⭐️⭐️.75
Taking the opportunity to review all four books under the last one.
Overall, I loved the world building and the concept of this series. Slayers vs. Vampires only for a slayer to become a vampire. Alina’s story had a ton of potential and could have made for an incredible work of fiction; however, I feel the series should have been at least two books longer.
Bite of Loyalty introduced Lincoln first and allowed the reader to learn about his character in a steady way. He was brash, broody, independent, but mostly broken. I felt like Lincoln received the perfect introduction. He was the strategist and the ever demanding professor with a control problem ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) While Lincoln handled Alina and his mating process HORRIBLY, his back story made up for it - showing how terrified he was of the situation and how unequipped he was to handle any sort of emotional decisions. The timeline that led to their mating made sense. They got to know each other and had a relationship before anything happened.
Then, Andrei was introduced in a similar way. We were given the popular bad boy who was at the top of his class and quickly shown that he had a VERY different, more vulnerable, side to him. Despite his severe lapse in judgment in Bite of Betrayal, I constantly found myself annotating, “ANDREI IS THE STANDARD >>>>.” He knew when to joke and when to be serious, often times being the glue that held their fucked up rhombus together. Once again, this mating timeline made sense to me. They had a bond and knew it - deciding to fight for their connection rather than ignore it.
However, I hated the way the author just threw Drake into this dynamic out of NOWHERE. His introduction was sudden, Alina’s acceptance was quick, and their mating was even quicker. Don’t get me wrong, I love me some Dracula and his lil monster, but I never felt like he was given the proper character development the other two were given. It’s like the author just gave up and didn’t know how to write another mate into the mix, deciding to just throw him out into the open, all the while hoping Alina would catch the bait. I loved how Drake was always the level headed one when it came to decisions and was also single-handedly the biggest romantic of the three mates.
Alina… well, I had a love hate relationship with her. Absolutely loved how independent and headstrong she was despite losing her family/having her entire world flipped upside down in a matter of hours. Despite all this, she was a fucking IDIOT. Her thought process on some things made no goddamn sense — specifically in Bite of Justice when she started freaking out about how her mates weren’t giving her the respect she deserved by backing her every decision about the slayers WHEN ALL THEY SAID WAS THAT SHE SHOULD TAKE TIME TO REST AND THINK OF A PLAN. She practically said they were awful and was ready to put her walls back up… like, no, bitch, you need to calm tf down. Sure, trauma can lead to thinking irrationally, but her thought process made no sense. I also didn’t like the direction the books took after her bond to Dev happened. It was just poorly executed imo.
I hated the way Lo just randomly was given a mate and her character was yeeted from the story until the last 50ish pages. My girl deserved better.
Alexandra was also another character who I felt was thrown into the story with no care whatsoever. The author never developed her character or relationship with Alina; yet, somehow, they were practically family. I understand she has her own series, but this friendship was whacky.
DIA was supposed to be a stepping stone for her that should have lasted more than one book in my opinion. Alina should have developed her relationship with Lincoln/Andrei, along with her knowledge on the other sectors, as well as building her skills to continue to the top of the points system. This gives time to develop DIA, Estrid, and Vic more instead of throwing them out there and forgetting about them later on in the series. Personally, I think introducing Dracula at the end of book two would’ve made more sense. This would’ve given an entire book to develop Alina’s trust in Drake as well as get to know him and his board properly.
Don’t even get me started on the ending of the series with the slayers. You’re telling me that the entire buildup of the series led to a solution after ONE fucking meeting??? Where was the epic fight? Rebellion on both sides from those who disagreed with the merge? WHAT ABOUT ASTAROTH?! So many characters were thrown into the mix just to be used and abused (sorry, Serena). The planning and pacing of this series was mediocre at best and I cannot comprehend how this series has such high ratings.
By the end of Bite of Justice, I was bored of the story, tired of the characters, and wanted the climax to happen… just for it to edge me 😂
The Blood Oath series had SO much potential to be a five star read, but missed the mark on key details, especially the writing style itself.
I’m sorry, but I still can’t get over that “roses are red,” bullshit Alina said in book one 💀 Unfortunately, that shit kept appearing in the next three books.
Did I enjoy the series? Yes.
Do I wish the author would’ve put more time and effort into the writing process? Yes.
Anyway… Andrei is THE standard and I’ll stand behind that. I’m not even into this sorta thing, but I could’ve done without Alina, and just had her three mates get together. They were far more interesting and carried the story for me.