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From Sunset Park, With Love #2

The Rachel Experiment

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Who knew that one night out would change everything?

As a financial analyst, Rachel Bai is more comfortable with numbers than people. When her boss promotes her to head a team in San Francisco, his message is clear—she has one year to build a successful team and become an effective leader. Rachel sets out to discover how to be more comfortable interacting with people, but a drunken night meant for research results in a mechanical bull ride and a one-night stand with a sexy stranger—definitely not part of her plan.

Attorney Luke Trudeau is intrigued by the mysterious woman who’s determined to put their night together firmly in her rearview mirror. So when Luke sees Rachel again, he proposes a deal: he’ll smooth out her rough social edges and teach her to charm clients if she’ll help him devise a financial plan to open his own practice.

It seems like a win-win, but Luke breaks the rules by falling in love. Can he convince Rachel that what they have is real and, when it comes to love, there are no set rules?

293 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 16, 2023

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Lisa Lin

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Lisa has been an avid romance reader and fan since she read her first Nora Roberts novel at the age of 13 after wandering the aisles of her local bookstore. Lisa loves that romance has the power to inspire, and believes that HEAs are for everyone.

Lisa writes light contemporary romantic comedies with a liberal dash of snark and banter. She enjoys delving into the complexity of Asian and immigrant family experiences, and celebrates female friendships in her trademark dry, witty style. As an Asian-American author writing own voices Asian American stories, Lisa hopes that her books will show the diversity of the Asian-American experience, and the importance of every reader being able to see themselves represented on the page.

Having grown up in Pennsylvania and helping out at her parents’ restaurant, Lisa has never bothered to learn to cook. She has two liberal arts undergraduate degrees and a J.D, and in her former life she was an intern, then Legislative Assistant for a PA State Representative. She also worked as a paralegal at a boutique law firm. Lisa is a politics junkie (don’t get her started on the wonder that is The West Wing!), indulges in naps whenever possible, and believes Netflixing in her pajamas and ordering take out qualifies as the perfect weekend.

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Profile Image for Madison Warner Fairbanks.
3,580 reviews506 followers
May 20, 2023
The Rachel Experiment by Lisa Lin
From Sunset Park, With Love series #2. Contemporary romance. Own voice / Asian. Can be read as a stand-alone.
Rachel Bai is a financial analyst and uniquely suited for the job. She is good with numbers and lacking in social skills. After meeting attorney Luke Trudeau for an out-of-character night of passion, she contracts with him to exchange a business plan for him, with him teaching her to better manage social engagement. Her new job is on the line. She needs to manage a team and without Luke, she feels she will fail.

🎧 I listened to an audiobook version narrated by Kat Riley. There were distinct voices for Rachel and Luke, the latter with an accent of a southern drawl and twang. The performance has the two play off each other with attraction and determination and hints of humor. I found the best speed for this was 1.4 which about my usual at the moment. The added family for both sides lends itself to their nationalities, and regional norms with drama and support no matter the differences.

I admired Rachel for making up her mind to learn to socialize and be a success as her job. She learns and changes her behavior even when setbacks left her discouraged. Her trying to math her way into riding a mechanical bull is adorable.

I received a copy of this from NetGalley and Dreamscape Media.
1,036 reviews87 followers
May 21, 2023
Rachel is awkward and has poor people skills. In preparation for her new promotion, Luke is mentoring Rachel on how to properly interact with people. In exchange, Rachel is helping Luke look into opening his own law firm. Of course, after spending some time together, sparks started to fly.

This was a bit of a letdown. I enjoyed the first novel in this series. However, this one was just okay. It didn't offer anything new and nothing stood out. Also, the story doesn't feel as genuine as it could have. Overall, just an okay read.

*Read for AAPI month*

***Thank you to NetGalley, Lisa Lin, and Dreamscape Media for graciously sending me the audiobook to review. As always, all thoughts are my own.***
Profile Image for Bethany (Beautifully Bookish Bethany).
2,873 reviews4,718 followers
December 14, 2023
3.5 stars rounded up

This was cute! A contemporary romance between a neurodivergent Chinese woman and the white guy she hooked up with and never expected to see again...

Rachel struggles with social skills but she's usually great at her job as a financial analyst. But now, she's managing a team and needs to be better. When she unexpectedly runs into attorney Luke Trudeau after a one night stand, they end up helping each other out. He teaches her social skills and she helps him with the nuts and bolts of starting his own firm. Except that it becomes more than just friendship...

The one night stand at the beginning was a little abrupt, but I ended up really enjoying this. Rachel is awkward but charming and I like how the book deals with cross-cultural relationships as they meet and interact with each other's families. Not a new favorite for me, but a solid romance. I received an audio review copy of this book from Libro.FM. All opinions are my own.
Profile Image for Shannon.
8,918 reviews442 followers
May 15, 2023
Liked but didn't love this interracial romance that sees a socially awkward Asian American lawyer, Rachel taking a promotion across the country where she has to get out of her comfort zone and interact more with people than she's used to. Throw in a hot one night stand to kick off this 'new Rachel' and she ends up falling for the Texas transplant who helps her with her 'experiment.'

Cute but I was hoping for a little more emotional depth and chemistry between the two MCs if I'm completely honest. This one won't be super memorable for me unfortunately. Many thanks to @librofm for an ALC in exchange for my honest review! There were some fun cameos from the previous book but it definitely does work as a standalone. For fans of Jayci Lee or Jackie Lau.
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122 reviews52 followers
December 29, 2023
This began with a hot scene that kept me interested till the end
But my interest was not rewarded though
My whetted appetite was not satisfied

Anyway I had pleasant laughable moments
But I think the FMC was too robotic and I just didn’t care much for her

It was an okay read
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2,808 reviews248 followers
May 20, 2023
Rachel Bai, a financial analyst, is thrust into a leadership role where she must navigate the complexities of team dynamics and interpersonal relationships. The story takes an unexpected turn when a night of research leads to a passionate encounter with a stranger, Luke Trudeau, an attorney.
I was pleasantly surprised by this book. The dual point of view and excellent narration added depth to the story, making it both steamy and heartfelt. The romance is a slow burn, allowing for emotional growth and self-discovery. While not everyone may connect with this story , I appreciated going into it without expectations, simply immersing myself in a contemporary romance filled with ups and downs and decisions that are not easy to take when it comes to Rachel and what she wants from her life. Luke is a sweetheart and his family are surely something else. They made me laugh a few times.

If you're a fan of sizzling chemistry and a journey of personal transformation, this book is for you!
Profile Image for Brianna Hart.
488 reviews62 followers
May 24, 2023
I liked the premise of this book but I think the audio part took away from it. I really didn’t the male side of the story and it kind of wrecked a little bit of it. The cultural differences were cute but also felt a little exaggerated. Overall, the love story was cute but it was just okay.

🌀Synopsis
Rachel just moved for work. She’s got something to prove and a lot to learn to get there. Determined to make a good start for herself she immediately steps out of her comfort zone. She meets Justin at a bar and after a drink and conversation, she decides to have a one night stand.
Or at least that’s what she thought. Until a get together with some friends when she realizes he’s also friends with her friends. The two end up striking up a business deal where he helps her become more personable and she helps him set up his own business.
Over the course of their work, the two develop feelings for each other. They overcome some cultural differences to figure out a way to have a good relationship.
Profile Image for Meg (reading_meg).
494 reviews1 follower
May 23, 2023
Thank you to Netgalley and Dreamscape Media for the ALC!

- I really struggled with this one. The main character is a self described awkward turtle, but in reality she seems to be completely oblivious to social rules. It’s to the point where it seems like she’s neurodivergent, but that’s never addressed either? The awkwardness seeps into the narration, and parts of it felt overly formal. With a romance, overly formal language can really make me feel distanced from the characters.
- the conflict late in the book felt pretty contrived and frustrating. It also didn’t show much growth on the part of either of the MCs.
- the MMC is from Texas, and I was not a fan of the narrator’s accent. It often took me out of the book.
- there’s an attempt to address the challenges that can come up in interracial relationships, but it didn’t feel like it went deep enough. A lot of throwaway comments were made about cultural differences, but I wanted to see more of how they dealt with that together. The chopstick situation is an example of an issue that was brought up but never developed upon.
Profile Image for Melissa Sliger.
284 reviews
June 21, 2023
Thanks NetGalley for this free book in exchange for a fair and honest review.

Okay imagine that Spanish Love Deception and The Kiss Quotient had a less spicy baby written by someone more like Sarah Adams. I don’t think this book is for everyone, however I thought it was delightful.

Rachel was a socially awkward financial analyst who moves across the county for a promotion. She is nervous because this job is more “social” and on the night before her first day she ends up at a Texas style bar. She meets Luke, a southern charmer who is the best kind of golden retriever. They have a one night stand, and Rachel leaves hoping to never see him again.

They end up meeting up again, and decide they both can help each other. Luke will help her socially, and she can help him set up his own business. They grow close, and he attends her sisters wedding with her.

I was curious if our FMC was neurodivergent, but it was never mentioned. They played it off as social awkward, but the lack of picking up on any social cues seems like more. I think mentioning she was neurodivergent would have solidified the fifth star for me. It at times felt emotionless but overall a super adorable quick read.

Stars: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
Spice: 🌶️
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2,337 reviews40 followers
May 26, 2023
This rom com hits all the right notes for those of us who have ever felt like they are not enough! I love that this author wrote such a fun rom com while delivering such an impactful message that you are enough and you need to believe in yourself so others can see you for who you are as well! The author weaves such a wonderful cast of characters to be close friends, lovers, family and adversaries that you forget you are reading a book and want to take up the gauntlet to help assist the main character yourself! I relate to Rachel in so many ways as I've often walked in her shoes feeling like I'm not enough for friendships, relationships and whatnot. However, as with Rachel, I realized that I am enough and the people around me need to accept me or move on. Fortunately, I didn't have to navigate this issue while also trying to navigate cultural differences like Rachel did. I love that the author points out the differences between cultures and made that a background for her book. The author's humor is wonderful and sets the perfect tone for the story. I can't wait for the next book to be available on audiobook as this series is definitely on my must listen list as the narrator does a fantastic job of bringing the characters to life and enhancing the author's words! Now I need to head off to check in with my squad to make sure no one needs "shovels and tarps!" LOL, read the book and you'll understand that reference! It is worth the time to read the book for the entertainment and friendship bonding it promotes alone!
Profile Image for Cassandra Mitchell.
242 reviews92 followers
May 23, 2023
The Rachel Experiment by Lisa Lin
4/5 Stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

•••Spoiler free review below•••

I really enjoyed the first book in this series earlier this year and I was excited to read more from this author. We saw very little of Rachel in The Year of Cecily so her story definitely can be read as a standalone but I highly recommend reading The Year of Cecily first. Both of these stories are enjoyable romance reads with great plots and lovable characters. I will say I definitely didn't relate as much to Rachel and her socially awkward no filter but I did really enjoy our MMC, Luke, and their story was a very enjoyable read.

Read this book if you like:
- family focused romance
- young professionals in love
- southern charm
- socially awkward FMC who is trying her best
- soup

The Rachel Experiment was released last week and if it's not already on your tbr, it should be!
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Special thanks to Dreamscape Media for sharing a free copy with me in exchange for my honest opinions.

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Profile Image for A_Stylish_Bookworm.
2,446 reviews125 followers
May 29, 2023
Thank you @tulepublishing @dreamscape_media @netgalley for a copy of this interracial romance. This is the 2nd book in the series and I didn't read the first and it was a perfect read as a stand alone.

This story is about Rachel, who is moving to San Francisco, is a bit socially awkward and strikes a deal with Luke to help his business if he helps her be better at social settings.

The story was cute and the narration had distinct voices for the two characters. I enjoyed seeing Rachel's growth and finally standing up to her family. The love story between Luke and Rachel was okay but nothing too memorable.
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744 reviews10 followers
September 26, 2023
As soon as I found out that book 2 was going to be Rachel and Luke, I was sold!

We meet both Rachel and Luke in book 1 of From Sunset Park Series by Lisa Lin, Year of Cecily, and get their story in this book, book 2, The Rachel Experiment. We get a sense that Rachel has some quirks in book 1, but in book 2 we get to delve inside her head - I think many readers will find her relatable in some way. Rachel struggles to socialize as she overthinks everything and then overanalyze it all on the back end. Her new job depends on it and she enlists the help of Luke, one of those guys who puts everyone at ease in an instant.

I love how well Luke saw Rachel. He didn’t try to change her or fight her desire to change, but supported her in her journey. Their relationship was adorable and I was cheering for them the entire way.

Cannot wait for more in this series and I know who is next!!
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379 reviews66 followers
July 2, 2023
A cute, quick romance. I enjoyed the autistic asian american main character.

i would have liked to see more of Luke. his character lacked just a little for me, but i did appreciate how respectful and understanding he was even called out on privilege.
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2,384 reviews1,289 followers
August 26, 2023
Matter of fact and introverted financial planner Rachel discover she's being transferred to California, and management, where she'll be expected to up her networking and leadership skills. Except Rachel is a self-described awkward turtle who would much rather focus on her work, not chit chat. But, new coast, new chance to break out of her shell right? Add a hot as hell one night stand to the mix and Rachel is sure she's on her way to change, until she runs into the man who rocked her world and who she never expected to see again.

Luke Trudeau is the picture of a white, privileged Texas good boy who loves his mama, shines like a star, and is extroverted as all heck, plus a successful lawyer to boot. but also a lawyer who wants to put out his own shingle. Luke strikes up a deal with Rachel-she'll advise him financially and he'll help her with her people skills (all while keeping their clothes firmly ON, friends only). But, meddling friends and family and coworkers seem intent that neither Luke nor Rachel can "just be friends," especially not with the way they seem perfect for each other.

This was sweet, and I appreciated seeing Rachel be embraced by new friends and realizing she's perfectly loveable as she is, even if she can work on not being so apologetic for herself.

Overall, I did want more emotion, some more stakes. The writing was very rational, and the third act break felt a little lopsided because the characters were communicating so well just before. Also, a lot of the text is explain-y and sometimes I wish an editor would ask and edit out some minor things like clothing details, minute descriptions of ordered foods, etc. I will also say I wanted another steamy scene or two because it was really just the one night stand, a little tension, and then a fade to black.

THAT SAID i enjoyed the voice of this upcoming author very much. The family dynamics between Rachel, her bridezilla little sister, and parents was well explored.

Content Notes: parental and sibling fighting

**I am friends with the author online, this review is from a copy i checked out from the library
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Profile Image for Anna DeBruyne.
273 reviews10 followers
May 19, 2023
Rachel Bai is a financial analyst who is not the best with dealing with people. She always seems to tense up or get nervous. She gets the opportunity to move to San Francisco and build her own team or else she may not have a job. It is the perfect segue to the promotion that she has been wanting. Her friend, Cecily, lives. in San Francisco now and she is looking forward to having a friend there. The first night in her new apartment, she ventures out to a local bar and meets a sexy-southern guy from Texas, Luke, who also is new there. Their one night hookup was mind-blowing but Rachel knows she will never see him again...that is until she runs into him at a friends birthday party, he propositions her. He will help her not be so awkward around people and she will give him financial assistance for him to open his own law practice.

I loved this one so much better than The Year of Cecily!! The characters flowed better, and I think that Luke is the perfect southern gentleman. I loved learning about the different cultural aspects when their families met and thought that was realistic. Seeing Rachel come out of her shell and be more social was great and I definitely think the character development was there. The breakup during the last part was trivial. I think it was silly that Luke didn't really understand what happened and what he did wrong. Also loved seeing Cecily and am hoping for one more book for Adrienne, the third girl in the story.

Profile Image for Leah M.
1,730 reviews64 followers
May 30, 2023
Thank you to libro.fm for providing me with an ALC of this audiobook. I am providing my honest opinion voluntarily.

This one looked like a good story, somewhere along the lines of a Hallmarked-up version of The Kiss Quotient. Unfortunately, it didn't live up to the hype I had built up in my head.

The audiobook narration was fantastic, done by Kat Riley, who managed completely different voices and even accents for Rachel and Luke, even affecting a Texas twang for Luke.

And while the story starts out intriguing, with a drunken night leading to a bull ride and a one-night stand between Rachel and Luke, which then turns into a mutually beneficial agreement between them: Luke will help Rachel learn some much-needed social skills to manage her social awkwardness, while Rachel will help Luke with her financial analyst skills, so that he can branch out and open his own office.

But it got rather boring quickly. And when it came to the big argument/miscommunication that always happens in romance novels, I had trouble understanding why they stopped being together. The reasoning didn't make sense to me at all, and it was a total letdown. Ultimately, this book wasn't a great one for me.
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3,206 reviews169 followers
May 27, 2023
Quick Summary: A hilariously funny multicultural rom-com

My Review: The Rachel Experiment by Lisa Lin is book two in the From Sunset Park, With Love series. It is a fresh, contemporary love story with a boatload of family drama.

What I Loved About This Book:

- I loved the playful banter that existed between the leads. They had such a relaxed vibe and a beautiful connection.

- I loved that the author gave a colorful depiction of the family dynamics of both characters.

- I loved that the challenges and conflicts were realistic. It made the story that much more relatable.

- I loved that Rachel and Luke were imperfect. I could appreciate that they were each on journeys of growth.

My Final Say: I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It was so lovely and very entertaining. Readers who want realistic fiction featuring an interracial couple will love this book.

Rating: 4/5
Recommend: Yes
Audience: A
Re-read: Yes
Keeper: Yes

Thanks to the author, to Dreamscape Media, and to NetGalley for granting access to this title in exchange for an honest review. The words I have shared are my own thoughts and opinions.
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214 reviews23 followers
August 5, 2023
DNF @ 13%

I’m sad that I had to DNf this one. I was really excited by the premise, the poc characters, and the cover. However, the narrator threw me off for this book.

The male narrator was from Texas. I’m guessing in order for the whole Texas location to be believable, the male narrator picked up an accent (that was awful and nowhere near a Texas accent). It was very obliviously fake. It would have been better if the narrator didn’t adopt an accent at all honestly.

Me being from the south, I know what a southern dialect sounds like. This was awful for me to try to put myself through. I’m hoping to read a physical copy, since I was really excited about this read.
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316 reviews9 followers
May 31, 2023
This meetcute friends-to lovers story was a breath of fresh air. Rachel is an awkward, highly educated, social disaster. Along came Luke. Culturally different. He’s a Texan with old fashioned ideals, extroverted and successful. She is from a traditional Asian family that he won over doing the Macarena at a wedding reception.
I listened to the Audiobook version read by Kay Riley. Pronunciation was a little slow or drawn out. Overall this book was one I didn’t want to stop listening to because I needed to know what happens next.
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105 reviews1 follower
June 10, 2023
Read this on a whim and really enjoyed it.
Rachel and Luke, complete opposites who use their skills and knowledge to help one another in their chosen professions.
I liked the balance of characters and how each of them explored their expertise and supported one another in their goals & aspirations.
I appreciated how open, kind, and genuine they were. Respecting and admiring their differences beyond just tolerating them.

I laughed out loud a few times (this rarely happens!)

Nice, easy read. Story line made sense. Characters contributed to the plot.
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Profile Image for Maria.
3,201 reviews101 followers
May 30, 2023
Cute and entertaining romance novel between Rachel, a social awkward Asian woman, and Luke, a very charismatic and charming Texan. Cue all the embarrassing social gaffes because of not being about to read the room. Add in the bridezilla sister and her squad of friends and you get some laugh out loud moments that also make you cringe a little. Rachel really grows throughout the book, and you slowly see her stand up for herself. My favorite part is the epilogue and the highlighted differences between Asian and American social gatherings. Light enough for a vacation read but not too light that there is no substance to the story.

I received a copy from #NetGalley for an honest review.
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351 reviews5 followers
March 26, 2025
Rachel, baby I'm so sorry. As a fellow Financial Analyst I really wanted to root for you, but I found myself not caring AT. ALL. Didn't care for FMC, didn't care for MMC, didn't care for the alleged romance. Just duds all around. I knew it was game over after I read my fav trope (MMC taking care of sick FMC) and wasn't moved in the slightest.
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256 reviews5 followers
August 26, 2023
Adorable! Just another rom-com. Rachel a socially struggling business woman gets set to Cali for a promotion but needs to work with a group of people. She meets Luke and despite their interesting beginning they start working together and of course fall in love
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310 reviews5 followers
May 3, 2023
Corny and unoriginal.
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109 reviews12 followers
May 29, 2023
I really wanted to like this but it just fell flat for me and I had a hard time really getting drawn in.

Thank you NetGalley for the opportunity to experience this eARC!
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261 reviews1 follower
June 9, 2023
I struggled to stay focused, and almost DNFd more than once.

2.5 ⭐️, rounded up


Thanks to #NetGalley and the publisher for early access to this audiobook in exchange for an honest review.
Profile Image for Bethany.
401 reviews28 followers
January 23, 2024
3 stars

This review is based on the published Kindle edition of this book because I was slow off the mark reading the ARC NetGalley provided for free. I am not being paid to review this book and what I write here is my own opinion. My rating scale is below.

In many ways I was reminded of Helen Hoang's The Kiss Quotient. That is no bad thing. That said, The Rachel Experiment varied from Hoang's standard in a number of ways which kept it from feeling like I was reading a knock-off quickly written to cash in on a publishing trend. Rachel and Stella are different people, even though they have similar jobs and similar difficulties interacting with others. For Stella it's at least partially due to her autism, but Rachel is given no diagnosis in text, and so as a reader who prefers not to armchair diagnose I assumed she simply had not developed any interpersonal skills over the course of her life. If I was mistaken in doing so, I apologize for my oversight. Both of them make arrangements with good-looking, charming men to help them improve their inter-personal interactions, though Stella did so to make changes in her personal life and Rachel to make changes in her professional life.

Which brings me to my first point. One of the things I particularly liked about The Rachel Experiment was that, although Rachel was asked/told to change her behavior in order for people to like her more, just about everyone agreed it was stupid and unfair that as a woman from a marginalized people, she had to go to the extra effort to fit in and be likable in ways a white man in her position would not be expected to. Related to that is the number of times Luke (the lead) is told in various ways that he doesn't seem to appreciate how easily everything comes to him because of his privileged status as a cis white man from a comfortable background. Instances of inequity that can show up in a professional workforce are explicitly named, and I was delighted.

Something else I liked about this book was Lin's ability to show the reader how important Rachel's work is to her, rather than simply handwaving that's she's very, very good at it, as many writers might do. As Ms Lin is a J.D., I was not surprised by the details of the legal profession that worked their way into the text, making the numerous attorney characters in the story feel more real, but the scenes with Rachel at work and interacting with colleagues also added a great deal (I feel) to the book. That said, Rachel's friends and Luke's family felt pretty peripheral, despite how often they appeared in the narrative (Luke's mother was shorthanded as a Steel Magnolia, his father wasn't given much personality at all, and Rachel's friends kind of boiled down to "the engaged one from the last book," and "the one who will probably be the lead in the next book" ), but I think Lin did a fine job humanizing Rachel's family (especially her mother) and making them more complex than they were initially presented. It was a nice touch that the reader got to appreciate more familial nuance as Rachel learned to recognize and interpret social cues more readily. Good writing!

Ultimately, this is a good book, and I feel confident recommending it.

rating scale
1 star - I was barely able to finish it. I didn't like it.
2 stars - It was okay. I didn't dislike it.
3 stars - It was interesting. I liked it.
4 stars - It was excellent. I really liked it.
5 stars - It was extraordinary. I really hope the author wrote more things.
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789 reviews50 followers
May 15, 2023
Rachel Bai is very good at her job as a financial analyst. She loves the work, especially when she doesn’t have to interact with other people. Her company offers her an opportunity for advancement which means a cross country move to the San Francisco office (bonus, the move gets her away from her wedding obsessed younger sister), and a six month trial period managing a team of people (major downside, anxiety inducing). Her first weekend in San Francisco, Rachel goes to a bar where she meets and has a one night stand with Luke, a lawyer. She and Luke meet again at a mutual friend’s wedding where they agree to a trade – socializing lessons for her, and help building a business plan for him. Naturally having agreed to a totally professional, clothes on relationship, they both catch feelings.

I’m having this weird quandary where I enjoy Lisa Lin’s writing 85% of the time, but she makes some big choices that I really don’t like. They aren’t objectionable choices (like giving a character an evil ex who had an abortion backstory), but they still kick me out of the book. I noped out of The Year of Cecily when Jeffrey kept chastising Cecily for being mad at him for entirely reasonable things. I really liked The Rachel Experiment right up until the third act break-up when Luke’s actions and understanding of the situation felt like a sudden left turn.

Let me get into the good stuff. I loved Rachel. She’s so earnest and a little overwhelmed, but when she operates in her areas of competency, she moves with confidence. The Rachel Experiment is about Rachel developing that confidence in her relationships – with her co-workers, her friends, her family and with Luke. Luke needs to back up his confidence with planning and attention to detail. The help they provide to each other is real and useful. I loved their relationship and the way they supported each other as they grew. I loved the friendship Rachel built with Cecily and Adrienne, and the team she built with her co-workers.

I don’t automatically object to a third act breakup, but the way this one came about felt out of character for Luke. Luke is the weak link in the book in general. But it felt odd that the person with the people skills was so oblivious in a critical moment. And just as a personal peeve, I am from Texas and I think more fictional Texans say ma’am outside of customer service situations than actual living contemporary Texans. In fact, the only person I’ve heard use ma’am in non-commercial interactions is from California.

I received this as an advance reader copy from the author. My opinions are my own, freely and honestly given.
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