swamp, desert, jungle, and rolling hills. It also lasts for 38 days. The Blessing Ceremony is where those who have survived the Sacrament receive their blessings which The Oracle carves into their skin. They all receive wings but get other marks carved into them for their individual blessings. Brains, Stamina, Muscles, Claws, and Shapeshifters are the other blessings. I really enjoyed all of this.
I really enjoyed the different characters in the book. They were all individuals and I didn't feel like any of them were copied directly from any other media. I loved the push and pull of the mating bond. I love a good enemies to lovers story. Though I'm not sure if we're at the lovers part just yet but I'm hoping it goes there. Though Kaeda may remind you of Nesta, Poppy, or Auren, she is very much her own character with her own journey that I look forward to reading about.
For the things I didn't like, I felt like the camp scene was a little too close to a similar scene in acotar. But it wasn't too much that I felt like it took me out of the story. I am a little bit confused on some of the details that happened in the story but I'm sure things will be cleared up in the next book.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book. It kept my attention and I look forward to picking it up on release day. I will following the series and the author. If you like fated mates, a female main character coming into her own, and enemies to lovers, this is the book for you.
"Kacela," he whispered, voice as weak as I felt. "I do not run from battles. I do not surrender. My soul has allied with yours. I will not lose you."
CONTENT WARNINGS:
Physical Violence, Mention of abortion via tonic
RATING: 4/5
SPICE LEVEL: 2/5
On tiktok, the author said this book is "inspired by the acotar Illyrian Blood Rite." I do get that vibe but if you're looking for characters to match the acotar counterparts, you would be completely wrong. These characters all stand on their own. While you may feel that Amaury has some Cassian in his color pallet of clothing, that's about as close as it gets. Griffin is a powerful, bordering on terrifying king. The Sacrament and the Blessing Ceremony are both so interesting. The Sacrament is where we get those acotar vibes but the mountain has four different terrains: swamp, desert, jungle, and rolling hills. It also lasts for 38 days. The Blessing Ceremony is where those who have survived the Sacrament receive their blessings which The Oracle carves into their skin. They all receive wings but get other marks carved into them for their individual blessings. Brains, Stamina, Muscles, Claws, and Shapeshifters are the other blessings. I really enjoyed all of this.
I really enjoyed the different characters in the book. They were all individuals and I didn't feel like any of them were copied directly from any other media. I loved the push and pull of the mating bond. I love a good enemies to lovers story. Though I'm not sure if we're at the lovers part just yet but I'm hoping it goes there. Though Kaeda may remind you of Nesta, Poppy, or Auren, she is very much her own character with her own journey that I look forward to reading about.
For the things I didn't like, I felt like the camp scene was a little too close to a similar scene in acotar. But it wasn't too much that I felt like it took me out of the story. I am a little bit confused on some of the details that happened in the story but I'm sure things will be cleared up in the next book.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book. It kept my attention and I look forward to picking it up on release day. I will following the series and the author. If you like fated mates, a female main character coming into her own, and enemies to lovers, this is the book for you.
October 29, 2022
Slightly disappointed. I originally thought this book would feel more original but a lot of it seemed to be full of Sarah J Maas inspiration. None of it felt original to me. I would have loved to see the author take the book in further and go less towards Sarah J Maas. I knew going in that this was going to have a fight for survival like acotar did but I was expecting more. It just felt too similar and I needed something to break it apart from it. The fight for survival and wanting the wing clans of fae to let their women train reminded me so much of A Court of Silver Flames.
I did enjoy the characters but they felt a little flat at times. I know this is the author's debut novel so I'm sure that will improve in future books.
I loved the fire between the two characters but I really would like to see more of them getting to know each other and see them fall for each other. I felt like we were told stuff more than seeing it.
There were so many characters by the time we got to the end especially with the added clans. It got a little confusing.
While the plot kept me interested I don't see why some things were added. There were a few scenes I had to reread to understand what was going on.
For a debut book for an indie author I'm impressed but would like to see more work put into character development and have a more original plot.
I did enjoy the characters but they felt a little flat at times. I know this is the author's debut novel so I'm sure that will improve in future books.
I loved the fire between the two characters but I really would like to see more of them getting to know each other and see them fall for each other. I felt like we were told stuff more than seeing it.
There were so many characters by the time we got to the end especially with the added clans. It got a little confusing.
While the plot kept me interested I don't see why some things were added. There were a few scenes I had to reread to understand what was going on.
For a debut book for an indie author I'm impressed but would like to see more work put into character development and have a more original plot.
December 2, 2022
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
While this book was intriguing and very fast paced, at times it felt like we were jumping around and important pieces of the story weren't there. While I was fascinated by the story and plot, I felt like different pieces of the book could have been longer, especially the final portion of the book. There last portion felt like the most important part of the story and I felt like as a reader we got cheated out of reading about it. Additionally, I did originally struggle to get into the book as the first few chapters didn't particularly hook my attention, but once it did, there was no stopping me from finishing. While I did have my issues with the way the story felt like it jumped around, that is not to say that I didn't love the story and what I did get still. Adaza created many compelling characters, leaving me wanting more information about all of them, and I am looking forward to the rest of the series and exploring more within this world.
While this book was intriguing and very fast paced, at times it felt like we were jumping around and important pieces of the story weren't there. While I was fascinated by the story and plot, I felt like different pieces of the book could have been longer, especially the final portion of the book. There last portion felt like the most important part of the story and I felt like as a reader we got cheated out of reading about it. Additionally, I did originally struggle to get into the book as the first few chapters didn't particularly hook my attention, but once it did, there was no stopping me from finishing. While I did have my issues with the way the story felt like it jumped around, that is not to say that I didn't love the story and what I did get still. Adaza created many compelling characters, leaving me wanting more information about all of them, and I am looking forward to the rest of the series and exploring more within this world.
November 11, 2022
3.5⭐️ I received an e-ARC via BookSirens in exchange for an honest review. Honored to have a chance to read Molly Adaza’s debut novel! If you enjoyed reading about the Blood Rite OR the inequality of women in the Illyrian camps in ACOSF, this book is for you! Kacela’s journey to become a Forterian warrior is intertwined with notes of unexpected love, loss, and the power of having the right people in your corner at the right time. There is so much opportunity for the sequel!
November 30, 2022
I got an ARC read of this book. I think it was an absolutely amazing book, I couldn't put it down (and couldn't stop thinking about it when I had to). The main character is amazing and the story has great twists and turns to keep you guessing.
December 14, 2022
I was lucky enough to receive an ARC of this book. I can’t lie - I did read some of the reviews before I began. While I do see a lot of merit in the comparisons to ACOTAR, overall I thought, for the most part, the author did a good job differentiating her world from that of SJM’s. For me, the book started a bit slowly, but as I got into it, I ended up reading the last 75% of the book in one sitting. All in all, I thought this book was super captivating and would definitely recommend to any fantasy lovers. I’ll anxiously await the second book!
November 5, 2022
While a good enough book that I will continue reading the rest of the series, it was not a favorite. As others have mentioned, so many similarities to ACOSF that there were times I felt I was reading it. The world building was hard to follow at time, making it hard to fully immerse yourself in the world, like so many fantasy readers like to. I was definitely left with a lot of confusion, which hopefully gets cleared up in the next book, but the ending was a little bit of different turn than most, so I give credit to that. Overall, an easy, quick read, if you love fantasy worlds and fae, I would recommend. It is a debut novel, and feels very much like one.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
July 10, 2024
My emotions have been on a rollercoaster ride of my life
I swear....my emotions ran rampant with this book. I was tortured so much, not sure of who she'd fall for, where she'd end up..... And now I finished on a cliffhanger. I need chocolate and book 2.
I swear....my emotions ran rampant with this book. I was tortured so much, not sure of who she'd fall for, where she'd end up..... And now I finished on a cliffhanger. I need chocolate and book 2.
December 14, 2022
A book that pitches itself as being inspired by A Court of Silver Flames and actually delivers on that promise? Amazing. We love to see it.
If you enjoy fantasy romance, this is a fun one to pick up. While I think it takes it a little while in the beginning to find it’s footing, the second half was so good. I couldn’t put it down. For a debut book, this was super impressive and I wasn’t wait for the second one!
If you enjoy fantasy romance, this is a fun one to pick up. While I think it takes it a little while in the beginning to find it’s footing, the second half was so good. I couldn’t put it down. For a debut book, this was super impressive and I wasn’t wait for the second one!
March 17, 2023
I wanted to love this book.
I love the concept. I love the characters. I love the genre.
However, it often felt like I had missed big points of exposition. It made it hard to truly become invested in the characters and their journey. More description of the world, traditions and relationships were necessary.
Some books intentionally leave out some of the description to help with surprise plot points etc. this left out so much that I just didn’t get it.
Straight into the action without description of where you were fighting, so I never felt like I was on solid footing.
I unfortunately wasn’t able to finish this book. There were so many holes. I wanted to more than anything but I was tired of wading through the confusion.
I love the concept. I love the characters. I love the genre.
However, it often felt like I had missed big points of exposition. It made it hard to truly become invested in the characters and their journey. More description of the world, traditions and relationships were necessary.
Some books intentionally leave out some of the description to help with surprise plot points etc. this left out so much that I just didn’t get it.
Straight into the action without description of where you were fighting, so I never felt like I was on solid footing.
I unfortunately wasn’t able to finish this book. There were so many holes. I wanted to more than anything but I was tired of wading through the confusion.
June 14, 2023
I received an e-ARC in exchange for an honest review.
My thoughts are a little jumbled on this one I'll be honest. But here's a very spoiler-free review. There are quite a few things I enjoyed about this book and her writing style is absolutely stunning to read. You really do feel everything she's telling you on the pages.
I thank you for your sweet time.
My thoughts are a little jumbled on this one I'll be honest. But here's a very spoiler-free review. There are quite a few things I enjoyed about this book and her writing style is absolutely stunning to read. You really do feel everything she's telling you on the pages.
I thank you for your sweet time.
December 11, 2022
Straight up warning, this book ends on a cliffhanger. Standard fair for a series of novels but for anyone looking for a book with any conclusion from a single read, this is not it. That’s not particularly bad news though, as this is an enjoyable read for fans of fantasy.
Our heroine, Kacela, was born an outcast but raised as something akin to nobility. She doesn’t fancy court life and would prefer to spend her time training to fight for her country and king. All this is complicated when a mating bond snaps into place with a fellow named Easton, who happens to be from the very same place she was escaped from as a child.
There are a bunch of tropes that I’ve noticed becoming standard in fantasy novels (particularly ones taken from Sarah J. Maas), such as some kind of soulmate ‘bond’, a woman showing her male colleagues that she’s just as good or perhaps even better than them, unknown lineage, the spunky outcast, etc. Plus the age old “chosen one” cliché (but well, we do need an interesting main character). It’s woven together nicely though, enough so that I’d definitely want to read the sequel. The month(s) spend on the mountain as a right of warrior passage, bonding, magical fae, etc feel extremely familiar though and I loathe to voice my criticism in having felt like I’ve read this all before because the author weaves words well. There are many parts where I feel more explanation on events could have been expanded upon but I suspect some details have been lost in editing rather than by choice by the author since a lot of info is crammed into one novel, especially towards the end.
The character and world building is good, with more than enough tidbits thrown in that I’d like to know more. I feel like this one book could even span two with info expanded upon but I’m not an author nor editor, but a mere reader who has no knowledge of these things. A solid debut novel overall.
I received this as an ARC from BookSirens and am leaving this review voluntarily. All opinions are unbiased and my own.
Our heroine, Kacela, was born an outcast but raised as something akin to nobility. She doesn’t fancy court life and would prefer to spend her time training to fight for her country and king. All this is complicated when a mating bond snaps into place with a fellow named Easton, who happens to be from the very same place she was escaped from as a child.
There are a bunch of tropes that I’ve noticed becoming standard in fantasy novels (particularly ones taken from Sarah J. Maas), such as some kind of soulmate ‘bond’, a woman showing her male colleagues that she’s just as good or perhaps even better than them, unknown lineage, the spunky outcast, etc. Plus the age old “chosen one” cliché (but well, we do need an interesting main character). It’s woven together nicely though, enough so that I’d definitely want to read the sequel. The month(s) spend on the mountain as a right of warrior passage, bonding, magical fae, etc feel extremely familiar though and I loathe to voice my criticism in having felt like I’ve read this all before because the author weaves words well. There are many parts where I feel more explanation on events could have been expanded upon but I suspect some details have been lost in editing rather than by choice by the author since a lot of info is crammed into one novel, especially towards the end.
The character and world building is good, with more than enough tidbits thrown in that I’d like to know more. I feel like this one book could even span two with info expanded upon but I’m not an author nor editor, but a mere reader who has no knowledge of these things. A solid debut novel overall.
I received this as an ARC from BookSirens and am leaving this review voluntarily. All opinions are unbiased and my own.
December 13, 2022
I received this book for free in return for an honest review.
The Revenant's Bargain written by Molly Adaza, is the first book of the Revenant Series and follows the story of Kacela. Kacela at a young age became the ward of a general and for the majority of her life began to tiptoe the line between diplomat and warrior, learning how to fight with those who are the best and learning politics from those who know how to play the game. In this first book we see Kacela return to the place and clan where her mother was murdered. In this clan is where her mate bond snaps into place with general Easton part of the same clan she has been taught to hate. Danger and war lurk behind every corner and Kacela begins to question everything she has been taught and her survival may lie in the hands of the mate she is supposed to hate.
The Revenant's Bargain is the start of any adult romance fantasy novel, the tropes exist within the book, fated mates, enemies-to-lovers, and forced proximity. The elements were easy to see and follow however the initial world building seemed to lack the complexity of a fantasy world and rushed forward in order to get to Kacela to meet her mate. The beginning left me with questions about the work that we w ere in and I wished there had been more time spent detailing the world, it felt rushed in order to get to certain parts within the story. It felt like the meat of the story was missing the substance to really make this book be something unique and special.
This isn't to say that the book had a poor concept, that is quite incorrect. In the last 100 pages of the book I was sucked into the story, sucked into new questions that needed more answers, worrying for Kacela. The start of what can be assumed to be a possible friend group for Kacela outside of Easton, and hopefully we see more of Kacela's independence in the next book. Adaza left a great ending for more to be written and I hope to see more questions being answered from what she left and I hope to learn more of the world she has created.
The Revenant's Bargain written by Molly Adaza, is the first book of the Revenant Series and follows the story of Kacela. Kacela at a young age became the ward of a general and for the majority of her life began to tiptoe the line between diplomat and warrior, learning how to fight with those who are the best and learning politics from those who know how to play the game. In this first book we see Kacela return to the place and clan where her mother was murdered. In this clan is where her mate bond snaps into place with general Easton part of the same clan she has been taught to hate. Danger and war lurk behind every corner and Kacela begins to question everything she has been taught and her survival may lie in the hands of the mate she is supposed to hate.
The Revenant's Bargain is the start of any adult romance fantasy novel, the tropes exist within the book, fated mates, enemies-to-lovers, and forced proximity. The elements were easy to see and follow however the initial world building seemed to lack the complexity of a fantasy world and rushed forward in order to get to Kacela to meet her mate. The beginning left me with questions about the work that we w ere in and I wished there had been more time spent detailing the world, it felt rushed in order to get to certain parts within the story. It felt like the meat of the story was missing the substance to really make this book be something unique and special.
This isn't to say that the book had a poor concept, that is quite incorrect. In the last 100 pages of the book I was sucked into the story, sucked into new questions that needed more answers, worrying for Kacela. The start of what can be assumed to be a possible friend group for Kacela outside of Easton, and hopefully we see more of Kacela's independence in the next book. Adaza left a great ending for more to be written and I hope to see more questions being answered from what she left and I hope to learn more of the world she has created.
November 10, 2022
I very much enjoyed reading the book, the concept was great and the plot was well thought out. There were some parts of the book where I was "on the edge of my seat" but there were others where the writing seemed a little choppy. By this I mean the scenes were fantastic and I loved the story points in them but I think the scenes would have been even better if it jumped around less. One thing that brought me out of the book a few times was the random mood swings of characters, I think context regarding characters emotions and actions would go a long way. This could be done with additional scenes or more explanation/development of current scenes. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED the royal politics and scheming in the book, it was beautifully done. The main character is amazing and I really enjoyed seeing her development throughout the story. I wish we were given more emotional insight regarding her decisions and feelings though, I think that it would help the reader connect with her more. The romance portion of the book was good but with more development it would be great. The "almost" moments were almost too much with how often they happened and it felt very confusing at times because of the lack of emotional context. The romance portion is something that I think is a great concept and its so close to being great, I think it would be amazing if this part of the story had a more steady development over the course of the book. Overall I really enjoyed the book and I think it has so much potential. With a little more development of the scenes and more context behind the different characters emotions it would definitely be a 5 star read.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
November 16, 2022
So excited that I received an ARC of this book! Thanks TikTok for introducing me to the lovely author!
So right off the bat, I want to say that this book sucked me in. I stayed awake until 3 am two nights in a row because I NEEDED to finish reading it.
Despite that, I somehow don’t have super strong feelings about the main character. Sure, she was pretty badass, but I didn’t have an instant love for her. I think maybe I wanted her to ask more questions? I don’t want to put any spoilers in this review, but there were multiple occasions where I was yelling “that’s it?! You’re not going to give me any elaboration? You’re not going to ask him *insert the seventeen questions I have*?” There were also times when I felt the transitions were a bit abrupt, like part of the book had been cut off or edited too heavily.
I knew this book was heavily influenced by A Court of Silver Flames, and I definitely see the connection. This book has many of the same themes and patterns. Did she basically re-write the Blood Rite? Yes. Am I mad about it? Eh, I don’t think I am! I wouldn’t be able to say this is the most original book I’d ever read, but that isn’t a deal breaker for me. I enjoyed seeing some of my favorite tropes (hellooo, one bed/forced proximity and fated mates!!), though I didn’t get all the spice I was hoping for when I heard it had the same vibes as ACOSF. I’m also hoping to get some female friendship in the next book! I’d love to see more than one cool female character.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read and I look forward to reading the sequel. The author set us up with a cliffhanger that left me anxious about what was to come. I have confidence that the next one will be even better!
So right off the bat, I want to say that this book sucked me in. I stayed awake until 3 am two nights in a row because I NEEDED to finish reading it.
Despite that, I somehow don’t have super strong feelings about the main character. Sure, she was pretty badass, but I didn’t have an instant love for her. I think maybe I wanted her to ask more questions? I don’t want to put any spoilers in this review, but there were multiple occasions where I was yelling “that’s it?! You’re not going to give me any elaboration? You’re not going to ask him *insert the seventeen questions I have*?” There were also times when I felt the transitions were a bit abrupt, like part of the book had been cut off or edited too heavily.
I knew this book was heavily influenced by A Court of Silver Flames, and I definitely see the connection. This book has many of the same themes and patterns. Did she basically re-write the Blood Rite? Yes. Am I mad about it? Eh, I don’t think I am! I wouldn’t be able to say this is the most original book I’d ever read, but that isn’t a deal breaker for me. I enjoyed seeing some of my favorite tropes (hellooo, one bed/forced proximity and fated mates!!), though I didn’t get all the spice I was hoping for when I heard it had the same vibes as ACOSF. I’m also hoping to get some female friendship in the next book! I’d love to see more than one cool female character.
Overall, it was an enjoyable read and I look forward to reading the sequel. The author set us up with a cliffhanger that left me anxious about what was to come. I have confidence that the next one will be even better!
November 22, 2022
I was given a free eARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
3.5*
There was a lot about this book that had potential, but ultimately failed in execution. This review will probably read as a bit of a ramble so I apologize in advance. Also, I have never read ACOTAR, so I can't speak as to the similarities many other reviews have mentioned.
The book was full of typos and grammatical errors, which I could look past if this was a self published book, but it isn't. The characters had decent traits, but there was little actual character development. For first person narration I never felt like I had a clue what was going on in Kacy's mind. I constantly found myself re-reading pages because there were so many skips in location and plot without explanation and I was always very confused. I don't think there was enough world building in the very beginning to make the plot make sense. If the world and factions and the types of magic had been more properly explained the rest of the book might have been more coherent. The last 150 pages or so were much better than the beginning, but still with flaws. The Sacrament was 38 days and barely took up much of the book. The author writes beautiful intricate sentences that, on their own are just wonderful. But all of them together on the page are too much fluff and not enough context and coherence. As much as I wanted this to be a great debut book for Molly, I really feel like it needs another few passes with editors. I will probably read any future books because I can certainly see the possibilities with this series, and I'm hoping the publishers work on filling in the detail of transitions and surroundings better.
3.5*
There was a lot about this book that had potential, but ultimately failed in execution. This review will probably read as a bit of a ramble so I apologize in advance. Also, I have never read ACOTAR, so I can't speak as to the similarities many other reviews have mentioned.
The book was full of typos and grammatical errors, which I could look past if this was a self published book, but it isn't. The characters had decent traits, but there was little actual character development. For first person narration I never felt like I had a clue what was going on in Kacy's mind. I constantly found myself re-reading pages because there were so many skips in location and plot without explanation and I was always very confused. I don't think there was enough world building in the very beginning to make the plot make sense. If the world and factions and the types of magic had been more properly explained the rest of the book might have been more coherent. The last 150 pages or so were much better than the beginning, but still with flaws. The Sacrament was 38 days and barely took up much of the book. The author writes beautiful intricate sentences that, on their own are just wonderful. But all of them together on the page are too much fluff and not enough context and coherence. As much as I wanted this to be a great debut book for Molly, I really feel like it needs another few passes with editors. I will probably read any future books because I can certainly see the possibilities with this series, and I'm hoping the publishers work on filling in the detail of transitions and surroundings better.
December 4, 2022
I received an e-ARC via BookSirens in return for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions remain my own.
A solid 3/5 from me. Good read with room to grow.
As a lover of high fantasy and fae stories I was very excited to get into this book and learn more about the universe.
Kacela (Kacy) was an interesting albeit frustrating FMC. Her internal struggle against courtly expectations only to fall right into them and her refusal to accept her bond definitely pushed the story along and I came to appreciate her growth when it came to the Sacrament.
An area I struggled with as a reader was the pacing at the start and early middle. The weeks of Kacy being unconscious or time just passing all of a sudden took me out of the flow, if I can say that. The last third of the book was tops though! I found that to be well fleshed out. That ending actually hooked me in a way that I will be reaching for the second book when it becomes available.
The magic system and class system established in the world Adaza created were interesting and I had hoped for more courtly intrigue at the start. Also, what is it with writers and tattoos in books recently?! I'm not complaining just wondering, haha.
It was hugely apparent (to me) that Neira was a gotdamn snake. Griffin as a character came off a little flat to me. He did not come off as royal as Nalin did for example. There was some arrogance but didn't quite hit. His use of Kacy's powers to close the gaps was (maybe is) a great tether that could be used in the rest of the series.
Easton was a vibe and I would like one of him for myself thanks.
Overall, I got some big SJM and JLA vibes. I was hoping for more original ideas than the way magic was either inherited or earned. I think with some edits and revisions this could be a great book.
A solid 3/5 from me. Good read with room to grow.
As a lover of high fantasy and fae stories I was very excited to get into this book and learn more about the universe.
Kacela (Kacy) was an interesting albeit frustrating FMC. Her internal struggle against courtly expectations only to fall right into them and her refusal to accept her bond definitely pushed the story along and I came to appreciate her growth when it came to the Sacrament.
An area I struggled with as a reader was the pacing at the start and early middle. The weeks of Kacy being unconscious or time just passing all of a sudden took me out of the flow, if I can say that. The last third of the book was tops though! I found that to be well fleshed out. That ending actually hooked me in a way that I will be reaching for the second book when it becomes available.
The magic system and class system established in the world Adaza created were interesting and I had hoped for more courtly intrigue at the start. Also, what is it with writers and tattoos in books recently?! I'm not complaining just wondering, haha.
It was hugely apparent (to me) that Neira was a gotdamn snake. Griffin as a character came off a little flat to me. He did not come off as royal as Nalin did for example. There was some arrogance but didn't quite hit. His use of Kacy's powers to close the gaps was (maybe is) a great tether that could be used in the rest of the series.
Easton was a vibe and I would like one of him for myself thanks.
Overall, I got some big SJM and JLA vibes. I was hoping for more original ideas than the way magic was either inherited or earned. I think with some edits and revisions this could be a great book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 6, 2022
I received an e-ARC for free in exchange for a voluntary review.
Overall I really enjoyed the storyline of the book and look forward to where she takes it as the series continues. The characters were all enjoyable to read and as the book progressed, you could start to see some development that I am excited to see how Molly continues in further books. I will say there were many times I had to stop and reread pages because I would lose focus during certain parts of the book. Locations within the story also bounced around frequently and I found myself getting some whiplash trying to keep up at times. At times it seemed like she was writing these amazing quotes and trying to throw them all in the book without context. There were also lots of grammar/spelling issues which normally wouldn’t bother me but it started to distract from the actual story.
Molly’s writing is similar to SJM and JLA, but I feel like her world building was harder to follow at times and left me with lots of questions about origins, backgrounds, etc. I also wish there was more development with the romance portion of the novel. I just felt like I didn’t get enough of that portion of the story yet, ya know?
Overall I think this debut novel is quite interesting and I do plan to read them all as she releases them and would love to continue reading her ARC’s. Kacy’s story will draw you in and leave you wanting more. If you’re into the popular fantasy tropes right now (fated mates, kingdoms in peril, strong female leads, etc) then you will enjoy this book.
Overall I really enjoyed the storyline of the book and look forward to where she takes it as the series continues. The characters were all enjoyable to read and as the book progressed, you could start to see some development that I am excited to see how Molly continues in further books. I will say there were many times I had to stop and reread pages because I would lose focus during certain parts of the book. Locations within the story also bounced around frequently and I found myself getting some whiplash trying to keep up at times. At times it seemed like she was writing these amazing quotes and trying to throw them all in the book without context. There were also lots of grammar/spelling issues which normally wouldn’t bother me but it started to distract from the actual story.
Molly’s writing is similar to SJM and JLA, but I feel like her world building was harder to follow at times and left me with lots of questions about origins, backgrounds, etc. I also wish there was more development with the romance portion of the novel. I just felt like I didn’t get enough of that portion of the story yet, ya know?
Overall I think this debut novel is quite interesting and I do plan to read them all as she releases them and would love to continue reading her ARC’s. Kacy’s story will draw you in and leave you wanting more. If you’re into the popular fantasy tropes right now (fated mates, kingdoms in peril, strong female leads, etc) then you will enjoy this book.
November 29, 2022
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Overall, I enjoyed the story and the writing. I thought the main character Kacela was an interesting, multifaceted character and I appreciated that she was a mix of brains and brawn. I was surprised by where the story went and will want to continue reading the series.
I did have some issues with the story. The heavy handed tropes combined with the heavy influence of Sarah J Mass keep the story generally predictable. I love my female protagonist, enemies-to-lovers, magic girl fantasies so I’m not upset, but this did feel reminiscent of a Kindle Unlimited story. Particularly with some of the plot holes and character inconsistencies in the story. Finally, the story wasn’t fully what I expected. The book description felt to me that the story would be more Hunger Games with a large portion of the book focused on the Sacrament-a blood filled coming-of-age test for warriors. This part of the story was my favorite but came much later in the book than expected. So I spent much of the book waiting for the story element that drew me to want to read it in the first place.
All-in-all, I thought the story had some good elements and that the author has potential. I think some more edits would make the story stronger but the book did enough to keep me interested and I want to see how Molly grows as an author. Congratulations on your debut novel!
Overall, I enjoyed the story and the writing. I thought the main character Kacela was an interesting, multifaceted character and I appreciated that she was a mix of brains and brawn. I was surprised by where the story went and will want to continue reading the series.
I did have some issues with the story. The heavy handed tropes combined with the heavy influence of Sarah J Mass keep the story generally predictable. I love my female protagonist, enemies-to-lovers, magic girl fantasies so I’m not upset, but this did feel reminiscent of a Kindle Unlimited story. Particularly with some of the plot holes and character inconsistencies in the story. Finally, the story wasn’t fully what I expected. The book description felt to me that the story would be more Hunger Games with a large portion of the book focused on the Sacrament-a blood filled coming-of-age test for warriors. This part of the story was my favorite but came much later in the book than expected. So I spent much of the book waiting for the story element that drew me to want to read it in the first place.
All-in-all, I thought the story had some good elements and that the author has potential. I think some more edits would make the story stronger but the book did enough to keep me interested and I want to see how Molly grows as an author. Congratulations on your debut novel!
December 13, 2022
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The Revenant's Bargain was, at least to me, filled with tropes that I have seen over and over again in fantasy novels that I have read in the last few years, particularly the ACOTAR series. I can make several direct correlations to the series: the Sacrament to the Blood Rite, the Foretarians to the Illyrians, engaged to one, mated to another... I could go on. There were new elements to the story that I had never read about before, and those make me interested to continue the series.
That isn't to say I didn't enjoy the book, it was interesting, especially the last third of the book. I feel like the beginning of the book was very rushed and I got dunked in to a world that I knew nothing about with little to no explanation, and I feel the book would have been better to me if there was more world building at the beginning. Another thing that would have made me enjoy it more is having less description of the color of the characters eyes or the way they smell and more on the things that are happening, especially early on in the book.
As I received an ARC, I believe any typos or misused words will be corrected before printing, I found several, and I am unsure about how I feel about the writing stylistically, but as this is the Author's debut novel, it may just be a "learning my style" thing. I am excited to see this series continue, and hope the author continues the series.
The Revenant's Bargain was, at least to me, filled with tropes that I have seen over and over again in fantasy novels that I have read in the last few years, particularly the ACOTAR series. I can make several direct correlations to the series: the Sacrament to the Blood Rite, the Foretarians to the Illyrians, engaged to one, mated to another... I could go on. There were new elements to the story that I had never read about before, and those make me interested to continue the series.
That isn't to say I didn't enjoy the book, it was interesting, especially the last third of the book. I feel like the beginning of the book was very rushed and I got dunked in to a world that I knew nothing about with little to no explanation, and I feel the book would have been better to me if there was more world building at the beginning. Another thing that would have made me enjoy it more is having less description of the color of the characters eyes or the way they smell and more on the things that are happening, especially early on in the book.
As I received an ARC, I believe any typos or misused words will be corrected before printing, I found several, and I am unsure about how I feel about the writing stylistically, but as this is the Author's debut novel, it may just be a "learning my style" thing. I am excited to see this series continue, and hope the author continues the series.
November 1, 2022
This book was overall decent. I was lucky enough to be chosen to read the arc of this book in return for an honest review which is what this will be. I was excited since the author got the inspiration for this book from the Blood Rite in ACOTAR. Though you can see the inspiration throughout the book this story and world is it’s own. The world building for the Sacrament is great and the magic system she created for the Forterians is such a good idea!
The reasons behind the 3 stars and not any more than that are more because it was hard to read it at first. The scene shifts were abrupt and I had to reread paragraphs to understand that the settings changed. It also seemed that at first the author wasn’t sure what she wanted her characters’ personalities to be. There was a lot of back and forth in my opinion. Once I hit about half way to 2/3s everything started being more solid and I got way more into the book. There are also parts where it was really predictable as the author used a bunch of tropes that are popular right now such as fated mates, forced proximity, kingdom in trouble and she’s the one to save it, etc.
Would I recommend this book? Maybe if someone was looking for something kind of like ACOTAR. Would I reread it? Probably not. Would I read the next one? Yes I would. I must know what happens after that cliff hanger!
The reasons behind the 3 stars and not any more than that are more because it was hard to read it at first. The scene shifts were abrupt and I had to reread paragraphs to understand that the settings changed. It also seemed that at first the author wasn’t sure what she wanted her characters’ personalities to be. There was a lot of back and forth in my opinion. Once I hit about half way to 2/3s everything started being more solid and I got way more into the book. There are also parts where it was really predictable as the author used a bunch of tropes that are popular right now such as fated mates, forced proximity, kingdom in trouble and she’s the one to save it, etc.
Would I recommend this book? Maybe if someone was looking for something kind of like ACOTAR. Would I reread it? Probably not. Would I read the next one? Yes I would. I must know what happens after that cliff hanger!
November 7, 2022
I received an e-ARC version via BookSirens for an honest review. I’ll admit, I don’t ever write reviews because for the most part I tend to enjoy almost any story so every review would be the same. But I will do my best.
I really enjoyed Molly Adaza’s debut novel. The plot was intriguing, very reminiscent of ACOSAF (winged-clan with a blood rite involving a sacred mountain) and FBAA (fated mates across rival races), but even with the similarities, I think Molly still created a unique story that fit within the world she created.
It is fast paced and keeps you interested, but at times I did have to reread portions that I found the writing to be unclear. Part of what was unclear for me was the mystery around Altun magic. I would have liked a bit more explanation as to the ways magic works in this world. Kacy would described the way the magic felt or looked but the only deeper explanation we got about something regarding the magic was the definition of “skipping”.
I also think there could have been deeper character development for most of the characters. I didn’t feel like there was very much to the personalities of the characters outside of their main motivation in the book.
Overall, I definitely recommend The Revenant’s Bargain for anyone who is a fan of new adult fantasy novels. It will be released December 14, 2022!
I really enjoyed Molly Adaza’s debut novel. The plot was intriguing, very reminiscent of ACOSAF (winged-clan with a blood rite involving a sacred mountain) and FBAA (fated mates across rival races), but even with the similarities, I think Molly still created a unique story that fit within the world she created.
It is fast paced and keeps you interested, but at times I did have to reread portions that I found the writing to be unclear. Part of what was unclear for me was the mystery around Altun magic. I would have liked a bit more explanation as to the ways magic works in this world. Kacy would described the way the magic felt or looked but the only deeper explanation we got about something regarding the magic was the definition of “skipping”.
I also think there could have been deeper character development for most of the characters. I didn’t feel like there was very much to the personalities of the characters outside of their main motivation in the book.
Overall, I definitely recommend The Revenant’s Bargain for anyone who is a fan of new adult fantasy novels. It will be released December 14, 2022!
November 28, 2022
Rough start, but once I got going, I fell in love with the world
I received an e-ARC of this book for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
The TL;DR version
I didn't find the ACOTAR inspiration to be too overwhelming. SJM herself draws a lot of inspiration from classic tropes and aspects like Blood Rites, Fated Mates, and Misogynistic Brutes are not owned by her. The world-building was phenomenal, extensive, and consistent and by far my favorite part of the story. I'm not sure I'd re-read it any time soon, but I am greatly looking forward to the books and would definitely tell my friends "just get to Chapter 6, it'll be worth it."
The Characters
This was my least favorite part of the book. Up until Chapter 16, Amaury, Neira, and Nalin were the only three characters I felt I had an understanding of, which was disappointing considering its a 1st person POV book. Despite it being clear where the story was headed, it felt as though Molly didn't quite know who she wanted them to be.
This meant that our MC couldn't get to know other supporting characters, and really stunted the growth I would've loved to have seen earlier on with Easton, Berel, and Gil. All of the later side characters had personalities and interactions with Kacy that felt real, and that I wanted to root for.
It was hard reading a book where Amaury was the only one character I felt I knew, and I couldn't put my finger on why there didn't feel like a true antagonist.
The Writing Style
At first I thought I'd give the book 3 ⭐️ and not 4 ⭐️
I felt as though I was reading a book that was set up to drop that crazy one line--the one that people put in tik toks and videos and get tattoos of. This may not be how Molly intended it to be, but it was received by me as though the characters were formed around these cool lines, rather than the other way around.
So certain phrases [like]
fell flat, because it contradicted the characters we knew, or the characters hadn't been built up enough to fit into those shoes. I'm looking forward to the second book because of how much better I knew the characters at the end, and now I need more
The World building
⭐️The world building was phenomenal. Absolutely phenomenal⭐️ Another reviewer said it, but Molly's world and the lore that accompanied it was everything From Blood and Ash wanted to be and never was. Feuds made sense. Actions had consequences. The magic was interesting and nobody felt too OP for who they were. I could picture myself in the world and didn't feel lost trying to do so.
Plot
The plot was absolutely phenomenal except that it moved too fast. I am a slice of life reader, and wanted a few more in-between moments to see characters interact with each other, or to describe feelings or transitions a little more. I often found myself wondering how we got from one scene to the other, and the world was so fascinating and the plot made so much sense otherwise that I wanted just a little bit more.
I received an e-ARC of this book for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
The TL;DR version
I didn't find the ACOTAR inspiration to be too overwhelming. SJM herself draws a lot of inspiration from classic tropes and aspects like Blood Rites, Fated Mates, and Misogynistic Brutes are not owned by her. The world-building was phenomenal, extensive, and consistent and by far my favorite part of the story. I'm not sure I'd re-read it any time soon, but I am greatly looking forward to the books and would definitely tell my friends "just get to Chapter 6, it'll be worth it."
The Characters
This was my least favorite part of the book. Up until Chapter 16, Amaury, Neira, and Nalin were the only three characters I felt I had an understanding of, which was disappointing considering its a 1st person POV book. Despite it being clear where the story was headed, it felt as though Molly didn't quite know who she wanted them to be.
This meant that our MC couldn't get to know other supporting characters, and really stunted the growth I would've loved to have seen earlier on with Easton, Berel, and Gil. All of the later side characters had personalities and interactions with Kacy that felt real, and that I wanted to root for.
It was hard reading a book where Amaury was the only one character I felt I knew, and I couldn't put my finger on why there didn't feel like a true antagonist.
The Writing Style
At first I thought I'd give the book 3 ⭐️ and not 4 ⭐️
I felt as though I was reading a book that was set up to drop that crazy one line--the one that people put in tik toks and videos and get tattoos of. This may not be how Molly intended it to be, but it was received by me as though the characters were formed around these cool lines, rather than the other way around.
So certain phrases [like]
fell flat, because it contradicted the characters we knew, or the characters hadn't been built up enough to fit into those shoes. I'm looking forward to the second book because of how much better I knew the characters at the end, and now I need more
The World building
⭐️The world building was phenomenal. Absolutely phenomenal⭐️ Another reviewer said it, but Molly's world and the lore that accompanied it was everything From Blood and Ash wanted to be and never was. Feuds made sense. Actions had consequences. The magic was interesting and nobody felt too OP for who they were. I could picture myself in the world and didn't feel lost trying to do so.
Plot
The plot was absolutely phenomenal except that it moved too fast. I am a slice of life reader, and wanted a few more in-between moments to see characters interact with each other, or to describe feelings or transitions a little more. I often found myself wondering how we got from one scene to the other, and the world was so fascinating and the plot made so much sense otherwise that I wanted just a little bit more.
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