The Witch and the Knight 1

Lovely Witches #0.5

by Lillyanna Fuchsia

Before Leila was the deputy headmistress of the Magic School, she had a simple life. Hundreds of years ago, she traveled from city to city, working as a seer. In one of those cities, she met the love of her life. Come read how she met Olivia in this short story.

Genres: Fantasy

22 pages, Kindle Edition

Published October 31, 2022

Reviews

[Ben Jackson · Rating 3 out of 5]

Has a decent start

I don’t really know what to say. It’s too short to really get invested in the relationships. Regardless, I still wouldn’t mind checking out the next installment and so on. I’d say check it out.

[SJ · Rating 2 out of 5]

I’m not quite sure what to say about this one. It sounded cute and it had the potential to be a good story. But instead you get a great start to a story with a meet cute, then a time jump with an abrupt ending to the first story and a separate start to a “part two” story of sorts. But there wasn’t an actual story here though. It’s says 22 pages but the story itself is only about 9 of that. It felt like more of a prequel and was just very short.

[Astrophel R · Rating 3 out of 5]

I agree with the other reviews saying this was too short to really judge. It definitely has potential (and I got this for free so I can't really judge) but it feels more like a first chapter than a complete short story in my opinion.

Also the preview chapter at the end is the same length as this full story, which isn't inherently a bad thing, but I feel like it negatively impacted my reading experience to have my Kindle say I was only 50% through the story, but already be at the acknowledgments.

[Nora Rockwell · Rating 5 out of 5]

To Short

I liked it but it was WAY to short. I can tell you like to tease. Give us more of these two please.

[Lauren · Rating 1 out of 5]

I wanted to like this. It starts out really well and I was enjoying it, but it was just too short for me to be able to get into anything or enjoy the story before it ended.