Okay so...let me start by saying that I am normally a hug fan of Fae, Mysteries and Enemies to lover's style books. This has all three which is why I'm really sad I didn't like it more.
The plot has great potential, that I don't feel was utilized to its fullest. I kept feeling that something was missing or forgotten about.
The pacing was ok...the first page had me so hooked and I kept chasing that excitement and at 58% I was still waiting for it again. While the writing is imaginative and thoughtful at times, it lacked something I like to call sparkle :)
The characters left much to be desired, none stood out and screamed "I am your STAR!!!" I was hoping and praying that there would be a moment when I would feel something for these people, but that was not meant to be.
Zia was likable when I began reading and even her actions made me think, why? how stupid? I still thought okay she's young and inexperienced keep that in mind. It did not help or get better.
Asher is your typical asshole/bully, look only at me persona going on, it wasn't fun. There are many books with the main love interest having this type of character and yet there is always something beneath the surface that shows there is more to them, and they aren't so bad.
I only experienced this once in the whole book, not for the lack of trying.
I also wanted to see more of the others. You know they are there and yet barley get to know them so when they make decisions, you're left wondering why they did that.
Like I said there is so much potential and hopefully the next book will dive more into character development, hopefully this help with the detached feelings I have.
Thank you, Violet E.C for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review :) :) :)