3.5 stars. This was a nasty little affair. Poor Ben struggled so greatly with the voice inside of his head. Not like a normal internal dialogue that we all have, but something a little more...shall we say...direct? Lots of solid plot points and a likeable lead. Where this fell short for me, literally, was the length and the development of both Ben and his dynamics with this voice. There were so many possibilities here and the author could have dragged this out much more, benefitting everything, but it all felt very rushed, abbreviated, and incomplete. This needed to pace itself better and take its time, as it had all the right pieces, but just couldn't fit them together in such a way that gave it all justice. Still a fun way to kill thirty minutes.