As Angels Watch is a Christian Fiction romance. Jewel and Collin meet via the internet and carry on an on-line, long distance relationship. Tragedy strikes and Collin decides to take a break from his job and travel to meet Jewel for the first time. At the same time, Jewel takes in Tracey, a neglected 10 year old girl. All of this happens as angels watch over all of the characters and pray for the best.
I like that this book doesn’t have an over abundance of sex. In fact there is none, and no foul language. I feel that too many books and TV shows these days are over-sexed and use too much profanity. It is an easy read and appropriate for all ages.
I really enjoyed the scenes where the foul spirit made an appearance and wished the foul spirit would have been presented more throughout the book to build tension and suspense. I hope he (or was the spirit a she?) makes more appearances in the sequel.
I did not see the twist at the end coming! This is the second time this author got me with an unexpected twist & that event might just be enough to get me to read the sequel.
The reason for the 3 star rating is two-fold: dialogue and rushed events.
Regarding the dialogue between characters, I couldn’t connect with most of it. It felt forced and unnatural and I couldn’t see the characters saying those things during those scenes. There was also too much that was shared with Tracey. For example, Collin tells Tracy (a 10 year old) that he has no intention of sleeping with Jewel until he and Jewel are married. To me, it’s not a believable that someone would say that to a 10 year old, especially one they only recently met.
As previously mentioned, this book is categorized as Christian Fiction which I hadn’t realized when I purchased it. This is not a genre I typically read and this book is probably the first in the genre that I have read. With that said, there was an over abundance of internal dialogue between the characters and God and it was too much for my personal preference.
I understand that when reading fiction, a reader needs to suspend some level of reality, however there were too many unbelievable and rushed events in this book that kept me from connecting with the story. For example, Jewel & Collin falling in love and wanting to marry after conversing only on-line and maybe through one phone call. Or Jewel being granted custody of Tracey without so much as a background check. Or how quickly Tracey, who may have been sexually abused by her mother’s boyfriends, bonds with Collin who is a complete stranger. Or the fact that social services allows Tracey to travel out of the country with Collin, an adult that doesn’t have custody over her. Or the sudden mention of the investigative work that Collin has done on Tracey’s mother. There was no prior mention or inference of him doing anything of the sort.
I also felt that the angels in the story were an oversight and not integral to the story. They made observations and prayed to God, but had no direct impact on the characters or the story. You could have taken the angels out and still have been left with this story.
As Angels Watch is a good story, but I personally could not connect with the dialogue and the quickness with which many of the major plot elements unfolded. If you enjoy reading Christian Fiction, this may be a book for you.