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Book of Payne #1
The Blight of Blackridge
All Eleanor Payne wants is to live her life in peace.
But a war between the gods has cracked the world in two, and the Payne family pledged to the losing side.
The village of Blackridge has labeled them traitors. They’ve fallen far from grace and lost nearly everything.
With her mother desperate to convert to preserve the little they have left and her great-grandmother forbidding it, Eleanor has no choice but to pick a side.
But she would rather starve than surrender.
On the hunt for another path, Eleanor uncovers powerful secrets that the Payne matriarchs buried in their past. And a condemning truth about the dark history of Blackridge. The more she uncovers, the more desperate the village becomes to silence her.
But Eleanor has come too far to turn back now. And when faced with the dangerous consequences of digging too deep, she unlocks a terrifying power within herself.
One that will make Blackridge wish they hadn’t pushed her so far.
But a war between the gods has cracked the world in two, and the Payne family pledged to the losing side.
The village of Blackridge has labeled them traitors. They’ve fallen far from grace and lost nearly everything.
With her mother desperate to convert to preserve the little they have left and her great-grandmother forbidding it, Eleanor has no choice but to pick a side.
But she would rather starve than surrender.
On the hunt for another path, Eleanor uncovers powerful secrets that the Payne matriarchs buried in their past. And a condemning truth about the dark history of Blackridge. The more she uncovers, the more desperate the village becomes to silence her.
But Eleanor has come too far to turn back now. And when faced with the dangerous consequences of digging too deep, she unlocks a terrifying power within herself.
One that will make Blackridge wish they hadn’t pushed her so far.
414 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 21, 2021
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About the author
R.P. Dunwater
4 books93 followersR.P. Dunwater is the pen name for co-authors Stephanie Withers and Kimberly Allen.
They met in high school, but we don’t need to talk about how long ago that was. What started as writing joint fan fiction projects evolved over the decade(s) into creating their own fantasy worlds with more realistic, and less overpowered, characters.
They both reside in New Jersey with their partners and fur children. They’re probably having a Lord of the Rings movie marathon (extended, always) or playing D&D right now.
Find out more at rpdunwater.com
They met in high school, but we don’t need to talk about how long ago that was. What started as writing joint fan fiction projects evolved over the decade(s) into creating their own fantasy worlds with more realistic, and less overpowered, characters.
They both reside in New Jersey with their partners and fur children. They’re probably having a Lord of the Rings movie marathon (extended, always) or playing D&D right now.
Find out more at rpdunwater.com
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December 21, 2022Hey! We're Stephanie and Kim, the writers behind R.P. Dunwater.
We wanted to take a moment and thank you for your interest in our story. The Blight of Blackridge is our debut novel and the first in the Book of Payne trilogy. We are beyond excited to share this story with the world, and we hope you all enjoy it.
That being said...if you're looking for a light-hearted book about love and magic where everything works out in the main character's favor, this is *not* the book for you. Nothing ever works in a Payne's favor.
But if you like dark realism and character-driven stories where you can't be sure which is the hero and which is the villain, then welcome to Blackridge.
Our book may feature a *clean* sapphic romance subplot, but there is no happy ending here. Not yet, anyway. This first book reads more akin to a villain's origin story and, by the end, we hope to find you in the same place we found ourselves before we decided to turn this into a series: wondering whether or not it was actually right to be cheering on our heroine all along.
Happy Reading!
We wanted to take a moment and thank you for your interest in our story. The Blight of Blackridge is our debut novel and the first in the Book of Payne trilogy. We are beyond excited to share this story with the world, and we hope you all enjoy it.
That being said...if you're looking for a light-hearted book about love and magic where everything works out in the main character's favor, this is *not* the book for you. Nothing ever works in a Payne's favor.
But if you like dark realism and character-driven stories where you can't be sure which is the hero and which is the villain, then welcome to Blackridge.
Our book may feature a *clean* sapphic romance subplot, but there is no happy ending here. Not yet, anyway. This first book reads more akin to a villain's origin story and, by the end, we hope to find you in the same place we found ourselves before we decided to turn this into a series: wondering whether or not it was actually right to be cheering on our heroine all along.
Happy Reading!
July 18, 2024
4.5 Stars
Exceptional! I can’t. The pacing was brilliant. The story’s progression was just so perfectly timed I wanted to blaze through every chapter to know what happens next! I’m pretty good with my reading control but with this book, my alarm was set for 4:50 AM, I’m supposed to sleep at 10PM and I ended up forcibly stopping myself at 1:50 AM. The story was addictive.
Exceptional! I can’t. The pacing was brilliant. The story’s progression was just so perfectly timed I wanted to blaze through every chapter to know what happens next! I’m pretty good with my reading control but with this book, my alarm was set for 4:50 AM, I’m supposed to sleep at 10PM and I ended up forcibly stopping myself at 1:50 AM. The story was addictive.
December 7, 2022
THE BLIGHT OF BLACKRIDGE - 4/5 STARS
- Potential spoilers ahead -
I'll be honest—I had some trouble getting into this book. The chapters were quite long, and while a lot of things happened, at the same time, they didn't, as the initial information we received felt quite surface-level. We got to know Eleanor 'Nell' Payne and her place in Blackridge, and learned that she and her family are shunned due to their affiliation with the banned God Ebroth. Regardless, after the first few chapters, I wasn't sure what the greater stakes would be to drive this story forward. There was some conflict between Eleanor and the daughter of the High Priestess of Dienna (a twin diety to Ebroth who is worshipped in Blackridge). Still, it initially felt a bit like a high-school drama in a fantasy setting, in which Nell feels like an outcast bullied by the popular kids.
But hey, I'm definitely one to admit when my first impression was wrong—and it was.
As soon as Eleanor became aware of her strong connection to Ebroth, the story picked up and became deserving of the Dark Fantasy genre. A sinister plot surfaced of Gods manipulating their followers for their own gain under the ruse of divine will. Due to this, the story has an added layer where it's unclear whether we're rooting for the right God or we, as readers, are manipulated as well into believing Ebroth should demand retaliation. It makes you question everyone's motives and look for clues, and gives the feeling that you are part of the greater conflict between the deities.
The Blight of Blackridge delves into subjects such as blood sacrifices, possession, manipulation, death, decay, and betrayal. Eleanor is morally ambiguous at times, but it's always clear what drives her, which makes her a very engaging protagonist. Throughout the book, her confidence and strength grow, but the authors didn't make her overly powerful. She remains vulnerable, whether to pain, love, or her shortcomings, and in doing so, Nell stays realistic and relatable, despite the darkness she has to deal with. The romance subplot also felt natural, and I'm absolutely in love with Mariela.
When reading the book, I couldn't tell it was co-written as it flowed smoothly between scenes and chapters. The authors seem very in tune with the story they are trying to convey and capable of enhancing each other throughout the book. Overall, The Blight of Blackridge was a great start to the Book of Payne series, ending in a way that makes me wish I could get my hands on the sequel already. I can't wait to read where they'll take the story next!
I was given an ARC in exchange for my honest review. This did not influence my opinion.
"It breaks my heart that you had to be born into a world that makes you feel like you deserve nothing, when you deserve so much more than we could ever give you." (The Blight of Blackridge)
- Potential spoilers ahead -
I'll be honest—I had some trouble getting into this book. The chapters were quite long, and while a lot of things happened, at the same time, they didn't, as the initial information we received felt quite surface-level. We got to know Eleanor 'Nell' Payne and her place in Blackridge, and learned that she and her family are shunned due to their affiliation with the banned God Ebroth. Regardless, after the first few chapters, I wasn't sure what the greater stakes would be to drive this story forward. There was some conflict between Eleanor and the daughter of the High Priestess of Dienna (a twin diety to Ebroth who is worshipped in Blackridge). Still, it initially felt a bit like a high-school drama in a fantasy setting, in which Nell feels like an outcast bullied by the popular kids.
But hey, I'm definitely one to admit when my first impression was wrong—and it was.
As soon as Eleanor became aware of her strong connection to Ebroth, the story picked up and became deserving of the Dark Fantasy genre. A sinister plot surfaced of Gods manipulating their followers for their own gain under the ruse of divine will. Due to this, the story has an added layer where it's unclear whether we're rooting for the right God or we, as readers, are manipulated as well into believing Ebroth should demand retaliation. It makes you question everyone's motives and look for clues, and gives the feeling that you are part of the greater conflict between the deities.
The Blight of Blackridge delves into subjects such as blood sacrifices, possession, manipulation, death, decay, and betrayal. Eleanor is morally ambiguous at times, but it's always clear what drives her, which makes her a very engaging protagonist. Throughout the book, her confidence and strength grow, but the authors didn't make her overly powerful. She remains vulnerable, whether to pain, love, or her shortcomings, and in doing so, Nell stays realistic and relatable, despite the darkness she has to deal with. The romance subplot also felt natural, and I'm absolutely in love with Mariela.
When reading the book, I couldn't tell it was co-written as it flowed smoothly between scenes and chapters. The authors seem very in tune with the story they are trying to convey and capable of enhancing each other throughout the book. Overall, The Blight of Blackridge was a great start to the Book of Payne series, ending in a way that makes me wish I could get my hands on the sequel already. I can't wait to read where they'll take the story next!
I was given an ARC in exchange for my honest review. This did not influence my opinion.
March 21, 2023
This fantasy explores some really interesting things. It’s all about fitting in, and how religion can be skewed to brainwash people. We follow Eleanor Payne, an outsider in her village, who uncovers the dark history that her ancestors endured. There are some magical elements to this story, but the heart of the tale is really about alienation in society and how lonely it can be to be different.
The relationships in this were interesting to me too. There’s a lot of push and pull between Eleanor and her mother, a dynamic that felt both familiar and realistic. I felt really sorry for Birdie and how she was treated both in her romantic relationships and by her people. Still, I enjoyed the sort of love triangle involved and how the young loves weaved the path of the plot.
Overall a good first book! I’m interested to see where the story goes and to explore Eleanor’s new found powers!
The relationships in this were interesting to me too. There’s a lot of push and pull between Eleanor and her mother, a dynamic that felt both familiar and realistic. I felt really sorry for Birdie and how she was treated both in her romantic relationships and by her people. Still, I enjoyed the sort of love triangle involved and how the young loves weaved the path of the plot.
Overall a good first book! I’m interested to see where the story goes and to explore Eleanor’s new found powers!
November 28, 2022
This book left me gutted. I felt sadness, anguish, excitement, anger, devastation, and shock. Basically, the whole gamut of emotions.
Stephanie and Kim did a fantastic job building this world and bringing you into it. The family and friend interactions were so real that I found myself feeling as exasperated as Eleanor must have felt. The injustices the Payne family has suffered pulled at my heartstrings.
I don’t know how I’m supposed to wait another year to find out what happens next.
I received this book as an eARC.
Stephanie and Kim did a fantastic job building this world and bringing you into it. The family and friend interactions were so real that I found myself feeling as exasperated as Eleanor must have felt. The injustices the Payne family has suffered pulled at my heartstrings.
I don’t know how I’m supposed to wait another year to find out what happens next.
I received this book as an eARC.
July 16, 2024
Feels very similar to Malice and Misrule, a YA vibe to it easy to read and an interesting plot with likeable characters.
All very steady and smooth, I enjoyed the story, characters and world but it was a little flat.
The pacing feels weird and there’s no real chemistry between any of the characters, but I am interested in what happens next and will keep reading this series.
All very steady and smooth, I enjoyed the story, characters and world but it was a little flat.
The pacing feels weird and there’s no real chemistry between any of the characters, but I am interested in what happens next and will keep reading this series.
November 27, 2022
Review 4.5/5
🍃 A once great and powerful family is now almost nothing. Their history almost forgotten with time and lies.
🍃 A desire to help your people, right the many wrongs done to them, and restore a hidden and almost forgotten belief.
📕
The Blight of Blackridge is a slow burn with secrets, injustices, love and heartbreak, magic, and supernatural power.
📖
As everything changed and the town was divided by those with different beliefs, they suffered greatly when their land and their people were taken. Time passed, everything around them changed, and many forgot the town’s real history.
As Eleanor uncovers her family and town’s secrets and history, the more difficult it is for her to remain calm and do nothing. Learning many truths she was blind to for different reasons helps define her new attitude and character. We see Eleanor grow into herself, her confidence, and the power she did not know her family possessed. The FMC desires to save her people and have peace amongst all, even those who preached the love of a Goddess but were hypocrites in their teachings and religions, those who had wronged her and her family so many times. But sometimes revenge is inevitable.
• The Payne’s relationship with each other was perfectly portrayed, and it was easy to understand everyone’s roles and interactions.
• I loved how the story was developed, you get a full view of the town and family history.
The ending surprised me and left me wishing for more. I did not expect it to a certain point and I don’t think Eleanor realizes yet the full extent of what she just did. Quite a sad ending overall (not a bad thing- my heart squeezed during all this), she lost and sacrificed so much… but the promise of more action to come has me looking forward to the future of Blackridge, Ebroth’s people, and their high Priestess in the next book.
P.s. I love Mariela 🖤
✒️ Quotes 🖋️
🍃 One of my favorite quotes is from a conversation about knowing when you find the one:
“It was easy. We could talk for hours and say whatever we wanted without fear of judgment. That’s what helps you get through the harder times—having someone who understands who you really are, and who doesn’t require you to do anything outside of your character...”
🍃 And this blessing is also a favorite:
“A blessing sent from me,
That wealth and prosperity
Shall surely come to thee.
Your hands shall overflow
With coins of silver and gold
That all your purse can hold.”
🍃 A once great and powerful family is now almost nothing. Their history almost forgotten with time and lies.
🍃 A desire to help your people, right the many wrongs done to them, and restore a hidden and almost forgotten belief.
📕
The Blight of Blackridge is a slow burn with secrets, injustices, love and heartbreak, magic, and supernatural power.
📖
As everything changed and the town was divided by those with different beliefs, they suffered greatly when their land and their people were taken. Time passed, everything around them changed, and many forgot the town’s real history.
As Eleanor uncovers her family and town’s secrets and history, the more difficult it is for her to remain calm and do nothing. Learning many truths she was blind to for different reasons helps define her new attitude and character. We see Eleanor grow into herself, her confidence, and the power she did not know her family possessed. The FMC desires to save her people and have peace amongst all, even those who preached the love of a Goddess but were hypocrites in their teachings and religions, those who had wronged her and her family so many times. But sometimes revenge is inevitable.
• The Payne’s relationship with each other was perfectly portrayed, and it was easy to understand everyone’s roles and interactions.
• I loved how the story was developed, you get a full view of the town and family history.
The ending surprised me and left me wishing for more. I did not expect it to a certain point and I don’t think Eleanor realizes yet the full extent of what she just did. Quite a sad ending overall (not a bad thing- my heart squeezed during all this), she lost and sacrificed so much… but the promise of more action to come has me looking forward to the future of Blackridge, Ebroth’s people, and their high Priestess in the next book.
P.s. I love Mariela 🖤
✒️ Quotes 🖋️
🍃 One of my favorite quotes is from a conversation about knowing when you find the one:
“It was easy. We could talk for hours and say whatever we wanted without fear of judgment. That’s what helps you get through the harder times—having someone who understands who you really are, and who doesn’t require you to do anything outside of your character...”
🍃 And this blessing is also a favorite:
“A blessing sent from me,
That wealth and prosperity
Shall surely come to thee.
Your hands shall overflow
With coins of silver and gold
That all your purse can hold.”
October 8, 2023
I loved this book! It really sets itself apart from everything else I've read. I wasn't tearing through these pages, I took my time and happily lived within the story. I enjoyed walking with Nell and reaching these discoveries together. Though, I might add that some of these chapters felt just a little too long for my own personal preference. The characters all felt so real, their actions and drive so palpable that it felt like I knew them personally. The overall vibe of this story itself was intriguing and unique. It felt comfortable yet a dark shadow always loomed over the words hinting at what was to come. And when the story turns dark and gritty I found myself cheering. The lines of good and evil, unjust and righteous are clear and blurry all at the same time and I mean that as a compliment. My heart was pulled in so many different directions and by the end I was an absolute mess! I am so excited to read the next installment!
October 30, 2024
I got a copy of this for free during the Stuff Your Kindle Fantasy event, and I'm really glad I did. This was a fresh take on an original plot of light magic vs dark magic - while turning the concept on its head.
I found the pacing in this to be excellent. Everything moved evenly, and I was always curious as to where the story was gonna go.
I liked the discussion of religion and how it can be twisted and used for evil in the wrong hands, and how not knowing your own family history can make you an accomplice to all that.
I'm really curious to know what happens next, and will be continuing on with the series.
I found the pacing in this to be excellent. Everything moved evenly, and I was always curious as to where the story was gonna go.
I liked the discussion of religion and how it can be twisted and used for evil in the wrong hands, and how not knowing your own family history can make you an accomplice to all that.
I'm really curious to know what happens next, and will be continuing on with the series.
December 8, 2022
This book was 🔥🔥🔥🔥 Although you may want to go back through and fix "" errors. On my kindle app location 3587 out of 5169
When they were giving a tour of the temple.
I can not wait to see what else goes down in the next book. I have very mixed emotions with certain characters. Glad some of them got what they deserved.
When they were giving a tour of the temple.
I can not wait to see what else goes down in the next book. I have very mixed emotions with certain characters. Glad some of them got what they deserved.
December 15, 2022
Holy crap I loved this book! I can't wait for the next one! I found it very relatable for myself. It was very well written and I enjoyed everything about it! I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
June 23, 2023
so good
I loved this book I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope Nell doesn’t do anything else she will regret.
I loved this book I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope Nell doesn’t do anything else she will regret.
August 16, 2024
4.25 ⭐️
April 9, 2025
Such a brilliantly written book. I loved it and couldn't put it down! I love books where sexuality isn't even blinked at and it’s just normal. Exceptional! I can’t. The pacing was brilliant.
December 10, 2022
The Blight of Blackridge is a hugely enjoyable read. It has me hooked from the first page. Full of rich detail and well developed characters, the Book of Payne delivers a mesmerising first instalment of the trilogy.
I loved the relationship between Nell and Birdie. It twists and turns, pulled by gods and fate, while still managing to feel relatable. I also really enjoyed that the story slowly releases its history, helping our heroine and the reader
make more sense of the complex world of Blackridge.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I loved the relationship between Nell and Birdie. It twists and turns, pulled by gods and fate, while still managing to feel relatable. I also really enjoyed that the story slowly releases its history, helping our heroine and the reader
make more sense of the complex world of Blackridge.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 12, 2022
Oh my gosh, cliff hanger! This book is totally different from any I’ve read before, and yet it sucked me in right from the beginning. Can’t wait to read what’s next!!
December 21, 2022
This book hooked me from the start. I love how complex the characters are. I didn't know what to think of each new character that was introduced and my feelings on a couple of them fluctuated chapter to chapter because I couldn't figure them out (in a good way). The world building and magic system is very interesting, and I hope to learn even more in the next book. (And hopefully more background into Dienna and Ebroth)
I really enjoyed Eleanor's development through the story. I could feel myself getting as frustrated as she was at certain points with some of the other characters and situations she was put in. This story had me feeling a full range of emotions. If you want a light hearted magical book - this is definitely not the one for you. I loved how dark this was, the writers really didn't pull any punches in this. I wasn't sure what to expect in that regard since the main character is 19 (if I'm remembering correctly) but it was great. It makes me very excited - and a little bit scared - to find out what happens next.
I really enjoyed Eleanor's development through the story. I could feel myself getting as frustrated as she was at certain points with some of the other characters and situations she was put in. This story had me feeling a full range of emotions. If you want a light hearted magical book - this is definitely not the one for you. I loved how dark this was, the writers really didn't pull any punches in this. I wasn't sure what to expect in that regard since the main character is 19 (if I'm remembering correctly) but it was great. It makes me very excited - and a little bit scared - to find out what happens next.
November 20, 2022
I adore this book and I can’t wait to read more about Blackridge and Eleanor.
February 4, 2023
This story has completely captivated me. The world that they build has so much history and an intensely intriguing magic system. I love the development of our FMC and can not WAIT until we get the second installment of this story!
August 29, 2025
If you like your sapphic YA/NA with a side order of darkness, this is THE book for you.
We follow Eleanor Payne, last child of a family formerly sworn to the service of the death god Eberoth. Despite trying to fit in with their fellow villagers in Blackridge, their old family ties to a now forbidden religion makes them outcasts amongst the zealous followers of sun god Dienna. Unhappy about the need to conform and deny her heritage, Eleanor seeks the truth of her family's past.
Just a warning: If "death god" didn't clue you in, this book contains a fair amount of on page death, some more detailed than others. While nothing is full on in-your-face grimdark levels of description, conceptually it probably wouldn't sit well with younger readers. Animal death/animal sacrifice in particular can challenge some readers, so come prepared.
Why did I love this book then? Because it hits all those YA plot beats of a quiet life slowly turned upside-down by bullying, love, lies, and the big bad issue of Nell's world: religion. It's done in that bombastic YA way where it's not directly comparable to real life in terms of how religion is practised, but the bigotry and hatred for those who chose not to be part of the fold in a highly religious society is still explored.
In some ways I found it very YA; there's a touch of spotlight syndrome to how Nell and Birdie have been friends for 3 years yet only now talk about issues important to them so we see it on the page. There's also the Queen of Mean character who makes Nell's life hellish with cruel, catty remarks and her entourage of followers.
But what I loved was how it diverged from what you'd usually expect while still hitting those plot points. Nell's awkward relationship with Birdie, the painful revelations about her grandmother Alma, the constant adolescent clashes with parent figures; it's written well with interesting twists, slower lulls to let us absorb, and actually feelings like the inner monologue of a contrary teenager. Often with YA characters I struggle to understand why they suddenly cause conflict other than because the plot says they should. Nell isn't like that. She simmers with rage and confusion, but never left me wondering why she acted the way she did.
The plot is dark and strange, unlike others I've read (and I read a lot of YA fantasy). The very long chapters could seems daunting, but I read way past my bedtime to get through it all because it was one of those books I really didn't want to put down.
The ending? Argh. I had to pick up the next book straight away.
We follow Eleanor Payne, last child of a family formerly sworn to the service of the death god Eberoth. Despite trying to fit in with their fellow villagers in Blackridge, their old family ties to a now forbidden religion makes them outcasts amongst the zealous followers of sun god Dienna. Unhappy about the need to conform and deny her heritage, Eleanor seeks the truth of her family's past.
Just a warning: If "death god" didn't clue you in, this book contains a fair amount of on page death, some more detailed than others. While nothing is full on in-your-face grimdark levels of description, conceptually it probably wouldn't sit well with younger readers. Animal death/animal sacrifice in particular can challenge some readers, so come prepared.
Why did I love this book then? Because it hits all those YA plot beats of a quiet life slowly turned upside-down by bullying, love, lies, and the big bad issue of Nell's world: religion. It's done in that bombastic YA way where it's not directly comparable to real life in terms of how religion is practised, but the bigotry and hatred for those who chose not to be part of the fold in a highly religious society is still explored.
In some ways I found it very YA; there's a touch of spotlight syndrome to how Nell and Birdie have been friends for 3 years yet only now talk about issues important to them so we see it on the page. There's also the Queen of Mean character who makes Nell's life hellish with cruel, catty remarks and her entourage of followers.
But what I loved was how it diverged from what you'd usually expect while still hitting those plot points. Nell's awkward relationship with Birdie, the painful revelations about her grandmother Alma, the constant adolescent clashes with parent figures; it's written well with interesting twists, slower lulls to let us absorb, and actually feelings like the inner monologue of a contrary teenager. Often with YA characters I struggle to understand why they suddenly cause conflict other than because the plot says they should. Nell isn't like that. She simmers with rage and confusion, but never left me wondering why she acted the way she did.
The plot is dark and strange, unlike others I've read (and I read a lot of YA fantasy). The very long chapters could seems daunting, but I read way past my bedtime to get through it all because it was one of those books I really didn't want to put down.
The ending? Argh. I had to pick up the next book straight away.
February 1, 2023
This book was a wild ride, and honestly, when I started it, I wasn't sure that I would like it as much as I do. We open with Eleanor "Nell" Payne, who to be frank, is pretty unlikeable. However, there are reasons for this. As we learn more about Nell and her history, her reactions to the people around her, particularly her family who would go back on their history to just fit in, makes sense. But then, BOOM, enter Birdie Caldwell. Birdie begins breaking down the barriers Nell constructed and the way that their relationship plays out on the page is both well written and realistic. Following that, the choices that impact their relationship places Nell in situations where hard choices have to be made, and in my opinion, this novel is one of the best at having its main character make realistic decisions, not just ones that advance the plot. And with that, the decisions that Nell has to make pain her. It was **chef's kiss**.
Getting into more of the characters would likely give away too much, but the character work here is spectacular. It is apparent that the authors spent a lot of time developing the characters and their relationships.
Nell's exploration of her family's history and its relation to the village takes wild turns, ending in tragedy, which I did not see coming. Leading up to the ending, I knew some bad things would happen, but the extent of it blew me out of the water. Looking back, all the clues were there, but the story was written so well as to not give away the twists.
Beyond that, the history of the village of Blackridge is woven expertly into the story that the reader receives all of the necessary information without being hit over the head with it. However, the only thing that felt a little lackluster was the setting. Aside from three characters that we are introduced to, we are stuck in a bubble of a village and two towns. There is description of these places, but the description wasn't that vivid. That being said, it wasn't necessary for this story. It sounds weird to say that, but this book is so driven by the characters that the setting was just that, background.
You wouldn't be able to tell that this book was written by two different people. The writing was smooth and uniform.
All in all, this book is summed up by the following quote:
"You couldn't always help what you saw or believed. Some truths were flexible. Others were as indelible as your face in the mirror, and in those cases it took superhuman amounts of denial to let them go."
Nell has to parse through the truths of her family and her village and determine how to live with them.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Getting into more of the characters would likely give away too much, but the character work here is spectacular. It is apparent that the authors spent a lot of time developing the characters and their relationships.
Nell's exploration of her family's history and its relation to the village takes wild turns, ending in tragedy, which I did not see coming. Leading up to the ending, I knew some bad things would happen, but the extent of it blew me out of the water. Looking back, all the clues were there, but the story was written so well as to not give away the twists.
Beyond that, the history of the village of Blackridge is woven expertly into the story that the reader receives all of the necessary information without being hit over the head with it. However, the only thing that felt a little lackluster was the setting. Aside from three characters that we are introduced to, we are stuck in a bubble of a village and two towns. There is description of these places, but the description wasn't that vivid. That being said, it wasn't necessary for this story. It sounds weird to say that, but this book is so driven by the characters that the setting was just that, background.
You wouldn't be able to tell that this book was written by two different people. The writing was smooth and uniform.
All in all, this book is summed up by the following quote:
"You couldn't always help what you saw or believed. Some truths were flexible. Others were as indelible as your face in the mirror, and in those cases it took superhuman amounts of denial to let them go."
Nell has to parse through the truths of her family and her village and determine how to live with them.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 24, 2022
I'm going to start this review with the fact that, even though I'm giving 4 stars and not 5, I am eagerly awaiting the next book in this series. It's incredibly likely I'll be wanting to collect the entire trilogy as physical copies as well.
The Blight of Blackridge does with a Coming-of-Age story what it often feels like so many others don't quite attain. Often, it seems authors forget the mercurial, inpulsive nature of teenagers, or how quickly feelings can shift without losing depth or intensity. The co-authors here haven't forgotten that ay all, and it's part of what makes Nell an incredibly frustrating, and also loveable, protaganist.
Nell is 19 years old, she's never really been her own person, and doesn't know a lot about who she is. While she's a teenager chock-full of ideas and feelings, hopes and dreams, only now is she trying to weave them together in a way that makes her an individual. What makes her a remarkable choice for her role going forward is that she is always open to new information, always ready to learn, and listen. She has little patience, however, for being lied to, or being asked to lie herself.
The romances in this book leave me conflicted, however, and I hope to see more development of this in the second book. I don't want to spoil anything, so I will not go into too much detail here, but certain aspects of Nell's choices and consequences don't seem to be in balance with the way she handles everything else. I did, however, love that queer relationships are just a thing that exists here, and are not part of the conflict in any way.
The slight clunkiness around certain aspects of the romantic relationships, as well as the pacing feeling a little like stop-and-go traffic are the only reasons I didn't give this five stars. I am already disappointed this is only a trilogy, as the world-building makes me want to disappear into a long-running series in this world.
If you like character-driven stories in a queer-friendly world with high stakes, or seeing human beings with human morality try to balance that with the sense of right and wrong that Gods far too detached from humanity may express, this book is definitely for you.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The Blight of Blackridge does with a Coming-of-Age story what it often feels like so many others don't quite attain. Often, it seems authors forget the mercurial, inpulsive nature of teenagers, or how quickly feelings can shift without losing depth or intensity. The co-authors here haven't forgotten that ay all, and it's part of what makes Nell an incredibly frustrating, and also loveable, protaganist.
Nell is 19 years old, she's never really been her own person, and doesn't know a lot about who she is. While she's a teenager chock-full of ideas and feelings, hopes and dreams, only now is she trying to weave them together in a way that makes her an individual. What makes her a remarkable choice for her role going forward is that she is always open to new information, always ready to learn, and listen. She has little patience, however, for being lied to, or being asked to lie herself.
The romances in this book leave me conflicted, however, and I hope to see more development of this in the second book. I don't want to spoil anything, so I will not go into too much detail here, but certain aspects of Nell's choices and consequences don't seem to be in balance with the way she handles everything else. I did, however, love that queer relationships are just a thing that exists here, and are not part of the conflict in any way.
The slight clunkiness around certain aspects of the romantic relationships, as well as the pacing feeling a little like stop-and-go traffic are the only reasons I didn't give this five stars. I am already disappointed this is only a trilogy, as the world-building makes me want to disappear into a long-running series in this world.
If you like character-driven stories in a queer-friendly world with high stakes, or seeing human beings with human morality try to balance that with the sense of right and wrong that Gods far too detached from humanity may express, this book is definitely for you.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 27, 2022
Possible spoliers!
I received an E-ARC of this book from the authors, thank you!
Eleanor Payne was raised into a family disliked by their entire community and only the stories as to why. But these stories aren't the entire truth, and as Eleanor comes into her own in adulthood, she's ready to find out the real reason behind it.
Two gods, two siblings, two sides. Dienna and Ebroth are the two gods that the town of Blackridge and other communities worship, but what is it about Ebroth that causes such an uproar toward the Paynes? Eleanor's great grandmother is ailing, and as she begins to reveal more of herself, Eleanor begins to understand the importance of what once seemed like aimless ramblings. She's learning who she really is, and who Dienna and Ebroth truly are. What they're truly capable of.
This book was an excellent debut. Something a bit different in the fantasy book world than I've read before. I really felt for Eleanor and the dismissal she received from a lot of people. Her mother and her friend most of all. Her mother didn't want to hear her because she already had her mind set on how she was going to live her life, and it was without this god that turned everyone against the Paynes. Her mother tends to blame her for a lot of things and also not believe or trust what she says when legitimately defending herself. Reading it was so frustrating because I KNOW that feeling. And when it came to her friend, Birdie, she also didn't listen. Birdie is in love with Eleanor, but Eleanor doesn't even realize those feelings exist on Birdie's end until she's trying to plan their wedding! Talk about ambitious! It was frustrating having to read poor Nell (Eleanor) deal with these two women who wouldn't listen. But through this and learning from her great grandmother who and what she truly is, she came out finally standing up for herself. It wasn't exactly how she probably would have liked it, but she tried many times to be heard. When you're dismissed like that as a person, by the time people finally hear you, you aren't exactly kind about it anymore.
I loved learning the power that Nell found she possessed, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it progresses more as she has to start moving forward and finding the real truth. But the question is, which god is truly right in this fight between people and their deities? It's quite interesting to see it all unfold.
I received an E-ARC of this book from the authors, thank you!
Eleanor Payne was raised into a family disliked by their entire community and only the stories as to why. But these stories aren't the entire truth, and as Eleanor comes into her own in adulthood, she's ready to find out the real reason behind it.
Two gods, two siblings, two sides. Dienna and Ebroth are the two gods that the town of Blackridge and other communities worship, but what is it about Ebroth that causes such an uproar toward the Paynes? Eleanor's great grandmother is ailing, and as she begins to reveal more of herself, Eleanor begins to understand the importance of what once seemed like aimless ramblings. She's learning who she really is, and who Dienna and Ebroth truly are. What they're truly capable of.
This book was an excellent debut. Something a bit different in the fantasy book world than I've read before. I really felt for Eleanor and the dismissal she received from a lot of people. Her mother and her friend most of all. Her mother didn't want to hear her because she already had her mind set on how she was going to live her life, and it was without this god that turned everyone against the Paynes. Her mother tends to blame her for a lot of things and also not believe or trust what she says when legitimately defending herself. Reading it was so frustrating because I KNOW that feeling. And when it came to her friend, Birdie, she also didn't listen. Birdie is in love with Eleanor, but Eleanor doesn't even realize those feelings exist on Birdie's end until she's trying to plan their wedding! Talk about ambitious! It was frustrating having to read poor Nell (Eleanor) deal with these two women who wouldn't listen. But through this and learning from her great grandmother who and what she truly is, she came out finally standing up for herself. It wasn't exactly how she probably would have liked it, but she tried many times to be heard. When you're dismissed like that as a person, by the time people finally hear you, you aren't exactly kind about it anymore.
I loved learning the power that Nell found she possessed, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it progresses more as she has to start moving forward and finding the real truth. But the question is, which god is truly right in this fight between people and their deities? It's quite interesting to see it all unfold.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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September 21, 2023First off I received this from the authors to get me caught up for when a Vision of Ruin released. This is my honest opinion.
Was not expecting any of that. Not an ounce! You are drawn into the village of Blackridge from the start and what is currently happening around the main character Eleanor.
Eleanor. Oh my goodness, if you do not know someone like her, you are her. Easy to relate to, easy to start falling in love with. She is spicy, and angry over her current circumstance. She is not your golden haired damsel in distress and I can not thank the authors for making her the complete opposite. She is awkward and unsure and for a girl of 19, she should be! But you get the feeling, nothing is ordinary about this young woman.
The conflict you are drawn into with the Priestesses of Dienna and those that belong to Ebroth keeps you guessing till the end. And the end. I cried. I have only had one other book make me sob like that and this book is now #2. It will break your heart. Your heart does so many rollercoaster flips through this book that you don’t know if you should be elated good things are happening, or cautious knowing that good feeling will be ripped away in seconds with one wave of Josephine’s useless hands.
It was also nice to see the other side of modern day witchcraft portrayed accurately and with a good attention to detail. I was impressed by the amount of factual work that went into this and it was much appreciated.
Personally 5/5 stars. It kept me engaged, guessing, and in the end in tears. Would highly recommend.
Was not expecting any of that. Not an ounce! You are drawn into the village of Blackridge from the start and what is currently happening around the main character Eleanor.
Eleanor. Oh my goodness, if you do not know someone like her, you are her. Easy to relate to, easy to start falling in love with. She is spicy, and angry over her current circumstance. She is not your golden haired damsel in distress and I can not thank the authors for making her the complete opposite. She is awkward and unsure and for a girl of 19, she should be! But you get the feeling, nothing is ordinary about this young woman.
The conflict you are drawn into with the Priestesses of Dienna and those that belong to Ebroth keeps you guessing till the end. And the end. I cried. I have only had one other book make me sob like that and this book is now #2. It will break your heart. Your heart does so many rollercoaster flips through this book that you don’t know if you should be elated good things are happening, or cautious knowing that good feeling will be ripped away in seconds with one wave of Josephine’s useless hands.
It was also nice to see the other side of modern day witchcraft portrayed accurately and with a good attention to detail. I was impressed by the amount of factual work that went into this and it was much appreciated.
Personally 5/5 stars. It kept me engaged, guessing, and in the end in tears. Would highly recommend.
March 13, 2024
Rebellion never tasted so sweet.
The authors throw you immediately into a world where isolation is survival. I found myself in awe at how much Eleanor rebelled against her community. I felt like she understood that within herself she didn’t have to fit-in to know that she deserved to belong. She discovers so much about herself within this story. Alma, her great-grandmother, has been guiding her even since before she had the revelation that she was different. Also, Birdie! She’s the best friend we all want in our corner, who accepts her even when the community doesn’t. There’s more there, but I don’t want to give too much away. I can’t wait to dive into the next installment. Because who doesn’t want to root for the success of a character who has been told all their life that they should conform when they were born to be different? If you enjoy a book all about self-discovery, magic, a vengeful High Priestess, and a character with a rebellious attitude—check it out!
The authors throw you immediately into a world where isolation is survival. I found myself in awe at how much Eleanor rebelled against her community. I felt like she understood that within herself she didn’t have to fit-in to know that she deserved to belong. She discovers so much about herself within this story. Alma, her great-grandmother, has been guiding her even since before she had the revelation that she was different. Also, Birdie! She’s the best friend we all want in our corner, who accepts her even when the community doesn’t. There’s more there, but I don’t want to give too much away. I can’t wait to dive into the next installment. Because who doesn’t want to root for the success of a character who has been told all their life that they should conform when they were born to be different? If you enjoy a book all about self-discovery, magic, a vengeful High Priestess, and a character with a rebellious attitude—check it out!
August 11, 2025
4.5 stars
I’ve read a couple books where the protagonists were nuns not that long ago, but I think I like reading from the pov of a priestess better, probably because they’ve got more power alongside more responsibilities. And Eleanor was a compelling protagonist indeed; she could be sullen and angsty at times, but I have to admit that her stubborn refusal to accept the way she was treated was impressive, even inspirational. I also really liked the magic system and the gods, especially the way the two gods balanced each other out. The romance was a bit fast but very sweet. The pacing was pretty consistent and the world was very interesting, though not too much detail was given yet. Hopefully in the next book. And I’m very keen on finding out what happens after that cliffhanger ending.
Overall, a very good book.
I’ve read a couple books where the protagonists were nuns not that long ago, but I think I like reading from the pov of a priestess better, probably because they’ve got more power alongside more responsibilities. And Eleanor was a compelling protagonist indeed; she could be sullen and angsty at times, but I have to admit that her stubborn refusal to accept the way she was treated was impressive, even inspirational. I also really liked the magic system and the gods, especially the way the two gods balanced each other out. The romance was a bit fast but very sweet. The pacing was pretty consistent and the world was very interesting, though not too much detail was given yet. Hopefully in the next book. And I’m very keen on finding out what happens after that cliffhanger ending.
Overall, a very good book.
July 14, 2025
3.5 out of 5 stars.
understandable crashout in my humble opinion. i support women's rights and wrongs.
this is what morally grey means to me. eleanor payne, you may have done some big no-no's, but the overarching destruction in the end was so valid of you imo. harharhar i love chaos. NAWT dead families and besties, though... but the overall apocalyptic pestilence is very real of you. an eye for an eye, yeah?
"We brought balance to the world, child. We were the restful night for the land and the keepers of all that was wild. We kept order. How can one truly appreciate the beauty of a rainbow without first weathering the storm?"
"The fields need to rest."
understandable crashout in my humble opinion. i support women's rights and wrongs.
this is what morally grey means to me. eleanor payne, you may have done some big no-no's, but the overarching destruction in the end was so valid of you imo. harharhar i love chaos. NAWT dead families and besties, though... but the overall apocalyptic pestilence is very real of you. an eye for an eye, yeah?
"We brought balance to the world, child. We were the restful night for the land and the keepers of all that was wild. We kept order. How can one truly appreciate the beauty of a rainbow without first weathering the storm?"
"The fields need to rest."
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 21, 2023
Very well written, with very relatable characters.
Eleanor Payne uncovers her family and town’s secrets and history, and their connection to the god Ebroth. Learning the truths she was blind to, defines her new attitude and character. As Eleanor grows into herself, so grows her confidence, and the power she did not know her family possessed...
Nell is a realistic and relatable character, and the romance was sweet and natural.
I was kindly sent an ARC of this book, but this review reflects my opinion.
Eleanor Payne uncovers her family and town’s secrets and history, and their connection to the god Ebroth. Learning the truths she was blind to, defines her new attitude and character. As Eleanor grows into herself, so grows her confidence, and the power she did not know her family possessed...
Nell is a realistic and relatable character, and the romance was sweet and natural.
I was kindly sent an ARC of this book, but this review reflects my opinion.
April 3, 2023
The Blight of Blackridge by R. P. Dunwater - 4/5
The Blight of Blackridge is a great story that left me crushed for days after the ending. The characters and the struggles they encounter are relatable and you find yourself picking out your favorites and rooting for them. The storyline is a page turner. Always keeps you wanting to read just one more page or chapter.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The Blight of Blackridge is a great story that left me crushed for days after the ending. The characters and the struggles they encounter are relatable and you find yourself picking out your favorites and rooting for them. The storyline is a page turner. Always keeps you wanting to read just one more page or chapter.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
September 21, 2023
A chilling tale of family and friendship
This story pulled at my past and my heartstrings. I identified with the protagonist far more than I want to admit, but trauma does have a distinct effect on a person’s memories and character. Despite my recollections, I enjoyed the twists and turns and I’m excited to read more. The ending definitely caught me off guard. Oh my! Things are going to get interesting!
This story pulled at my past and my heartstrings. I identified with the protagonist far more than I want to admit, but trauma does have a distinct effect on a person’s memories and character. Despite my recollections, I enjoyed the twists and turns and I’m excited to read more. The ending definitely caught me off guard. Oh my! Things are going to get interesting!
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