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191 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 16, 2022
-The FMC and the MMC don't spend any time together, they just text back and forth on KIK.
-This book feels like it's written by a boomer who is out of touch and is trying to fit in with the youth. The texting between the characters is cringe and full of way too many emojis and it's done through kik. (A sub plot of them texting is him getting her to download kik so they can text instead of using the dating app.) (who the F uses KIK still?)
- the book also focuses too much on non important scenes like her long lunch date with her best friend. And the last 30% of the book is just random text conversations from them and then FMC going “oh I'm inspired now, can’t talk, got to go write.”
-the story info dumps every little bit of info. There is no pacing, just info dumping and filler scenes with way too many unimportant details. Who the fuck cares about her best friend she is unimportant so why does it take 10+ pages to have a coffee date with her?
-absolutely unnecessary making this a duet. Cut the filler and it could be 1 good book instead of being broken down into two shitty books.