Naive dreamer Fenimore James runs from home and goes west to become a famous outlaw––Simon Shaw. However, his fantasies of glamorous robberies quickly evaporate as he joins the notorious Red Evans gang and finds himself in the middle of a strange and bloody game, where gang members are suddenly being murdered one-by-one at the hand of a mysterious pursuer, who leaves cryptic signs scarifying their bodies.
To complicate matters further, Fenimore’s waking hours become torture, when he begins questioning his own sexuality, finding himself falling head-over-heels for a fellow male gang member, whom he hated and feared just recently. While his nights are plagued by a bizarre dream figure––the Man In Black.
Meanwhile the boss of the gang slowly gets paranoid, starting to suspect that the killer is someone among his own men...
WARNING: The Man In Black is an LGBT thriller and mystery that contains violence, occasional foul language, and adult sexual situations.
Lily has been writing short stories to entertain her friends since her teen years, and before coming to pen her own novel, she helped her writer friends with research for their fiction and non-fiction. She is a collector of all things dogs, and Balto & Togo, an animal shelters volunteer, a history buff, a vintage trinkets and toys enthusiast.
EDIT 12/29/2024 - Third time through the book in 3 years! Still enjoying it, still agree with the earlier review, want to add that I like the epilogue too, it wraps the story up well.
EDIT 8/22/23 - Finished the book again on 7/21/2023 and thought I should update this review.I got a free copy for reviewing back in last autumn and wrote my first review on Goodreads, but I have been wanting to reread it ever since. So now that I purchased the book officially and finished reading it for the second time I feel I have something to add.
I like how the book handles trauma. So the length of the book might scare people off, but it adds to the overall feel of the book, and that is Fenimore James, who becomes Simon Shaw, ends up going through so much in the course of a year. It’s one of the things I find strangely relatable, like living through a short moment of time with an encyclopedia's worth of story to tell. It feels more than just a coming of age story, it feels like a life changing event that we the reader are sharing with Simon, as he goes from a naive farm boy with romantic ideas on what the life of an outlaw is, to seeing the actual crimes committed by the gang and how Simon tries to process it all in the moment, the outcome of the crimes as the gang is targeted by a vicious killer that could possibly be one of the many people wronged by Red over his career, to the epilogue itself as Simon finally has a quiet moment to process, reflect, and work through the events in the novel.
The romance is great because it feels like a slowly burning romance that becomes really intimated, as both characters begin to really get to know each other and their past, and actually become a closer couple. And there’s also quite a few sex scenes that just build on each other and ends up making the payoff feel more satisfying. The romance exists beyond the sex scenes though, with all the time spent on the pillow talk between the two I do actually find myself rooting for the two of them to make it to the end after all the work they put into their relationship. And it plays really well into Simon’s self discovery. Overall, I love the characters and the time put into them. I saw a review mention “World Building”, which I think isn’t accurate. I can’t really tell you about the world that gang exists in besides the fact that it’s the Arizona Territory between 1880 and 1881, but when it comes to the gang I can tell you about most of the gang, like Red Evans. He’s mostly a mysterious figure who interacts with Simon when needed and keeps Simon guessing as to who he is, but his past becomes an important part of the story. There’s the character of Rico Desilva who has like 5 lines mostly in Spanish but we end up finding out little pieces of his past like his family that he still visits in Mexico. The character building is top notch here and it pays off because I find myself really worrying for these guys when danger happens and even after I’m done with the story I wonder what Simon’s life is like in a time period where the best way for him to learn about his sexuality was to join a gang outside of the law.
The mystery is tense as they try to find who is the one sending them mysterious letters and killing them. I like it better on the second read because like most of the stuff in this book, it’s not a traditional mystery story. It’s not a detective that is trying to find this stuff out, necessarily, but there is detective work in it. It’s a gang of outlaws that doesn’t like to pull it’s punches in it’s descriptions, so it’s them trying to find the killer and kill him before he kills them. And the writing makes the psychological feeling stand out and makes this feel even more tense. Simon starts having nightmares that just get progressively more intense by the end and the killer actually seems to go back and forth between the real world and his dreams in a sense. Going back to the trauma, the way Simon reacts to the events of the year seems very believable. And the events affect the whole gang and causes them react in the situation that just adds to the tension, and the trauma, and adds a sense of urgency and danger. This book is well paced, I think, because it puts all this action and events and character reactions into the story while having plenty of moments where the characters breathe, take a bath, and reflect on the situation happening around them, and then later these moments are invaded by random acts of chaos that adds to the overall tense atmosphere the author seems to be creating.
To anyone looking at the length and really wondering if they want to take a chance, try and make it through the first 80 pages. You’ll find a few reasons to stick with it before then, I think, and after that point you’ll begin to care enough about the characters as they go through some of their first high stakes moments. Overall, great first novel by a first time author and a fantastic book to read a second time. It actually has gotten me back into reading on a regular basis again
***Original Review*** I was able to receive a free copy from a friend who likes historical thrillers. While I don't I read many romances, I am also a fan of historical thrillers and liked the blurb that promised a thriller and a mystery and I like to keep an open mind and read new things. The almost 800 page book reads as a pseudo-autobiographic that takes place in 1 year. Despite it's length it was a rather quick read. It doesn't start as a thriller but it does grab the reader in with it's action. Slowly the tension builds and becomes increasingly dark, and the changing narration highlights that dark change. The first part is an exciting introduction to Simon and the rest of the characters. It contains short adventures like a daring train robbery and the first appearance of the Man In Black that comes to Simon in a dream and transitions from one action packed scene to the next. The ending to part one is one of my favorite sequences, where the gang is on the lamb in a small town to celebrate Christmas and then the night climaxes in two exciting scenes at once. In the second part, the thriller side of the story begins to pick up steam and the plot begins to focus on an unlikely romance between Simon and one of the other male members of the gang while the gang is killed off one by one. It's a really sweet romance that takes place in the midst of chaos. The bed scenes can be pretty explicit at times. I don't know how it compares to other stories of its type, but they're not really pornographic. The scenes build on each other and explores the trust built between the characters in their situation. The struggle the couple faces is not how will their love be seen by society, since they are already in a gang of outlaws, but instead the struggle is will their romance survive the unfolding events and the tension this romance starts to create in the gang. The story explores the tensions and dark secrets in the relationship, as well. It has it's own great twists, I think, I was not able to predict some of them. The third part is packed with action and mystery as well. By this point it's a rather dark thriller with a lot of violence and actions which concludes in an unpredictable thrilling finale. At least I didn't predict the outcomes. It was a page-turner that kept me engaged for the length of the story. It manages to touch on many topics rather deeply and is saturated with spooky atmosphere and mysterious vibes. I liked the characters too. They were 3D and human beings, no good and bad guys there, and all of them seemed to change, evolve and react in realistic ways to the situation around them. Overall, I really do want to read it again because I wonder what will stick out to me the second time through. I wonder what clues about the killer I will pick up on the second read through, knowing his identity.
This book was an unexpected surprise. I did not expect to enjoy it as much as I did, but the author crafted a phenomenal story. We are introduced to Fenimore are known by his outlaw name as Simon. We follow as he grows from a young male to a young man. He dreams of the outlaw lifestyle, and runs away from home only to discover it is not as rosy as believed. A great cast of main characters and side characters that pull you from the outside in as you glimpse their outlaw world.. This book gives drama, suspense, action, spice, and an intriguing look at self discovery.
This book had everything. Violence to suspense to spice!! I really enjoyed this! It’s a rather large book but it didn’t feel like it because the story and characters pulled me right in and kept me interested every page. I loved the drama and action especially. Wonderfully written thriller with romance and I highly suggest this. Check the warnings.
Okay this book is actually infuriating because I loved it until I didn't. It had SO much potential and I really enjoyed the first 400-500 pages! I was rooting for the characters, I wanted to know what was going to happen, I was completely invested. I adored the slow burn, the love interests had amazing chemistry. The book was huge, but the plot gripped me and the pacing was fast.
But I had a few issues with it. Namely: it needed several more rounds of editing, a sensitivity reader, and that the genre/theme of the story were unclear. The focus on the mystery/thriller aspect really only begins after 400 pages or so, so the book really actually focused on the romance IMO (which was a really great romance!) but this is not a genre romance novel. Nor does it contain the tropes/expectations of a genre romance novel.
The main issue was the length and lack of editing. The author is clearly a talented writer and there were multiple points that I had the active thought 'this could be an amazing book if it was edited a bit more'. It needs to be cut down, 900 pages is way too long and did lose its momentum in parts. On the bright side, for the most part, it didn't feel like a 900 page book. It felt more like when you settle in for a 200k fanfic (which I can read faster than most novels). Because it was so long and lacked focus, the theme of the book was pretty unclear and the tone drastically changed from scene to scene.
This also needs to be said: when writing historical fiction, you have to decide how you're going to handle derogatory language, racism, sexism, homophobia, etc. and I did find that there could have been a bit more care and sensitivity when using period-typical language. There is a disclaimer in the beginning that these words do not reflect the views of the author, but there really isn't a need to keep in some words when you've already deviated from historical accuracy for the sake of readability. I do not think this was out of malice because there are points in the book where the main character makes his thoughts/feelings on slavery and indigenous peoples clear and is a good person, but a sensitivity reader could have really helped.
My last issue is with the how the romance was handled and the ending. (**Stop reading now if you don't want any spoilers.**) The two romantic leads were by far the most developed characters, so they were the heart of the story. So when one of them dies in the end in a relatively pointless way, it doesn't even further the other's story. It didn't need to happen, it didn't have much significance, it was just sad. The story was already wild and outlandish anyways, so the sad ending felt quite out of place. The main character didn't learn to live free and learn a valuable lesson from the death of the love interest (à la Rose from Titanic); our main character had already broken free and developed as a character mid-way through the book when he went against his father's opinion and started writing his memoir. So writing his memoir in the epilogue didn't feel poignant or meaningful. Queer characters can obviously die and be killed off in stories, but this felt a bit BYG. I actually think a sensitivity reader could have really helped in this area, too.
So all in all: this had the potential to be a great book. If it had a few more rounds of editing and a sensitivity reader, my rating would be much higher. Thank you so much to Netgalley for the ARC!
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The Man in Black by L.R. Liverpool - Review by Jessica Stone
So to start off this review I will say I have literally NEVER read a western book, but I adore western movies, and that's what this author did with this book. Reading it was like watching a western film. This author managed to do it all, a little western action, some mystery and intrigue, romance and a little slice of life.
I was thoroughly impressed with this book, the world building and character building that was takes place in this book was done in such a way that rather than be confused of overwhelmed with so much information it all flows together cohesively. I will admit I started out slow it took a good 12 chapters for me to get deep in, but by the time I realized this book had me enthralled I was 5 hours deep.
I enjoyed the down to earth quality's of the main character "Simon", I felt myself relating to his questions about what life is supposed to be and the monotony of everyday repetition in a comfortable situation, wondering and knowing more adventure and just, life is out there waiting for me/him/us. He's a very deep, thoughtful character and listening to his thoughts and worry's was enthralling.
The romance was soooo good, not too thick and over consuming as some books are and the build and relationship growth to the romance makes it feel very authentic and not rushed, so that was very refreshing, this romance in general was just wonderfully refreshing. I also thoroughly enjoyed the mystery that this author threw in, the kinda of "who done it", feeling is one of my favorite parts. The intrigue of not knowing who or what is causing these murders, while the main characters navigating this new life, and love and realizing that life can be much more complicated and wild then even he had imagined.
Well if I keep going with my review I might rival this book as far as length goes, but in all seriousness, I highly recommend giving this book a shot, don't give up, because it does get VERY good. Well done L.R Liverpool! I look forward to digesting more of your work!
The Man in Black, L.R. Liverpool, Review, Itsy Bitsy Book Bits, Romance, Thriller, M/M, Jessica Stone, October 2023
The Man in Black was such a pleasant surprise! I don't tend to enjoy westerns, they just have never really been my kind of stories. However, the blurb for this one was so intriguing I figured I should give it a shot, & I am so happy I did. Beautifully written & artfully crafted, the reader feels truly involved in the lives of these men. Simon is truly a little cinnamon roll & I really adored him, along with the delicious jalapeno popper that is Monty. While this book is looong & slow, I was so interested & emotionally invested it didn't feel tedious. There were some surprisingly spooky things in Simon's dreams, a few heart pounding scenes, & unexpectedly heart tugging moments in both lovely ways & awful ways. I teared up multiple times throughout this book over small spots of big love. I did have to put it down a couple of times to take a breath or 2 because I'm highly sensitive to triggers involving children, but there are clues that lead up to those parts so anyone else like me can either be prepared or choose to skip over them. They aren't overly detailed or gratuitous or anything, it's just me being HIGHLY sensitive to that specifically. I also put the book down toward the end, for almost a whole day, because I was so mad lol. But that is a sign of a very good book! And when it came to the last word, everything that happened really did fit & make sense to the storyline, if not my battered heart. Truly worth the bittersweet read.
The Man In Black by L.R. Liverpool Is about a man who decided to find a more fulling and exciting life in the West. Fennimore James lived a simple life with his family on the farm his father owned on the east coast, he only dreamed and read about the happenings of the wild west. After getting a idea to go there to fulfil his dreams of being like Billy the kid, he comes up with his moniker Simon Shaw and set off to search for The Evans gang. After a chance encounter with Red Evans himself in a salon His dreams have finally came true. Life on the road isn't what he had hoped for, the glitz and the glam of it fell short in his eyes. With Simons anxieties and withdrawn nature he doesn't quite fit in. As he settles into the life and starts to make friends with the others in the gang he finds himself in hot water as someone one is pursuing the gang taking them out one by one. He also finds himself falling for one of the gang members and uncovering a truly heinous past of how his lover was added to the group. There's so much to unpack on in this book. A lengthy read but well worth it. Full of deceit, love and old west action. L.R Liverpool keeps you guessing the entire book. Also the ending is absolutely gut-wrenching. I have a feeling this book will haunt me in my dreams.
I can say this was a very interesting read and in a very good way. Was I hesitant due to how many pages this book was...Yes. Was I happy I gave it a chance and turned the pages with an open mind... again Yes.
Western mystery, danger, gangs, intrigue with some romance, I did really enjoy this story. I felt like I was brought back in the western ages of time and the author did a great deal of storytelling and the attention to detail I also appreciated.
Fenimore James wants to explore and dream to more in life than where is at. With some money in his pocket he heads out West and wants to be known as Simon Shaw. When outlaws come with a gang run by Red Evans, Simon decides to join up....believing this is what he wants. When bloodshed is spilled, maybe being an outlaw is not what it may be cracked up to be. With someone out there deciding to kill gang members....everyone is suspicious. Who is committing these crimes? With Fenimore aka Simon Shaw also finds an attraction to another gang member....will they be safe or will it cost them in their own bloodshed....
I would definitely recommend this book....be patient....but a very good read all together.
The Man In Black By: L. R. Liverpool Review by: Susan Ratchford 5 Stars
Admittedly at first I was intimidated by the sheer size of this book, that all changed once I started to read The Man In Black. The visuals were stunning and the emotions were beyond gripping! I absolutely loved how she split the book into three segments. It helped with the overall length and flow of the story! It really helps you grasp the changes and struggles Fenimore James or should I say Simon Shaw goes through! The tone was also wonderful, it goes beyond being transported back to the old west. I truly felt like I was sitting around a campfire listening to him tell me his life story, both the ups and the downs. Almost like listening to stories from your grandparents! It was absolutely mesmerizing! I could picture every scene, every outfit, as if I was in the saloon! I will definitely be keeping an eye out for more books by Ms. Liverpool! I highly recommend giving this book a try!
This book is completely not in my wheel house at all. I first don't normally read historical romance or western. That said, this book was amazing. It is a long book but I loved it because it doesn't feel long while you are reading it. It is a quick read for its length so don't let that distract your from reading it. The way this book is written is what sells me so much on it. It takes turns that you don't see coming and has you on the edge of your seat the further you get into the story line. The intrigue that you enter when Simon starts to figure out his sexuality in a time period that it was not common and banned, brings you understanding of what it might have been like during that time. The way things unfold in this book kept my interest the whole way through. The self discovery, the feeling of being bored and complacent, and the will to do something dangerous is what had me hooked, line, and sinker. I am not one to really read westerns or even watch one but this one appealed to me because of the darker nature that was described in the book synopsis. The mystery in the book is there and it is a slow build. I feel like the first few chapters are a little slow but it completely picks up and you find yourself lost int he land of outlaws. The murder mystery will have you guessing every character that is in the story and there are a lot of them. It seems like it could be anyone and the mystery man in black that haunts Simon's dreams......complete plot twist because it not only gets you thinking in one direction while dropping seeds of doubt in other directions. I found myself not knowing what I thought I knew. This made the book so much, much more than just a story to read. It almost felt as if I was going into this time period and living it right along with the characters. If you have a weekend that you need a break consider this book!! You wont disappointed and don't let the length scare you off because after the first few chapters, the pages will just continue to turn without you realizing that you are turning them.
Set against the backdrop of the Wild West, "the man in black" is a thrilling tale of ambition, disillusionment, and self-discovery. The book combines elements of a traditional Western with psychological drama and LGBTQ+ representation, making it a unique addition to the genre. Through the protagonist Fenimore James who is an idealistic youth who reinvents himself as Simon Shaw the author explores themes of identity, morality, and desire amidst a whirlwind of violence and suspense.
The story begins with Fenimore James fleeing his mundane life in search of fame and glory as an outlaw. However, the romanticized vision of the West is quickly dismantled as he joins the infamous Red Evans gang. The author masterfully contrasts Fenimore's initial naivety with the gritty, brutal reality of life as a criminal.
The plot thickens with a mysterious figure systematically eliminating gang members, leaving cryptic messages scarified onto their bodies. The murders introduce a layer of psychological horror and intrigue, reminiscent of classic whodunit mysteries. The narrative tension escalates as paranoia grips the gang, with suspicions turning inward. The gang leader’s descent into madness adds another layer of complexity, highlighting the fragile dynamics of power and trust within the group.
Simultaneously, his personal journey unfolds. His burgeoning feelings for a fellow gang member, once a source of fear and hostility, mark a profound internal conflict. The exploration of Fenimore’s sexuality is handled with sensitivity, portraying his struggle for self-acceptance in a hyper-masculine and intolerant environment. Adding to the psychological weight is the recurring appearance of the enigmatic Man in Black in Fenimore’s dreams, a figure that seems to symbolize his inner fears and desires. It is though elusive and a fascinating narrative device. He blurs the line between reality and fantasy, serving as a manifestation of Fenimore's subconscious fears and desires.
The author’s prose is richly descriptive, painting vivid images of the Wild West while maintaining a tense, foreboding atmosphere. The action sequences are gritty and visceral, contrasting sharply with the introspective moments of Fenimore’s personal journey. The dialogue is authentic, capturing the rugged vernacular of the era, while the dream sequences are hauntingly poetic, adding a surreal quality to the narrative.
In conclusion, it is a gripping and thought-provoking book that pushes the boundaries of the Western genre. Its blend of psychological drama, murder mystery, and LGBTQ+ themes makes it a standout work. Despite minor pacing issues, the book's rich character development, thematic depth, and suspenseful narrative make it a worthwhile read.
This book is a must-read for fans of unconventional Westerns and character-driven stories that challenge traditional tropes. It is a tale of survival, identity, and the dark truths lurking behind dreams of glory.
L.R. Liverpool’s book The Man In Black was such an excellent read, I was so enthralled with all the excitement and mystery of this awesome book. I love the characters that are developed with such fine details, I grew to love and hate them. I was fearful of losing my favorite characters to the mysterious killer, and was cheering for the gift of love for our main character! When Fenimore James announces at the beginning of the novel that he was going to leave his quiet life as a farmer’s son I was intrigued by what path he was going to choose for his new life. When he took all of the money he had been working for and saving to take off and achieve his life’s dream of joining a gang of thieves I was a bit shocked. Fenimore proceeded to change his style of clothing dressing in all black, except a nice white dress shirt, all of which he had tailor-made for himself, I was worried he had spent his life earnings, but apparently, he still had plenty at the moment to travel on. Fenimore even went as far as changing his hair while awaiting the completion of his suit. Once Fenimore was all dressed to go, he changed his name to Simon Shaw, a more dastardly name to be feared. Then we went on his search to find a gang of thieves to join. In a bar during his travels, he heard talk of a fearful group of bandits called the Red Evans gang. Simon considered his options of going home to marry a local woman, even though he did not feel attracted to women like most of the men his age, or seeking out this gang and joining up. Simon decided his fate and off he went to find the Red Evans gang. In a surprising twist Simon not only met and befriended Red Evans himself in a big city bar, but he accidentally saved Red’s life. This led to Red inviting Simon to come and join his gang. You’ll have to read the story to follow along with the exciting and frightening events that Simon goes through as he grows to be a man who finds love in a place he never thought to look for it. Brandy Rymer 2/2023
If you are looking for a historical fiction thrill ride full of intrigue, mystery, murder and romance, then this is definitely for you.
The Man in Black by L.R. Liverpool follows Fenimore James as he leaves home to pursue and achieve his fantasy of becoming an outlaw. He succeeds by becoming Simon Shaw. The adventures he imagined take a dangerous turn when he joins the Red Evans gang, and they start getting murdered one by one. Through all of this, Shaw is still able to fall in love, but that can be just as dangerous.
This is a book that will stay with you well after you finish. The character development and world building were well done by the author. One stand out is how well the author handled the intricacies of self identification and sexuality with grace and sensitivity.
Once you get to part two, this novel is full of suspense, well-rounded, and flawed characters and will keep you turning the page until the end.
This was a really long journey, but I can say I enjoyed every second of it. I'm a really big fan of historical thrillers, so make it MM and I'm just here for it. This was such an interesting story and I was so invested in it. I just really enjoyed reading this one.
It pains me to say this after I was auto-approved by this publisher (I´m sorry), but I couldn´t finish this book. As a matter of fact, I don´t think I managed to read even 1/3 (I´ll try again someday, though, because I´m curious about what other reviewers say about the plot and probably my current mood also has a thing to do with leaving this unfinished).
Now, why did I drop this? There´s a bunch of things:
- I felt like there was too much pointless narration. Let me give a couple of examples. The story begins with Simon (not his name back then, but hell anyway) living with his parents in a farm, explaining a bit about his dream of being a gangster in the Wild West and move to the West. There´s a good few chapters while he manages to go there and find a gang to join. Which left me wondering, couldn´t we have started the first chapter with Simon already out in the field searching for a gang? Why not use just a few paragraphs or a couple of pages of explaining his background and then go straight to the gang plot? And here is the thing, not only plotwise I felt there were many unnecessary things, that also happened with descriptions or narration with more particular stuff. Like, right now I don´t remember what Simon was saying, but in a moment he began thinking about an aunt and what they did back in his hometown with her, and I was like, why is he telling us this? The aunt is not currently present, is not an important character as of now, why can´t you tell her story later if she ever appears? That annoyed me, maybe also because I prefer very straightforward narrations. I like to get to the point.
- Simon´s dreams of becoming a gangster were... very childish. It´s what I can imagine a kid these days wanting to be when they grow up. Not only his original plan of moving out to become a delinquent (cause he thought that was cool) seemed a bit strange, but he seemed truly taken aback when he realized that -surprise, surprise-, if you are a gangster you need to commit crimes, shoot weapons and be an awful person in quite a few ways. How naive is this character? I´d say too naive, at least at the beginning of the story (don´t know if it got better).
- There was stuff that happened in the story that looked like a stereotyped western movie... And very unlikely to happen in real life. An example? The gang was staying at a tavern and something happened (I think a waiter made a mistake). One of the gangsters got pissed, shoot someone in the foot and then continued eating his meal as if nothing happened. No sheriff came. No nothing. I was, once again, asking myself, what am I reading?
- The way Simon entered the gang is also very surrealist. He tripped and unintentionally saved the gang´s boss of being shot. Then, by chance, the boss accepted him in the gang because he did this "brave" thing of saving his life that way. This seemed taken strainght from a sitcom, but I didn´t mind because I like comedy. Although... Is this really a comedy? I don´t think so, not the way its narrated.
- The love story -or the part that I saw- was very... YA in a way? I mean, Simon and Monty don´t get along well at the begining. Why is that? I´m not sure. The narration mentions Simon finds Monty too arrogant evn before we actually see how annoying Monty is. Thus, they randomly don´t like each other. A bit later, when the train robbery happens, they randomly change their minds (Monty especially) and begin their friendships. Or well, maybe it was not so random: Simon planned something to escape the police and it worked, that was all it took to gain Monty´s respect (I say randomly because truly, the plan was not impressive at all).
I could say more but, overall, this book needs more editing. I read reviews saying it was hard to stop reading this story but, for me, the opposite happened: It was hard to pick the story and read. It drags for too long and, when the action happens, it´s not very believable.
I received a complimentary copy from Rowanvale Books and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The Man In Black by L.R. Liverpool beautifully showcases the transformative journey of Fennimore James and how his life was impacted by Red and his gang. Fenimore James was raised in a farming community, but he yearned for change. He was a dreamer and an adventurer at heart, imagining a life roaming through Arizona, mingling with the most dangerous outlaws. Seeking new adventures and a break from his dreary, albeit comfortable, lifestyle with his family, he alters his appearance and persona in search of excitement. Taking on the alias Simon "Si" Shaw, this is the story of how he "accidentally" becomes a member of an infamous gang and the tale of their escapades, both positive and negative.
The first chapter did everything a first chapter should do. It introduced the main character, established the story's foundation, and hooked the reader, making them want to know more. After reading the first few pages, I was completely engrossed in the story and eager for more! This book showcases lessons about the power of compassion. It is rich with themes of resilience, redemption, moral dilemmas, and revenge in a time of great upheaval. The plot is tightly woven, following Fennimore's transformation from a country boy to a gang member and a man who finds himself through his journey with his fellow gang members. The author's writing style is evocative, with detailed descriptions that bring the era to life. The characters are well-developed, each with struggles and growth, making the story engaging and emotionally resonant. As a reader, I found myself deeply invested in their journeys and the historical, moral, and social dynamics that shaped their experiences. What I love about the book is the author's ability to showcase a vivid and immersive historical setting, the complex social dynamics and ongoing struggles for justice. The book is informative, transformative, and compelling; the character development is another strong point, particularly Fennimore's evolution from a naive young man to taking up a role in a gang and becoming a more insightful man. I also love how the narrative explores the lives of other characters, Monty and Ford, for example, providing a broader perspective on their lives.
Don't be intimidated by the length - every page is worth reading. The content is not repetitive and is extremely entertaining, packed with valuable information that leads to an exciting story. The narrative also explores Simon's journey of self-discovery and his realization of his sexuality, which includes scenes of an adult nature. Readers sensitive to this subject should be aware of its presence in the book.
I rate this book a solid 5 out of 5 stars because of its vivid portrayal of the era, and the moral complexities faced by the characters provide a rich and thought-provoking experience. I recommend this book to readers who appreciate historical fiction, particularly Western novels. Thriller and mystery lovers would also enjoy this read.
L.R. Liverpool’s The Man in Black is a bold, genre-bending Western that straddles the dusty line between classic outlaw storytelling and psychological horror, with an unexpectedly tender and complex queer narrative at its heart.
At first glance, the premise seems familiar: a young dreamer, Fenimore James, runs away from home seeking fame and infamy as an outlaw in the American West. Reinventing himself as “Simon Shaw,” he imagines a life of dashing robberies and newspaper notoriety. But Liverpool quickly undercuts this fantasy. The West Fenimore finds is brutal, messy, and far from heroic. His initiation into the notorious Red Evans gang is a descent into violence, moral ambiguity, and escalating paranoia as gang members begin turning up dead—each body marked with cryptic symbols carved into their skin.
The killings themselves are haunting, but it’s the psychological weight they impose on the gang—and Fenimore in particular—that truly fuels the novel’s tension. Liverpool constructs a palpable atmosphere of dread, where every rider might be the next victim—or the killer. As suspicion infects the gang, Red Evans, the gang’s cold, calculating leader, starts spiraling into fear and mistrust. The question hangs over every chapter: is the killer a stranger, a spirit, or one of their own?
But what makes The Man in Black especially distinctive is Fenimore’s inner journey. As the external chaos intensifies, so does his internal disarray. The character arc is impressively layered: a boy who begins with childish fantasies of outlaw fame is forced to confront both the brutality of real violence and the unsettling stirrings of desire—for a fellow gang member he once loathed. Liverpool handles Fenimore’s questioning sexuality with sensitivity and depth, allowing his confusion, fear, and eventual acceptance to unfold gradually, with raw emotional authenticity. The slow-burn queer romance is not only believable, but heartbreakingly human—something rare in Western fiction.
Adding yet another layer to the novel is the titular Man in Black, a mysterious dream figure who haunts Fenimore’s sleep. These surreal, dreamlike sequences are disorienting and unnerving, drawing on gothic and horror tropes that push the novel beyond mere Western and into psychological thriller territory. Is the Man in Black a figment of Fenimore’s fracturing psyche? A warning? Or something even more sinister? Liverpool wisely refuses to give easy answers.
The prose is rich but accessible, with evocative descriptions of desolate plains, creaking saloons, and moonlit deserts. Liverpool has a gift for tone: the world feels grimy, violent, and alive, yet never overdone. The pacing is brisk, and the tension rarely falters. Dialogue is gritty and believable, often laced with grim humor or bitter resignation.
To say I was excited about this book is an understatement at least. My two favourite genres are historical fictions and thriller; this novel is branded a ‘historical thriller.’ It did not disappoint.
Brief Synopsis: Written in a somewhat memoir style, we follow one man’s life dramatically transform over the course of a year. He initially led a quiet, simple life as a farmer, but romanticised the outlaws he read about in newspapers. This led to drastic action; he changed his name, his appearance and left everything behind with the intention of a more adventurous life. What transpires is nothing short of horrific, as he gets lured in to a violent gang and we watch his slow descent into the darkness.
My Thoughts:
1. Fast-paced It is a lengthy novel, but the pace of the plot makes it a page-turner. There is SO much tension and suspense. Firstly, and most obviously, due to the “Man in Black” our main character dreams about as his gang members are murdered one by one. There is a constant worry of who is going to be next, and when. I was constantly questioning who the killer could be… I felt myself slowly going insane as I questioned every single character. The author did an outstanding job at world-building through the vivid descriptions, it overall added a very eerie atmosphere for the duration of the novel.
2. Covers important social and political topics One aspect of this novel that I enjoyed most was exploring a homosexual relationship within a historical context. Their love for one another put themselves in danger, in a time that was already incredibly more violent. *There is some smut, for my freaky friends ;-) With the novel being set in a historical context, that innately (and unfortunately) exposes us to the racism, homophobia and sexual assault that was blatantly accepted within those time-frames. They are, however, important topics to discuss, and we should shy away from the reality of what it once was.
3. Accurately portrays the human spirit
Another favourite aspect of mine was the character development. They accurately demonstrated the human spirit, how we are all flawed beings capable of both horrible and beautiful acts. I enjoyed watching the transformation of the main-character as he discovered his sense of self.
Overall an outstanding debut novel, cannot see what they write next!
Thank you to Rowanvale Publishing for providing me a copy of this book in exchange for my honest opinion.
There are so many reasons why I love this novel so much, and I really have no idea how to put into words all the feelings that I experienced while reading it!
The plot of The Man in Black tells the story of an ordinary guy who leaves his home, goes to the Wild West in pursuit of his dream and plunges into a bright and romantic life outside the law, only to soon come face to face with reality, finding himself drawn into an exciting maelstrom of events full of secrets and dangers, dilemmas and betrayals, growing suspense, mysticism, new discoveries about himself, complex and intricate feelings and truly deep, beautiful love. It sounds like a classic story about a journey, but you'll be surprised how many emotions it can give, how many complex and ambiguous life topics it raises, and how this journey will end for the protagonist and his new friends. The book leaves you with the strongest feelings and thoughts for a long time after reading it, and this seems to me the most important thing in any work.
Another thing that should be noted is the love with which the author wrote her creation and how much effort she put into it - this is felt in the reverent attention to the details of the era, in the recreation of it, in the sense of immersion in its free spirit and unique beauty, and in how carefully the characters are written: bright, original and at the same time incredibly realistic. The novel is written in a very rich, lively language with apt comparisons and metaphors and just wonderful humor. Despite the size, the novel did not seem to me drawn out at all - it takes the time to draw your attention to each of the most interesting topics and intertwine them with each other, and tells a story thought out to the smallest detail and built with mathematical precision, which makes it really impossible to put it down.
This is an incredibly tragic, but just as beautiful, full of various colors story about how a journey in pursuit of a naive dream, full of gains and losses, allows the hero to find the way to himself.
I express my deep gratitude to L.R. Liverpool for the discoveries that this trip allowed me to make, and sincerely wish success in future works, which I'll look forward to!
Some books surprise you in ways you don’t expect, and The msn in black is one of them. At first glance, it’s a classic western—young dreamer Fenimore James (who renames himself Simon Shaw) runs away to chase fame as a gunslinger and ends up joining the notorious Red Evans gang. But instead of the glamorous outlaw life he imagined, Fenimore finds himself in the middle of a bloody nightmare as gang members are hunted down one by one by a mysterious killer who leaves gruesome marks on their bodies.
The story is packed with suspense and grit, but what really got me was how deeply it delves into Fenimore’s head. He’s a mess—torn between his idealized vision of being an outlaw and the harsh, brutal reality he’s thrown into. On top of that, he’s grappling with feelings he doesn’t understand for another gang member, someone he used to despise. It’s raw, awkward, and painfully real, and you can’t help but root for him even when he’s in way over his head.
The mystery of the killer keeps the tension cranked up, but the book doesn’t just rely on plot twists. The writing does a great job of building the claustrophobic, paranoid atmosphere within the gang, especially as the leader starts suspecting one of his own men. And then there’s the eerie, almost supernatural element—the Man in Black, who haunts Fenimore’s dreams and leaves you wondering if he’s just a figment of Fenimore’s unraveling mind or something more sinister.
What I loved most is how this book isn’t afraid to mix genres. It’s a western at heart, but it’s also a murder mystery, a psychological thriller, and even a tender coming-of-age story. The romance is understated but powerful—it’s more about Fenimore coming to terms with himself than anything else.
If you’re expecting shootouts and saloons, you’ll get them, but this book is so much more. It’s messy, dark, and sometimes uncomfortably personal, but that’s what makes it so good. The Outlaw’s Shadow takes the myth of the Wild West and strips it down to something raw and human. Definitely worth the ride.
Fenimore James runs from home, dreaming of becoming a famous outlaw. Needing a name more befitting an outlaw, he changes his to Simon Shaw. Through luck, he saves Red Evans’s life and is invited to join his gang. He quickly learns that life as an outlaw is not all that glamorous. He finds it a bit terrifying when he learns someone is stalking Red’s gang. Members are being eliminated one after another, with mysterious clues left behind. If that is not bad enough, Fenimore is beginning to question his sexuality when he finds himself desiring one of the men who at first scared him. To matter worse, Red is becoming increasingly paranoid, thinking maybe the killer is one of his own.
What a fascinating story this turned out to be. Fenimore went from a boy to a man as he experienced violence, love, and the unknown. He struggled with what was expected of him and tried to find ways to do things without the casual disregard for life. The men in the gang were varied in their personalities and their abilities. Each man contributed something unique. Their backgrounds were often heart breaking. Fenimore (Simon) was not sure what his role was and was not sure he fit in. As he makes friends, he begins to feel as if he belongs but then the terror starts with the murders and the cryptic messages left behind. The suspense was cleverly done with no clue who was behind the killings. After, you can look back and see some clues but not while the action is going.
In short, this book is well worth your time. Do not be alarmed at the length, once you start, the pages will fly by. There are some triggers so be sure to look at them. The ending will make you cry even as you have seen love at its best. After all he has experienced, Fenimore has become a young man now and knows what he wants from life. Kudos to L.R. Liverpool for writing a book that will stay with you long after the last page has been read. I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book. All opinions are my own.
Fenimore James has always dreamed of leaving his boring farm life with his family and seeking out adventure with outlaw gangs, specifically the gang fronted by Red Evans. Adopting the moniker of Simon Shaw, Fenimore leaves home in search of the notorious gang, desperate to prove himself. By some twist of fate, he does indeed get his wish, but all too soon it becomes obvious that all is not what it seems among the Evans’ men, especially when they begin to be, begins to realise that he has complicated and distracting feelings for one of the gang members that he initially hated.
This was a surreal read, being both romantic and heartfelt, and creepy and tense in equal measure. The romance was a true slow-burn, giving you a chance to really learn the characters and what they truly were to each other. I thought that Liverpool nailed the complexity of the characters in this, with Evans and his gang being both deeply human and vulnerable individuals, whilst at the same time clearly being unhinged and terrible people. Fenimore, bless him, could be very naive at times, and I was struck several times by the want to reach through the book and smack him around the back of the head for being such an idiot. But I honestly think this fit his character perfectly. Red Evans and the world of his gang had been glorified and built up by Fenimore as something more than what they actually were. It was interesting to watch Fenimore learn the truth and even wrestle with his own morals and conscience. There was a creeping dread throughout this book that I thought Liverpool crafted masterfully, with me almost nervous to read the next page in case something had happened to one of my favourite characters. All in all, it was a very enjoyable read, although I was not prepared for the ending!!
I would recommend this to anyone who is looking for a thriller/mystery with elements of romance (MM). The characters are memorable and complex, and although it is a meaty read, it is well worth it.
Fenimore was the son of a farmer but always dreamed of becoming more. Having read a lot of articles about famous outlaws, Fenimore decided that it’s the life he always dreamed of. He set off on his adventure of finding a gang and becoming famous as well, changing his name to Simon Shaw.
Time goes by when he meets Red Evans and his gang. Simon is invited to join the gang and doesn’t hesitate. Quickly he learns that life as an outlaw is nothing like he imagined. He thought it was all adventure and riches, never taking into account it also included murders and life on the run. On top of that revelation, he also is questioning his sexuality. Simon started developing feelings for Red’s second in command, Monty.
Killings among the crew start happening and it is a mystery as to who is doing it. The killer is always one step ahead of the gang causing Red to start losing his marbles thinking that he has a rat within his own men. Simon starts regretting this whole thing but it’s too late to tuck tail and go home especially when he could be the next victim.
I have to say that this book has so much going on within that I am finding it difficult to put into words. I usually hate reading anything of the Western style but the other going ons in the synopsis intrigued me. Even though to me Westerns are boring, this one was not. There was romance, mystery, murder, and it delved into darker topics like racism, homophobia, possible rape etc. It was packed full to the brim with different topics.
My only issues with this book are that the author kept switching from first name basis to last name basis of the characters that I found it a bit difficult to keep track of who's who. The second issue is the book is divided into 3 parts and part 1 felt like it was dragging on too long before anything of importance happened. Once I started in part 2, the plot started to speed up and get more exciting.
Fenimore James is a young man who has grown up on a farm with his parents and siblings, he thrived on reading the paper and the stories of outlaws within them until one day he decides that he wants to be one too, so he packs some belongings and saddles up his mare Messy and waves goodbye to his family as he sets off to get a job, or at least that's what he tells them, his actual plan is to travel West and find an outlaw gang and become one of their most prolific members.
The first thing on the list is a new look, no more rustic clothing, a black velvet coat, white linen shirt and fancy trousers will do nicely, along with a haircut and a new name, Simon Shaw, a good, solid alias for an outlaw, however, he begins to have some anxieties as he sets out on the open road, will be he robbed, is he a good enough shot and how will he even find a gang to join?
As the days pass and he travels further West, he encounters a man with a similar dress sense to himself and after talking to him and drinking a sizeable amount of gin and returning from the bar with a round of whiskeys, he bumps into the one person he was looking for "Red Evans" and inadvertently saves his life in a clumsy way, but it gives him the in he needs.
As he settles down into life as an outlaw and seeing everything that comes with it, he begins to have a few misgivings, especially when the members begin to die and are left with calling cards of a mysterious murderer, not to mention the feelings he is working through towards someone who also terrified him and nightmares of a Man in Black. Will Fenimore be able to keep up with his life as an outlaw, will the mysterious Man in Black become a reality and will he be able to work out who the mysterious murderer is before it is too late? This is a suspenseful, western themed tale of discovery, danger and dastardly acts where paranoia reigns in the outlaw riddles Wild West.
The Man in Black is a historical, LGBT romance. Fenimore James is a young man who is bored in his life. He is a dreamer and believes he should be more, however, that more is running away from home to become an outlaw named Simon Shaw. Simon believed he was going to be able to rob his way through life living his best life. He joins a gang, but he comes to find out that joining this gang is no joke. This is a life that is a bloody one and there is a mystery person out there after the gang’s blood. Many of its members are being murdered. Simon has dreams at night where a “man in black” visits him. He doesn’t understand why this man is in his dreams but he thinks it is important. However, he is dealing with other “issues” as he starts to question his sexuality - at the beginning, he has always questioned this but was engaged to a woman. However, his feelings for men are too strong and he ends up trying on this experience with another gang member. He and his new “friend” start to try to help the gang figure out who could be hurting them, and the leader gets scared and starts to think it could be someone they are all close to. This is a thriller and has a good plot, but will Simon find the life he has always dreamed for himself, is the killer someone close to them, and will he figure out where he belongs amongst all of this? This was an interesting story. It has been a while since I read a historical setting piece, but the fact that it was a thriller made is worth the read. It was a little slow to start, but if you can get through the beginning it will be a good read. There are many exciting parts, the aspect of taking on a puzzle, outlaws, and it was nice seeing a man trying to figure out who he was. If you are looking for a different take on an LGBT story and love thrillers, this is the story for you.
The Man In Black by L.R. Liverpool is an extraordinary novel that will keep readers at the edge of their seats from beginning to end. It is an LGBT thriller that will take you on a rollercoaster of emotions as you follow the journey of naive dreamer Fenimore James, who runs away from home to become a famous outlaw named Simon Shaw.
Liverpool’s writing is captivating, and the plot is both thrilling and mysterious. As Fenimore joins the Red Evans gang, he finds himself in the middle of a strange and bloody game where his fellow gang members are being murdered one-by-one by a mysterious pursuer, leaving cryptic signs scarifying their bodies. This makes for a thrilling read that will keep you guessing until the very end.
What makes this book unique is the way Liverpool skillfully intertwines the central mystery with Fenimore's questioning of his own sexuality. As he finds himself falling in love with a fellow male gang member, Liverpool tackles the complexities of sexuality and identity with sensitivity and depth.
The author's portrayal of characters is equally impressive. The way she portrays Fenimore as a naive and vulnerable young man is particularly engaging, making the reader feel emotionally invested in his journey. The other members of the Red Evans gang are also expertly crafted, with each character having their own distinct personality that adds to the overall tension and intrigue of the story.
Overall, The Man In Black is a gripping, page-turning novel that will leave readers wanting more. The book's focus on LGBT themes is expertly woven into the narrative, making it a groundbreaking work in its genre. I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a thrilling and thought-provoking read.
When I requested the book I didn’t realize how huge it is! And I enjoyed it immensely!
I used to read a lot of Western Novels in my teens. I grew up in Germany and Karl May is a very known author of travel novels and I devoured everything he wrote with a Wild West Setting. This book has not much more than the setting in common, but it gave me the same vibes, the same feelings. It made me quite nostalgic and it played a huge part in why I liked it that much.
I’ll keep the plot vague because I think it is best to be enjoyed without too much knowing beforehand. I tend to go in books blind anyways, but I know many people don’t.
The book is written in Simon's POV and begins as he sets out to find and follow an outlaw. He rambles a lot. And that is the charm of the book. It’s like he tells his tale and whenever he remembers something trivial he just tells that as well. Even though it’s not necessary for the plot per se, it gives the book this special vibe.
He eventually finds the band of outlaws and the story continues right out of a Wild Western movie. It is action packed but also everyday life. Many details make it easy to imagine the setting. Some things were a bit over the top, but enjoyable nonetheless.
The romance was amazing! I knew it featured romance of course, but it expected something different and it took a while for it to get there. Simon forms a bond with all the outlaws, but he gets closer to one than to the others. It also wasn’t the main focus of the story. But Simon needed it to find himself and grow. His eyes got opened up very wide as he realized the world he lived in.
Fenimore James leads an idyllic life with his family on the farm but has big dreams of running away in search for adventure. He has read all about the famous outlaws in the newspapers, books, and wanted posters. The life of an outlaw is a glamour job for him so away he runs to find a group of outlaws to get in with and live their wild and lawless lifestyle. First, he must ride away on Messy from his small hometown, so away he goes. Fenimore decides that he needs to change his name as well and becomes Simon Shaw. Shaw buys new clothes and finds a meal. He quietly asks around as to where the Red Evans gang can be found so as “not to run into them” but reality is that is exactly who he is looking for! The life of an outlaw is not all the glamour that he thought it would be as one by one, gang members are being killed and clues left on their bodies. On top of that bit of stress, Simon is having feelings that he cannot understand for a fellow gang member, another male and not the typical floozie that he would engage in sex with. What is going on? He is haunted by dreams of a man in black and now his boss or gang leader is starting to suspect one of their own of killing! Will this end and will Fenimore return home? Great cast of characters and the setting is done very well. I can picture myself in some of these old western towns decrepit or rich and even find myself a bit saddle sore after reading about their time in the saddle. Great book!! It was a bit on the long side but definitely worth the time to read!
I don't often write book reviews, but this is one of those times when I can't keep silence. This book made a big impression on me because I'm a big fan of the Wild West. The richness of the descriptions, the attention to details won me over. The author arranges the picture in such a way that it seems like you are watching a movie. The movie you want to stay in. The second distinguishing feature that bribed me, I would call the work with the characters. There are just a bunch of them! For every taste and they all are so different. Some are deceptively kind and charismatic, others are charming from the first lines. Some remain true to their line to the end, while others can drag you into their snares and fool you. The most sympathetic, of course, is the main character. Through his eyes we look at this world and together we taste gangster romance of the Old West. The taste is not what it seems. Instead of book adventures of hard-boiled bandits, a bitter reality, bumps and pain are waiting for us. Detective line is at the highest level. I watched it with bated breath, and some moments just didn't let go. I read and did not notice the world around! Same as when it comes to romantic scenes. The love line unfolds slowly, reverently, exposing the most sincere feelings. It will not do without hot scenes, which are a pleasure to savor in this entourage. I was left with the most pleasant feelings after reading. If you love thrillers and romance, this is a must read.