When I first opened this book, I’ll be honest, I expected to be reading a bodice-ripper. Thankfully, this book mixed historical romance with a dash of the paranormal to produce something rather different- and something that I rather enjoyed!
Olivia Moreland is one of the ‘Mad Morelands’- a suspiciously ahead-of-their-time family, who have been marked by society as ‘odd’ because of the progressive beliefs that they have and crazy adventures they all get up to: Olivia’s sister is a budding chemist, and her brothers have a penchant for blowing things up. Olivia herself has started a business unmasking the fake mediums that were extremely popular in the death-obsessed Victorian society, but when she crosses paths with Lord Stephen St. Leger she accidently becomes involved in a centuries-old mystery and a ghost hunt in Stephen’s ancestral home, all whilst battling her feelings for him.
I really liked the fact that Olivia and Stephen’s relationship didn’t follow the prescribed romantic formula; there was a minimum of irritated snapping, taking offence, and misunderstandings, which instead let the characters interact more naturally, spend more time together, and foregrounded their growing relationship. It also made more room for the two mysteries at hand: the fake medium that Stephen’s mother is reliant on after the death of her eldest son, and the very real ghost mystery that haunts Blackhope Hall, complete with vanishing spirits, visions and dreams that plague both Olivia nad Stephen. The two strands are woven cleverly together, with the author skillfully walking the line between the paranormal and the fake, and the result was something that kept me gripped: I never knew quite which way the story was going to turn!
The only thing I did take issue with was the sometimes-slow pace of the plotting. There were several occasions where Olivia and Stephen are about to fall into a passionate embrace but- in the nick of time- decide that instead they’d better run away instead. Once is great; twice is fine. Three or four repetitions of this had me was rolling my eyes. This approach was also repeated when it came to their shared skepticism over the visions they both experience: again, too much repetition made the plot drag.
That, combined with a little too much on-the-nose dialogue, was enough to make me put down the book for a while, for some deep breathing exercises.
This was a shame, because the nub of the plot was great. It was interesting, had a whole host of unsavoury characters- my favourite was the fake medium- and villains. Though the ancient mystery was a tad predictable, I enjoyed reading about how it impacted Olivia and Stephen in the present day, and wove into the overall plot, especially as there was so much good stuff going on.
Overall, Mesmerised was a good read, with a rather unique premise, memorable characters and some good plotting. A little more editing, and a little more character development, and it would have been great: that said, this is the first in a series, so I’ll be looking forward to seeing what else Camp has to offer!