This is not a full review. I read through the beginning of all 300 SPFBO9 contest entries. This was a book I wanted to read more of.
A young student of sorcery is bullied by a group of rowdy youths who dump him in a catapult to see if he can fly in this YA fantasy.
This is off to an active start. For me, there was a kind of comedy in the oversized bullying of our young sorcerer.
It had a Harry Potter quality to it in the way his ogrish tormentor bundles him out of the market with a hood over his head and dumps him in a disused catapult.
There’s no real sense of danger to it, because our MC mostly just takes his licks, but there’s something believably youthful about that. They’re not REALLY going to launch him in a catapult, are they?
The narrative isn’t in a rush. Our MC takes interest in a market stall of carved figures, buying a protector carving, much to his own surprise. There are other diversions in the action to explain setting details. This adds good context to the story.
The is perhaps a little clunky at times, but it is otherwise clear, avoids being overwritten, and competently moves the story along. The dialogue is also good and to the point.
It introduces its characters well and puts them in motion. This seems like an engaging read, and I recommend it especially for a young audience. 1st in a series off to a competent start! I’m in.