Picasso didnt begin his painting career with cubism or his blue period. I'd also venture to say that Einstein's theory of relativity didnt come to him after his first algebra assignment. Greatness and innovation come from years of study and of practice.
You only wonder how Rembrandt painted such lifelike figures until you realize he studied anatomy and physiology to almost an obsessive extreme. True masters craft amazing works because they have spent years building on the basics...and once the basics are mastered, the creative spirit takes flight.
I read Supernatural Assassin Black Velvet Vol 1 for Goodreads Reviewers Association. It was my fourth book with the group and unfortunately, I was reminded that sometimes e-publishing allows stories to reach the public...that are not ready for public viewing. Vina Kent has moved into the theory of relativity without passing algebra.
Twenty fine pages in and I almost gave up on the book. It was filled with errors: spelling and grammatical. I was finding glaring errors on each page...even multiple errors per page. I forged ahead and finished the book because I rarely give up on a book and I also did not want to review a book without giving it a chance. Luckily, the writing improved a bit as the story went on and there was in fact a story. I gave the book 2 stars. One star to any author that can complete a book...it is not an easy task. I also gave another star because there was an actual story here. There were some interesting passages here and there and I could tell that Vina is passionate about writing. Unfortunately, there's a long road ahead.
There are some fun characters in the book, but we have seen most of them before. They are, in many ways, stereotypes. The dialogue does not flow all that well and some of the character reactions, dialogue and/or mannerisms seem overly dramatic and immature.
For some reason, I kept thinking that this felt more like a rough, rushed draft by a junior high student for a summer creative writing course than a serious attempt at a novel. In my humble opinion, the author is an astute student of pop culture and has absorbed everything from Lara Croft to film-noir, the Devil Wears Prada to Mean Girls and James Bond to Twighlight. The problem is that each scene seems to be written as if it's describing something someone else is done. It does not have an author's stamp on it.
This book is in desperate need of an editor. Only after some corrections and some edits, would I be able to recommend this title.