What will Fitzwilliam Darcy do when his beloved father stands between him and happiness?
Darcy has always emulated his wise and honourable father, George Darcy. But following a sinister act of betrayal by a former family friend, his father rejects his most benevolent principles.
When Georgiana forms a friendship with Miss Elizabeth Bennet, Darcy convinces his father to allow the association to continue. However, Elizabeth soon presents a thorny problem: she entices Darcy as no other lady has before, and with his current outlook, his father would not approve of her as a daughter-in-law.
Still, Darcy’s problem may resolve in time: his father, after getting to know Elizabeth, is certain to recognise her many admirable qualities and change his mind. But what if he does not?
In this Pride & Prejudice Regency variation, Fitzwilliam Darcy is caught between the influences of love and duty. Which of these will wield the greatest power?
When not writing, Award-winning Regency romance author Kelly Miller spends her free time singing, playing the piano, reading, and amusing her dogs. Like a much loved Jane Austen character, she is an excellent walker.
Her Austenesque Regency romances have won first place honors from: Chanticleer International Book Awards, Royal Dragonfly Book Awards, Indies Today Book Awards, Incipere Book Awards, and Firebird Book Awards.
I have now read all six of this author's published stories and enjoyed them.
Mentioned several times, this story's main premise is Darcy's struggle as Love vs Duty make his life very unsettled.
Darcy's father develops heart troubles and is given a short time to live. So he hands management of their properties to Darcy while staying at hand for any need to consult. He does demand as part of Darcy's duty that he marry...that he marry someone with the correct connections, education, wealth, etc.
Darcy has taken Georgiana with him when he travels to Bingley's newly leased estate, Netherfield. There Georgiana becomes close friends with Elizabeth, who helps her overcome her guilt about Ramsgate. Darcy is happy with the changes he sees in his sister but now finds it difficult to cool his feelings for Elizabeth, knowing his father (and his aunt) would not approve. Jane and Charles marry and do invite E. to live with them. However, when Mr. and Miss Darcy travel back to Pemberley it is with the promise that Elizabeth is invited to spend some time that summer at Pemberley.
At Pemberley we find that matchmaking has found a suitable wife for Darcy and surprisingly also a man begins to court Elizabeth. However, The lady intended for Darcy swears she does not want to marry...ever. The result is that Elizabeth (with feeling of her own for Darcy) sees what is expected for Darcy, she sets in her mind that she can never have him. Darcy also makes a decision about his relationship with E. but is surprised when things don't go as he expected.
That is some little page space given to Wickham but it is does not affect ODC. There is a short epilogue. I recommend this story.
Loved these characters 4.5* rounded up (review may contain vague spoilers)
I always enjoy it when one or both Darcy parents is alive in the story. In this case, it’s Mr. George Darcy who lives. Always a good man, he becomes a little less tolerant and malevolent towards those of a lesser station in society after Wickham’s betrayal. He makes it clear to his son that he should keep to friends and acquaintances of his own sphere. He makes an exception for Bingley and, with reservations, allows Elizabeth to visit Pemberley as Georgiana’s guest after they become friends in Hertfordshire.
Elizabeth and Darcy have unexpressed feelings for each other, as Darcy knows his father will not approve. He wants Darcy to marry a lady from his own sphere. Darcy senior’s sister makes it clear to Elizabeth she shouldn’t set her sights on her nephew, so she too hides her feelings. At Pemberley, his aunt sets out to do a little matchmaking with others on both their behalf.
I loved the strong Bingley portrayal at the beginning, who steadfastly put Caroline in her place. I loved the early friendship between ODC in Hertfordshire, and this Darcy who wasn’t above dancing. Georgiana is sweet and a good friend to Elizabeth and her brother. While they have their own plans for Fitzwilliam, Mr. Darcy senior and his sister, are always respectful and kind towards Elizabeth. No Lady Catherine in this book.
My attention was held throughout with an enjoyable plot, the mild angst because of potential rivals, and good dialogue. Ms. Miller even made me weep for Wickham—a rare feat indeed!
I did have a quibble though. The letter—we are teased with the contents, but it is never shared with the reader. That was a disappointment I felt would have added to the romance.
Clean content.
Recommend
April 14, 2023 - Audiobook Great narration by Scott Fleming. Enjoyed it.
After making a mistake about a favorite’s character, George Darcy has learned to be cautious and his young adult children feel the results. What a fascinating premise for this latest Pride and Prejudice various from Kelly Miller! Not only is the senior Mr. Darcy alive for this one, but he both discovers Wickham’s weak character and dictates a class distinction to his children in their friendships and love lives. I was all eagerness to see how these profound alterations worked on Austen’s classic tale.
As many who read my reviews know, I have a great fondness for Austen variation stories. I love to explore ‘what-if’ questions to take different paths with the characters through a familiar setting. A Dutiful Son begins the changes from the start by having Mr. George Darcy alive at the beginning of the story and able to see that his preference and elevation for young George Wickham from merely the steward’s son has created a profligate with expectations beyond his station. Instead of seeing Wickham as a weak specimen, the senior Mr. Darcy chooses to take the extreme view and see it as a weakness of class status so bands his children from forming any new connections outside the sphere of their status. Not being a tyrant, he does allow for current friendships his children formed to stand, but he makes it clear that he has expectations of a different sort for Fitzwilliam’s future. Young Mr. Darcy has a friendship with Bingley who is a wealthy young man from the merchant class and young Miss Darcy has a friendship with Miss Elizabeth Bennet a gentleman’s daughter with no real prospects of wealth or status. Bingley falls for Elizabeth’s sister and their story is an easy happily ever after. Elizabeth leaves them to it for a pleasant visit with Darcy and Georgie to their home.
Darcy and Elizabeth are attracted and he falls in love after meeting her during his visit to Bingley’s estate in Hertfordshire, but there is his internal conflict of pleasing his ailing father by doing his duty vs following his heart. At Pemberley, Darcy finds that a marriage prospect is already on the table and even Elizabeth finds the possibility of a courtship, but neither have their hearts or heads turned by these others. However, it does drive home the expectation placed on them. Elizabeth sees her own status as inferior and is miserable under the cautious gaze of Mr. Darcy senior and his equally class-conscious sister.
I really enjoyed exploring this new avenue for the story and loved seeing the friendship element as strong. Darcy and Elizabeth avoid much of the ‘pride’ and ‘prejudice’ of the original and of course Wickham is unable to work his wiles on Elizabeth, but their being forced to dwell on always being parted by other’s disapproval of their status of wealth was wearying. I will admit to feeling the pace slow down while they struggled through this period of internal monologues and waiting for the catalyst that would change the status quo of the issue they were facing. There was some good suspense here as I waited to see how they’d find a way and there was some good surprise there. The resolve eventually came and it was gratifying to see them find their happy and the swoonworthy moments.
All in all, I enjoyed exploring this new variation path and time spent with the author’s representation of the P&P world. Those who enjoy sweet yet feeling-filled character-driven historical romance should pick this one up for a closer look.
I rec'd an eARC from Meryton Press to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at The Reading Frenzy Jan 26th.
Oh, duty is what one expects from others, it is not what one does one's self. ~ Oscar Wilde
As the story begins, George Darcy has received a shock. He has discovered the evil lurking within his once-beloved Godson, George Wickham. The elder Mr. Darcy sends Wickham away. He also instructs his children, Fitzwilliam and Georgiana, to make friends only within their strict social sphere. No more befriending those not of the upper circles, although he acknowledges that Charles Bingley has been a good friend to Fitzwilliam and allows that relationship to continue. However, no matrimony with Caroline Bingley!
The younger Darcy heeds his father and finds it easy to dismiss Miss Bingley. However, his attempts to ignore his attraction to a young woman he meets in Hertfordshire fail.
The greatest human need is that of being heard. ~ Tom Osborne
The older Mr. Darcy meets Elizabeth Bennet and approves of her — as a friend for his daughter. He does not agree that she would be a suitable wife for his son.
How can Fitzwilliam make his father understand? How can his father hear him?
At some point, you just have to let heredity and environment debate themselves while you go off and shape your own life. ~ Robert Brault
The story is well-written and I enjoyed it. However it must be said that George Darcy's "logic" for opposing a match between ODC is completely nonsensical and it had me rolling my eyes many times. The backstory with Wickham to support this contrived conflict of the elder Darcy's suddenly altered opinions on matters of class and rank was pretty weak.
Unpopular opinion on this one - I really didn't care for the story and basically skimmed the 2nd half of the book. Yes, I know P&P is about class differences even within the gentry but Gaaaa, it's harped on over and over (and over) that ODC are not of the same sphere.
"Although I expect you to be kind in your dealings with those lower in status, you must adhere to class lines." (quote from the book)
As the book description states, Mr. George Darcy is still living in this unique twist to canon. But an act of betrayal by a close family friend, completely shatters Mr. George Darcy's guiding principles.
"Could Darcy continue to honour his father whilst staying true to his own beliefs?" (quote from the book)
This is the crux of the story. With added tweaks to canon, Darcy and Miss Georgiana travel to Hertfordshire with the Bingley's. When Darcy sees Elizabeth Bennet... " A ridiculous fancy bedevilled him that she possessed a view into his soul."
"...that brief interlude with her had been akin to a beatific reverie, and its conclusion left him...bereft." (quote from the book)
There was much I enjoyed of this story, new friendships, a stronger Bingley, and original characters created. The tweaks to canon were well done and, of course, the story is well written. The outside forces separating Darcy and Elizabeth added the right amount of tension to the story. However, I will admit to a slight dragging of the story before its final conclusion. But, I will contradict myself by saying I wish there was more development between a certain couple that we never really get to see...how did the lady's opinion of never marrying get changed?
All in all, this was a lovely and enjoyable variation by the ever talented Ms. Miller. I highly recommend it, and I am thankful for winning a copy of this e-book.
Exquisitely written A Dutiful Son is a charming P&P variation. Again, Miller captures the story and weaves it into her own with ease. The characters are delightfully portrayed, the distinctive literary style is perfect, and the amount of research is meticulous. Introducing Mr Darcy Senior is a splendid twist, and the agony of forbidden love tears at the heartstrings. A Dutiful Son had me flipping the pages, needing to learn how Darcy would choose. His father's wishes—his duty or his love for Elizabeth? In fact, I binge-read this book and was bereft when it ended. I may mention this each time I read one of Miller’s books, but I think that this is unquestionably one of her best yet. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an enthralling and page-turning read.
Really enjoyed this book. Fairly well written with some editing mistakes that should have been caught. Mainly Miss Talbot’s hair changes from strawberry blonde to auburn which are essentially at opposite ends of the redhead spectrum. Also Mrs Bridgestone is called Lady Bridgestone once.
The conflict between love and duty went on a little long for me and got depressing.
I would have liked a chapter or two showing Darcy and Elizabeth dealing with London society since the question of her ability to do that was central to the plot.
I’ve loved every book from this author, and this one did not disappoint. I found the premise of the story to be a fascinating twist on Darcy and Elizabeth’s love. With Darcy’s father still alive, the course of the story completely changed. In this variation, we met new characters and developed more of an understanding of others. The friendship between Elizabeth and Georgiana was lovely to read. I also enjoyed the approach to Elizabeth and Darcy’s romance with a slow buildup to it. An all round great read for anyone who craves more P&P!
“One painful duty fulfilled makes the next plainer and easier.” –Helen Keller, The Story of My Life
>>SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: language, although clean of graphic descriptions, there were discussions of the actions and the fate of the SBRB. The old adage ‘you reap what you sow’ was never clearer than here. Just saying. >>Angst Level: moderate as the reader deals with lovers’ angst. La! That was NOT fun. >>Source: Borrowed KU 10-18-22 with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own.
George Darcy: “Bad men need nothing more to compass their ends, than that good men should look on and do nothing.” –John Stuart Mill, Inaugural Address Delivered to the University of St Andrews, 2/1/1867
Yep, Old George Darcy was still alive in this story. That meant he had to deal with his godson, George Wickham, and his proclivities. Oh, how the scales fell from his eyes and he soon saw the error of his ways. Wickham was not averse to spurning the preferment of the living offered to him. He took the funds in lieu of the living, thumped his nose, and left Pemberley, hopefully forever. Mr. Darcy soon regretted elevating Wickham above his station in life. That theme would run through the rest of the story.
“Non nobis solum nati sumus. [Not for ourselves alone are we born.]” –Marcus Tullius Cicero
Poor Darcy was a mess. His father’s new views on class distinction [see above] had him looking to his own circle for a mistress of Pemberley. His father’s health was another reason for urgency. Pemberley was dependent upon Young Darcy making a good match. It was also important to the future of his sister when she came out. Mr. Darcy would not refuse the friendships his children already had even if he felt they were beneath the Darcy name. Fitzwilliam could keep his friendship with Bingley. And Georgiana could keep her friendship with Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Thank you very much.
There were new characters that added flavor to the story. The Darcy siblings had another aunt, Mrs. Brookstone, sister to George Darcy. She was sharp and had attitudes similar to her brother's regarding keeping the distinctions between classes. She did not approve of the friendships of her niece and nephew. Those people would have to prove themselves to her before she would accept them. This was a long, Long, LONG story and that was too long for me. I put it down at least once to simply have a break. There was so much introspection between young Darcy and Miss Elizabeth. Dang! I grew tired of Elizabeth thinking she didn’t measure up and Darcy thinking he couldn’t have her because his father thought she didn’t measure up. That grew old. They did a lot of stuff, and then more stuff, and still more stuff. Their HEA finally came but it was a long time coming. The epilogue was way in the future and oh, so good.
JAFF's 4,5 ! My only issue with this is that I found Elizabeth a bit too meek and uncertain, and she showed very little wit or snark in her exchanges with Darcy.
Fitzwilliam Darcy struggles to find his happiness while try to keep his father happy. Lessons learned in multiple quarters are necessary for happily ever afters to be found out.
This story involves a change of heart for George Darcy due to Ramgate. He changes his ideas in class values....well in this sweet hearted story you see a Fitzwilliam struggle through this due to Elisabeth.. Its a wonderful page turning story that keeps the reader wondering what That William will do and will his father change his mind. A well done story of love and family issues...I reckon end it I couldn't put it down.
I’ve read a few books by this wonderful author now, and this one was a lovely, heartwarming read. As always, writer Kelly Miller has brought the classic Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice to new life with this fresh take on the characters and their Regency-era lives.
‘“I cannot believe this! How could Wickham betray me after all I have done for him? The blackguard!” George Darcy’s fist crashed upon the mahogany desk with a mighty thump.’ … from this angst-filled opening line, the reader is immersed in a family dilemma that will come to challenge Fitzwilliam Darcy in ways neither he nor his father could have envisioned.
One thing I liked in particular in this take on Pride and Prejudice is that Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet become fast friends early on in the story, which makes a nice change from an oft-used trope in romance where it’s animosity at first sight instead.
A few things impacted my full immersion and enjoyment of this book, such as passive writing and the over use of filler words such as ‘own’, etc. But more than anything else, sentences opening with ‘He’ and ‘She’—often inappropriately and confusingly—tripped me up time and again. These sentence starters, for the most part, denoted either Darcy or Bennet, but— unfortunately—they occurred frequently at new paragraphs and also followed other characters, and even a horse! Suffice it to say, this is a huge issue and needs addressing. Because of this, I almost gave four stars to this read, but instead have given 4.5, rounded up to 5 for rating purposes, due to the other aspects of the narrative being so well done.
I especially loved Davy’s character, young man with mental development issues, whom the author portrayed wonderfully. And the interactions between the other characters and Davy were fantastic and felt realistic. Lots of fun banter enlivens the dialogue and overall warm, cosy feel of this period romance read.
I highly recommend Kelly Miller and her Pride and Prejudice adaptations for anyone who enjoys clean romance in a historical setting.
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NOTE ON RATINGS: I consider a 3-star rating a positive review. Picky about which books I give 5 stars to, I reserve this highest rating for the stories I find stunning and which moved me.
5 STARS: IT WAS AMAZING! I COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN! — Highly Recommended. 4 STARS: I WOULD PULL AN ALL-NIGHTER — Go read this book. 3 STARS: IT WAS GOOD! — An okay read. Didn’t love it. Didn’t hate it. 2 STARS: I MAY HAVE LIKED A FEW THINGS —Lacking in some areas: writing, characterisation, and/or problematic plot lines. 1 STAR: NOT MY CUP OF TEA —Lots of issues with this book
I think I’m going to be confused if I ever read the original Pride and Prejudice. Hahaha. I have seen some of the films and variated films. Im constantly impressed by Kelly Miller’s ability to retell this story while holding that these characters are still the same each time but still different because of the variances. Never do you think that the character is acting Ina way you don’t expect. (Based mostly on Miller’s other versions)
In this instance, the elder Darcy (Fitzwilliam’s father) has survived well into the book. And his actions influence Darcy and the entire story. And just when you think you know what’s happening based on the previous versions. Well… no. Darcy and Elizabeth and Bingley and Jane are the constants. It’s like seeing alternate realities and feeling that pull of immutable soulmates. It’s pretty cool that way. I even got some ideas for variations of my own. (Probably wont follow through. But it’s fun to think about!)
What an exquisite delight it was to immerse myself again in the wonderful Austenesque atmosphere created by Kelly Miller! In this “Pride and Prejudice” variation, I found everything I love Jane Austen's original books for.
As a true fan of Jane Austen, I have a habit to reread her six full novels. I must confess, I’ve read “Lady Susan” only once, and it just doesn’t feel like I’ll reread it ever again. Austen books are my comfort reads. The ones you get snuggled in your favourite blanket with, sometime in mid-February when the daylight makes a fleeting appearance and you need something to stir up your frozen spirit. But after a couple of decades of this practice, I can recite these books almost by heart. So, I’m deeply grateful to Kelly Miller for writing books that capture the true Austenesque atmosphere perfectly and have the same vibes as the original works.
In “A Dutiful Son” Mr Darcy’s father is alive. And despite having his son’s best interest at heart, he presents him with a dilemma, which, for a responsible and sensible person like Fitzwilliam Darcy, it wouldn’t be so easy to solve. Besides, as a side effect of Mr Darcy’s changed views on people of his class communicating with those with a lower status, vulnerable Georgiana’s spirits are in danger.
The story begins with the Pemberly patriarch finding out about Wickham’s dishonourable behaviour towards Georgiana. He is full of rage and regrets, and he blames himself for having allowed it to happen. From now on, George Darcy demands from his son to stop indulging in fraternisation with those from a lower class. And it happens right before Mr Darcy meets the lady who is about to steal his heart. He is forced to admit the unavoidable truth: “In vain have I struggled. It will not do. My feelings will not be repressed. You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you,” Jane Austen, “Pride and Prejudice”.
But can a man of his standing and upbringing go against his father’s wishes?
“A Dutiful Son” by Kelly Miller is pure joy for all Jane Austen and “Pride and Prejudice” fans. You’ll get leisurely walks and horse rides amidst the picturesque countryside, balls and dinners in grand mansions, matrimony schemes discussed in elegant sitting rooms.
I’ve read all of Kelly Miller’s books, and I am eagerly waiting for more.
Miller’s best variation yet! I adored this story from beginning to end, particularly the time spent at Pemberly. Elizabeth’s friendship with Georgiana is so sweet, and the subtle torture Darcy and she endure while fighting their feelings for each other was masterfully done. An excellent choice for any Austen fan!
I love reading these books it is like getting behind the scenes views of much beloved characters. It has everything you could ask for including (Spoiler) a happy ending. Each have their personal struggles but they get there in the end. I highly recommend you read this book. Thoroughly enjoyable.
I’ve long been a fan of Pride and Prejudice variations, especially those of Ms. Miller, and I believe this jumped up to the very best among them. Of Ms. Miller’s P&P variations, I think Mr. Darcy’s Perfect Match continues as my favorite, although this ranks as my second favorite, and the best among those variations which essentially start before the entire original P&P. I’ve often said that I do not particularly care for variations which start before Darcy’s disastrous marriage proposal in Kent, so that a complete variation jumps up so high on my favorites list tells something in itself.
The starting variation point here is that Darcy’s father, Mr. George Darcy, is still alive when Wickham’s betrayal of the family occurs. Because of this, George Darcy becomes less tolerant, and makes it clear that his son and daughter should keep to friends and acquaintances of their own station in life. (Luckily, we can exception for Bingley, as he and Darcy are already good friends, so we still get to travel to Hertfordshire and follow to some extent the events of the original novel).
Here the main difference that happens, and that sets things in motion differently, is that Georgiana gets to accompany his brother, and becomes good friends with Elizabeth while visiting Hertfordshire. I especially loved reading about Elizabeth and Georgiana’s friendship in this book. While Georgiana and Elizabeth’s friendship grows, so do Elizabeth and Darcy’s feelings for one another. These feelings, however, remain unexpressed because it is clear to both that they could never be a match because of their differing statuses, even though after careful deliberation, Elizabeth is deemed an acceptable friend for Georgiana.
The characters in this novel were well-realized and some were particularly engaging. I loved Bingley’s strong portrayal (always a favorite of mine, Bingley with a backbone!), too. Wickham also got what was coming to him… but it also kind of made me sad. Weird. It was well written!
Enjoyable plot, a little bit of angst, lovely bit of romance and great friendships. Fantastic book.
Note: while I usually read ebooks, I listened to this as an Audible version. I must commend the narrator Ms. Miller worked with for this – he is absolutely fantastic and really brought this book to life for me. Bravo!
A Dutiful Son is a variation of Jane Austin’s characters in Pride and Prejudice which I must admit I have not read, so I will not make comparisons. I absolutely loved this book. Ms. Miller’s beautiful story absolutely brings Elizabeth Bennet, Fitzwilliam Darcy, Georgiana Darcy, and all of the other characters to life in living color. These characters are so well developed I felt as if I knew them personally.
The story begins with a huge betrayal of the family by a longtime friend, Wickham, who has always been dear to Fitzwilliam and his father, George. Georgiana is the victim of a malicious scheme that is foiled by Fitzwilliam just in time. Although Mr. Darcy Sr. has always been a bit liberal in his feeling toward social classes socializing, the horrible incident with Wickham, the son of his head servant, convinces him it is safer for his son and daughter to reframe from associating with lower classes. You can never determine who is motivated by jealousy and an effort to improve their station. His children must marry within their own class. Fitzwilliam hopes his father’s sentiments will eventually change.
Fitzwilliam leaves Pemberley, his luxurious family estate, to visit his best friend, Charles Bingley, in Hertfordshire. He obtains permission from his father to have Georgiana accompany him. This is where he meets the beautiful and intelligent Elizabeth, who becomes close friends with Georgiana. Her beauty, forthright manner, and guileless and caring nature win his heart like no other. Unfortunately, his father has forbidden him to marry below his class.
Ms. Miller’s descriptions of the estates, the balls, the countryside, horseback riding, and just day-to-day task are enchanting and vivid. The dialog is realistic, engaging, and lively. The authenticity to the time period in all aspects is exceptional. I could feel the internal struggle and heartbreak within the characters as they tried to accept their place and station in an unfair and judgmental society. I highly recommend this delightful and beautifully written story.
In this variation, Mr Darcy senior is alive, as well as his sister, who is Darcy's aunt, Mrs Brookstone. After Georgiana's near brush with ruin and scandal at Ramsgate, Darcy tells his father about Wickham's perfidy. Darcy Sr is outraged, and decides to change his liberal outlook regarding people of lower social classes. He instructs his son to adopt a much less tolerant attitude towards those of the lower social levels. Although Darcy doesn't like his father's reasoning, he agrees , thinking that his father will eventually change his mind.
Then, Darcy and Georgiana visit Bingley in Hertfordshire, and Georgiana becomes close to Elizabeth, so much so that Georgiana wants to invite her to stay for the summer at Pemberly. Although Darcy Sr doesn't like the Bennett family's behavior, he allows the invitation. At Pemberly, Darcy's attraction to Elizabeth strengthens, but he's conflicted because of his father's new attitude about people beneath their station.
It's difficult to admire a Darcy character who, at twenty-eight years of age, can be so easily manipulated by his father's opinions on society, a grown man who allows his father to tell him he must get married right away, and who even agrees to pursue his father's choice in a prospective bride. Sure, his father is ailing, and is therefore a sympathetic figure, but, nonetheless, it's not very manly behavior. This kind of killed some of the romance for me. Our beloved Darcy was all too willing to give up the idea of pursuing Elizabeth, and I didn't like that.
Of course, things all turn around for the better, but I thought that Mr Darcy Sr's turnaround was quite abrupt. This book is very well written and well edited. However, I would have preferred a Darcy character with more conviction. I recommend it with reservations.
In 'A Dutiful Son', author Kelly Miller is true to the spirit of Jane Austen's writing and to the time period of the original writing. For the most part, the dialogue and description ring true, and the reader is swept away into the nineteenth century world in which making a good marriage was necessary to one's well being, and possibly one's survival. The familiar characters are there, and through their thoughts, words, and actions, Ms. Miller takes us deep into their minds. I found myself thinking, "Now I see why Darcy acted that way!" Certain characters rise to the foreground, like Darcy's sister Georgiana. Others, like Darcy's father, are present in this story and now occupy a significant role.
In this variation, Darcy's father, following the betrayal of his prodigy Wickham, withdraws from his liberal principles to take a more traditional stance: His son must restrict dealings with those below his specific class, and must under no circumstances contemplate marriage outside his class. We follow Darcy's dilemma as he struggles to remain a dutiful son while his attraction for Elizabeth Bennet grows. We empathize with Elizabeth, an intelligent and forward-thinking woman who appreciates Darcy's qualities and yearns for him, while knowing she must marry someone else and live out her life in a stifling marriage without him. Darcy and Elizabeth struggle to honour the conventions of their time, but every so often, a way will be found.
The character evolution sometimes differs from the original text, and this made for a delightful and satisfying variation. I enjoyed seeing the possibilities for redemption in each, even Wickham.
Overall, Ms. Miller's work succeeds stylistically and in treatment of plot, theme, and characterization. A great story brought to life in a new way!
In this story Mr Darcy's father is still alive and has a younger sister who lives with them in her widow hood. The older Darcy is aware of Wickhams misbehavior and sins and withholds the living from him. It's unclear why he even pays him for several reasons : Wickhams not ordained so can't hold the living anyway 2) its up to his own discretion as to which minister he offers it to -- nothing compels him to offer it to Wickham. It's a part of this story that doesn't make sense. Mr Darcy's new views regarding mixing of classes has changed because of how Wickham turned out and he is adamant that those in trade can have nothing in common with his family. He allows Darcy to continue his friendship with Charles but insists he inform them that nothing will permit his son to marry outside their sphere..Caroline is never going to get Pemberley!. This also puts Elizabeth Bennet outside the possibility because of her Gardiner and Philips relations. She can be Georgiana's friend but nothing more. It's interesting how they saw the trades as so much lower than they are even when someone like Mr Gardiner is highly educated, dresses impeccably, and has an income that rivals the wealthiest member of Parliament! In a few short years those unacceptable trades people will hold a huge amount of wealth and smash their attitudes! Just investing in the upcoming rail service will bring great financial rewards. I enjoyed having the influence of Older Darcy and his sister on both Darcy and Georgiana and less of Lady Catherine! Its an interesting twist!
I should have known better. I thought, “I’ll get a start on this book, dip into the pages for a little bit” . . . hours later, still deep into the pages . . . . The culprit is another delightful “Pride & Prejudice” Regency variation by Kelly Miller! I previously read Ms. Miller’s "Accusing Mr. Darcy: A Pride & Prejudice Variation." Even though I haven’t read the original for many years, I enjoyed "Accusing Mr. Darcy” as a stand-alone historical mystery-romance. So, I looked forward to reading Ms. Miller’s “A Dutiful Son: A Pride and Prejudice Variation.” I am happy to report that the author has done it again with another enjoyable read! In this variation, the strict lines of class challenge Darcy. His father instructs Darcy that he must only wed a lady of his own class. But what does this mean for the growing fondness he and Elizabeth feel for one another? Add to that are gossips suspecting Elizabeth is social climbing after Darcy’s wealth and status, Elizabeth’s ambitious mother and obnoxious younger sisters, and Elizabeth’s growing friendship with Darcy’s younger sister Georgiana – will it have to end? Along with the romantic troubles (I submit as evidence: the button scene in the portrait gallery!) are balls, stunning interiors, even more stunning gowns, horse rides, and long strolls through the English countryside. What a wonderful world to become lost in! In my opinion, this book will be enjoyable to readers who love historical romances, regardless of how familiar they are with the original “Pride & Prejudice.” Like “Accusing Mr. Darcy,” this book stands on its own.
Once more author Kelly Miller sets out to push the boundaries of fan fiction, with Jane Austen’s 'Pride and Prejudice'.
This time we're graced by the presence of Mr Darcy senior, adversely-affected by the dastardly designs of the waster Wickham on young Georgiana. It was fortunate that Georgie's brother foiled the best-laid plans of the bounder, and she was returned to the bosom of her family unscathed--but her father now has a bee in his bonnet about over-familiarity between his children and those of lower status.
Enter stage left Elizabeth Bennet, daughter of a a gentleman but without a dowry or the required level of gentility to pass muster as a bride for Fitzwilliam, who has of course fallen head over heels for her. She's good enough as a friend for Georgie though, and as the pair have hit it off Elizabeth is invited to Pemberley, where Fitzwilliam's father and his Aunt Brookstone are so impressed with her comportment that they're soon trying to marry her off elsewhere, as well as pointing Darcy the younger in the direction of the most eligible heiress in the neighbourhood.
Potential matches and misunderstandings abound, amongst the usual suspects plus a few new faces. It's a well-written and constructed piece which deepens the friendship between Elizabeth and Georgiana while coming up with a satisfying solution for the problem that is Wickham.
Overall a good effort, although it may be that the 'little bit of ivory' on which Jane Austen wrote may have been expanded to its limits.