It wasn't bad, well-written aside for a couple of editing slips. But, Reagan (the sister) annoyed me *so* much! And Skip, he went from "brother", to jealous ex-lover, to manic killer, to mentally unstable werewolf who wanted to be a vampire. I just never got a grasp on his character.
Also, back to the sister: Mitch was hiding the file containing the pictures from her and forbid her to go into his office: all of his suggested that she didn't know about his profession as a bounty-hunter. However, by the end of the book, not only she (and the mother) knows, but she wants to become a bounty-hunter as well!!
And Jarrod (who knew that Skip was not stable and went on killing rampages once in a while) never paid attention to Mitch's concerns about his sister hanging out with Skip. He was just so weak throughout the whole book...
So, Mitch decides to become a vampire, and he doesn't even *think* about going out during the day once more before he does that? Never thought of seeing the sun one last time? Did not wonder about 'dying' every night? He was fairly uncomfortable with Jarrod being 'dead' next to him on the bed, but he didn't ponder about that happening to him before they did the change?
Lastly, the change was just so easy: just one drink of Jarrod's blood, some pain, and that's it? Seemed anti-climatic.
All in all though, it wasn't bad at all. Hot sex too. I just think it could have benefited from being more complex.