Listen, I’m not going to say my story is crazier than anyone else’s but it’s up there. I suppose you can be the judge.
I wake up one morning to my mom telling me I’m going to Alberta Canada to take care of my sick dad. Who by the way thought I was going to be a boy and named me Ryan but when I came out a girl he left. The name stayed.
Dad has cancer and now I have to look after a man that never bothered looking after me. I leave my home in Georgia, my friends, and my boyfriend—Zac—of two years.
When attending Lords high school in Canada, I didn't expect to fall for someone, especially not my world history teacher.
Mr. Sparrow is hiding something and I’m going to get to the bottom of it. Although as I try, my father tells me some shocking news about myself and why he left me after I was born.
Seems I won’t be having an enemies-to-lovers trope not when I was born the enemy—born to kill.
Woman, you are trying to kill me with these books! This story is so good! It’s completely different from any other vampire story I’ve read, and I LOVE it! So many twists & turns that I TOTALLY did not see coming! Just…wow. I applaud you for the serious creativity that is flowing out of your brain right now! And the song lyrics you quoted in there? Were you stalking my Spotify, bc total props for liking CORPSE! <3 Oh, and one of the best things about this book? Pretty sure I didn’t see a single typo throughout the whole thing, and that makes me irrationally happy. Last thing before I go, a small warning to mind your step on that cliffy, it’s a doozy! (This is the feeling it left me with, lol. “Oh, it’s on like Donkey Kong!”)
Obviously the author has never visited Alberta, particularly the region they are writing about. There are so many errors that the story is not even plausible, and this comes from someone who reads monster romances avidly. The education system in Alberta does not have homecomings, we have graduation celebrations at the end of the year, this is not AMERICA! Second of all, the geography of Kananaskis country and Banff/Canmore are far away from each other. Learn about the locale you are writing about. Thirdly, any teacher knows codes of conduct. This is no way the teacher would go for a student and any probationary teacher would not act this way. Teaching jobs are difficult enough in Alberta! This is just an awful book, it is difficult to read since it was so badly written. A suggestion would be for the author to write books about their local region, not a foreign country, and please work on the story flow. I visit Florida often, but I'd never write a story about the everglades. Stick with what you know.