Most often, our need for revenge is pure and simple, hard and fast. We see it over and over in the movies we watch and thenovels we read. Writers know a successful formula when they see one. However I appreciate a good revenge story when authors show the process of emotion grow and percolate inside a character over time. The true artist, I think, can create a slow burn inside of a character while on the outside change time, place and experience. We as readers get to look past the emotion of the moment, and get a more convincing glimpse of people 19s lives. The revenge does not go off with a 1CBANG! 1D, but it rises to an art form.
For William Trevor and William Faulkner, revenge isn 19t quick, and to tell you the truth, revenge isn 19t clear. In fact, it 19s very dark. In both of their stories in this anthology, I 19m not sure there is any relief in sight.
In Faulkner 19s 1CBear Hunt 1D, a proud Mississippi black man waits twenty years for his revenge on a repulsive, mean-spirited white man that terrorized him in his youth. Through the story 19s narrator named Ratliff we learned of the brutality of Faulkner 19s Mississipi - drunk KKK types to riding into black community gatherings and terrorizing random victims at gun point. In the beginning of 1CBear Hunt 1D, a whiskey fueled bigot named Provine held a gun in one hand to a colored man 19s temple while with the other hand burned a trail of holes in his collar with a lit cigarette, and there was nothing anyone was going to do about it.
That is, not until twenty years late when this same Raitliff is participating on a 1Cbear hunt 1D, and this same Provine comes down with an annoying case of the hiccups. We are not sure of Ratliff 19s motives, but he thought it would be funny to see if he could scare Provine out of his hiccups. He sent him on a midnight hike through the forest to a nearby Indian village for a remedy knowing full well the hostile feelings Indians harbored towards the white man. Jaja. This was going to be funny, he must have thought.
Jaja. What Raitliff didn 19t think about, or know about, was Provine 19s history with the black servant of one of the hunters. Ash was a quiet ex-soldier that drew little attention to himself. Ash, the same black man who suffered Provine 19s drunken assault twenty years earlier takes off in the darkness to settle his score. That 19s right, Provine is going to get the scare of his life, but he doesn 19t know from whom.
Faukner never really details the rage, violence, and/or retribution in the darkness, but that 19s why the story works. Everyone is left grinding. Everyone gets what they deserve.
The other William 19s story is equally as uncomfortable. In 1CTorridge, 1D the school geek in an English private school takes all the abuse thrown his way and does little to defend himself or fight back. For most of his youth, he literally becomes a kickball of his closest friends. They build themselves up at his expense. They joke about him. They play pranks about him. They talk about him behind his back. Because Torridge took it, I suppose, his friends seem to rationalize their cruelty. He didn 19t complain, then. And he didn 19t complain, now.
That 19s why they like him. These jerks grow up remembering Torridge 19s shortcomings, and forgetting their own. Trevor builds the story over the next twenty years; as each of these guys becomes fat and middle aged, they develop fantasies of their past. They all look to their times with Torridge as the time they wielded their most power. They got away with everything. When they plan a reunion of sorts with their families in tow, they look forward to seeing their school chum once again. They 19ve developed a legend in their minds that they 19ve shared with their wives and kids. Here, Trevor is at his most brilliant. Where Faulkner settled his score under the moonlight, Trevor creates the most typical of family settings, with white tablecloths, wine cocktails, and smiling kids. Torridge shows up not so different from the expectations of his school mates. Everyone there is ready to pick up where they left off. The families who have been hearing stories about Torridge are primed to be entertained.
But Instead of reaffirming the stories everyone wanted to hear, Torridge provided them with the most brutal truth that shames everyone within the range of his voice. Dryly, he makes implications of his companions 19 sexuality with the story of a homo friend who hanged himself. The wives recoil in horror. The kids stare at their dads in disbelief.
Is is Hamlet who said, Revenge is a dish best served cold? Torridge shows know signs of animosity or bitterness, but he cuts and slices his friends up without drawing a drop of blood. In Trevor 19s world, everyone suffers. Only Torridge walks away.