I ordered this book because I was intrigued by the premise of it, and because I can relate somewhat to the author's trajectory (though it took me a whole 'nother decade to get a bigger heaven). I still love the title. And the premise.
But the editing. I mourned the whole way through. The book needed a concept editor, a book coach, a copy editor, a publishing guide. The story is strong and the ideas are worthy, the whole thing just hollers self-published. Though I don't regret the money I spent on the book, I did feel as though I am the wrong one to read it, which is why I'm not rating it. His real audience would not notice the flaws I did. His primary audience, as far as I can tell, would be his particular denomination, mostly those who have set out on a similar path of discovery and hope, as well as the ones who doubt his sincerity.
This writer is very sincere; he's humble and inquisitive, passionate and compassionate, courageous and godly. A good editor or two, with some patient diligence, could have crafted real art out of this rough block of genuine story.