I had high hopes going into this. Knowing it’s self-published, well, I should’ve known better.
This book is in desperate need of a competent editor. A professional. The writing needs some serious polishing. There is potentially good information in here, but the writing/editing is so poor it’s hard to get anything out of it. The organization is not good. Often it seems like parts are just talking in circles. There’s a lot of repetition, and very confusing typos. (Word to the wise: spellcheck is NEVER enough.) Formatting is awful. After an editor goes through it, get a professional proofreader to polish it up. So. Many. Errors. It’s painful. And distracting. There MIGHT be good content here, but it’s buried in horrible writing, confusing errors, and poor formatting.
Also? A few studies are mentioned, but there’s no endnotes or footnotes or anything. No citations. There should be a lot of citations in a book like this. The burden of proof is on the author. For all I can tell, these so-called studies are fabricated.
Very little is explained well. An editor could’ve helped direct the author to make this book a lot more helpful to potential readers. Instead, reading it is a waste of time.