Sigh.
As I have previous stated in other reviews of this author’s work, I almost always struggle with the first few books in every new series she writes [I am not really sure why, but I almost always dislike them and it takes a few books for me to settle in and eventually I end up loving them, which is the case with 2 of her current series], so I am not surprised that I didn’t love this book [though, I liked the first one and rated it higher than any other “first book” by the author]; what I AM surprised about it just how…inconsistent [?] this book is. Let me explain.
First, there is a TON of repetition. WHY is this a thing now in cozies? WHY WHY WHY??? Is there a new word count that has to be met and instead of giving us a complete story, they must just rewrite what they had just written, but in a different way? I was sorry to see this author succumb to this [STUPID and dumbing down] trope and I hope that she gets past it – she is a talented writer and I know that she can write a very good story, so this kind of crap really isn’t needed.
Second, there is a TON of inconsistencies. A TON. Here is an example: in one chapter, the book club is getting ready to take on the mystery of who the killer is and Shirley [one of the BEST side characters – I just love her and her strength and how she strives to keep her business HERS {it is failing, but she IS trying to keep people from gossiping}] talks about how she will update the murder notebooks and bring them to the next meeting. Move forward to the next meeting [several chapters later] and Shirley hands out the notebooks and Rarity says to her “OH, I didn’t know you were going to make murder notebooks” I’m sorry, WHAT? Seriously? And this happens OVER and OVER and OVER again [the worse was in chapter 17 and 18 when Rarity spends her afternoon researching the man they think is the killer and then in chapter 18 talks about making a memo to herself to remember to RESEARCH THIS SAME MAN. WHAT??? At this point, I even went back and reread it to make sure it wasn’t a mistake on my part and nope, I read it right. I just don’t understand this. So this and the telling of the same stuff OVER AND OVER AND OVER again were two of the biggest flaws in this book.
The mystery in itself is very good. I DID guess who the killer was very early [like from the moment they arrive in the picture], but it was a total guess and it wasn’t until towards the end when things are unraveling that I got the why [though I am still not 100% sure about all of that], but ultimately, it all fell flat. At no point did I feel that Rarity was in danger in the end and the reveal was just so…flat. My heart didn’t race, I didn’t grip my book, I just read it and went “well, THAT was meh”, and finished the book. It was just so anticlimactic and disappointing. Add to the mess that Rarity was acting so weird and defensive and everyone seems pretty catty and…I don’t know, weird in this one, it just was a jarring read. It was like the characters were not happy with the way they were being written either.
Even though it seems like I don’t, I really DO like this author. Her “Farm-to-Fork” and “Kitchen Witch” series are amazing [though it took me 3 books and 4 books in each series to get REALLY into them and then love them] and I so WANT to read the “Tourist Trap” books but I despise that narrator so those are out for me [the first two I read were pretty good and I liked the mysteries] and I really recommend them to people. I just don’t love how this one went and I am really disappointed. Will I read book 3 if there is one? Yes. From my past history with her books, the third book is usually where things turn around for me and I am hoping for that here, though a lot of things need to change for that to happen.
Thank you to NetGalley, Lynn Cahoon, and Kensington Books/Lyrical Press for providing this ARC in exchange for an honest review.