Well, not as bad as the first book. The story it's self was not bad and went in interesting directions, but was tainted by the lack of breathing room. This short book could have greatly benefited from two to three times the word count, things that were supposed to have levety felt brushed past, and because there was also a extended period of magic caused battle fatigue from one of the two main characters it felt like she was always in recovery, saying that she won't do that again just to do it again on the next page.
And like I said, the story was interesting but Beswick (the author) seems to be unable to write a character with more depth than a piece of paper.
SPOILER: Prime example: 4/5ths through the story the crew comes across the ship and crew that the male lead had served his military career on. They are forced into conflict and the female lead used this opportunity to take out her anger at what had been done to her by different people under the crowns order, and uses magic to burn the face off a sailer and makes him suffer while he dies. The male lead then puts the sailer out of his misery and she snaps at him, before she wrecks the rest of the other ship torching most of the crew alive.
So, do you think this can cause a moment of reflection, as the male lead sees the woman he's come to love, let out her psychopathic tendencies on the crew of men that he once called brothers? Do you think it could make him question what has happened and what she has become? No, she falls into battle fatigue, he nurses her back to health, she says she feels no remorse for her actions, he agrees and they move on with the story.....
So close to an interesting character moment, but the effert was not there. I feel like a better author could take this story and make something of it but it is too much to ask of Beswick.
What ever the case, I promised a friend that I would read the first two books of this series and I am more than happy to stop here.