First off, this one was dragged out too much. It could have been told in about 200 pages, not nearly 400. It got tiresome and very repetitive. I am not a big sports fan, but I do watch baseball every now and then, and it is, by far, my favorite sport. I go to Rangers games here in Dallas (Arlington really), and I love the idea of baseball novels. I generally love baseball movies, just stories centered around baseball in general. They tend to feel non-elitist and folksy. They feel very rooted in small-town America, even when the MLB teams are all in large metro areas. That being said, the baseball action in this book was pretty meh. It was neither exciting nor totally boring. It just existed. It felt quite lifeless, and I never felt any tension, even in the World Series games.
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Ryder, as a character- did not care much for him. He seemed too odd for me, and he felt fake. He felt robotic in a lot of ways. You never got a really good look at his personality. When he cheats on his totally cool and described as beautiful longtime girlfriend, I liked him even less. His entire dilemma with killing a kid with a fastball in little league was odd, mostly because halfway through the book, he meets with the kid's mom, and that entire storyline entirely goes away. He's cured out of nowhere, and his entire life changes. We go on to see that he quits MLB after one year? Seemed ludicrous to me. We are told over and over the guy lives for baseball and has ever since he was a kid, so he quits after one year to open a camp for kids who are in bad situations?
1) It makes him look like a white savior. Rich white dude is going to save all the downtrodden, no doubt, mostly black and brown kids, mostly from inner city areas. Why? Because he was sad at accidentally killing a kid in high school? Seems rather elitist to think you can even compare your life to their lives. I was sad in high school but had well-off parents who immediately moved me away from any sort of guilt or unhappiness at all. Just felt very phony and weird.
2) It was very out of character, even though we don't really get to see much of who he is as a person honestly, but we know his life is baseball. Hell, in the epilogue, his gf goes to sleep and he immediately goes out into a barn where he has set up a mound, home plate, backstop, etc and pitches, and feels like he's at home again. But, I'm supposed to believe he suddenly decided to quit baseball, his life dream, and a decade+ of work to get there, to start a camp for underprivileged kids? Come onnn. You can't be serious.
Anyway. Like I said- book was very repetitive, the first half going over and over and over the death of this one kid (Deon), then the second half is just a boring short rehash of every game to the world series win which was obvious halfway through. Never did you doubt the Orioles would win the World Series, so that action was all for nothing.
There is a side story of the MLB maybe, possibly, due to Ryder's amazing 110mph fastballs, deciding to maybe possibly make a rule where pitchers would have an upper limit on their velocity, and there is a story of the "unwritten rules" of baseball where you bean a guy who beaned one of your teammates, but honestly, these stories really go nowhere, and by the end of the book, neither story is even resolved.
I wanted to love this book, but it was too long for what it was, was too repetitive, the main character seemed like a robot with no deep internal characteristics, and the baseball action was just blah. I made it to the end, but it took me longer than it should have, and I was only looking forward to finishing it as opposed to being deep into the story by the end. I just wanted it, mostly, to end so I could move on to better books.