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The Brotherhood: Origins #1

What a Duke Desires

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To win a prize that will redeem his shattered reputation, the Duke of Burville must masquerade as a commoner…

Wentworth Rawley might be a duke, but his title means nothing after he voted against his peers and in favor of the Reform Act…mere months after being caught in an extraordinarily compromising position with an older lover at a public party. Isolated and alone, Wentworth would do anything to be accepted by the ton again.

But when the opportunity to regain everything he’s lost falls into his lap, he has to choose between the ton and the one man who has stood by him through the worst of times…the man he secretly loves…his valet, Jack.

Jack Cotton rose from nothing to be the right-hand man of London’s most notorious duke. He owes Wentworth everything, so when Wentworth turns to him for help with the strange quest that will restore him to his rightful place in society, Jack throws everything he has into the task.

Everything including his heart.

But as desperately as Jack loves Wentworth, he cannot declare that love. Wentworth is a duke, and the place in society he wants can only take him miles out of Jack’s reach. That doesn’t stop Jack from giving everything so that his beloved can have what he desires.

Be careful what you wish for. It might stop you from getting what you truly desire!

What a Duke Desires is a heartfelt story of two lost souls with only each other to rely on, a trek across England without the benefit of money or class, mischief in a hayloft, nasty nobles and vicious valets, an ball that no one wants to attend, and constant confusion about sleeping arrangements.

Please Be Advised: Steam Level – Pretty darn hot! This is not your grandma’s Historical Romance!

272 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 15, 2022

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Merry Farmer

316 books1,166 followers
USA Today Bestselling author Merry Farmer lives in suburban Philadelphia with her two cats, Justine and Peter. She has been writing since she was ten years old and realized she didn't have to wait for the teacher to assign a creative writing project to write something. It was the best day of her life. Her books have reached the top of Amazon's charts, and have been named finalists for several prestigious awards, including the RONE Award for indie romance.

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Profile Image for Lisa C.
1,136 reviews22 followers
December 10, 2022
Amazing start to a new series. well, sort of a new series, as these are the origin stories of the wonderful Brotherhood series. Wentworth Rawley, Duke of Burville is an unhappy man, except when he's with his friend and valet Jack Cotton. When Wentworth's mentor dies and sends him on a journey to find what he wants and needs, of course, Jack accompanies. Loved these two and how they are so perfect together. Can't help but think of the old adage - can't see the forest for the trees - as Wentworth go searching for happiness everywhere but at home with his love. Highly recommend.
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5,471 reviews66 followers
December 16, 2022
Wentworth Rawley the Duke of Burville but has been shunned by his peers after he voted in favour of the Reform Act mere months after being caught in a compromising position with an older lover at a public party. Even his staff leave apart from a maid Dolly Smith & footman Jack Cotton, Wentworth would do anything to be accepted by the ton again. Three years later his former lover dies & at the reading of the will Wentworth is given a letter which tells him of a prize that will give him the opportunity to regain everything he’s lost falls into his lap. To win a prize that will redeem his shattered reputation, the Duke of Burville must masquerade as a commoner. Jack Cotton rose from nothing to be the right-hand man of London’s most notorious duke. He owes Wentworth everything, so when Wentworth turns to him for help with the strange quest that will restore him to his rightful place in society, Jack throws everything he has into the task.
The start of a new series & a must read if you’ve read the previous series as this is where it all began. I loved both Wen & Jack who both suffered from injustice & much of the book I was up in arms at their treatment & totally in their corner. They were two wonderful characters & perfect for each other. I loved their journey to Derbyshire which was entertaining, endearing & revealing, There are also several secondary characters who were also well portrayed & I look forward to their stories. A very well written engrossing & enthralling read which I read straight through
My honest review is for a special copy I voluntarily read
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1,307 reviews18 followers
July 17, 2023
The plot was kind of weak, Wen was a bit too much of a dumb bunny, and the Caruthers subplot was completely wtf. There was also a use of “their" when it should’ve been “there", which was beyond painful. But it was also extremely sweet and I liked the MCs together. They had chemistry and were just so darn earnest and cute.
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1,255 reviews21 followers
January 8, 2023
Thanks to BookSprout for a copy of this story and this is my freely given opinion.

This is a MM historical romance with some steamy MM love scenes so if that is not what you are looking for, please take note.

This is the story of Wentworth Rawley, a duke with a scandalous past, shunned and scorned by society for his political leanings and having been caught in a compromising position at a social event with his older lover at the time. He obviously suffers from his loss of social stature and connections, including the loss of his household staff. He is left with two loyal staff, and rebuilds. A couple of years down the road, he has a comfortable home, with loyal staff, but still suffers loneliness in the Ton.

His former lover has also died, and Wentworth finds himself traveling to the estate of his lover as he was named in the will. Accompanying him is his valet, and good friend Jack Cotton, one of the two staff who stayed with him from before. He is very attracted to his handsome valet, but nothing has ever come from that, but they are very close and he relies on Jack and his friendship heavily.

Wentworth finds that his friend left him something in his will in the form of a quest, hinting that it would return him to the good graces of society, but in his quest, he must not use his title or his riches to reach it. Jack and Wentworth set out on this quest, and it becomes one where Wentworth discovers more about himself through his travails, but more importantly, Jack and Wentworth's relationship becomes stronger and closer as they become lovers.

The wrench is thrown into the works when at the end of the quest, Wentworth finds that his dubious prize is a new valet by the name of Caruthers, who is a sly snake of a man who wants to use blackmail and threats to redeem Wentworth in society, and even worse, undermines his and Jack's relationship.

I like reading MM historical romances as something different, and it is interesting to see how same sex relationships may have occurred in the context of fictional history. There is graphic MM sex in the story if that is something others may not be interested in. I thought the two main characters and their attraction was sweetly slow burning, but I found that Wentworth was too much of a wide-eyed innocent ingenue type character for me to take seriously, and too submissive and open to manipulation from others. Also, what the heck was with Caruthers and what the heck was Wilmore trying to do with that particular manipulation and (?) plan?

I just did not get it I guess.

2.5 stars out of 5.
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1,233 reviews20 followers
December 24, 2022
I normally don’t read many historical romances but this one caught my eye and now I feel I might have to give these more a chance.
This is so entertaining. Wentworth is really uncomfortable being a Duke. He has learned how to present himself as such but it isn’t really who he is. When he stands up for his beliefs, he gets into trouble and becomes a social pariah. He finds himself without not only his social standing but even his staff mostly deserts him. Over a few years he becomes more acquainted with his valet and housekeeper on a sort of friend level. Then his old acquaintance and mentor dies leaving him something in his will. Wentworth must attend the will reading and there he finds a sort of treasure hunt involves his inheritance. He and Jack start on a journey that is both entertaining and educational. Wentworth learns more about becoming a common man. The progression of how Wentworth tries to regain his social standing and how his relationships get resolved kept my attention till the end. This story also made me want to read more of this series.
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9,473 reviews533 followers
June 5, 2023
A Joyfully Jay review.

4.25 stars


This is the first book in a prequel series to Merry Farmer’s The Brotherhood series, so we get the inside scoop on how the Brotherhood was formed. I really thought this was an amazing start to the series. I love Wen’s pure heart and nobility of spirit. He’s very forward-thinking, for the time, and he’s got so much love and kindness to share. Jack is absolutely besotted with his Wen, and is eager to engage his lord as his lover, but he’s unwilling to help him fall into disgrace with all these dark plans. He’d rather let Wen go than help him destroy himself, and that’s what brings sense to Wen, at just the right moment. We also get to meet other founding members of The Brotherhood, and they do help Wentworth get his act together–as well as recover his man–but their stories are future books in this Origins series. I am eager to read on.

Read Veronica’s review in its entirety here.

Profile Image for Kirstine Hansen.
1,152 reviews4 followers
April 9, 2025
Wentworth Rawley is lonely. After having been caught in flagrante with Lord Wilmore, and shortly thereafter voting against the Tories in Parliament, Wentworth has been shunned by polite society.

A few years later, a letter from the recently deceased Lord Wilmore has him traveling incognito with his trusty valet Jack Cotton, in search of a gift that will help him regain his place in society.
Profile Image for JD Crittendon.
1,191 reviews11 followers
February 12, 2024
Wants, Desires & Needs!

This was a fun and surprisingly interesting enough read about Wentworth and Jack. It's a well-worn premise: upstairs-downstairs trope but with sweet touches and a unique ‘Final Will & Testament’ request plot. Quite enjoyable!
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1,273 reviews22 followers
June 5, 2024
It started out okay, but it could have accomplished what it needed to without making the main characters so foolish in half the length. Also, I've read better versions of the lord/valet thing.
524 reviews
January 22, 2023
The Brotherhood Origins, Book 1

As a reader of the entire Brotherhood series and a fan of Merry Farmer’s stories, I was delighted when the notice appeared that Merry has embarked on a prequel series about the origins of the organization known as The Brotherhood. The Brotherhood is an organization whose members are gay men from all levels of society and many different occupations in Victorian England. They provide society, aid, and support for one another and at times, they fall in love. The main character in the first Origins book, Wentworth Rawley, a duke, has nowhere to turn for support after he was discovered in a compromising position with another male noble and after a Parliament vote that was unpopular with most nobles. Almost all of his household staff and fellow nobles desert Wentworth leaving him adrift and lonely. One man of his household staff chooses to stay by his side, Jack Cotton, who steps in to become the duke’s personal valet. As Wentworth tries to pull his life back together be becomes attracted to his valet, not knowing if his valet is of the same mind. While Wentworth is trying to regain his position is society, a former lover passes away. Conditions of the will send Wentworth and Jack on an quest together to obtain Wentworth’s inheritance and a path to re-enter his desired society. While on the journey, Wentworth must become a commoner, he cannot use his title, the dukedom’s funds, or conveyances. The duke becomes a different person on the road with Jack. During the journey, Wentworth and Jack grow closer and consummate their relationship. The trip is not an easy one with all the restrictions and mishaps. By the end, Wentworth and Jack attain their happy ever after. This is a very steamy m/m romance, and can be read as a stand-alone. It is only the beginning, however, and only one step towards the establishment of The Brotherhood as more beneficiaries of the aforementioned will come together and embark on their own journeys towards the establishment of the organization. I will definitely be reading the next installment.
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274 reviews14 followers
February 13, 2025
The first half of the book made me giggle and kick my feet, it was so sweet, charming and romantic. We meet Wentworth, the titular duke, at the lowest point of his life; he put his neck on the line for his beliefs and was ostracized by the ton for his efforts (it didn’t help that he’d been caught in, let’s say, a compromising position before), which is precisely the moment when the kind young orphan Jack Cotton enters his life and takes the mantle of his valet and champion. Fast-forward three years, and we’re told they’ve become fast friends and confidants in the interval; although we don’t get to see the progression of that relationship on page, I completely believed it thanks to how well their easy and respectful camaraderie was portrayed. They also spent those three years completely in love with each other, but afraid to act on it. After Wentworth’s former lover dies and they set off on a madcap journey to Derbyshire, where the late lover’s will says Wen will find the key to his return to the good graces of his peers, we follow Wen and Jack on a delightful road trip, during which their bond grows and they finally act on their supressed lust.

However, after the 50% mark, when they arrive at their destination, the book shifts focus from their lovely, sweet partnership to the somewhat confusing (and I’d say fumbled) business with a moustache-twirling villain in the form of an ingratiating upstart valet. Given that the strength of the book lies squarely in the relationship between Wen and Jack, as soon as they’re not on-page together, the book suffers for it. Also, the second half was irritatingly circular and repetitive at points, with Wen aghast at the prospect of blackmail and subterfuge (he really should take tips from another duke, one Valentine Napier), but kind of going along with it for reasons that make him sound a little silly and naïve. Nevertheless, the ending was as charming and romantic as the first half of the book, and I ended up enjoying the book overall. Also, the writing was pretty solid, and at moments very charming and funny.
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245 reviews5 followers
December 16, 2022
The first Brotherhood series was my first experience with the world of m/m historical romance. I binge read each book of the series that was already published and anxiously awaited each following book. All good things must end though, right? Not when one of your favorite authors decides to write the origin story of the most amazingly supportive group of men I’ve found in historical romance! I’ve been excited for this series ever since she took a poll in her Facebook group and introduced the idea of writing The Brotherhood’s origin story.

The fact that Wentworth Rawley, Duke of Burville, and Jack Cotton are from extremely different backgrounds plays a significant part in this book. I appreciated that the difference in their behavior based on their locations was depicted and explained. I also appreciated the foundation that was laid for the books to follow. George seems to have been an observant and sneaky matchmaker. One wonders what he might have accomplished if he hadn’t waited to act seemingly from beyond the grave. In my opinion George is the godfather of what will eventually become The Brotherhood. I don’t mean the godfather in the mob sense of the word, but rather he was the creative force and inspiration behind it.

Caruthers is an irredeemable villain who gets his just desserts. I loved to hate him! In one of my favorite scenes in the book, Wentworth chooses to make an example of him and Caruthers’ mask slips. It’s as if he never thought the tables would be turned on him. I was cheering and dancing in my chair when I read that scene!

Merry ended this book with an Easter egg for those who have read the first Brotherhood series. I strongly recommend the first series, but this book can be enjoyed on its own.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
1,304 reviews33 followers
September 15, 2025
Very decent and clear set up of what was keeping Wentworth and Jack apart. They both didn't want to risk losing what they had: Wentworth not wanting to risk offending and losing Jack, one of the last people who stood by him in his time of need and Jack not wanting to go above his station and risk losing Wentworth by being presumptuous.

The juxtaposition showing us Wentworth and Jack having everything they wanted while they were acting as normal people versus them suffering in pursuit of Wentworth wanting to be integrated back into society via Caruthers was very well done. It made me hate Caruthers for what he represented and Wentworth for being so naive about what it meant to be in society's favor. Like honestly, how could he imagine friendship being a valid way of integration?

God, Wentworth being an absolute idiot about Jack and what he really needed was so incredibly annoying. The fact that there wasn't any real groveling and that Wentworth didn't need to work to earn Jack's trust again really sullied what would've been a great story. Jack just magically accepting Wen back as if nothing had happened was lazy because Wen had shown colors that Jack had never seen before. Shouldn't he have needed to prove himself (more than just abandoning the ball and showing up) to Jack? I wanted a hard fought HEA, but this story of flubs the ending with the insta-forgivness.

Still, I'm rating this a 3.5 rounded up because it did a very good job with pacing (minus everything past Caruthers) and showing the story (versus just telling it). I'm interested in seeing what the next book holds.
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475 reviews
January 5, 2023
The inspiration for this new series comes from an older series but you need not have read that one in order to enjoy this. And enjoy this I did. Every tale Merry Farmer spins is just so good, she really gives her characters depth and of course, there is always plenty of steam!
In this story, we meet Wentworth and Jack, both of which are far too polite to overstep their bounds, but when a task sets them on a journey together, they can't help but overstep into each other's arms. These two are just so made for each other, each willing to help bolster the other with friendship and camaraderie, each wanting the best for the other. It was very endearing that Wentworth could forgo his posh upbringing and love Jack for who he was, not letting class stand in the way. There's a villain you will hate but he brings much-needed turmoil into the story you will end up loving it.
I highly recommend this book and cant wait for more from this series.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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2,987 reviews26 followers
December 27, 2022
We finally start learning the backstory of The Brotherhood from the series by Merry Farmer. In a book that explores how getting what you wish for may not get you what you need Ms. Farmer gives us Wentworth who is a Duke who has been disgraced and wishes he was back in the good stead with the ton. His valet Jack has stood by him and the two men have been pining for each other for years without telling each other. The journey that Wentworth’s mentor (and obviously Ms. Farmer) send them on is a lot of fun to read and as usual there is lots of interesting historical color that this writer is so good at working into her novels. I sense that many plot twists have been set up in this book and that subsequent books will build on them till we have The Brotherhood in all its glory. I know that The Brotherhood isn’t real but it makes my heart happy to think that there may have been something like it.

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818 reviews5 followers
February 18, 2023
Wen is a Duke who when he was younger was caught in a compromising position - with a man. After voting in a controversial bill he is ostracized from society. He meets Jack at his lowest ebb and works closely with him. Jack works for Wen for three years before the sparks ignite! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this engaging, entertaining and unputdownable story! This story is well written, fast paced, with lots of angst, friendship, revenge, plotting, passionate, steamy scenes, and love that is tested by dreams and nightmares of life. Told from dual POV reveals intimately their thoughts feelings and emotions as they explore their relationship! There's an epilogue and a HEA but it ends on a tiny cliffhanger that leads to the next book! I read this a few times as I thought it was really a beautiful story; I also loved the authors historical notes of the era. Read it! You will love it! Recommended!
2,418 reviews11 followers
December 12, 2022
Entertaining and Gripping!
This story clearly shows that what one desires is not necessarily what will make one happy nor what one really needs to achieve a full life and this is the lesson Wentworth had to learn.
I found the main characters, Wentworth and Jack, ever so endearing. Yes, they had their faults and weren't perfect, but then no one really is and this made them very lifelike.
Their story is one of longing, passion and learning how to live in an era when their lifestyle was frowned upon and severely punishable.
I loved this story so very much and look forward to the next book in this series.
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652 reviews6 followers
December 30, 2022
What you want is not always what you need
George, Marquess of Wilmore, is no more. In his will, he requires that his most special friends be reunited for the reading of his will. Each of them receives a set of instructions that will give him what he most needs.
Wentworth may be a duke, but he is terribly unpopular with the ton. Not only has he been discovered in a compromising position with another man, but his support of the Reform Act has closed many doors for him.
But is the valet he inherits from George really what he needs? His blackmail and the supplanting of his valet Jack do not recommend him. Wen wants acceptance but not at any cost. Will Wen wake up in time to save his love?
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21.1k reviews372 followers
January 1, 2023
Wentworth and Jack's Story . . .

Wentworth Rawley is a Duke who is currently out of favor with the Ton. Jack Cotton is Wentworth’s valet and the two are in love, willing to do anything to help the other. But coming from different social levels, they really must keep their feelings hidden. Wentworth has a plan to get himself back in society’s good graces, but he needs Jack’s help. So without benefit of money or title, the two of them set off on an adventure of redemption, but end up in more trouble along the way. Will Wentworth’s plan ever work?

This author gives us good stories with characters we can fully enjoy. Grab your copy and see if things eventually work out right for them.
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637 reviews2 followers
January 6, 2023
I have always enjoyed historical romance, and mm historical romance is what got me reading mm romance. It astounds me how backwards people were in their beliefs. Women were treated as property and men were not allowed to be together romantically. This book reminds us how important it is to to stay true to the ones you love and who love you, regardless of what others think and believe. Wentworth and Jack have something special, but the constraints of the political time conspire to keep them apart and indeed, to keep secret their relationship. This book was gripping and the sexy times were very steamy. It was a very enjoyable read. I am looking forward to reading the next in the series.

I received an ARC and am voluntarily leaving a review.
26 reviews
June 9, 2023
All 4 books

The overall story is a good read with a good understanding of the world at the time. However, I am not huge into rereading the same thing from others’ point of views and that seems to take up the majority of the first chapters of each book.

The reason I gave it a low rank happens to be for the lack of character description. I like being reminded of what a character looks like while reading instead of trying to recall their appearance from a brief one paragraph at the beginning. And the writer gets a little lost in coming to the point, as if the she bludgeons it to death with the same thought process over and over, causing this reader to lose interest.
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December 1, 2024
2.5 stars. This started out well with a fish out of water situation but then went downhill with a truly incomprehensible blackmail plot. Nothing about it made sense - Wen wants to be included in society again so blackmails a bunch of vile people to come to a ball. Does he actually want to be friends with these people? Does Jack really want to be with someone who would 1) blackmail people and 2) enjoy the company of this vile group? Is Wen really that stupid? Jack leaves but not because he doesn't approve of Wen's actions, but because he thinks he's not enough for Wen and Wen should find someone better suited. So much wtf.
1,600 reviews8 followers
January 1, 2023
I love historical MM romance and seeing how the MCs manage their love and togetherness in a time when it could mean dishonor or even death. Added to the stress of same-sex attraction in this story is the complication of class differences. I loved Wentworth and Jack, especially Jack's devotion to Wentworth, even knowing that his love is likely in vain and (so he thinks) could never be returned. This is a great start to a new series. I look forward to more.

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159 reviews33 followers
June 25, 2023
Oh, Wentworth. There were moments where I wanted to hug him and shake him at the very same time. I liked both of the heroes and enjoyed the development of their relationship.

I especially enjoyed the idea of there being a queer tribe even though they had to be fairly discrete because of the illegality of gay relationships. I also liked that the author did acknowledge that her characters were privileged for the time due to their socioeconomic status and could get away with things that poorer, less powerful men could not have.
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2,894 reviews8 followers
December 31, 2022
An good easy to read story, well written, with wonderful characters and attention to detail. A romance full of unexpected turns and twist or two with a happily ever after.
What a Duke Desires is a heartfelt story of two lost souls with only each other to rely on, a trek across England without the benefit of money or class, mischief in a hayloft, nasty nobles and vicious valets, a ball that no one wants to attend, and constant confusion about sleeping arrangements.
2,318 reviews6 followers
December 31, 2022
The backstory to The Brotherhood, you didn't know you needed.

Loving a man during this period in society is not an easy thing to do. Following your heart, and making a way is more than worth it.

Jack and Wentworth were a nice beginning into this Origins series. Fall in love with a new cast of characters and never let go of their heartfelt romantic journeys.

**I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.**

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5,474 reviews55 followers
January 8, 2023
I really enjoyed this book. I very rarely read historical romance, but the premise- specifically Jack's devotion- was something I knew I had to read. Good world building. The setting/time period and class distinctions really makes the stakes higher. Wentworth and Jack have such strong bonds and wonderful chemistry. I found the story a captivating adventure that I couldn't get enough of. And the handling of the villain was so satisfying. I would read another in this series. 5 stars.
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1,155 reviews
February 20, 2023
Another enjoyable read and a nice start to a new series. Wentworth was caught in the act with another man. Jack as his valet stayed by his side as everyone ostracized Wentworth. For years, they had harbored feelings for one another and the death of Wentworth's former lover may finally spur them to act on their feeling. The characters and plot were good. Looking forward the next book in series.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
1,051 reviews5 followers
August 24, 2023
A wonderful post regency mm love blossoming

For lovers of mm love set in either regency or post regency periods, this is a must. A young duke forsaken by the ton seeks acceptance by society. His valet, who stuck by him when everyone else left, cohabit in a simmering platonic relationship. The death of his mentor and his bequest frim his will, sets in motion a journey of discovery. What he fund's is not what he was expecting.
405 reviews1 follower
December 22, 2022
Extraordinary!!!!

Loved Wentworth's and Jack's story. They came from different backgrounds and social standing. Nothing would stop them from pursuing the feelings they had for each other.
As a mother of a gay son, it is appalling that men could die for their sexual orientation!! Loved this story!
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