**spoiler alert** I rate this book four stars because Ardell, one of the main characters of the book, has a brother named Eden who was put into a coma by a neighborhood bully named Jojo. Jojo went to jail because of his actions but has just been released. The book begins with Jojo returning home and Ardell seeking revenge for the harm done to his brother. Meanwhile, everyone else in the neighborhood is frightened of what trouble Jojo will stir up this time.
I really like that the author chose to make Jojo come back as a less aggressive person that has a lot of respect and love for his mother. This is shown when Shana said “He was a wild boy, there’s no doubt about that. He caused a lot of people a lot of problems and a lot of heartache including his mother. But he’s making up for it now, without anyone watching him, without anyone, knowing” (McClintock 79). It gives him a new image and leaves the reader conflicted with whether or not they should appeal to him. Similarly the author’s choice of making Ardell’s anger overcome him. In the book, Ardell is characterized as somebody who “...has hate in his heart, and hate takes the fear out of people and replaces it with a thirst for vengeance” (McClintock 10). With that being said, this book can be seen as controversial because some may be on Jojo’s side while others may be on Ardell’s side. While Ardell had a motive and what Jojo had done was not ok in any way, shape, or form, however, neither is what Ardell did. Some may say that Ardell was justified in killing Jojo, but similar to Shana, I believe that “... taking a life for any reason is wrong” (McClintock 100).
The book had a lot of expected yet unexpected events. Because while I didn’t see it coming, I think that a lot of readers would have expected Ardell to get revenge on Jojo because of how determined he was and because he had such a strong motive. However, when, where, and what was actually gonna happen was unexpected. I would have not expected Ardell to kill Jojo and I thought that whatever conflict happened would occur in the neighborhood since it was the general setting of the story. It was also not known at what point Ardell would get his revenge because there were multiple occasions where he tried to do so and he was either stopped or he didn’t go through with it because Jojo wasn’t doing anything wrong at that moment.
In order for this book to get five stars, this book would need some suspense. While there were a lot of unexpected events while reading it, I didn’t feel any suspense. I may not have expected some things, but I felt no sense of what’s gonna happen next until the end of the book. Suspense would add a lot more to this book and make it even more awesome.
Similar to Ardell, William, the main character of A Long Way Down by Jason Reynolds, sought to avenge his older brother. Both characters were very angered by their brother’s death and sought to take immediate action.