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Eternal Dominion #12
Compulsion
With his weddings and honeymoons behind him, it is time for Xeal/Alex to return to his climb to the top, only a new force seems to have other ideas regarding that. In a battle where one's will can only carry them so far, just how far will Xeal/Alex' will carry him and will he break Eternal Dominion completely in the process!
- GenresHaremTime TravelFantasy
240 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 1, 2022
243 people are currently reading
27 people want to read
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Bern Dean
40 books59 followersAs a child I did not read unless Pokémon cards count. It wasn’t until middle school when my mother played a trick on me, she got me entranced in the Harry Potter books. She would read the first few to me before switching to reading me a chapter and leaving the book out for me to read if I wanted more. Thus started my love of reading, at least in part. I still didn’t go out of my way to find books to read and after high school I could count on one hand how many books I would read each year. Life continued like this for over five years before I was hooked on an anime and searched out its light novel. This led to the phase where I was reading at least a couple books a month to now where I have gone through over 300 books in the last year.
Now I am putting my own work in to the world while following my own mantra. To write for yourself or you will never love what you write. When I first started to put my ideas into words I was surprised to find that those I shared it with loved it. This led me on to the road of putting out my own book for the world to see. Thank you to everyone who has or will help and support me in making this dream a reality.
Now I am putting my own work in to the world while following my own mantra. To write for yourself or you will never love what you write. When I first started to put my ideas into words I was surprised to find that those I shared it with loved it. This led me on to the road of putting out my own book for the world to see. Thank you to everyone who has or will help and support me in making this dream a reality.
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November 21, 2022
disappointed
I couldn't finish book twelve , Xeal is an overpowered narcissistic bully , the plot lacks action and on the odd occasion a dungeon run is undertaken Xeal knows all answers and his "Dragon breath" solved any problems ,nobody dies or is ever in any danger thanks to the Phoenix blood and feathers,so there is no excitement ,tension, or close calls ,the other characters are caricatures and contribute very little to the story , I had big hopes after the first couple of books but I'm sorry the story line is boring in ED and plain silly in reality.
I couldn't finish book twelve , Xeal is an overpowered narcissistic bully , the plot lacks action and on the odd occasion a dungeon run is undertaken Xeal knows all answers and his "Dragon breath" solved any problems ,nobody dies or is ever in any danger thanks to the Phoenix blood and feathers,so there is no excitement ,tension, or close calls ,the other characters are caricatures and contribute very little to the story , I had big hopes after the first couple of books but I'm sorry the story line is boring in ED and plain silly in reality.
November 2, 2022
Great read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action. A lot of things going on in the book.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with lots of action. A lot of things going on in the book.
November 1, 2022
Fantastic
Another book and this contains more intrigue and here be dragons i can not wait for the next book in another month.
Another book and this contains more intrigue and here be dragons i can not wait for the next book in another month.
November 1, 2022
Great read
Another great addition to the story. The pace is perfect and with so much going on the story just keeps getting better. Look forward to reading the next book!
Another great addition to the story. The pace is perfect and with so much going on the story just keeps getting better. Look forward to reading the next book!
November 2, 2022
You are awesome!
Love your writing style and imagination! I am looking forward to reading more of this series. No spoilers from this fan!
Love your writing style and imagination! I am looking forward to reading more of this series. No spoilers from this fan!
November 6, 2022
Fantastic
I just love the characters that uou have created in this I'm drawn in further with every page that I read can't wait for the next installation of this series
I just love the characters that uou have created in this I'm drawn in further with every page that I read can't wait for the next installation of this series
November 5, 2022
Still good
One major mistake the author made was names being different in in game and out. Ass list grow of character gets hard to remember. A character list is needed
One major mistake the author made was names being different in in game and out. Ass list grow of character gets hard to remember. A character list is needed
November 21, 2022
Boring
God its boring. Find naked Phoenix rince and repeat. Yawn fest, there is one interaction with abyss end. And it was rubbish.
God its boring. Find naked Phoenix rince and repeat. Yawn fest, there is one interaction with abyss end. And it was rubbish.
July 15, 2023
Bad woo woo
Way too much time and words spent on time wasting stuff, like the names of their trainers, anything more than a mention they are training and other RL crap that doesn't advance the main story. Why are they still squabbling over the fact the MC has a harem? Especially since each character simply regurgitate the same position over and over and over again like broken records.
It's worse than reading a smut series with a good storyline with all the time wasted on smut.
Like similar wuxia style stories, it bogging down as the characters advance.
Way too much time and words spent on time wasting stuff, like the names of their trainers, anything more than a mention they are training and other RL crap that doesn't advance the main story. Why are they still squabbling over the fact the MC has a harem? Especially since each character simply regurgitate the same position over and over and over again like broken records.
It's worse than reading a smut series with a good storyline with all the time wasted on smut.
Like similar wuxia style stories, it bogging down as the characters advance.
December 5, 2022
Just more of the same, and not in a good way.
The same idea repeated over and over with a revolving cast of characters. The same tricks over and over from interchangeable villains. This has gotten very, very boring.
The same idea repeated over and over with a revolving cast of characters. The same tricks over and over from interchangeable villains. This has gotten very, very boring.
April 11, 2024
Alex is learning about being an up an coming dad to Sam an Nicole both pregnancies in reality .
Alex continues to push himself as he gets closer to each level as well as his guild as well . He tries to try to stay ahead of the rest of the guild's in ED . In reality he gets ready to be a dad as each month gets closer for Sam an Nicole due date as well as spend time with his other girlfriends as well . With the last one being Kate total of 5 girlfriends . With all families living under one roof from his parents to Sam's parent's an live in staff as well . recommend reading excellent series .
Alex continues to push himself as he gets closer to each level as well as his guild as well . He tries to try to stay ahead of the rest of the guild's in ED . In reality he gets ready to be a dad as each month gets closer for Sam an Nicole due date as well as spend time with his other girlfriends as well . With the last one being Kate total of 5 girlfriends . With all families living under one roof from his parents to Sam's parent's an live in staff as well . recommend reading excellent series .
January 12, 2023
Finding Phoenix locations
I am still enjoying this series ( even though this was the 12th book). I will say, however, this book was not my favorite. I'm anxious to download and read book 13, though.
I am still enjoying this series ( even though this was the 12th book). I will say, however, this book was not my favorite. I'm anxious to download and read book 13, though.
November 16, 2022
Great Series
This story of a guy who gets a redo who leverage his previous experiences to make billions and be the most powerful person in game was fantastic.
This story of a guy who gets a redo who leverage his previous experiences to make billions and be the most powerful person in game was fantastic.
January 31, 2023
Nice book
I found the story unique and very interesting and look forward to seeing the next installment of this series of books .
I found the story unique and very interesting and look forward to seeing the next installment of this series of books .
December 11, 2024
Not bad
Outside of a few typos and chapter sections full of long explanations that break up the flow of the story this was a decent book
Outside of a few typos and chapter sections full of long explanations that break up the flow of the story this was a decent book
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