2.8 stars |
First grievance is with the word romance being in the title. Everyone has their own definition of romance according to their standards. However, in literature there should be one universal meaning of it, or something to that degree, in which readers will get a sense of the chemistry and love between two characters. How that's achieved is up to the writer, but the point is - we should feel it. However, if 98% of the book is spent with the two characters bickering back and forth, if its spent with them still denying their feelings for one another at 65% in, and if they haven't even gone out on a single date, that shouldn't fall into the romance genre but maybe another type of genre, one that doesn't seem to be a thing. More or less we're reading about situationships, and one-night stands that extend to marriage, but there's hardly any true romance happening. Which needless to say is disappointing.
When I say a majority of the book focused on the drama happening at work, I mean that. This book took office "romance" to the extreme and it was about as exciting as you can imagine it to be. There were some aspects that made it slightly tolerable to get through i.e. hating coworkers who took every opportunity to make Kenya seem like she was rising to the top by being on her back. Outside of those instances, I got tired of being stuck at Fine Industries, the company of Holland Alistair, the arrogant, brooding, rude, line stepping billionaire aka leading man, main love interest, so-called "hero".
My second grievance is with the fact that I got no satisfactory lesson being learned by any member of Kenya's family. After she's betrayed by her stepsister and boyfriend, Kenya was expected to still mule for her sister because long ago she had cancer. Sorry, but Sasha, her sister, being sick doesn't give her license to steal Kenya's boyfriend and not suffer any consequences. Yet from the way Sasha's mom Felice tried to brush off the whole incident like Sasha merely stole Kenya's favorite shirt, made me grind my teeth. Kenya's father was a spineless, non-speaking simpleton, who pretty much let his wife toss his biological child out of the family because she refused to kiss the ring. It was disgusting. At the end, Kenya was still "there" in a sense, willing to be there for her nephew, leaving the door open for Sasha to cry and manipulate her way back into Kenya's life in the distant future. How Kenya arrived at such a magnanimous place was the oldest excuse in the book - she's in love so therefore she can forget about the hurt and the pain of the past despite the fact not one person: her dad, her stepmom, stepsister, or ex-boyfriend lifted a finger to sincerely apologize to her. I mean, Kenya stopped living her life, dropped out of college just to be there to take care of Sasha when she was going through cancer. And because of that, her family felt she should happily step aside, even give her blessing and continue to emotionally mule for Sasha. So that story line could have been wrapped up better.
Third and finale grievance is the fact that I didn't feel an ounce of chemistry between Alistair and Kenya. With stories told in first person, some authors go overboard with letting us know how hot and horny the leads are for each other. In this instance, I felt that Alistair fetishized Kenya, at times. Just some phrases he used that made me cringe and say to myself: If Kenya was white would he constantly comment on the color of her skin, or her hair?? Who can say, but yeah it just came off...weird or maybe disingenuous. I wanted more heat between them, more sexual tension. They could tell me until they were blue in the face they wanted each other, but the tone didn't convey that well. There was also a fade to black love scene, which again, didn't help with intensity or believability that these two opposites were attracted to each other. I would be find with that, as I don't really need extremely detailed love scenes to get the picture of what the characters feel, but if there had been proper buildup, that would have been enough to quell my curiosity.
In the end, I think if the plot involving the business was trimmed by 50%, and more scenes of them getting under each others skin in a less combative way had been employed, I would have enjoyed reading this more. It wasn't a bad novel by any means, it just could have been more...spicy.