➸ 1.75 stars
Tropes:
↬ Spice: 🌶️🌶️
↬ Fantasy Romance
↬ Singular POV; First Person
↬ Revenge Plot
↬ Forced Proximity
↬ Dislike to Love
↬ Reluctant Allies to Lovers
↬ Insta Love
↬ Gods & Goddesses/Politics
Ratings:
↬ Initial Intrigue: 4/5
↬ Characters: 1/5
↬ Plot: 1/5
↬ Structure 2/5
↬ World-Building: 1/5
↬ Writing: 2/5
↬ Uniqueness/Creativity: 2/5
↬ Overall: 1.5/5
↬ Read: on Kindle
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I originally picked Flame & Sparrow up because a YouTuber I really like recommended this very recently. I’ve been in a mood where I want to read but just don’t know what to read, so I decided to pick this up on whim and try it out. The short version: this was bad. The long version: poorly written & edited, wayyyy too long and for what, instalove galore, nonexistent character development/relationship building, very obvious lack of worldbuilding. I could genuinely go on and on. I have a lot of gripes with this book, so I’m going to try and do it in a condensed number of paragraphs so this doesn’t get too long (cause your girl really could rant about this.
First of all, yes this is very poorly written. Now 5/10 if I’m reading a KU fantasy-romance book I’m not going to be reading a masterpiece. But I genuinely kid you not when I say the first 35% of this book is just unreadable. Just pages and pages of nothing, with no plot, very poor worldbuilding, and a plethora of characters were introduced to that have little to no significance to this story. I really had to start skimming entire chapters because the FMC was doing absolutely nothing. I kid you not that this book has an entire chapter dedicated to the FMC cooking. Yes, you read that right, this 650+ page book has an entire chapter written with the FMC cooking (who also forgets this hobby of her’s halfway into the book, mind you). This entire book has chapters like that, with the FMC doing a completely mundane and boring task that has half a chapter or more dedicated to it.
The world in this story makes virtually no sense. You know why it makes no sense? The insane amounts of info dumping in the beginning of the book. That’s just not how you build a good fantasy world, especially for how complex this one is supposed to be. After the info dumping, the author just expects the reader to understand the world, and it’s just really not plausible. Nothing about the gods, humans, or elves really make sense. Humans can become lower caste gods but how does it start? Who are the higher gods? What world do the humans/elves even live on? It just really didn’t click for me.
Also the instalove and friendship instalove in this story is just genuinely insane. The FMC and MMC barely even interact till 35% until the book, and they’re already kissing 15% later. They barely know each other, and this book is so long you’d think we’d get a slow burn? The spice starts pretty soon after, which just pissed me off so badly because of how slow the relationship could have moved. And the same thing happens with the friendships in this book. The FMC befriends the MMC’s godly friends and they are just immediately friends? Based on the FMC’s description of the gods, you’d think they’d have ulterior motives with humans and especially elves (which speaking of, the FMC being an elf was barely ever an issue and the gods literally despite elves??? Like wtf?) and not just immediately befriend a stranger? It was just dumb, and lazy asf writing in my opinion.
I have so many more things I can complain about in this book because it really was just so poorly written. The only reason this isn’t one star was because I was engaged enough to read and then skim to the end. But Flame and Sparrow truly reads like a first draft of an unpolished world and underdeveloped characters. Nothing makes sense, the characters suck, and world is mediocre at best and head scratching at worst. This really has nothing going for it. I hate to shit on indie authors, but this really was something I had to grit my teeth to even get through the start, much less to the ending. I don’t know, maybe I’m being too harsh, but this really was just not good imo.