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308 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 30, 2023
"So, you and Matt…" He keeps his gaze fixed on the table and I notice the muscles along his jaw are clenched tight.
"Dated. Yes," I say, curious to see how this will play out. "Briefly."
[…] "And you've… ?" His brow furrows, and I can clearly see he’s uncomfortable even asking.
"Kissed," I finish for him.
[…] It’s like watching a storm cloud build and churn as he struggles to contain himself. "I know it's none of my business, but I have to know," he grits out, with what can only be a low growl starting deep in his chest. Primal and possessive.
[… all of these edits are me trying to make this passage not so effing boring and long FYI …]
"Know what?" I whisper, fidgeting in my seat. […] This can't be normal.
"Has he touched you? Has he tasted you?" His voice is low and gravelly. Using his knee, he forces my legs apart under the table and I gasp as he reaches out to trail his fingers along the seam at the crotch of my jeans.
"Blake…" His name comes out as a moan, and I whip my head around to check whether anyone overheard and is watching us.
"Has he Zoe? [sic] Has he felt what's mine around him?"
[…]”Jesus, Blake. No, nothing like that!"