I read this book between two sunrises and though it wasn’t amazing or especially novel in its purpose or message, it could not have been that bad or I would have put it down more often. A thin little piece, that I found to be not wonderfully organized or structured, it was nonetheless a book worthy of reading for the few diamonds one can find in its kimberlite walls. A writer, unfortunately seems to need constant reassurance and motivation, whether it be in the midst of a project, or the throes of a delusional case of writer’s block, so for me (a writer), any kernel of courage or hope I can glean from others who have suffered through rejected stories and sleepless nights is welcomed and encouraged, as long as it’s packaged in an interesting way.
Ultimately this, like many other forgettable books about writing, feels more like something a publisher pitched to a seasoned writer as a means to make some quick money, and less like a project birthed from passion and an artistic need. That’s not to say that many fine books aren’t created that way, but it feels a little bit like participating in prostitution. It still has some obvious appeals, but it feels cheap. I’m not trying to attack the writer. I myself would probably write about almost any subject if a major publishing house asked me and promised me the kind of money that would allow me to ask for generous cuts and premium memberships without hesitation. Just as a reader it sometimes feels obvious when a book is a bit forced, a bit contrived. It’s still a good book mind you, I just think it could have been truncated and put in a collection of essays. My only real, stylistic gripe is the sloppy over-use of hyphens in the text. I’m not sure who told this man about hyphens in lieu of semi-colons or ellipsis, but I would love to not see them multiple times per page. And I am not suggesting that they were always or even usually grammatically or syntactically incorrect, but just distracting and unnecessary.
Alas, if you are a neophyte to the pen and the published word, peruse these pages and use the little goodies where you find them. That's the beauty of the sentence, some that read as tired tropes and obvious statements seem alive and beautiful to the next person.